【讀后續(xù)寫】購物與健康-2021年高考英語一輪復(fù)習(xí)能力拓展之讀后續(xù)寫

2021年高考英語能力拓展之讀后續(xù)寫11

購物與健康

1.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswere

limited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.

Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,

thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined（謝絕）.Butshekepturgingustohavealookat

last.

Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.Itwasourhome,smallandcharming,

overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderly

couple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,

thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouse

anddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadeanoffer-farbelowthe

askingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalso

muchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.

Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigher

price.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstill

wasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid（出價）.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.

Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.

注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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Wewenttotheownershomeafterwemacleourfinaloffer.

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Theownerlookedatusandsaid,

2.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopperandhavingagoodnoseforbargains.So

whenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale”,Imarched

intothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfand

enjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofasale.

Allofasudden,there,atthebackofthestoresatacanoe（輕舟）exactlylikemyhusband's

dreamSupremoNumero-Uno,whosepicturehadbeenstuckonthebathroommirrorforyears.My

heartbeatwildly.Ipushedmywaythroughthecrowds,andnearlyfellintothecanoelookingfor

thepricetag.Thereitwas,withthemanufacturer^suggestedpriceat$6,750plustaxcrossedout

andahandwrittenTOCLEAR$750ASIS.Mustbeamistake.$6000off?Salesman.Ihadtotalk

toasalesman.Ispottedayoungfellowwitha"Hi.I'mMathew"."Mathew.TellmeaboutthisEl

Supremocanoe.What'swrongwithit?Whyisitonly$750?^^

“Oh.There'snothingwrongwithit.It'sbrandnew.We'reclosingthestore.It9sonclearance

likeeverythingelse.Tilgocheck.^^Afewminuteslaterhecamebackandsaid,'Tmsorryma'am.

Someonemadeamistakeonthesaletag.Itshouldbe$4,750forthewholepackage.^^

Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes."Ohwell",Isaidsadly."Ofcourse,itwastoogoodtobetrue.

Thisisexactlylikemyhusband'sdreamboat.IguessIstartedtodreammyselfwhenIsawthat

pricetag.He'sgoingtobe62yearsoldFriday.Hadtoretireearlyforhishealth.It'sbeenhardon

justthepensionbutthestubbornoldfoolhasbeensaving$10everyweekforyearstobuyonejust

likethis.IpromiseIwon'tbuyanything,butit'sjustanoldman'ssillydream,youknow.Always

saidhewantedtofishinacanoeafterheretired,“myvoiceloweredandIturnedandwalked

away.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fbrdelivery,ma,am?^^

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"Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpa'sandthecanoe

hadbeenorderedbyhim.

3.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

SallywasonlyeightyearsoldwhensheheardMommyandDaddytalkingaboutherlittle

brother,Georgy.Hewasverysickandthedoctorstoldthemthatonlyaveryexpensiveoperation

couldsavehislife.However,hisfamilycouldnotaffordit.SallyheardDaddysaysadly,"Onlya

miracle（奇跡）cansavehimnow.^^

Sallywenttoherbedroomandfoundherpiggybank.Sheshookallthemoneyoutonthe

floorandcounteditcarefully.Thensheputallthemoneyinherpocketandmadeherwaytoa

drugstore（藥店）.Shewaitedpatientlyfbrthestorekeepertogiveherattention,buthewasbusy

talkingtoanotherwell-dreoedman.Sallyclearedherthroat.Nogood.Thenshetookoutacoin

fromherpocketandthrewitontotheglasscounter（柜臺）.Thatdidit!

“Whatdoyouwant?”thestorekeeperaskedangrily."Can'tyouseeI'mtalkingtomy

brother?”“Well,Iwanttotalktoyouaboutmybrother,Sallyansweredbackbravely."He'ssick,

andIwanttobuyamiracle.”“Ibegyourpardon,“saidthestorekeeper.

“MyDaddysaysonlyamiraclecansavehimnow,sohowmuchdoesamiraclecost?”

“Wedon'tsellmiracleshere,littlegirl.Ican9thelpyou.”

