讀后續(xù)寫練習寫作練習 高三英語一輪復習寫作專項

讀后續(xù)寫-David’srun試題呈現(xiàn)：Itwasthedayofthebigcross-countryrun.Studentsfromsevendifferentprimaryschoolsinandaroundthesmalltownwerewarmingupandwalkingtheroute(路線)throughthickevergreenforest.IlookedaroundandfinallyspottedDavid,whowasstandingbyhimselfofftothesidebyafence.Hewassmallfortenyearsold.Hisusualbigtoothysmilewasabsenttoday.Iwalkedoverandaskedhimwhyhewasn'twiththeotherchildren.Hehesitatedandthensaidhehaddecidednottorun.Whatwaswrong?Hehadworkedsohardforthisevent!Iquicklysearchedthecrowdfortheschool'scoachandaskedhimwhathadhappened."Iwasafraidthatkidsfromotherschoolswouldlaughathim,"heexplaineduncomfortably."Igavehimthechoicetorunornot,andlethimdecide."Ibitbackmyfrustration(懊惱).Iknewthecoachmeantwell-hethoughthewasdoingtherightthing.AftermakingsurethatDavidcouldrunifhewanted,Iturnedtofindhimcomingtowardsme,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetosideasheswunghisfeetforward.Davidhadabraindiseasewhichpreventedhimfromwalkingorrunninglikeotherchildren,butatschoolhisclassmatesthoughtofhimasaregularkid.Healwaysparticipatedtothebestofhisabilityinwhatevertheyweredoing.ThatwaswhynoneofthechildrenthoughtitunusualthatDavidhaddecidedtojointhecross-countryteam.Itjusttookhimlonger-

that'sall.Davidhadnotmissedasinglepractice,andalthoughhealwaysfinishedhisrunlongaftertheotherchildren,hedidalwaysfinish.Asaspecialeducationteacherattheschool,Iwasfamiliarwiththechallenges

Davidfacedandwas

proudofhisstrongdetermination.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.范文1：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Tappinghimgentlyontheshoulder,IaskedDavidwhathadcausedhimtodecidetogiveuptheopportunity.Havinghesitatedforamoment,herepliedinalowvoice,“Youknow,Irunveryslowlyandmyrunningpostureisugly,whichwillresultinotherslaughingatme.”Ismiled,shookmyheadandsaid,“That’sjustyoursupposition.Asamatteroffact,allthepeoplerespectandadmirethosewhoovercometheirowndifficultiesandbravelyachievetheirgoals.”“Really?”Heseemedtobeindoubtaboutmywords.Seeingmenodfirmly,heworehisbigtoothysmileagain,hiseyessparklingwithexcitementandcuriosity.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Assoonasthestartinggunrang,thechildrenbegantorun.Afterawhile,Davidbecamethelastintheteam,aswehadexpected.However,Davidseemedcalm,firmandpersistent.Duringthewholecross-countryrace,nobodyteasedhim.Onthecontrary,whenhefinallyreachedthefinishingline,allthepeoplepresentcheeredforhim.ItwasDavid’sstrongdeterminationandperseverancethathelpedhimbecomeapopularperson.范文2：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.IbrokethesilencebyaskingDavid,‘Youareeagertorunfromdeepinside,right?”Davidturnedandlookedatmebutsaidnothing.Icontinued,“Iknowyou’reafraidofbeinglaughedat,butIthinkit’sagoodchanceforyoutoproveyourself.Youhavebeenworkingsohardfortherun,andI'msoproudofyou,David.Ifyoureallywanttorun,don’tletanythingoranybodystopyou.”Hefroze,seemingtothinkaboutmysuggestion.Finally,eyessparklingwithdetermination,hesaid,“Ichoosetorun.”

IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Therunbegan.

Alltherunnersrushedforward.Davidfellbehindtheotherrunnersafterafewminutes.Someofthecrowdsbeganwhispering.Suddenly,Davidtrippedoverasmallstone.Ihurriedlyshouted,“Comeon,David.”Unexpectedly,thewhisperofcrowdstransferredintoencouragement,“Comeon!Comeon!”Davidpickedhimselfupandwentallouttomoveforward.Ashecrossedthefinishingline,allthecrowdscheeredloudlyforhim.Heearnedpeople'srespectthroughhisbravedecisionandstrongdetermination.范文3：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.

