讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)周周練母親節(jié)的愛(ài)心早餐導(dǎo)學(xué)案高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)周周練主題：人與人類(lèi)型一親情類(lèi)題目：母親節(jié)的愛(ài)心早餐第二節(jié)(滿(mǎn)分25分)閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。AMother'sDaySurpriseThetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningforMother'sDay.HowpleasedandproudMotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.TheyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.Theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.Therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.Thebigdaycameatlast.Thealarmrangat6a.m.Thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.Theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.TheyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jennafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.Next,Jeffturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.EverythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.Thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.Thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.ThenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.Thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.Thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJefftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.Thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.Ohdear!Thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.注意：1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分為兩段，開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好：Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared._____________________________________________________________________Paragraph2:Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup._____________________________________________________________________文本分析1、頭腦風(fēng)暴1.Whatwouldtheirfatherandthetwinssaywhentheirfatherappeared?2.Wouldtheirfatherhelpthemout?WhatwouldFatherdoinordertohelp?whatthetwins’behavior?3.Howdidthetwins’feel?4.Whatwouldthetwinssaytotheirmotherandwhatwouldtheirmothersaytothetwins?Totellthetruth?5.Whentheytalkedtotheirmother,whatkindsofbehaviorsbetweenthem?6.Whatdidtheyunderstandandrealizefromthisincident?2.重點(diǎn)詞匯和表達(dá)單詞音標(biāo)詞義背誦porridge[?p?r?d?]n.粥;麥片粥;toast[t??st]n.吐司;干杯;burner[?b?:n?(r)]n.爐子，燃燒器;3.文本要素分析elementscontentWhoWhatWhenWhere【參考答案】：Who：Jenna&Jeff(twins),mother,father;What：ThetwinswantedtosurprisetheirmomonMother’sDay,sotheywerepreparingthebreakfastbutitwasmessandburnedthefinger;When:At6:00aminthemorning;Where：Athome;Theme(主題):Thepurposeofthepassageistotellustobegratefultoourparents.4.故事結(jié)構(gòu)圖plotlineplotline故事情節(jié)線(xiàn)climaxclimax（高潮）Theirfatherappeared....Whatwouldhappen(發(fā)生Theirfatherappeared....Whatwouldhappen(發(fā)生)?______________________________________________________________________________________________________development，developmentdevelopment，ThetwinsJeffandJennaplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherasawother'sDaysurpriseThetwinsJeffandJennaplannedtomakebreakfastfortheirmotherasawother'sDaysurprise____________________________________________________________________________________________beginningstorymountaineendingpositivepositiveresolution解決action行動(dòng)conflict沖突resolution解決action行動(dòng)conflict沖突【參考答案】：development:EverythingwentsmoothlyuntilJeffburntthepieceofbread.climax：Theporridgeboiledover,Jeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandtheotherpieceofthebreadturnedblack.ending:Motherhuggedthetwinsandshowedherthanks.5.