“Listen,Ihavethemoneytopayfbrit.Justtellmehowmuchitcosts.^^

Thenthatwell-dressedmanasked,6€Whatkindofmiracledoesyourbrotherneed?,,"Idon't

know,^^Sallyanswered.Tearsstartedtorushintohereyes."Ijustknowhe'sreallysickand

Mommysaysheneedsanoperation.Butmyfamilydoesn'thaveenoughmoney,soIhave

broughtallmymoney.Ilovemylittlebrother.”"Howmuchdoyouhave?”askedthewell-dressed

man."Adollarandelevencents,“Sallyanswered.44Andthat'sallthemoneyIhave.^^

注意:

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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"'Well,Icanhelpyou,saidthewell-dressedman.

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Itwasn1longuntilGeorgiwashomeagain.

4.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫

的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為120左右。

In1989,freshoutofhighschool,Iwasfacedwithadifficultchoiceofacareerpathbefore

collegestartedinthreemonths.InthosedaysinPakistan（巴基斯坦），therewerelimitedchoices:

becomingadoctororanengineer,orenteringthefinancialworldaftergettingabusinessdegree.I

wasn*tinterestedinengineering,sothatIwasleftwithmedicineorbusiness.Icouldn'tdecide.

MyunclesuggestedthatIdoaworkplacement（實習(xí)工作）toexperienceitforamonthinan

internationalcompanyfollowedbyamonthinahospital.Afterthat,Icouldmakeadecision.It

seemedlikeagoodidea.

Iwasacceptedforamonth'splacementataforeignbankinKarachi.Igotafeelforhowthe

worldoffinanceworked,madenewfriends,andgenerallyenjoyedthemostlyeasy-goingwork

environment.

Themonthpassedrapidly,andsoonIbeganworkingataleadinghospitalinKarachi.The

experiencewasquitedifferent.Thehospitaldaysstartedearly（at7am,comparedwith9amatthe

bank）,andwerefilledwithendlessduties.Andthenightcalls!Thiswascrazy,workingallday,

throughthenight,andagaininthenextday.

Ibeganthinkingaboutmytwoexperiences.Thebankhadofferedamorerelaxing

atmosphere,betterworkinghoursandlessstress.Thehospitalhadanintense（嚴(yán)肅緊張的）

environment,andthestudyingandtrainingwasdifficult.Itseemedthatbusinesswasabetter

choice.

Neartheendofmymonthatthehospital,Iwasdrivinghomeafteraverybusynightcall.In

frontofmewasapublicbus,withsomeboyssittingonthetop.Asthedriverweavedthrough（穿

梭）traffic,Icouldseetheboysshakingfromsidetoside.

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Suddenly,aboyfelloffthebackofthebus._

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Thenextday,whenIwenttohospitaltoseetheboy,allhisfamilygotup,withgrateful

smilesontheirfaces.

5.閱讀下面材料?，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文，續(xù)寫

的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

OnthemorningofJan25,theverydayoftheChineseLunarNewYear,Iwasunpleasantly

wokenupbyaphonecall.Itwasformyfather.Hepickeditup,andIsensedfromhisshakyvoice

thatsomethingwentwrong.

Assoonashehungup,myfatherturnedtomymotherandthenme,saying,“Itwasthe

secretary.Hecalledeveryonetomeetintheofficerightnowbecauseoftheoutbreakofthe

COVID-19.^^

“Butdad,it'stheSpringFestival!^^HowIwishedmyfathercouldchangehismindandstay

withus.Wasn'tthedaymeantfbrfamiliestobetogether?Myfather,anofficialworkingin

anothertown,seldomcamebackhome.Andwasthevirusseriousenoughtokeepusapart?Iwas

upset.Tomygreatdisappointment,fatherlefthomewithouthesitation,comfortingmebysaying

thathewouldbebacksoon.