Headdrooping,hebenthiseyesupontheground,utteringnothing.Afterwhatseemedlikeages,I

musteredupallmycourage

andaskedhimifhewantedtorun.Thepoorboy

noddedtimidly,bitinghislipandlookingaway.

GentlystrokingDavid’sshoulders,Iwasdeterminedtoencouragehim,“Escapeneversolvesaproblem,butfacingitdoes.Wecannevercontrolwhatothersthinkofwhatwecannotdo,butwecanmakeourselvesstrongerbyprovingtothemwhatwecan.Justbelieveinyourself!”Prompted

bymywords,Davidraisedhisheadandclenchedhisfists,afireofdeterminationgleaminginhiseyes.Hewasreadytorun.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Themoment

thewhistlesignaledthestart,alltheparticipantsdashedintothedenseforestexceptDavid,whosparednoefforttoswinghisfeetbehindtherestofthestudents.Hardashetried,itwasnotlongbeforehefellover.Asmyheartsank,Davidwasalreadystrugglingtohisfeet,andcontinuedtoshuffleandstaggerforward.Theclocktickingdown,theotherteachersandstudentsnoticedwhatwasgoingonandstarted

cheeringhimon.Whencrossingthefinishline,David

wasgreetedwith

thunderousapplausefromalltheteachersandstudents,includingthecoach,likeaherofilledwithpride.Atthatpoint,

David'stoothysmilereturned,proving

thatnothingisimpossiblewithconsistenteffort,unwaveringdeterminationandastrongbeliefinoneself.范文4：Hesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Hiswanderingeyesbetrayedhispainfulstruggle.Imusthelphimmakeabravedecision--thetrueonedeepdowninsidehim.“Areyousureyou’llgiveuptheopportunityyou’vebeensweatingforalltheseyears?Areyousureyouwon’tregretnottakingthischancewhenlookingbacksomedaylater?Willothers’

opinionsdefinewhatyouare?”

Igentlypattedhimontheskinnyyetpowerfulshoulderandencouragedhimtobehonestwithhimself.However,Iwasn’tforcinghim,forhe’swiseenoughtoknowwhathereallywanted.Heslowlyraisedhishead,lookingatmewithatwinkleinhiseye.Asilentexchangeofglancetoldmehisfinaldecision.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Thenstartedthefiercecompetition,takingawaytheaudience’sbreath.Everybody’sheartwentouttohimwhenthepoorlittleboywasleftfartherandfartherbehind.Worsestill,hetrippedandfellwhenIwascheeringloudlyforhim!“WasItoblameforalltheseembarrassments?“Iguiltilythoughttomyself.Davidmanagedtopickhimselfupbeforeanybodywasabletohelp.Hecontinuedtodraghislegstowardsthedestination.Thunderousapplauseandcheersfilledtheairwithachorusof

“Comeon,David!”

blowinginthebalmybreeze.David,nodoubt,wasthelastone,butthegreatestheroshiningwiththeawesomesportsmanship!“Itfeelssogoodwhenhesitationgiveswaytodetermination!”

Withthisconclusion,thebreathlessboythrewhimselfintomyarmsandthankedmewithhistoothygrin.Forme,thegreatestprivilegeofbeingateacheristhatyouneverknowhowyourpupilwillteachyou!范文5：Paragraph1:Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme

Seeinghimlowerhishead,Ipattedhimonhisshouldergentlyandtoldhimthatallhiseffortswouldbewastedifhedidn'tparticipate.Sunkinthoughts,hebithislipsforawhileandIencouragedhimthatnonewouldlaughatanyonewhosparednoefforttodothebest.Notasingleworddidhesay.However,Iwasextremelyexcitedtoseehimnodslowlyandstandtohisfeet.Wavingtosaygoodbyetome,hequickenedhispaceandheadedforthestartingline.91Paragraph2:IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Astherefereewhistled,Davidstormedforward,tryinghisbesttofollowtherunners.Heartpoundingviolentlyandpalmssweating,Igazedathimanxiouslyandcheeredforhimexcitedly.Thoughhewaspassedbyotherrunnersbehind,hewasstickingtorunningwithoutdelay.Evenwhenhefellforward,

herefusedtoendthecross-countryrun.Themomenthereachedthefinishingline,hewaswarmlygreetedwiththunderousapplauseforhisgreatdetermination.范文6：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn'tlookatme.Timeseemedtostandstill.Smiletuggingatthecornerofmymouth,Ipattedonhisshoulderandencouragedhimtorun.Hedidn'treplytomebutIcontinuedencouraginghim,asIcaughtafleshoflightinhiseyes.Afterwhatseemedtobeages,Davidliftedhisheadandcastmeadeterminedlook.Allthefrustrationthathadbeenbuiltinsideofmecametoacompletestop.Thencamethemomentwhenhetoldthecoachthathedecidedtorun.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.