文本概要本文以母親節(jié)為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了雙胞胎Jenna和Jeff為了獻(xiàn)給母親一份美味的早餐，自己動(dòng)手，做起飯餐來(lái)，但是不幸的是，他們連連失敗，后來(lái)在父親的幫助下，獲得成功，他們把早餐獻(xiàn)給親愛(ài)的母親，媽媽非常感動(dòng)的故事。6.續(xù)寫(xiě)結(jié)構(gòu)分析Paragraph1:Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.TheirfatherhelpingTheirfatherhelpingtwinspreparebreakfast.首句呼應(yīng)上文ThethingstheyThethingstheydidtogetherXXX中間刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)___________________________________________________________________中間刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)gobackhome尾句銜接過(guò)渡___________________________________________________________________gobackhome尾句銜接過(guò)渡Paragraph2:finishthebreakfastThetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.首句finishthebreakfast首句呼應(yīng)上文say\do\feel___________________________________________________________________say\do\feelsurpriseandlove中間刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)___________________________________________________________________surpriseandlove中間刻畫(huà)細(xì)節(jié)尾句萃章顯志向cui尾句萃章顯志向cui’zhang’xian’zhi【詳解】1、續(xù)寫(xiě)構(gòu)思①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)雙胞胎失望地環(huán)顧四周時(shí)，他們的父親出現(xiàn)了。”可知，第一段可描寫(xiě)他們的父親指導(dǎo)幫助他們準(zhǔn)備早餐。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“這對(duì)雙胞胎把早餐端到樓上，叫醒了他們的母親?！笨芍诙慰擅鑼?xiě)母親收到孩子們的禮物早餐，非常感動(dòng)。2、續(xù)寫(xiě)線(xiàn)索幫助——指導(dǎo)——積極——獻(xiàn)禮——感動(dòng)3、詞匯激活行為類(lèi)①.幫助：help/assist②.指導(dǎo)：guide/conduct③.獻(xiàn)禮：presentagift/giveagift情緒類(lèi)①.積極：positive/positively/takepositiveactions②.感動(dòng)：moved/touched4、續(xù)寫(xiě)訓(xùn)練1、爸爸毫不猶豫地主動(dòng)提出幫忙。他和雙胞胎一起準(zhǔn)備母親節(jié)驚喜。（withoutasecondthought）2、看到他們垂頭喪氣的臉，他讓他們打掃廚房，同時(shí)幫他們給媽媽做早餐。（非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞；時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）3、珍娜引起了她父親的注意，他們偷偷地向?qū)Ψ秸Ａ苏Ｑ?。（catchone’seye；wink）5、“親子關(guān)系”高分句型1、Whereweloveishome,homethatourfeetmayleave,butnotourhearts.家是我們所愛(ài)的地方，雙腳可以離開(kāi)，心卻不能。2、Nottomeanagreeting,nottoshyahug,getclosetoourfamilies,cherishthisextraordinaryandnobleaffection.不要吝嗇一個(gè)問(wèn)候，不要害羞一個(gè)擁抱，親近我們的家人，珍視這平凡而又高貴的親情，那是生世最真最切的永恒。3、Ifthewholeworldbetrayedyou,atleastyourmotherwillnotgiveup.Stillrememberchildhoodmother'sembraceisthemostbeautifulparadise.如果整個(gè)世界都拋棄了你，至少還有母親不會(huì)放棄你。還記得兒時(shí)母親的懷抱就是我最美的天堂。4、Whenitestofamily,weareallstillchildrenatheart.Nomatterhowoldweget,wealwaysneedaplacetocallhome.面對(duì)家人的時(shí)候，在我們內(nèi)心深處我們始終覺(jué)得自己還是孩子。不管我們年齡多大了，我們還需要一個(gè)稱(chēng)之為家的地方。5、Thefamilyisshapingexcellentpersonalitylifetextbook,istostimulatethespiritofpowersource,istheemotionalrainnourishesthesoul.親情是塑造優(yōu)秀人格的人生教科書(shū)，是激發(fā)力量的精神源泉，是滋養(yǎng)心靈的情感雨露?！緟⒖即鸢浮浚?.續(xù)寫(xiě)訓(xùn)練1.Withoutasecondthought,Dadofferedtohelp.HejoinedthetwinsinpreparingtheMother’sDaysurprise.2.Seeingtheircrestfallenfaces,hetoldthemtocleanupthekitchenwhilehehelpedthemmakebreakfastforMother.3.Jennacaughtherfather’seyeandtheywinkedateachothersecretly.7.范文展示Asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.“Don’tpanic!”theirfatherhandedeachofthemawettowel,

helpingthemcleanthemessupquickly.Afterthecleaning,hebeganhelpingthempreparebreakfast.Thetwinsactedastheirfather’slittlehelpers,anditwasapleasuretoteamupwiththeirfather.Underhiscarefulguidance,

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theFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.

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theirfatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.Thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.“HappyMother’sDay!”shoutedthetwins.“Andwehaveasurpriseforyou!”Sosweetwasthes