2023年上海九年級英語中考沖刺講義之作文（分體裁）

教學(xué)內(nèi)容Fillintheblankswithproperwords（在短文的空格內(nèi)填入適當(dāng)?shù)脑~，使其內(nèi)容通順．每空格限填一詞，首字母已給出）TipsforiningfreshmaninhighschoolIneverreallyknewexactlyhowIfeltaboutstartinghighschool.WhileIwasexcitedtomakenewfriendsandlearnnewthings,Iwasalsoverynervousaboutfindingmywayaround.Iknewitwouldbed______togetusedtoanewlife,buttherereallyisn'tmuchtofear!So,forallthosenewiningfreshmenoutthere,I'mheretohelpyoumakeitthroughyourfirstyearofhighschool!HereisjustalistofsomeofthethingsIfoundhelpfulthroughoutmyfirstyear.1)Remember,youarenota______.Therearehundredsofteensexperiencingwhatyouareexperiencingthisverymoment!Althoughyoumay,feelamilliondifferentthings,justkeepinm______thattherearepeoplethatarefeelingthesameway.2)Don'tbeafraidtomakenewfriends.Therearemanypeoplewhos______thesameinterestsasyouandarelookingforthosewhohavethatinterest.Sometimesyoumayhavenothinginmonbuttheneedtomakefriends!Remember,thereareplentyofteensoutthereforyou.3)Joinaninterestingcluborsport.Highschoolisthetimetot______newthings,andluckilyyourschoolhassomuchtooffer!Therearesomanyclubstochoosefrom,liketheenvironmentalclub,Spanishclub,cookingclub,andsomanymore!Manyschoolsalsoofferawidevarietyofsports,i______afreshmanlevel!Joiningacluborsportisalsoagreatwaytomeetpeople!…See?Itreallyisn'tthathard!Knowingthesethingswillhopefullymakeyoufeelalittlemorec______aboutyourfreshmanyearofhighschool.8187difficult,alone,mind,share,try,including,confident下面這篇作文寫的如何？請同學(xué)們注意自己的字跡與書寫習(xí)慣。專題知識梳理確定文章的框架和結(jié)構(gòu)是寫作的前提。文章的結(jié)構(gòu)永遠(yuǎn)是決定一篇寫作是否達(dá)到要求的最重要的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)，即一篇文章好不好，首先看的不是他的句型，詞匯，或是論點(diǎn)等，而是段落之間的銜接一定要十分清楚，常用的大三段的形式開頭，經(jīng)過，結(jié)尾。同時可以多用用連接詞，例如：firstofall,moreover,secondly,lastly等。另外可以多分自然段，給考官一目了然的感覺。還有我們可以多看看優(yōu)秀的文章，看看他們的寫作模式，這樣寫出來的作文寫作才能更加貼近考官的標(biāo)準(zhǔn)。二、專題精講（1）議論文Nowadays,thereisamonworryabout（theissuethat）___作文題目______.Infact,therearebothadvantagesanddisadvantagesin__題目議題_____.Itiswidelybelievedthereareseveraladvantagesasfollows.Firstly，___優(yōu)點(diǎn)一______.Andsecondly___優(yōu)點(diǎn)二_____.Justasthesayinggoes,everycoinhastwosides,__討論議題______isnoexception.Itstillhasdisadvantages.Tobeginwith,___缺點(diǎn)一______.Inaddition,____缺點(diǎn)二______.Tosumup,weshouldtrytomakefulluseoftheadvantagesof__討論議題____,andreducethedisadvantagesatthesametime.Inthatway,wewillcertainlymakeabetteruseofthe____討論議題___.Recentlytherehasbeenadiscussionaboutthetopic“WaterIsPrecious”inyourclass.PleasewriteatHost60wordsaboutthetopic"WaterIsPrecious"toexpressyourpointofview,(請以“水是珍貴的”寫一篇至少60詞的作文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）(你的作文內(nèi)容須包含以下幾點(diǎn))1）Whyiswaterveryimportantinourlife?2）Whatarethecausesofthewatershortage?3）Howcanweprotectourpreciouswaterresources?