讀后續(xù)寫親情類我的媽媽是個英雄講義高考英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的短文Mymomhatestocook,She'drathertinkerwith(=)hermotorcycleorpracticeknottyingforrockclimbing.ShealsospendsalotoftimewithmeEverymorningMomtakesmetoschool.lputonmypurplehelmetandclimbonto.TheBeast.Mom'spassion,aftermeandhermotorcycle,isclimbing.lwouldsay"rockclimbing",butwedon'thaveanylargerocksormountainsnearby.lusedtofeelembarrassedthatmymomwassodifferent.NowI'veetoappreciateMomforwhosheisandnotjustbecauseshe'sahero.ltallstartedwithacookingproject.EverystudentinMrsMaitlandt'shomeeconomicsclasswassupposedtocreateanoriginaldish,andthenpresentitatschoolthefollowingTuesdaymorning.lbeggedMomtohelpme.Shegavein,butnotuntillpromisedtohelphercleanTheBeast.Wespenthoursinthekitchen.Wepreparedhotdogsandhardboiledeggsrolledincoconut.Iwassatisfied.Thebigdaycame.Ourparentsweresupposedtobringourfoodtotheclassroomateleveno’clock.AsMomdroppedmeoffthatmorning,lmadeherrepeat,Iwillnotforgetthecake.Iwilnotforgetthecake.”lwatchedherrepeatingitasshewentaway.Aftermathclass,weallfileduptothethirdfloor.IlookedaroundforMom.Shewasn'tthere.SammyPingle'sfatherhadbroughtsomesortofchickendish.PamelaBeanandheraunthadapitcherofliquidwithlemonsfloatinginit.JanetGreelyandhermomproudlystoodnearanenormousfruitsaladtoppedwithsomemarshmallowsWhereareyou,Mom?Iwondered.Theminutestickedbyandmoregrownupsappeared,bringingmoretastydishes.FinallyheardthedistantroaroftheBeast.Iracedtothewindow.lwasastonished.Momwasemptyhanded!lmetheratthedoor.Youforgotit,didn'tyou?”Mom’seyeswideopen.“I'msor_"Shecouldn'tfinishherapology;aclangingalarmcutheroff.注意:1續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右2.請按如下格式在相應(yīng)位置作答。MrsMaitlandshouted,Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!"AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.材料分析:這篇讀后續(xù)寫以人物為線索展開，作者的母親是一位與眾不同的母親，她討厭做飯，卻愛搗鼓她的摩托車和攀巖，這一度讓作者感到非常尷尬。但是現(xiàn)在作者卻開始欣賞自己的媽媽不僅僅因為她是一個英雄，這一改變的起因在于一個烹飪活動。然后作者描述了在MrsMaitland的家政課上，老師要求每個學(xué)生準(zhǔn)備一道原創(chuàng)菜看，作者與媽媽精心準(zhǔn)備好菜肴，并反復(fù)提醒媽媽記得帶上他們的菜肴，結(jié)果媽媽還是空著手出現(xiàn)了。就當(dāng)媽媽想對此表示道歉時，火警警報器響了。故事容易讀懂，但是可能會因為對兩端首句理解上的困難，造成跑題。故事線：Momhatestocookbutlovesmeandhermotorcycleandrockclimbing.Ibeggedmymomtocreateanoriginaldishandsaladandwespenthoursinthekitchenmakingthedish.Mom'droppedmeoffthatmorningandImademompromisethatshewillnotforgetthecake.Otherstudents’parentsbroughttheirdishesbutmomemptyhanded.感情線：Embarrasseddelighted/satisfiedworriedeagerdisappointed研讀兩段的給出句，想想它們給我們提供了哪些續(xù)寫線索,確定續(xù)寫方向Para1:MrsMaitlandshouted,“Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!Whywasthereafire?Howdidwefeel?Whatdidmymom,myclassmatesandIdo?Para2:AsMsayaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.Whosescreamwasit?Whydidhe/shescream?Whatdidmymomdo?續(xù)寫方向：第一段：可知，第一段會記敘為什么會著火再結(jié)合文章內(nèi)容以及第二段首句MrsMaitland在點名可判斷，第一段還應(yīng)描寫大家是怎樣跑出那棟樓的，大家的感受應(yīng)該是恐懼和害怕的。第二段：根據(jù)第二段首句AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance.weheardascreamfromthebuilding.本段可能描寫這是誰的尖叫聲，他身上發(fā)生了什么事，根據(jù)上文我變得開始欣賞媽媽不僅是因為她是一個英雄，得知這一段應(yīng)描寫媽媽做了什么事情，根據(jù)正能量原則，媽媽應(yīng)該是去救了這個.語言積累：befearful/afraid/scaredof害怕goblank(大腦)突然一片空白go/turnpale臉色慘白afloodoffearwellsup/springsupins.心里涌起一陣恐懼tremble/shakewithfear/terror嚇得發(fā)抖chokewithfear因為害怕而哽咽heartbeatsviolently心跳的得厲害standopenmouthedwithhorror嚇得目瞪口呆范文：MrsMaitlandshouted,"Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!”Weallheadedforthestairs.WefoundoutlaterthatJackhadbeenheatingoilforpopcorn.He'dstartedtalkingtohisclassmateandhadforgottenaboutthehotoil.Whenhecametoputsugaronthecorn,therewereflamesleapingfromthepan.Everyonepiledintotheparkinglot.Smokestartedtoeoutofoneofthethirdfloorwindows.Momheldmyhandtightly.Iforgotaboutmycake.AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.WelookedupandsawJenny,Help!"shecriedout,“I'mtrapped!"Momdisappeared.ShegrabbedherclimbingropefromTheBeastandrantowardthebuilding.Momclimbedtothewindowandsecuredoneendofherrope,thenloweredashakyJennysafelytotheground.Assoonasshewasfree,everyonecheered.Whocaresifmymomhatestocook?升級范文：MrsMaitlandshouted,"Fire!Thisisnotadrill!Everyoneoutofthebuilding!”HardlyhadweheardMrsMaitland’swordswhenallofuscrowdedforthestairslikeaflood,screamingandstaggering.Asenseofhorrorcreptuponmerippingacrossmywholebody,mybloodrunningcoldandmyeverysinglehairstandingonend.WefoundoutlaterthatJackhadbeenheatingoilforpopcornbutheforgotaboutit,whichresultedinflamesleapingfromthepan.Everyonepiledintotheparkinglot.Wesawflameswiththickblacksmokeingoutfromthethirdfloor.Andwealsoheardtheexplosionofthegastankmixedwiththenoisysoundsfromshatteringwindows.Momheldmyhandtightlyforforgettingaboutmycake.AsMrsMaitlandwastakingattendance,weheardascreamfromthebuilding.WelookedupandsawJennyHelp!"shecriedout’I'mtrapped!"Unfortunately,theflamesalreadycoveredonesideofthebuilding,longskinnytonguesoforangeslitheringoutthewindow,tryingtoreachtheroof.Whenallofusfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch,Momdisappeared.Grabbi