Inthefollowingdays,newsloadedwiththefastspreadofCOVID-19andtheastonishing

deathtollscaredeveryoneinthecountry.Fatherneverreturnedhome,onlyoccasionallytalking

ontheWeChat,overwhichhetoldushowhewentfromdoortodoor,checkingeveryfamilyand

persuadingpeopletostayathome.Irealizedthatmyfatherwasworkingindangerousconditions

underincrediblygreatburden.Healwayslookedtiredbutdetermined.EverytimeItoldhimto

takecareofhimself,hewouldsmileandsay,"Don'tworry,son.Yourfatherisasstrongasabull.^^

Atthosemoments,tearswouldwellupinmyeyes,andallmycomplaintswouldgoawaybeforeI

couldsayanything.Thetalkwasbriefbutmeantalottome.

Ilearnedfromthemediathatthemedicalstaff,governmentofficials,andalmosteveryone

involvedwereworkinginthebattleagainsttheCOVID-19.Itwastheseguardianangels（守護(hù)天

使）who,despitethepossibilityofgettinginfectedthemselves,wereriskingtheirlifesothatthe

restofuscouldbesafe.Amongthemwasmyfather.He'sprotectingthepeople,meincluded.

Para1:Thencamebadnewsthatmyfatherwasillathospital.

Para2:Weekslater,myfathercamebackhomehealthy.

6.閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。續(xù)寫

的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右。

Thedoctorssentmymotherhometodie.Asafifteen-yearsurvivorofbreastcancer,shehad

sufferedtwoheartattackswhenadvancedcancerwasfoundinherlung.Thedoctortoldmesadly,

"Shehasafewdays,maybeaweek.Herheartisweakandunstable."Momhadstruggledtoraise

threedaughterswhileholdingafull-timejob,yetworkedhardtomaintainawarmhomeforher

family.MyplanforMom'sfinaldayswassimple:shewouldlivewithlove,anddiewithgrace.

Itookmothertomyhome,smallbutcomfortable,whichwasaheaventofourcatsandadog.

Theanimalshadtherunofmyhouse.Weequippedthebedroomwithanelectrichospitalbedand

anoxygenmachine,whichfrightenedthecats.I'dmovedtheirfurnitureandthecatswere

annoyed.Thedog,ontheotherhand,animmaturedogwithbadhabits,wasexcitedbyallthe

changesinthehouse.Hejumpedup,barking.HeisOttowhowasnotafraidofthehospitalbed,

theoxygenmachineorthemedicalsmells.Norwasheafraidoftheweakwomanwhohadscolded

him.OttojumpedontothefootofMom'shospitalbed,andstayed.Withtheexceptionofeating

andusingthelitterbox,OttoneverleftMom'sroom.

DayspassedandMomstartedtorally."Notunusual,Iwastold,“arallyisoftenasignof

imminentdeath（回光返照）"Iwasheart-broken.ButOttowouldnotgiveherupsoeasily.Heused

herimprovedconditiontorepositionhimselffromthefootofherbedtoherside.Herthinfingers

foundhissoftcoat.Heleanedintoherbody,asifholdingtightthestringsofherwilltolive.

Thoughweak,shepettedthedogandwouldnotallowedmetotakehim.Daysturnedintoweeks

andMomcontinuedtofight.

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Once,afterthenurseshadgonefortheday,IheardthesoundofMom'svoicecomingfrom

herroom.

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Threeyearslater,MomtogetherwithOttoisstillhere,medicinesandnurseslonggone.

7.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Awomanwhohadastroke（中風(fēng)）whileonaFaceTimovideocallwithhersister,saidthe

technologysavedherlife.EsmeeRussell,headoftheStrokeAssociation,said,"Astrokecan

happentoanyone,atanyage,atanytime.That'swhyit'ssoimportantthatpeopleknowhowto

actfast:itcouldsavealife."Strokeshappenwhenthebloodsupplytopartofthybrainiscutoff

byaclot（凝塊）,ordamagedbybleedingthatcausesbraincellsintheaffectedareatodie.

OpokuaKwapong,wholivesaloneinNewYork,wasonacallwithhersister,Adumea

Sapong,inManchester,whenMrsSapongnoticedthathereldersister"didn'tlookright”.Andshe

alsonoticedhersister'svoicewasslurred（口齒不清）.MsKwapongsaidshehadnotrealisedhow

seriousthesituationwas.