____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________60________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________100作文實(shí)例WaterIsPreciousRecentlytherehasbeenadiscussionaboutthetopic“WaterIsPrecious”inmyclass.Iholdthepointthatwateristhemostimportantintheworld.Wecan’tlivewithoutwater.However,theamountofwaterislessandless.Butsomepeopledon’tcareaboutit.Theywastealotofwaterintheirdailylife.Evenworse,theypourdirtywaterinrivers.Theythrowrubbishintorivers,too.Manyriversandlakesareseriouslypolluted.Wemuststopthepollution.Onlyinthiswaywecan（canwe）livehappily.Ifwedon’tsavewater,thelastdropofwaterwillbeateardropofus.批改：7+5+1=13原文的詞句較好，語法也是優(yōu)秀的，但是唯一不足的是，文章的重點(diǎn)沒有把握好，特別是第三個問題之如何保護(hù)水資源沒有進(jìn)行細(xì)寫。所以文章的完整性、針對性要時刻把握，建議：列出提綱，并指出重點(diǎn)描寫部分。WaterispreciousThereisnodoubtthatwateristhemostpreciousintheworld.However,nobodycandenythefactthatmanypeoplearewastingandpollutingwater.Manythingsareinfluencingthewatershortage.Manyfactoriesarepollutingtheriversandlakesbypouringdirtywater.Treesarecutdownsothatwaterisflowingabout.Manypeoplewastewaterinacasualway.Itishightimeweprotectedwater.First,weshouldmakerulestoavoidpollutingwater.Wemusttrytoaskfactoriestorecyclewater.Second,treesaresupposedtobeplantedinagreatnumber.Inthisway,watercanberemained.Third,weneedtoaskeveryonetosaveusingwaterineverydailylife.Withgreateffort,weareabletoprotectwater.（2）記敘文第一段：總結(jié)描述Lifeisjustlikeapainting,colorfulandmeaningful.Amongthem,nothingcanbemoreunforgettablethantheafternoonspentwithmyfather.第二段：具體描述第三段：對事件分析Itisthemostunforgettabledayinmymemory.I’lltreasureforeverandbearinmindthatIshouldalwaysbesincereanddiligent.Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Oneproblem/questionImetinmyEnglishstudy”.accordingtothesituationgiven(請根據(jù)所給情形，以“我在英語學(xué)習(xí)中碰到的一個問題”為題，寫一篇不少于60個字的短文。要求內(nèi)容切題、語言地道、表達(dá)流暢)情境：每個人在自己的英語學(xué)習(xí)過程中總會碰到這樣那樣的問題。你碰到過怎樣的問題？你解決了這個問題嗎？如果解決了，你認(rèn)為你的解決方案怎么樣？如果沒有解決，你認(rèn)為是什么原因？以后會用什么更好的方法？以下詞或詞組供參考：can(not),understand,(don’t)know,read…correctly,remember,write,ask(注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分)作文實(shí)例OneproblemImetinmyEnglishstudyIhavemanyproblemsinmyEnglishstudy.Amongthem,remember(remembering)word(words)isthebiggestproblem.Wordisveryimportant,(wordsare)soIshouldtrymanywaystosolvetheproblem.First,Ishouldtrytoreadloudly(aloud)everynewword.Second,usethewordsmanytimes,suchaswrite(writing)morepassages.Third,Ineedtrytofinddifferentwaystorememberwords.Allinall,IhopetoremembermorewordstoimproveEnglish.批改：5.5+7+1=14語法錯誤較多，特別是動名詞做主語，另外就是單復(fù)數(shù)和主謂一致，其次就是loudly和aloud的區(qū)別。參考范文OneproblemImetinmyEnglishstudyNowadays,Englishhasbeenausefultoolintheworld.EveryonehasdifferentproblemsinlearningEnglish.Ihavethesameproblem.Ican’tmemorizethewordswell.Idecidetotrysomewaystosolvetheproblem.Mostofall,IshouldtrytorevieweverywordwhenIhavetime.Besides,agoodwayofrememberingisnecessary.Ihopetoaskothersforadviceaboutmorewaysaboutrememberingwords.Lastly,Ineedtousethewordsmoreoften.Ishouldreadthewordscorrectlyandwritemorepassageswithnewwords.IstronglybelievethatIcanmemorizewordsbetter.三如何開頭與結(jié)尾一、開頭類：語文作文常言題好一半文，英語也一樣，好的開頭也就是一篇成功作文的一半，agoodbeginningishalfdone,想想閱卷老師要批全年級許多作文，如果每篇上來都像串通好了一樣的IthinkIthink,這會是如何郁悶的感覺，alwaysputyourselfintheother’sshoes,寫作文的時候也要換位思考，替批分的老師想想。