讀后續(xù)寫親情類為母親準備蛋糕并打掃衛(wèi)生講義-高三英語二輪復習

讀后續(xù)寫的提升是學生自己寫出來的，更是學生自己修改出來的。寫是輸出，要能寫出來，就要先輸入，也就是學生的知識體系中需要有素材，和相應的表達方式。讀英文名著，是最有效的輸入方式之一。名著中的表達方式就是學生需要的。例如，形容在很餓的情況下看見了食物，你會怎么寫？eatitasquicklyaspossible,或者atethemwithinafewminutes。那么你考慮過wolfdown？或者heswallowedthebrandyandatethefoodlikeahuntedanimal。這表達方式來自HarryPotterandthePhilosopher'sStone和Great.Expectations?！纠m(xù)寫故事】Itwasanearlywintermorning.Joanwassleeping

soundlywhenthephonerunginthelivingroom.Shemilledoverandglancedattheclockonthewall--itwasalreadynineo'clock.Everyweekendmorning,hermotherhadtoworkpart-timeinthecafe.AlthoughJoanwasstillsleepy.sheknewshehadtogetup.Afterall,shedidn'texpectherbrotherMike,whowassleepinglikealog,tohearthephone.Shequietlywentovertothelivingroom.Whenshepickedupthereceiver,ontheotherendcamethewarmheartedgreetings,“Goodmorning,myDear!”

Recognizingthevoicefromherfather,Joanwasimmediatelysurroundedbyasenseofjoyandthesleepinesssweptaway.那是一個初冬的早晨。瓊正在酣睡，這時客廳里的電話響了。她轉過身來，瞥了一眼墻上的鐘——已經(jīng)九點鐘了。每個周末早上，她的母親都要在咖啡館做兼職。盡管瓊仍然很困。她知道她必須起床。畢竟，她沒想到睡得像木頭一樣的哥哥邁克會聽到電話。她悄悄地走到客廳。當她拿起聽筒時，另一端傳來了溫暖的問候：“早上好，親愛的！”瓊認出了父親的聲音，立刻被一種喜悅包圍，睡意一掃而空。Joan'sfatherwasaseaman,whorarelycameback.Workingontheseawasreallyhard.Born

inanot-richfamily,JoanandMikefeltthestressoflifebuttheywerehappytoenjoythefamilyatmosphere.Atschool,theywerestraight-Astudentsthroughouttheacademiccareerandactivelyinvolvedinschoolactivities.Theybecametheprideoftheschoolandtheenvyofthestudents.瓊的父親是一名海員，很少回來。在海上工作真的很辛苦。瓊和邁克出生在一個并不富裕的家庭，他們感受到了生活的壓力，但他們很樂意享受家庭的氛圍。在學校，他們在整個學術生涯中都是全優(yōu)學生，并積極參與學?；顒?。他們成了學校的驕傲，也成了學生們羨慕的對象?！癎oodmorning,Dad,what'sup?”

Joansaidinaneasytone.“Ihavebeenverynicerecently,mybaby.Todayisyourmother'sbirthday,andIhaveorderedheracakeonlineanditshouldcometothehouseinoneandhalfanhour.