The58-year-oldKwaponghadwokenfromanafternoonsleepwhenMrsSapongcalledher

onFaceTime.MsKwapongsaid“Mysisterlookedatmeandsaidshecouldseethatmyface

didn'tlookright.ShealsosaidthatIwasslurringmywords,butIthoughtshewasmakingafuss

（大驚小怪）andIdidn'tbelieveher.^^

MrsSapongsaidWhenIcalledKwapong,shesaidthatshednotbeenfeelingwellandhad

beenfeelingtiredandwasalsohavingsomedifficultywalking.Isaid,'Perhapsyouneedtotake

somemedicine/Shetriedtopickupaglassofwaterandwasn'tableto.ThenInoticedonthe

FaceTimevideocallthatherfacewasdrooping.Itoldhersheneededtohangupandimmediately

seeadoctor.ShethoughtIwasmakingafusssoIthencalledoneofmyothersisters,whoisa

doctor,andshecouldhearherspeakingandcouldalsotellthatherspeechwasslurred.Weboth

toldhertocallforhelpatonce.^^

注意：1.所敘寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

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MsKuaponghungupthecallandthendialedtheemergencyservices.

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MsKwapongsaid:"Thereisnodoubtthattheinternetandtechnologysavedmylife.

8.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Mymotheralwaystoldmeitwasbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful."Ifyouaresmart,

finallyyouwillaffordtobebeautiftiL“AllIneededwerethebrains,andsomeday,Iwouldbea

reallybeautifullawyer.

MymotherworkedataTVstationandIwouldcomealongandwatchthemagicoffilming

TVshows.Butallthesame,Iwaslearning.

Whenmyfather^businessfailed,Iwasabletocontinuetoattendoneofthebest

bilingual（雙語的）schoolsinMexicoCitythankstoscholarship.Scholarshipfollowedmeinto

middleschoolandhighschool.

However,duringmysenioryearinhighschoolmyfamilymovedtomydad'scountry,the

UnitedStates.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,IhadoptionaS可選擇的）classes.SoIdecidedtotake

psychologyclass.WhileIfoundthepublicschoolsystemtobeajoke,Ididfindmypsychology

classattractive.Mymother,inherdreamsformylife,didnotseepsychologyasagoodchoice,

butIwaslikeher,strong-willedtothesubject.

Imarriedyoung,evenbeforeIhadadegreeundermybelt.Worstofall,Imarriedakidwho

wantedtobeposter（牧師）.MymotherlovedAndydearlybutshewouldaskhimoccasionally.

“Whenwillyouhavearealjob?,,IdidfinishmydegreeandIbecameasocialworker,butwhenI

hadmyfirstchildatage24,Iquitmyjob.Thenat26,anotherbabygirljoinedourfamily.

Unfortunately,thisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome（唐氏綜合癥）.

HowwouldIbeabletobreakthenewstomymother?”Itisbettertobesmartthantobe

beautifUL“Iknewwhat“smart"meantinthestatement,andIdoubtedifmywithanextra

chromosome（染色體）wouldmeetthoseexpectations.Mymomwascomingtothehospitalto

meethernewgraed-baby.Iwouldtellherthen.Ineededtimetogathermythoughts.Iwasafraid,

afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmart...orbeautiful.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭己為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Para1:

Mymotheramvedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.

Para2:

Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.

9.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所紿悄節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事.

Mydadwasthegentlest,mostlovingandcaringdadintheworld-untilwehadanargument.

Duringthosemoments,mywordssurelyneverreachedhis"openmind"becausehisearswere

closed.Therewasnopointtryingtoarguewithmydad.Healwayshadthelastword.Icould

neverwin.