如果這個老師，在進(jìn)行了一上午枯燥的批閱過程后，猛然間，讀到一個繽紛絢爛的開頭，被深深shock到，被deeplyimpressed到,那會是何等的驚艷！下面就來欣賞一些容易吸引眼球的閃亮開頭。開頭一：名人名言+諺語俗語記住，一篇120字左右的作文里，出現(xiàn)12句名言點(diǎn)綴一下即可，切忌為求華麗生搬硬套。在用到名言的時候，大致有這么4種：1.Aproverbsays，……2.Itgoeswithoutsayingthat……3.Asaclassicproverbgoesthat……（推薦?。?.thereismuchtruthinthesaying“……”（俗話說得好……）推薦背誦的名人名言+諺語：在論述努力學(xué)習(xí)一類的作文中可用到以下這些：Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。（強(qiáng)調(diào)多做練習(xí)的重要性……）Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。（學(xué)習(xí)要堅持不懈）It'snevertoooldtolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithasinglestep.千里之行始于足下。（強(qiáng)調(diào)腳踏實(shí)地的重要性）Actionspeakslouderthanwords.行動勝過語言。（學(xué)習(xí)，是要去做的）Experienceisthemotherofwisdom.實(shí)踐出真知。（做學(xué)問要實(shí)踐）Romewasnotbuiltinaday.偉業(yè)非一日之功。（學(xué)習(xí)是個積累的過程）Onefalsestepwillmakeagreatdifference.失之毫厘，謬之千里。（強(qiáng)調(diào)治學(xué)要嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)）Anidleyouth,aneedyage.少壯不努力，老大徒傷悲。（不好好學(xué)習(xí)你就悲劇了）Asamansows,soshallhereap.種瓜得瓜，種豆得豆。（聲明天道酬勤的真理）Allworkandnoplaymakesjackadullboy.只工作不休息，聰明孩子也變傻。（也要說說學(xué)習(xí)不能過度）開頭二：數(shù)字統(tǒng)計，用報告說話要想更有說服力，就應(yīng)該用實(shí)際的數(shù)字來說明。

不妨試用下面的句型：

1.Accordingtoarecentsurvey,2.Arecentsurveyshowsthat……開頭三：描述身邊現(xiàn)象/生活現(xiàn)狀/社會現(xiàn)象在寫到一些要求對某類熱點(diǎn)民生話題的作文時，開頭可以這樣寫1.Anincreasingnumberofpeoplearebeginningtorealizethat……（比如意識到環(huán)保、節(jié)能、低碳的重要性）2.Manyindividuals,ifnotthemost,holdtheideathat……（比較高階的一種，詞漂亮又有插入語，推薦?。?.Now,itisgenerallyaccepted/monlythoughtthat……4.Nowadays,manypeoplearelivingundertheidea/thoughtthat……5.……h(huán)ascausedwidepublicconcernrecentyears（描述某件引起廣泛關(guān)注的話題時）6..……isnowbeingquestionedbymoreandmore/aincreasingnumberofpeople（寫到某些舉措不得人心，或者你持反對態(tài)度的時候，可以這么寫）開頭四：介紹某些人、事、物1.Whenspeakingof/Whenitesto……（萬能公式）2.……，describedas……，is……e.g.Microblog,describedasapletelynewformofmunication,hasnowcaughtonquicklyamongteenagersbyenablingtheuserstoupdatetheirlateststatuswithinjustafewwords.3.Itseemsthat……is……（sweepingtheworld/catchingon/beingpopularovernight）（比如說說科技的飛速發(fā)展，電腦、網(wǎng)絡(luò)的興起等等）4.Formany/mostofus,……is……e.g.Formostofus,adrinkofwaterisjustamatterofturningonatap.開頭五：氣勢磅礴的排比1.For……,itis…….For……,itis…….Andfor……，itis……（從多方面多角度去描述你要寫的東西，前兩個要為第三個蓄勢，觀點(diǎn)最后亮）e.g.Forbaseballfans,2009wastheyearoftheYankees.Forjobseekers,itwastheyearoftheGreatRecession.Andforpeoplewhotrackbabynames,itwastheyearofthevampire.2.Whatdoyou……but……?What……but……？What……but……？（在想要勾起讀者興趣，增強(qiáng)文章互動性時可用這個，不同于上句的層層遞進(jìn)式，這個句式偏重三句并列）e.g.Whatdoyouuseeverysingleday,butneverpayfor?Whatistrulyyoursbutcamefromsomewhereelse?Whatisverypersonalbutsharedwitheveryone?Theanswer?It’syourname.3.……isa……，a……,a……（遞進(jìn)式）e.g.Firstlove,isasurgeofadrenalin,arushofblood,athingofinnocenceandpainthatlastsalifetime.初戀是情感巨浪的洶涌，是情感在熱血中的奔流，是情感純真的表露，亦是一生中永恒的傷痛開頭六：回憶式開頭回憶式的寫法的作用就相當(dāng)于語文中的倒敘，用你的開頭將讀者帶回到當(dāng)時的情景，用在敘述一件事情的作文中效果尤其好1.Ineverforget/remember/bearinmindthe……daywhen……e.g.Ineverforgetthesweetdaywhenwewalkeddownthestreethandinhand.2.Iremembersomewordssaidby+某位名人或熟知的人e.g.IremembersomewordsbythethirdPresidentoftheUnitedStates,……3.Onceuponatime……wasjusta……（用于強(qiáng)調(diào)某人某物今非昔比時）e.g.OnceuponatimeLiubeiwasjustapeddlersellingstrawsandals.