Doremembertotakethecake.”“早上好，爸爸，怎么了？”瓊輕松地說?！拔易罱^得很好，我的寶寶。今天是你媽媽的生日，我在網(wǎng)上給她訂了一個蛋糕，應該在一個半小時后送到家里。記得把蛋糕拿走?！盚earingherfather'swords,Joanfeltalittleashamed.HowshecouldforgetMum'sbirthday!Shetookaglanceatthedirtyclothespiledonthesofaandtheoilyfloorthathadn'tbeenmopped(拖地)forafewdays--Therewastwohoursbeforehermothercameback.ShecalculatedtheyhadenoughtimetoprepareasurpriseforMum.聽到父親的話，瓊感到有點慚愧。她怎么會忘記媽媽的生日！她瞥了一眼沙發(fā)上堆著的臟衣服和還沒拖地的油地板(拖地)過了幾天——過了兩個小時她媽媽才回來。她估計他們有足夠的時間給媽媽準備一個驚喜。Thinkingofthis,shefeltfullofexcitement.“Well,Dad,nowI'mgoingtowakeMikeup.WewillgiveMumasurprise!"想到這里，她感到非常興奮?！昂冒?，爸爸，現(xiàn)在我要叫醒邁克。我們會給媽媽一個驚喜！”JoanhungupthephonewithDad,andhurriedlywenttoMike'sroomtosharehimherBigCleaningplan.AfterlisteningtoJoan,Mikereadilyacceptedheridea.瓊掛斷了爸爸的電話，匆匆忙忙地去邁克的房間和他分享她的大掃除計劃。聽了瓊的話，邁克欣然接受了她的想法。TheBigCleaningplanbegan._________________Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein._____【名著情景】1.Amyhadtowashthecupseverymorning,andcleanthespoons,theteapotandglasses.Shethenmustdusttheroom,thenAuntMarch’sbirdmustbefed,thedogcombedandtentripsadayupstairstogetthingsforMrs.March.Afterthetiresomework,shemustdoherlessons,thenshewasallowedonehourofexerciseorplay.2.WhileMrs.Marchtookoffhercoatandshoes,thegirlsranabout,tryingtomakethingscomfortablefortheirmother.Megarrangedtheteatable,Jobroughtwoodforthefire,andBethwalkedaroundthekitchen,quietandbusy,whileAmygavedirectionstoeveryone,asshesatatthetable.Astheygatheredaroundthetable,Mrs.Marchsaid,withaparticularlyhappyface,

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I’vegotatreatforyouafterdinner.”3.“Givethemallmydearloveandakiss.TellthemIthinkofthemallday,anddreamofthematnight.AyearseemsverylongtowaitbeforeIseethem,butremindthemthatwhilewewaitwemayallwork,sothattheseharddaysarenotwasted.IknowtheywillrememberallIsaidtothem,thattheywillbelovingchildrentoyouandIwillbefonderandprouderthaneverofmylittlewomen.”以上段落均來自LittleWomen。【下水作文】TheBigCleaningplanbegan.JoantookchargeofwashingthedirtyclotheswhileMikestartedtosweepthefloor.Therewereatonofclothes,which

madeJoantiredandsweaty.TheoilyfloorleftMikeexhausted,too.Theythoughtofmother---shedidthehouseworkbyherselfeverydayandhadtodopart-timejob.They

feltmoreashamed.Sotheyweredeterminedto

dustthewholeroom

everywhere.Atthesametimetheymanagedto

prepareagreattreatfor

mother.Thenthecakewasdeliveredontime.Withthecakeplacedonthetable,Mumcamein.

Mikehurriedto

putslippers

beforemotherwhileJoanimmediatelytookoveralltheitemsfrommother'shands.“Oh,myhoney,thank

youverymuch.”

saidmothersmilingly.Onturningbackandseeingthebrightandneathouse,

shestoodrootedtothespotforaminute.

Movedanddelighted，shegaveasweetkissaJoanandMike.Joanpointedthecaketotellmotherthatthiswasfather'sloveforher.

Greattearsswaminmother’seyes.

Beforeenjoyingthelunch,theytogethersurroundedthephoneandmadeacalltotheirfather,

sharingthefeelingsoflongingandmissing.默寫版：TheBigCleaningplanbegan.JoantookchargeofwashingthedirtyclotheswhileMikestartedtosweepthefloor.Therewereatonofclothes,______________這讓她很累并且汗流浹背。TheoilyfloorleftMikeexhausted,too.Theythoughtofmother---shedidthehouseworkbyherselfeverydayandhadtodopart-timejob._________________她感到更加羞愧。Sothey_________________________________決心把整個房間的灰塵打掃干凈.Atthesametime______________________________