讀后續(xù)寫遇險類：溺水感恩家人將我救起講義 高考英語作文復習專項

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構成一篇完整的短文。

Thelittlecarwascrowdedwithkids:mybrothersandsisters.Wefought,debatedandcrie，makingmuchnoise.Beingpartofabigfamilywasreallystartingtoannoyme.Forexample,mybrothersandsistersknockedonthebathroomdoorallthetime.HowIwantedtobetheonlychildinmyfamily.

Asthecarrolleddownthesmallroad,mymumsaidcheerfully,“Thepoolisthreeminutesaway.You'llhavemuchtimetoswim.”Swimmingwasapeacefulactivity.Icouldfloatonmybackandlookatthesky.IcouldpretendIwastheonlypersonintheworld.Mumparkedthecarbesideasmallrowofothercars.

“Oneatatime,"sheyelledbeforethecardoorsopened.Nobodylistened.

Thecardoorsallflewopenatonce.Afterpushing,yellingandcrying,wecameout.Iquicklypulledoffmyjeans,T-shirt,socksandshoes,andfinallyputonmyswimsuit."Yeah!”

IyelledasIjumpedintothebignaturalpoolwithsmallstonesonitsfloor.Coldwaterstruckmyface.Iputmyheadunderthewater,whichshotupmynose.Afterstandingupagain,Idroppedbackwardintothewaterandbegantofloat.Thewatersataroundmyears,smoothandsilent.Thesunwarmedmyface.

Iwaslikealeaffloatinginalargepoolpeacefully.Everythingwassilentunderwater.Forthemoment,IfeltIwastheonlychildthere.Ididn'thavetosharethingslikesnackswithotherkids.Mystomachmadeanoiseatthethoughtoffood.Hadn'tMumpackedahugebagofchipsforoursnack?Istooduptowalktoshore.

Oh!Darksandywatersuddenlyfilledmymouthandcoveredmyhead.Therockygroundwasgone;Iwaspushedintothedeep,darkwater.Itriedtokicktothesurface.Asmyfacepeekedout(微露出)fromunderthewater,Itookadeepbreath.Itriedtoswimandleavethedeepwater.Butitdidn'twork.Ionlyknewhowtofloat.注意：

1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右；2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。

Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.__________________

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwordasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater._______________________Continuingwritingquestion"3221"modelingafterreading[Mainideaofthepreviousarticle]Thisarticletakestheeventasaclue,tellingthestoryoftheauthorwhowasnearlydrownedwhenhewentoutswimmingwithhismother,brotherandsisters,andwasluckytoberescued.Fromthis,theauthorrealizedthatitisluckyandhappytoliveandgrowupwithhisbrotherandsisters,changingthepreviousconceptoflongingtobetheonlychildinthefamily.1、Readtheprevioustextandfind"3"-Who?Whathappened?How?1.Readtheprevioustextandfind"3(who,whohappened,how)"tounderstandthemainidea.Payattentiontothehigh-frequencywordsandforeshadowingsentencesintheprevioustext(toenhancetheharmonybetweenthedevelopmentofthestoryplotandtheprevioustext).Afterreading,identifytheconflictproblem(usuallyinthelastparagraph)andextractthekeythemeofthestory-thepreciousnessofbrotherhood.Therearetwoconflictingquestionsintheprevioustextofthisquestion:(1)HowIwantedtobetheonlychildinmyfamilyForthemoment,IfeltIwastheonlychildthere(2)ItriedtoswimandleavethedeepwaterButitdidn'tworkIonlyknowhowtofloat2.Continuationof"22"with2plotseach:ThewaterisclosedovermyheadagainPlot1:HowdoIhavethepsychologyandactionsofselfrescuePlot2:Mybrothersandsistersfoundmeandwenttofindmymothertosaveme.Ormybrothersandsisterssavedme.IcouldfeelmybodymovingupwardasafamilyhandstartedtopullmethroughthewaterPlot3:Descriptionofhowmymotherormybrotherandsisterssavedme.Plot4:Ithankmymotherandbrothersandsistersforsavingmeandtakingcareofme"1"endpoint:Itisluckyandhappytogrowupinafamilywithbrothersandsisters.參考范文：Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.

Scareandanxietycametomymind.Iwantedtoaskforhelp,butmyhanddidn'twork.Myfamilystoodbythesideoftheswimmingpool.However,thedistancefrommetothemwassofar.ButIwouldn'tgiveup.Istruggledtomovemybodytomakethewaterwavetoattracttheirattention.However,myactionwassolightthattheycouldn'tpayattentiontome.Icontinuedmyactionwithmystrongmind.Ibelievedthattherewouldbesomeonewhowouldnoticemebecausewewereabigfamily.Justthen,Iheardmybrothersandsistersshoutingaloudforme.IknewIwouldn'tdieandIsawsomeonewasswimmingtowardme.

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwardasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater.

AndIfeltmybodyoutsidethewaterandIwasputontheground.InstantlyIopenedmyeyes,mymum,sistersandbrothershuggedmetightlywithtearswellingupintheireyes.Agentlesmilespreadovermyface.“I'mOKnow.Don'tworry.Thanksforyourhelp,Mummy.Withoutyou,Imayhavedied."Momstrokedmyheadandreplied,“Youalsoshouldthankyourbrothersandsisters.Itwasthemwhonoticedyouweresinkingandturnedtometosaveyou.”Asurgeofwarmthroseinsideme,andIsaidmovedlyinachokedvoice.“Thanksforyourhelp,everyone.”AndIhuggedthemtightly.Fromthenon,Iconsideredthebigfamilyis

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best.Thisexperienceislikeaneverlastingflower,bloomingintheriverofmymemories.默寫版：Thewaterclosedovermyheadagain.

_________________恐懼和焦慮涌上我的心頭.Iwantedtoaskforhelp,________________我的手卻起不了一點作用.Myfamilystoodbythesideoftheswimmingpool.However,thedistancefrommetothemwassofar.ButIwouldn'tgiveup.___________________________________我努力移動身體，使水波吸引他們的注意力.However,myactionwassolightthattheycouldn'tpayattentiontome.Icontinuedmyactionwithmystrongmind.________________________________________我相信會有人注意到我becausewewereabigfamily.Justthen,Iheardmybrothersandsistersshoutingaloudforme.IknewIwouldn'tdieand______________________我看到有人正朝我游過來.

Icouldfeelmybodymovingupwardasafamiliarhandstartedtopullmethroughthewater.

AndIfeltmybodyou