曾經(jīng)劉備也只是個賣草鞋的小販4.TherewasatimewhenI/we/youdidsthe.g.Therewasatimewhenwemetwithaseriesofdisastersbutwedidn’tletgoourhope.5.Thereareveryfewthings/peopleItrulylove/hateinlife.（few表達(dá)你對該事物的特殊感情，再用truly進(jìn)一步強(qiáng)調(diào)，接著要做的就是開始具體敘述你所要寫之事）開頭七：否定句開頭有時候否定句起到的強(qiáng)調(diào)效果往往要好于肯定句，也更具有文采1.Perhapsnoone/nothingelse（onEarth/inhistory）hassucha……as……（用來強(qiáng)調(diào)描寫對象的獨(dú)一無二）e.g.PerhapsnooneelseonEarthhassuchanaffinitywiththeNorthPoleasJeanLouisEtienne.也許這個世界上沒有人會像JeanLouisEtienne那樣與北極有過如此親密的接觸2.Therearen’tmany……（people/teenagers/citizens）whohavehadthehonor/chanceto……e.g.Therearen’tverymanyUScitizenswhohavehadthehonortomeetapresident,letaloneakidfromaforeigncountry.3.No……h(huán)asreceivedmorepraisethan……e.g.Noinventionhasreceivedmorepraisethanputer.開頭部分小結(jié)：一般大多數(shù)情況下能夠套用的格式大致有以上這么多種，但所謂水無常形兵無常勢，創(chuàng)作的力量是無窮的，在靈感如涌泉的時候也不妨用自己獨(dú)一無二的搭配寫出一個獨(dú)一無二的開頭，要知道，作文寫到最高境界就是沒有格式，自成一派，信手拈來，就像一塊優(yōu)質(zhì)的畫布，但顏料還得你自己往上涂。二、文章內(nèi)容類：光有個漂亮的開頭還遠(yuǎn)遠(yuǎn)不夠哦，文章的中間部分也就是豬肚環(huán)節(jié)同樣要寫得充實(shí)瀟灑，不然配在一個光鮮的開頭下面，不但不能相得益彰反而顯得干癟無力，讓老師的印象分也驟然下降。那接下來我們就看看如何將這“大頭”部分寫得出彩。要在內(nèi)容部分得高分，用到的技巧大約有這幾種：長短句交叉、使用插入語、用詞多樣準(zhǔn)確生動又形象、關(guān)鍵詞靈活換用不重復(fù)、句型使用多樣表述地道。內(nèi)容技巧一：華麗麗的長短句1.ThesedelicatesentencessaidbyAudreyHepburn,whoiswidelyrecognizedasoneofthemostbeautifulwomen,aimatonetopic:itisone’sinnerbeautythatreallycounts.（非限制性定從，放在句子中間修飾中心詞sentences,顯然要比直接+aimat好得多）2.Backham,whohasbeenalegendinhistime,willdefinitelybeanimmortal,eventhoughhemightnolongerbestrivingonthesparklingpitch.（一個非限制性定從+一個讓步狀語從句）3.However,flowsofadvertisementswillnotonlyimpacttheproducer’simage,butalsomakethepotentialcustomersboredandevenspoiltheadvertisingprogram.（notonly……butalso也是寫長句時的主力軍?。?.Wherevertheygoorwhatevertheydo,theyalwaysbearinmindthattheyaremessengersofpeace,representingChina.（bear……inmind,一個賓從&現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語）5.AlmostatthesametimethenewscamethatpeopleindroughtstrickensouthwesternChinaarefacinghorribleshortageofdrinkingwater,peopleintherestpartofChinajoinedhandstodonatewaterandotherresources,hopingtogiveahandtothoseintroubleandbenoonlooker.決不袖手旁觀（有1個時間狀語從句+1個同位語從句+1個名詞&動詞過去式構(gòu)成的復(fù)合形容詞+1個現(xiàn)在分詞作目的狀語，beno+名詞表決不，動詞搭配又合理，可謂長句中的典范）6．EventhoughZhaohasbeenhandsomelypensated650,000yuanbygovernment,whichisexpectedtobemore,thisfinancialpensationstillcannotholdacandleto無法與……相提并論Zhao’s11years’torturousandfreedomlostprisonlife,thusconfirmingthesayingthat,“Moneyisnoteverything”.（讓步狀從+非限制性定從+復(fù)合形容詞+現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語+引用諺語）7.Sunshangxiangstoodoutasadazzlingpearlfromquantitiesofdistincthistoricalfigures,confirmingthesayingthat,‘Womenarenoinferiortomen’.（現(xiàn)在分詞作結(jié)果狀語與引用名言的完美結(jié)合，推薦）內(nèi)容技巧二：神出鬼沒的插入語短句中用插入語，可以充更多字?jǐn)?shù)；中長句中間用插入語，讓句式更整齊美觀來看一些典型的插入語單詞作插入語，如：besides,however,otherwise,therefore,though1.Ontheotherhand,however,puterisnotwithoutitsdefects/disadvantages.