Atonetime,whenmyfatherrefusedtounderstandthatIneededtheprivacyofaphonein

myroom,myfrustrationturnedtotears.Heendedour"discussion",leavingmesilently

defeatedandmiserable.Withthehopethathiseyeswouldbemoreopenthanhisears,Ibeganto

writeanotethatbeganwith"DearDaddy".Inamosttouchingtone,ItoldhimhowmuchI

respectedhisopinion,andhowmuchIhatedtotalkbacktohim.1stressedthatIcherishedour

relalionshipand,abovealbIlovedhimdeeply.ItwasonlyminutesbeforeIheardaknockat

mydoor.WhenIsawthelookonmyfather'sface,Iknewthatmynotehadmeltedhistemper

andtouchedhisheart.Thevictoryofwinningmydad'spermissionwassweet.

ThismorningIwokeupatatextmessagefromoneofmybestfriends,whichsaid"Who's

excitedforasnowday?”Myinitialreactionwaswhyonearthwewouldhaveasnowday.Itwas

notsupposedtosnowlastnight.Mysecondreactionwasthatthatwasnottrue.SoIcalledmydad

tomakesurewhetherwhatIheardwascorrect.Sureenoughitwas.Afterfindingthisnewsout,I

fellbackasleepalmostimmediately.MydadhadsaidtocallhimwhenIwokeup.Abouttwo

hourspassed,andIwokeup,callinghimasplanned.Noanswer.Ifiguredhewasjustoutfbr

business,soIleftamessage.Icalledhimmultipletimesonhiswork,house,andcellphones.

Still,noanswer.AroundnoonIgotworried.Heshouldhaveansweredsomethingbynow.

Thinkingofhissufferingastomachflutwoweeksago,IdecidedIwouldgotomakesurehewas

okay.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.至少使用5個短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語.

AfterIgotoverthere,Iwasworried.

Atonce,Icalledmymomandtoldherwhathadhappened.

10.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Mymotheralwaystoldmeitwasbettertobesmartthantobebeautiful."Ifyouaresmart,

finallyyouwillaffordtobebeautifUl."AllIneededwerethebrains,andsomeday,Iwouldbea

reallybeautifullawyer.

MymotherworkedataTVstationandIwouldcomealongandwatchthemagicoffilming

TVshows.Butallthesame,Iwaslearning.

WhenmyOther'sbusinessfailed,Iwasabletocontinuetoattendoneofthebest

bilingual（雙語的）schoolsinMexicoCitythankstoscholarship.Scholarshipfollowedmeinto

middleschoolandhighschool.

However,duringmysenioryearinhighschoolmyfamilymovedtomydad'scountry,the

UnitedStates.Forthefirsttimeinmylife,IhadoptionaS可選擇的）classes.SoIdecidedtotake

psychologyclass.WhileIfoundthepublicschoolsystemtobeajoke,Ididfindmypsychology

classattractive.Mymother,inherdreamsformylife,didnotseepsychologyasagoodchoice,

butIwaslikeher,strong-willedtothesubject.

Imarriedyoung,evenbeforeIhadadegreeundermybelt.Worstofall,Imarriedakidwho

wantedtobeposter（牧師）.MymotherlovedAndydearlybutshewouldaskhimoccasionally,

“Whenwillyouhavearealjob?,JIdidfinishmydegreeandIbecameasocialworker,butwhenI

hadmyfirstchildatage24,Iquitmyjob.Thenat26,anotherbabygirljoinedourfamily.

Unfortunately,thisbabygirlhadDownsyndrome（唐氏綜合癥）.

HowwouldIbeabletobreakthenewstomymother?”Itisbettertobesmartthantobe

beautiful.^^Iknewwhat"smart”meantinthestatement,andIdoubtedifmywithanextra

chromosome（染色體）wouldmeetthoseexpectations.Mymomwascomingtothehospitalto

meethernewgraed-baby.Iwouldtellherthen.Ineededtimetogathermythoughts.Iwasafraid,

afraidthatshewouldseeNicholeasonethatwouldneverbesmart...orbeautiful.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Para1:

Mymotherarrivedatthehospitalmid-morning,readytomeethernewgranddaughter.

Para2:

Sixyearslater,Nicholerunstomomwheneverweseeeachother.

