2024屆高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)道歉信作文評講課件

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（15分）假定你是李華，

你的美國留學(xué)生朋友

Mark即將回國，但你臨時有事無法去機(jī)場為他送行。請給他寫封郵件，內(nèi)容包括：1.表示歉意；2.說明理由；3.你的祝愿。詞數(shù)80左右。3SampleletterDearGeorge,(表示歉意)

I'mterriblysorrytotellyouthatI'llbeunabletoseeyouoffattheairporttomorrowafternoon.(說明理由)

DuringyourstayinChina,yougavemyalotofhelpinEnglishlearningwhichIappreciateverymuch.Ireallyhopetoseeyouoffandthankyoufacetoface.However,myyoungersistersuddenlyfellillthismorningandsheneedstobeinhospitalforthreedays.Ihavetotakecareofhersincemyparentsarefullyoccupiedwithwork.(你的祝愿)

It'smuchtomyregretthatIwillmisssuchanimportantoccasion.Wishyouapleasantjourneyanddon'tforgettokeepintouch!Yours,LiHuaItwastimetogohome.“Remembertoworkonyourclassspeechesforhomework,”MissWalkercalled,aseveryonestartedtalkingandpackingtheirschoolbags.Jennyfeltsick.Shehatedhavingtoreadaloudinclass.Shewassureeveryonegotreallyboredlisteningtoher.Once,whenJennywasreadingoutherholidaydiary,Leewasevenlookingathiswatch,asilverandblueonewhichseemedjustmagical.JennywatchedLeewalkaheadofherastheyleftschool.Heseemedsoclever,andhehadacertainsortofshiningconfidence.Hewasjustoneofthosepeoplewhoweregoodateverything.Jennysighed.Assheturnedthecorner,shesawLee'swatchlyingrightinthemiddleofthepath.Jennyknewsheshouldjustpickitupandreturnittohim,butshedidn'twanttorunafterhim.Jennybentdownquickly,pickedupthewatchandranhome.Onarrivinghome,Jennyputitonalmostwithoutthinking.Shewassurpriseditfittedsowell.Shewalkedtothemirrorandstartedpracticingherspeech.Wordsjustfloodedout

ofher.“I'mgoingtotalkaboutswimming.Ihavebeenlucky.I'vewonlotsofcompetitions.ButwhenI'minarace,I'mnotreallythinkingaboutwinning.I'mjustlovingthefeelingofbeinginthewater...”Jennylaughedwithexcitement.Shewalkedacrosstheroom.Shesuddenlyseemedtohaveacertainsortofconfidence.Turningbacktothemirror,Jennysawaflashoflightfromthewatchintheglass.Theflashesofsilverseemedalmostmagical.SomaybeLee'swatchreallyDIDhavesomethingmagic.Thenextday,asthelessonbegan,MissWalkeraskedwhowasgoingtobebraveandgofirst.No-bodymoved.Jennyslowlyraisedherarm.BeforeMissWalkercouldsayanything,therewasashoutfrombehind.“She'sstolenmywatch!”Leesaidangrily,“Itwentmissingatschoolyesterday.”

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforan

explanation.Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolisten

toJenny'sspeechfirst.plot（reasonable）Predictwhatwillhappenbasedonthecontentgivenandthefirstsentenceofthelasttwoparagraphs.Para5(ContinuationPara1):EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforan

explanation._________________________________________________1.Jenny穩(wěn)定情緒(心理，動作，內(nèi)心獨(dú)白等等)2.否認(rèn)偷手表并解釋未及時歸還的原因3.她的理由并沒有讓大家信服Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolisten

toJenny'sspeechfirst.Ending?writingoutlineplot（reasonable）Para6(ContinuationPara2):__________________________________________________________________________________________1.她的演講流暢自然。2.同學(xué)們包括Lee也被吸引了。3.她沒有看手表但完成了演講。4.她找回了自信和同學(xué)們的認(rèn)可。Ending?writingoutlinelanguage（rich&varied）大家等待解釋

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.1.Jenny穩(wěn)定情緒

AflushofembarrassmentcreptoverJenny'sface.Howtomakeothersbelieveshedidn'tstealitbuttookitforitsmagic?Itsoundedridiculous.Loweringherhead,shesuddenlycaughtsightofthedimsilverlightfromthewatch.aflushof

:asuddenstrongfeeling一陣強(qiáng)烈情感aflushofanger/embarrassment/enthusiasm/guilt一陣憤怒/尷尬/熱情/內(nèi)疚creep-crept-crept:tomoveordevelopveryslowly非常緩慢地行進(jìn)；不知不覺產(chǎn)生；Aslightfeelingofsuspicioncreptoverme.我漸漸地產(chǎn)生了一絲疑慮。language（rich&varied）2.否認(rèn)偷手表并解釋未及時歸還的原因

Withadeterminedlookonherface,JennyadmittedthatthewatchwasLee'sandshefounditaccidentallywhenleavingschool.Shealsonotedthatitwasthewatchthathelpedherconquertheterrorofgivingaspeech.

3.她的理由并沒有讓大家信服.Whispersspreadingintheclassroom,itseemedasifnobodybelievedher.Para6:

Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmiledandaskedtheclasstolistentoJenny'sspeechfirst.1.她的演講流暢自然。Thesmile,warmandpowerful,immediatelydroveawayJenny'sfear.Takingadeepbreath,shestartedherspeechinacalmvoice.2.同學(xué)們包括Lee也被吸引了。Asshementionedhowshefeltinthewater,sodevotedandpassionatewasJennythatshetotallyforgotshewasgivingaspeech.Fascinatedbyheruniquequality,everyone,includingLee,stoodtoapplaudhersuccessfulspeechwhenitwasover.Para6:3.她沒有看手表但完成了演講。她找回了自信。TearswelledupinJenny'seyes.Toheramazement,shedidn'tevengiveaglanceatthewatchwhengivingthespeech.BathedinMisswalker'ssmileoftrust,finally,Jennygotherconfidencebackaswellasfriends’approval.

EverybodywasfixingtheireyesonJenny,waitingforanexplanation.

AflushofembarrassmentcreptoverJenny'sface.Howtomakeothersbelieveshedidn'tstealitbuttookitforitsmagic?Itsoundedridiculous.Loweringherhead,shesuddenlycaughtsightofthedimsilverlightfromthewatch.Withadeterminedlookonherface,JennyadmittedthewatchwasLee'sandshefounditaccidentally

whenleavingschool.Shealsonotedthat

itwasthewatch

thathelpedherconquertheterrorofgivingaspeech.Whispersspreadingintheclassroom,itseemedasifnobodybelievedher.

Atthatmoment,MissWalkersmi