（however作插入語，作無論如何/但是的意思，是最常用的一個插入語）2.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsofputersandavoidtheoppositefacet方面.（therefore作插入語，使用的頻率也非常之高，同時，上句中用fruits代替了advantages,避免了前后重復(fù)并且相當(dāng)之形象）短語作插入語，如forexample,bytheway,inotherwords,sofar,asamatteroffact,asaresult等等1.ChinaandIndia,forexample,areneighbors.2.TheUnitedNationsarecallingformoreenvironmentfriendlyactions,inotherwords,theyaredemandingthatpeopleallovertheworld（should）switchtogreenproductsanddotheirbittoprotecttheearth.內(nèi)容技巧三：適當(dāng)用被動替換主動適當(dāng)用被動句，更能反映客觀事實(shí)，如：1.Attentionshouldbepaidto替換Weshouldpayattentionto2.Immediate/Instant/Effectivemeasuresshould/isneededtobetaken/carriedoutto……替換Weshouldtakeimmediatemeasuresto……3.Great/Jointeffortshouldbemadeto……替換Weshouldmakegreat/jointeffortto……4.Itshouldbepointedoutthat/Itshould替換neverbeneglected/overlooked/ignoredthat……Imustpointoutthat……/Weshouldneverneglect/overlook/ignorethat……5.Wearebroughtuptobelievethat……替換Wefirmlybelievethat……內(nèi)容技巧四：關(guān)鍵詞、高頻詞句的表達(dá)多樣性下面來看對于表達(dá)同一個意思，有多少種不同的寫法1.我（個人）認(rèn)為：Formypart；Frommypointofview/Frommyperspective；Personallyspeaking；PersonallyImaintainthat……;I（firmly）holdtheviewthat……；Inmyhumbleopinion;I’moftheopinionthat……（Inmyopinion&Ithink）2.大多數(shù)人認(rèn)為、知道Many,ifnotmost/Most,ifnotall,harbortheideathat……；Themajorityofthepeople/Manyindividualstaketheattitudethat……；It’suniversally/widelyaccepted/acknowledgedthat……；It’ssharedbyalargenumberofpeoplethat……；There’snoonebutknowsthat……（Manypeoplethinkthat……）3.……越來越流行tobeeincreasinglypopular;……gaingrowingpopularity;……isincreasinglyappealingto;……iscatchingonaincreasing/growingnumberofpeople（……ismoreandmorepopular）4.關(guān)注……，重視……pourattentioninto……;take……intoaccount;take……intoconsideration;beconcernedwith/about;keeponeself（well）informedof;beeawareof/that……；（payattentionto/putemphasison）5.據(jù)我所知，……tothebestofmyknowledge;forallIknow/forwhatIcantell（asfarasIknow）6.做……是有好處的、有幫助的Itpaysto……;It’srewardingto……;It’sofgreatbenefitto……;Onecanreaphugefruitsfrom……（it’sgood/helpfulto……）7.……導(dǎo)致了giveriseto;……（greatly）contributeto……；……isamajorcontributorto……;……leadto……;……resultin……（……cause……）8.喜愛……,熱衷于……takeafancyto/haveafancyfor……h(huán)aveanaffectionfor……h(huán)avealoveaffairwithbefondof/bekeenon/bekeenabout……beobsessedwith……（like……）9.凡事都有兩面性NogardenhasnoweedsEverythinghasitsplusesandminusesEverythingcutsbothways……isadoubleedgedswordWeshouldnotbeblindtotheothersideof……（everycoinhastwosides）10.努力做某事、盡某人之力做某事doeverythinginone’spowerto……takepainstodosparenoeffort/makeanefforttododoone’sutmostto……goallouttodo……doone’sbitto……（tryone’sbesttodo）11.……不盡如人意……h(huán)as/leavesalottobedesired……failstomeet/satisfyone’sneed/demand/requirement……isfarfromsatisfactory……doesn’teuptoone’sexpectations（……isundesirable）12.……就是個極好的例子，……恰好能說明我的觀點(diǎn)……issuchaprimeexamplewecancite……asanexcellentexampleof……perfectlyfits/illustratesmyidea/descriptionof…………perfectlyservemypurpose（forexample，……）13.在某種程度上atsomepointtosomeextent/degree;toacertainextent/degreeinasortofwayinpartinasense（partly）14.……無法與……相提并論；……與……相差甚遠(yuǎn)……can’tnotevenholdacandleto…………palesintoinsignificancewhenparedwith…………isnotinthesameclasswith…………can’trival……in……there’snoparisonbetween……and…………canneverapproach……三、結(jié)尾類：結(jié)尾一：我們得出了這樣的結(jié)論……1.Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydraw/eto/reach/arriveattheconclusionthat……