2021年高考英語能力拓展之讀后續(xù)寫11

購物與健康

1.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Myfiance（未婚夫）andIwereexcitedaboutshoppingforourfirsthome.Butourfundswere

limited,andnoneofthehousesinourpricerangeseemedsatisfactory.

Oneagentrecommendedahouseinparticular.Althoughherdescriptionsoundedwonderful,

thepricewasbeyondourrange,sowedeclined（謝絕）.Butshekepturgingustohavealookat

last.

Wefinallydidanditwasloveatfirstsight.Itwasourhome,smallandcharming,

overlookingaquietlake.Walkingthroughtheroomsandtalkingwiththeowners,aniceelderly

couple,wefeltthewarmthandhappinessofthemarriagewithinthathome.Asperfectasitwas,

thepriceremainedtoohighforus.Buteveryday,wewouldsitbythelake,lookingatthehouse

anddreamingofwhatitwouldbeliketolivethere.Dayslater,wemadeanoffer-farbelowthe

askingprice.Surprisingly,theydidn'tlaughatus.Theyrenewedtheirofferinstead.Itwasalso

muchmorethanwecouldafford,butfarlessthantheoriginalaskingprice.

Thenextday,wegotadisappointingmessagethatanotherbuyerhadofferedamuchhigher

price.Evenso,wedecidedtotalkwiththeownersdirectly.Wemadeourfinaloffer,whichstill

wasthousandsofdollarslessthantheotherbuyer'sbid（出價）.Weknewit,butwehadtotry.

Nobodyknewifwecouldgetit.

注意：1.所續(xù)寫的短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好：

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph1:

Wewenttotheownershomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.

Paragraph2:

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,

【答案】

Paragrph1：

Wewenttotheowner'shomeafterwemadeourfinaloffer.Theotherpotentialbuyercame

withconfidence.Theownersmiled,saying,"Tellmethereasonwhyyouneedthishouse.Theone

whoseanswersatisfiesmewilltakethepossessionofit.”"Formybusiness.,,Thebuyeranswered

withoutanyhesitation.Afterthinkingforawhile,Ireplied,UIcanfeelwarmthandloveofthe

marriageinthehouse,whichIhavebeenlongingfbr.”

Paragraph2：

Theownerlookedatusandsaid,“Iwanttosellmyhousetoyou!^^Asurge（大量，洶涌）of

shockhitme."Why?HeofferedahigherpricethanIcouldafford."Iasked,surprised."Iwantto

giveittothosewhocanfillitwithloveinsteadofmoney.,,Weappreciatedhimandfeltasenseof

warmth,deeplymoved.Irealizedthatasincereheartwasmoresignificantthanmoney.

【解析】

【分析】

本文是一篇續(xù)寫類書面表達(dá)，對考生的要求極高，首先是語篇構(gòu)思能力，其次是運用語言的

能力。要求考生根據(jù)原文的脈絡(luò)繼續(xù)搭建故事的細(xì)節(jié)內(nèi)容。這對夫妻非常喜歡這座房子，但

是他們囊懷羞澀根本付不起高昂的價格，但是他們對房子的喜愛會讓他們最終得到這座心愛

的家。文章最終必然是一個出人意料的結(jié)尾。全文使用一般過去時，同時根據(jù)實際情況靈活

運用時態(tài)。

【詳解】

第1步：審題。本文是一篇續(xù)寫類書面表達(dá)，續(xù)寫第一段中介紹他們最后一次出價并與競爭

對手陳述購房的理由。第二段是房屋主人對兩家陳述的評價以及最終的決定。

第2步：組織要點.第一段：這對夫妻購房的原因在于喜愛這棟房子，讓他們有家的感覺;

另外一對夫妻購房是想做生意。適當(dāng)運用心里描寫。第二段：房屋主人對兩家的陳述進(jìn)行評

價，并給出最終的決定：把房子賣給我們。此類文章必然有出人意料的結(jié)尾，

第3步：根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞組進(jìn)行語篇構(gòu)思，文章中出現(xiàn)的間接引語和時態(tài)問題。