Withthesoundofagun,alltherunnersbegantorun.ItwentwithoutsayingthatDavid

was

leftbehindotherrunners.Buthedidn'tgiveupandthrivedtofinishit.Thunderousapplauseburstout.Everyonewasstruckbyhisstrongdeterminationinsteadoflaughingathim.Crystal-liketearslikebrokenpearlsrolleddownhisface.Thatexperiencewascarvedinhismind,andnothingwouldbeabletoeraseit.范文7：Wesatdowntogetheronsomesteps,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Iturnedhimaroundandlookedhimintheeyesincerely.Iquietlysaid,“David,ifyou’renotrunningbecauseyou’reafraidsomeoneisgoingtolaugh,that’snotagoodenoughreason.Areyougoingtoletthemgetinyourway?Ifyoureallywanttorun,David,run!”IheldmybreathasDavidtookthisin.Thenhelookedatthefieldandsaidwithafiercebutquietdetermination,“I’mgonnarun.”IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartingline.Thestarter’sgunsounded.Buthehadonlygoneafewmetresbeforehetrippedandfellflatontheground.Myheartsank.AsIstartedtoshoutencouragement,othervoicesaroundmetookupthecall.“ComeonDavid,youcandoit!”Davidpickedhimselfupandstartedagainuntilhecrossedthefinishlinetowildcheersandapplause.范文8：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDavidwouldn’tlookatme.Pattinghimontheshoulder,Isaid,“Icanunderstandhowyouarefeeling.Canyoutellmewhyyouhavedecidednottorun？”Turningtomewithtearfuleyes,herepliedhehadmeanttorun,butwasafraidofbeinglaughedatbyotherchildren.“Butyouhavebeenlookingforwardtoit.Ihopeyoucanchallengeyourselfandjointherun,”Isaidencouragingly.Withatoothysmileonhisface,hepromisedtorun.(80

詞

)IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Helooked

small

among

other

children,

buthefacedthechallengebravely.Asthegunshotsignaledthebeginning,allthechildrendashedoutlikearrows.AsusualDavidfellbehindothers,buthekeptrunning,hissmallbodyrockingfromsidetoside.Whenallotherchildrenreachedthefinishingline,Davidwasstillrunninginthethickevergreenforest.Whenhearrivedatthefinishinglineanhourlater,hemetwiththunderous

applause.

His

determination

andpersistencemadehimabighero.（85

詞）范文9：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDaviddidn'tlookatme.

Heloweredhisheadandwriggledhishands.“Doyoufeartheaudiencewilllaughatyou?”Iasked.Henoddedwithshameandguilt.Itsuddenlydawnedonmethathewasashamedofhisphysicalcondition.Ihuggedhimfirmly,“Ihavefaithinyouandyouwillnotbelookeddownupon.Instead,everyonewillcheerupforyoureffortstomakeit!”Davidwasinspiredinstantlyandacceptedtorun.IwatchedasDavidmoveduptothestartinglinewiththeotherrunners.Asthesignaltorunignited,runnersshotoutlikebullets,exceptDavid.Hedraggedhislegwithgreatefforts,stepbystep.Alltheaudiencerealizedthathewasdeterminedtogoinspiteofphysicalweakness,andtheyexplodedexclamation.Witheveryone’sencouragement,Davidfinallyfinishedtherace,thoughitwasthelastonetoaccomplish.Peopleweredeeplymovedbyhisperseveranceanditwasthedearestthinginsportsmanship.范文10：Wesatdownnexttoeachother,butDaviddidn'tlookatme.

Clearingmythroat,Istarted,“Nowyoutellmeyourrealthought,David?”

Hesitantly,hecustomarilyloweredhisheadandavertedmygaze,numbthereforseconds.Ipattedhisheadgentlyandsaid,“Iamalwaysproudofyourstrongdetermination.Iknowyouwillalwaysparticipatetothebestofyourabilityinwhateveryouweredoing.Justb