（議論類文章的萬金油式句型，非常正規(guī)、書面，不過略微缺乏新意）2.Thus,itcanbeincludedthat……/wecanfindthat……3.Needlesstosay/Admittedly/Obviously,……4.Therefore,it’squitereasonableforme/ustoconcludethat……（總結(jié)完之后，來點(diǎn)美好的期盼）結(jié)尾公式二：我們提出了以下建議……換言之，這類結(jié)尾就是在高歌，明天會更好~1.Therefore/Thus,itishightimethatwedid……（提建議還用個虛擬！很高級?。。。?.Accordingly,Iremendthat……（somemeasuresshouldbetaken）（于是乎……我建議……）3.Asaresult,tosolvetheproblem,I’dliketogivemyadvice/suggestionthat……議論文寫作One普陀區(qū)94.writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"myopinionongettingpayfordoinghousework【以“我對有償做家務(wù)的看法”為題,寫一篇不少于60詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格】提示:一些家長為獎勵,你怎么看這件事?可以了鼓勵孩子參與家務(wù)活,便給么結(jié)合自身的經(jīng)歷闡述觀點(diǎn)和理t予孩子一定的報酬作為孩子承擔(dān)家務(wù)的由。(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。)參考范文MyopinionongettingpayfordoinghouseworkIthasbeenonhotdiscussionwhetherchildrenshouldgetpayfordoinghousework.AsfarasIamconcerned,gettingpayfordoinghouseworkisreasonableandbeneficialtochildren’sgrowth.Astheonlychildinmyfamily,Iamalwaysencouragedtodovariouskindsofhousework,suchaswashingclothesandmoppingthefloor.Inreturn,myparentsgivemepocketmoneyasrewards.Throughthisexperience,notonlydoIbeemorediligentandhardworking,butalsoIamabletoaffordwhatIwanttobuy.Inaddition,astheoldsayinggoes,“Nopains,nogains”,Iamfullyawareofthevalueoflabourandhappinessintheprocessofdoinghousework.Inconclusion,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthatitisessentialforchildrentogetpayfordoinghousework,whichcontributestoourallrounddevelopment.Two寶山區(qū)=7\*ROMANVII.Writing(作文)（共20分）Writeapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“ArePiggyGoodforChildren”（以“儲蓄罐對孩子有益嗎？”為題寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）Usethefollowingpointsasaguide:Dochildrenstillneedpiggybanksnow?Whatcanchildrenunderstandbysavingmoneyinthepiggybank?(注意，短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。)參考范文：Arepiggybanksgoodforchildren?Somepeoplethinkthatpiggybanksaretoooldfashionedforchildrentouse,butIthinktheyareagreatidea.Childrencannotunderstandwhatsavingisreallyallabout,butbysavinginpiggybanks,theycanslowlyunderstandit.Childrenmightnotunderstandwhat100yuanmeansuntiltheyseealotofcoins.Ifyouhave100yuanworthofcoins,youcanbetterunderstandthemeaningof100yuan.Savingbeesfunwhenyoucanseeyourmoneyslowlybuildup.Forchildren,thepiggybankisstillbestwaytosavemoney.Three黃浦區(qū)VII.Writing94. In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic“Lifeisnotalways…”. 作為一名初三學(xué)生，你的學(xué)習(xí)生活緊張忙碌。要想取得好的成績，良好的心態(tài)很重要。你是如何看待初三的學(xué)生生活，請談?wù)勀愕捏w驗(yàn)或想法，分享自己的故事。