第4步:連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

保持整潔美觀的卷面是非常重要的。

【點睛】

本篇范文結(jié)構(gòu)完美，條理清晰。范文時態(tài)和人稱運用準(zhǔn)確，涵蓋了文字提示要求的所有要點，

且有適當(dāng)?shù)膫€人發(fā)揮?？忌\用了多樣式的句型結(jié)構(gòu)，整篇文章富有變化，并不死板。文章

里使用了較多的高級詞匯，如takethepossessionof,longfor,appreciate等；盡量運用了豐

富的句式，如非謂語動詞用法Theownersmiled,saying....；定語從句Tellmethereasonwhy

youneedthishouse；同時文章里還使用了一些串聯(lián)成分,這些串聯(lián)成分讓各個要點更為緊密

地結(jié)合在一起。這些高級語法結(jié)構(gòu)的運用提升了文章的層次，顯示了很強(qiáng)的駕馭語言的能力。

2.閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個完整的故事。

Ialwayspridedmyselfonbeingawiseshopperandhavingagoodnoseforbargains.So

whenIcameacrossasportinggoodsstorewithasign“GoingOutofBusinessSale",Imarched

intothecrowdedstore.Upanddowntheaisles（通道），Iwandered,hummingtomyselfand

enjoyingtheenergyandexcitementofasale.

Allofasudden,there,atthebackofthestoresatacanoe（輕舟）exactlylikemyhusband's

dreamSupremoNumero-Uno,whosepicturehadbeenstuckonthebathroommirrorforyears.My

heartbeatwildly.Ipushedmywaythroughthecrowds,andnearlyfellintothecanoelookingfor

thepricetag.Thereitwas,withthemanufacturer^suggestedpriceat$6,750plustaxcrossedout

andahandwrittenTOCLEAR$750ASIS.Mustbeamistake.$6000off?Salesman.Ihadtotalk

toasalesman.Ispottedayoungfellowwitha"Hi.I'mMathew","Mathew.TellmeaboutthisEl

Supremocanoe.What'swrongwithit?Whyisitonly$750?^^

“Oh.There'snothingwrongwithit.It'sbrandnew.We'reclosingthestore.It?sonclearance

likeeverythingelse.Tilgocheck.^^AfewminuteslaterhecamebackandsaidJTmsorryma'am.

Someonemadeamistakeonthesaletag.Itshouldbe$4,750forthewholepackage.^^

Ifelttearswellupinmyeyes."Ohwell",Isaidsadly.<6Ofcourse,itwastoogoodtobetrue.

Thisisexactlylikemyhusband'sdreamboat.IguessIstartedtodreammyselfwhenIsawthat

pricetag.He'sgoingtobe62yearsoldFriday.Hadtoretireearlyforhishealth.It'sbeenhardon

justthepensionbutthestubbornoldfoolhasbeensaving$10everyweekforyearstobuyonejust

likethis.IpromiseIwon'tbuyanything,butit'sjustanoldman'ssillydream,youknow.Always

saidhewantedtofishinacanoeafterheretired,myvoiceloweredandIturnedandwalked

away.

注意：

1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；

2.應(yīng)使用5個以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語；

3.續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好；

4.續(xù)寫完成后，請用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語。

Paragraph1:

IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fordelivery,ma'am?”

Paragraph2:

“Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpa'sandthecanoe

hadbeenorderedbyhim.

【答案】

IwasalreadyatthemalldoorwhenMathewcaughtupwithme."Doyouhave$750plus$25

fordelivery,ma'am?”"Yes.Yes.That'saboutallIhave,”"Wellthen,youjusthaveyourhusband

sittingatthefrontgateonFiidaymorningaround10o9clocksohecanbetherewhenmyDadand

Icometounloadhisnewcanoe.We'llevenputabowonitforhisbirthday.”Istartedtocry.My

oldhandshookasIwroteoutmycheque.

"Ma'am.There'ssomethingyoushouldknow.ThisstorewasmyGrandpasandthecanoehad

beenorderedbyhim.Healwayspromisedtoretireoneday.Saidhewantedtospendtimerelaxing

andoutfishingin