高三第三次聯(lián)考英語+應(yīng)用文+拾瓶子老人捐錢+講義

閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一-篇完整的短文。Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwithtrashbags.Icouldn'thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled(

拖著腳走路)along.Occasionally,shewouldpauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonherway.幾個星期以來，我注意到一位老婦人推著裝滿垃圾袋的購物車從我們家走過。當她拖著腳走路時，我忍不住為她感到難過拖著腳走路)。偶爾，她會停下來，從路邊拿起一個罐子。她會小心地把它放進其中一個袋子里，然后繼續(xù)前行。Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wastherenoonetolookafterher?我想知道是什么情況使她走到了人生的這一步。她沒有家人嗎？沒有人照顧她嗎？Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.“Madam,”Isaid.“CanIaskyousomething?"一天晚上，我再也受不了了。當她走過時，我走到街上攔住了她?！胺蛉耍蔽艺f?！拔夷軉柲泓c什么嗎？”Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshewasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedtoaskhermyquestions,butIinsisted.她轉(zhuǎn)過身來看著我，美麗的黑眼睛在她布滿皺紋的臉上閃閃發(fā)光。那時我就知道她不是一個普通的無家可歸的人。她有尊嚴，是的，甚至有快樂。突然，我不好意思問她我的問題，但我堅持了下來?！癐'veseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,”Iexplained.“Doyousellthemtobuygroceries?”“No,”shesaidwithasmile.“Idothistohelpthechildren.”“我已經(jīng)看到你幾個星期在撿罐頭了，”我解釋道。“你賣它們是為了買雜貨嗎？”“不，”她笑著說?！拔疫@樣做是為了幫助孩子們?！盜musthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.“Ihadcancer--twice--andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileIwasthere,Imetthechildren,andI'veneverforgottenthem.Idon'thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andIpickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.”我看起來一定很困惑，因為她接著解釋?！拔一剂税┌Y——兩次——兩次我都去了另一個城鎮(zhèn)的大醫(yī)院。他們治好了我。但當我在那里的時候，我遇到了孩子們，我從未忘記他們。我沒有錢，但我還能走路，我拿起這些罐子賣給醫(yī)院?！盨hetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend’spickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywherethehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.她告訴我，她每周花很多時間收集罐頭；至少有兩家企業(yè)為她保存罐頭。當她有足夠的東西時，她把它們都裝進朋友的皮卡車，然后他們兩個把它們帶到醫(yī)院所在的城市。在那里他們被套現(xiàn)了。注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.文本分析：故事大意--我注意到一個老太太經(jīng)常撿罐子。有一次我忍不住好奇，上前去問她撿這些罐子干嘛用。她告訴我，她曾兩次患癌，有好心企業(yè)為她保存罐頭瓶，加上搜集到的，攢到一定數(shù)目她就和朋友拿到為她治病的醫(yī)院那里，換取現(xiàn)金，幫助孩子們，回饋社會。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：-她說我知道你的感受。老奶奶解釋說，我知道這不算多，但每一點點都很重要。當我看到孩子們微笑時，所有的努力都是值得的。聽到這里，我把手伸進錢包，掏出一些鈔票。第二段--“但我想讓你接受，”我告訴她。她笑了笑，最后拿走了我拿出的紙幣。然后她給了我一個擁抱。在那一刻，我意識到并不是所有的天使都有光明和翅膀。官方范文，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,”shesaid.“Iknowit'snotmuch,buteverylittlebitcounts.AndwhenIseethechildrensmile,itmakesallthehardworkworthit.I'vebeenblessedinmylife.Iwanttodosomething,andthisissomethingIcando.Apartfromthat,thereisnothingIcandotoensurepersonslikemeareblessed.Itdoesn'tcostmemuch-onlythecostofthegas--andithelpsthechildren.”Hearingthis,Ireachedintomypurseandpulledsomebillsout.

“No,no.Idon'twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

“ButIwantyoutotakeit,”Itoldher.“Useitforgasorwhateveryouwant.”ShesmiledandfinallytookthebillsIheldout.Shethengavemeahug.Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stoppingoccasionallytopickuponeortwo.Atthecorner,sheturned,smiled,wavedandwasgone.AndIrealizedatthatmomentthatnotallangelshavelightandwings.Somehavegrocerycarts.參考范文一，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

“IwasclosetodeathtwicebutIhadanarrowescapeeverytime.Thosekids,theyaresoyoungandpathetic.Theworldisclosingtothemandtheirfutureislimited.Ijustwanttodosomethingtomakethemalittlebetter,”sheexplained,hervoicetremblingwithcompassionandhereyesshiningwithlove.Myheartachedforthosekidswhosufferedandatthesametime,asurgeofrespectandadmirationforthisladywelledupinme.Ialsowantedtodomybittohelpthem,soIsuggestedcarefully,“canIgiveyousomemoneysothatyoucanspentonthem?”

“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

“Ihavemetalotofkindpeoplealongtheway,whohelpsthiswayorthatway.Ijustwanttosharethestory.Ifyouwanttohelp,youcandonatetothemdirectly.”Shesmilesinattemptationtocomfortme.Whenshesaidgoodbyeandshuffledagainalongthemoonlight-litstreet,Ijustfeltthatherlimpingfigure,herweatherface,aswellashercreakingcartonlyaddedtohercharmanddignity.Despiteallthesufferingandhardshipsshehadgonethrough,shesawthepaininothersandhadacompassionateloveforpeople.Wecouldn’tjudgeabookbyitscoverandshewasanoblewomanwithadignifiedsoul.

參考范文二，

Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.

Theelderlywoman,whosenamewasMrs.Jenkins,sharedherstories.Somelittlechildren,whoshehadmetduringherownbattleswithcancer,criedbitterlywiththetreatmentbutalsofoughtstrongly.

Somerecoveredwhilesomeleftforever.Witnessingtheirresilienceandfateinspiredhertomakeadifferenceintheirlives.Despiteherownfinancialstruggles,

shewasincrediblyjoyfulwhenshehandedoverthemoneyfromtherecycledcans.Theactofcollectingcanswasmorethanjustawaytoraisefunds;itwasameaningfulwaytogivebackandbringaglimmerofhappinesstothechildrenundergoingtreatment.Hereyessparkledwithloveandkindnessasshespoke,leavingmeinaweandpropellingmetoofferhersomemoney.

“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.

Mrs.Jenkinswasadamantaboutn