參考范文：Howtimeflies!Ihavestudiedinmyschoolforthreeyears.AndIwillgraduatefrommiddleschoolinseveralmonths.Iameagertosharemyhappinessandsadnesswithyou.Ihadsomanymemoriesinthreeyears’life.Onofthemimpressedmeverymuch.Istillremember,whenIbegantolearnEnglish,Ifoundittoodifficult.NomatterhowhardItried,Istillcouldn’tdowellinitandalmostgaveitup.AssoonasmyEnglishteacherfoundmyproblem,shehadatalkwithmeabouthowtolearnEnglishwell.Sincethen,shehaskepthelpingme.Littlebylittle,I’vebeeinterestedinEnglishandI’mgoodatit.IthinkIamsoluckytobeeoneofherstudents.I’velearnedalotfromher.Iwilltrytohelpotherswhentheyareintrouble.Ithinkitisahappythingtohelpothers.記敘文寫作One徐匯區(qū)VII.Writing(作文):(共20分)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“Myhappymomentwith__________”請以“__________和我的快樂時光”為題寫一篇至少60詞的短文，你的家人，朋友，物件或是你的某項(xiàng)愛好與活動曾經(jīng)給你留下了幸福開心的時刻。請選取一個角度，描寫你和他（它）幸?？鞓返乃查g。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格）Thefollowingisforreferenceonly（一下表述僅供參考）municatewith...,share...with,learnfrom...,enjoy,relaxMyhappymomentwithHopeHopeisacat.Ifirstsawheronastreetanditwasraining.Shelookeddirty,cold,hungry,andobviously,shehadnowheretogo.SoIdecidedtotakeithome.Inthefollowingdays,wehadawonderfultimetogether.Ifedherandtalkedtohersometimes,evenIknewshemightnotunderstand.ShewassoadorableandshealwaysfollowedmewhereverIwent.Oneday,shejustjumpedoutofthewindowandranaway.Maybeshemissedhermom,Iguess.ButIwillneverforgetthehappymomentwithher.Two長寧區(qū)VII.Writing(寫作)94.Writeatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“Ifinishedatasksuccessfully”(請以’我成功地完成了一項(xiàng)任務(wù)’為題，寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)你在初中四年的學(xué)習(xí)生活中一定完成過家長，學(xué)校和老師布置的一項(xiàng)任務(wù)。請你簡單描述一次完成任務(wù)的經(jīng)歷。（注意文中不得出現(xiàn)考生的姓名、校名及相關(guān)信息，茍澤不予評分。）IfinishedatasksuccessfullyThememorythatIfirstfinishedthespeechmyteacherassignedtomestillstaysfreshinmymind.Iusedtobeveryshyandrarelyspeakinfrontofclass.ButwhenIwasinGrade7,myteacheraskedmetogiveaspeechtomyclassmates.Standingonthestageandlookingatallmyclassmatesmademeverynervous.Istartedmypresentationwithashakingvoice.SuddenlyIsawmyteachergazingatmewithanencouraginglooking.Withhisencouragement,Ibeemoreandmoreconfidentandfinallyfinishedthisspeechinaapplause.ThisisanveryimportantexperienceformebecauseInotonlyovercamemyfearbutalsolearntthatthecouragetotryisalsoveryimportant.Three閔行區(qū)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“_____________haschangedme”(以“__________改變了我”為題。寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)成長路上，你曾經(jīng)遇見過很多人，如一位師長、一個朋友等，你也曾經(jīng)經(jīng)歷過很多事，如一次比賽、一項(xiàng)活動等，這些人與事或多或少改變了你，讓你變成更好的自己。請選擇其中某件事或某個人，以“____________haschangedme”為題寫一篇不少于60字的短文）。（注意：段文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）范文：MyfriendhaschangedmeWhenspeakingofsomeoneorsomethingthathaschangedme,thefirstthingtoeintomymindisthatwhatmybestfriendsaidtomewhenIwasintrouble.IhadtroubleinlearningEnglish.However,wheneverIplantogiveupmyEnglish,mybestfriendalwaysencouragesmetohaveanothertry.ShetoldmethatifIgaveitup,andthatmeantIhadfailed.What’smore,mybestfriendwouldliketobewithmeandteachmeEnglish.Atlast,withherhelp,IbecamemoreandmoreinterestedinEnglishandmyEnglishimprovedalot.

1)作文的三大塊得分點(diǎn)：語法、內(nèi)容和文采，特別要注重文章框架、語法。2)尤其注意應(yīng)用文和記敘文的結(jié)構(gòu)和內(nèi)容。One黃浦區(qū)In60to120words,writeaboutthetopic“..andl”.(以“我和..…”為題，寫一篇60120個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。）每一個生命個體都和這個世界發(fā)生著聯(lián)系，你也不例外。請分享一個你和他人、社會或自然之間的故事，并談?wù)勛约旱捏w驗(yàn)或感受。（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)的姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）Musictomeiswhatwatertofish.Ononehand,musiccanbringmerelaxation.AsaJunior3student,toreducethepressureofheavystudy,Iusuallymakefulluseoftimetolistentomusicinsparetime.Ontheotherhand,musicisreallygoodtomymentalhealth.Itcanrefreshmybrainafterlongtimehardalsoenablesmetoforgetsadness.Inmusic,Ihavefoundthevirtueofhumanbeing,thevalueofourselvesandthebeautyofnature.MusicandIaresocloselyconnectedthatwecannotseparateforever.Two奉賢區(qū)Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic"Thatday,Imadea/an___________”(以“那天,我(做)了一（個）_____________”為題,寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文,標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格)(注意:短文中不得出現(xiàn)任何人名、校名及其它相關(guān)信息,否則不予評分。)生活中的每一次體驗(yàn)、每一段經(jīng)歷都為你的成長助力。你或許交了一個新朋友、許了一個新愿望、作了一次新選擇······，請分享一段你的經(jīng)歷，并說明這段經(jīng)歷是如何幫助你成長的。參考范文：Thatday,ImadeafriendLastSaturdaywasmybirthday.Myparentsopenedabirthdaypartyforme.Theyinvitedmanypeopletothewonderfulparty.Iwasveryhappy.ThehappiestthingwasImadeanewfriend.Shewasabeautifulgirl,wearingayellowdress.Whenweatecake,apieceofcakefellonherdress.Ilentmyowndresstoher,shethankedmemanytimes.Wetalkedalotandbecamefriendsthatday.Ilearnedthatwewouldfeelhappywhenwehelpothers.Three嘉定區(qū)Writeapassageofatleast60wordsaboutthetopic“ANewSkillIhaveLearned”(以“我學(xué)會的一種新技能”為題寫一篇不少于60詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格)生活中，我們不斷學(xué)習(xí)新本領(lǐng)，新技能。請簡單描述你學(xué)會某一種新技能的過程，并談?wù)勊o你的學(xué)習(xí)或生活帶來了什么變化。參考范文：ThenewskillIhavelearnedrecentlyisskating,whichisthemostpopularactivityduringwinter.AndIamalwayshavingagreataffectionforiceandsnow.WhenIwaslittle,mycousinslikedtohangoutandtheylovedtochaseeachotheronice,whichseemedagreatfun.Sadly,theydidn’tallowmetojointhembecausetheythoughtIwastooyoung.AfterIhavebeenamiddleschoolstudent,Igotthechancetoskate.However,itwasnotaseasyasIassumeditwouldbe.WhenIputontheiceskates,Icouldbarelystandontheice.ButIreallywantedtolearnthisskill.Lateron,Iwouldstartpractisingearlyintheknowthatpracticemakesperfect.AndIamcapableofglidingontheiceafterpracticing.Thelearningprocesstellsmethatwewillconfrontvariousdifficultiesinourlife.Whatwecandoisnevergiveupandwewillsucceedsomedayinthefuture.Four崇明區(qū)Writingapassageofatleast60wordsonthetopic“Ihavegrownup”.(請以“我已經(jīng)長大了”為題，寫一篇不少于60個詞的短文，標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出現(xiàn)考生姓名、校名及其他相關(guān)信息，否則不予評分。）提示：我們經(jīng)過了四年的初中學(xué)習(xí)生活，或多或少在某些方面長大了、成熟了。請結(jié)合自己的12個經(jīng)歷，談?wù)勀阍谀膫€方面體現(xiàn)出長大了、成熟了，并有何感悟。Ihavegr