寫作技巧10-不落俗套的“高級詞”公開課

第三講讓亮點(diǎn)詞匯添彩層級十不落俗套的“高級詞”在寫作中，考生如能在正確使用基本詞匯的基礎(chǔ)上，將一些基本詞匯升級為高級詞匯，就會為自己的高考作文增加得高分的亮點(diǎn)?！雒谰漭斎朐谑褂酶呒壴~匯時(shí)，我們可以嘗試如下方法。一、無重復(fù)原則——求雅變異寫作時(shí)應(yīng)盡量避免重復(fù)使用相同的詞語，要用貼切多樣的詞語來展示自己的詞匯水平。用詞不同、表達(dá)方式迥異，也是詞匯高級用法的體現(xiàn)。1.Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikesplayingfootball.→Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherprefersplayingfootball.2.Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayalsohavedifferentwaystodealwithsuchasituation.→Wemayhavedifferentopinionsinorganizingclassactivities.Wemayalsohavevariouswaystodealwithsuchasituation.二、具體化原則——生動貼切所謂詞義具體化原則是指，寫作中盡量避免使用意義寬泛、模糊的詞，而要根據(jù)語境使用具體生動的詞。1.Heisagoodteacher.→Heisakind/patient/knowledgeableteacher.2.Hegoestoworkeveryday.→Herides/drivestoworkeveryday.三、晚詞優(yōu)先原則——新穎高級為了表現(xiàn)自己的語言功底，吸引閱卷老師的眼球，盡量用高年級階段學(xué)到的詞匯代替低年級階段學(xué)到的詞匯。1.IamverygladtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.→Iamextremely/morethandelightedtoknowyouareinterestedinTangpoems.2.Ishouldbefreeanytimeafterschoolnextweek.→Ishouldbeavailableanytimeafterschoolnextweek.四、短語優(yōu)先原則——湊詞增色用短語代替單詞不僅會使文章增加亮點(diǎn)，而且如果關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路，用短語湊字也是一個(gè)很好的選擇。1.形容詞變短語的方法：of＋同根名詞形容詞對應(yīng)短語veryimportantofgreatimportanceveryusefulofgreatuseveryvaluableofgreatvalueverybeneficialofgreatbenefitveryhelpfulofgreathelpTakingregularexerciseisverybeneficialtoourhealth.→Takingregularexerciseisofgreatbenefittoourhealth.2.動詞變短語的方法：同義短語替換動詞對應(yīng)短語thinkholdtheviewknow/realizebeawareofusemakeuseof/takeadvantageof①Ilikeplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’mfondofplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’minterestedinplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’mcrazyaboutplayingfootballinmysparetime.→I’maddictedtoplayingfootballinmysparetime.②Isincerelyhopethatyouwillconsidermysuggestions.→Isincerelyhopethatyouwilltakemysuggestionsintoaccount/consideration.■佳句輸出Ⅰ.用高級詞匯替換加黑詞匯1.Heshouldhavedrivenmoreslowly.→Heissupposedtohavedrivenmoreslowly.2.Mostofthestudentsareshort-sighted.→Themajorityofthestudentsareshort-sighted.3.Jackisveryclever，whooftenthinksofnewideas.→Jackisveryclever，whooftencomesupwithnewideas.4.Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsavesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.→Somestudentsthinkthattheyshouldsetasidesomeoftheirpocketmoneyforbooks.5.I’mverygladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.→I’mmorethangladtolearnthatyouarecominginSeptember.6.Wouldyoupleasehelpmetoturndowntheradio?→Wouldyoupleasedomeafavortoturndowntheradio?Ⅱ.根據(jù)提示用高級詞匯改寫下列句子1.Asaresult，theplanwasafailure.(turn)→Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.2.Ibelievethatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.(convince)→Iamconvincedthatourcountrywillbecomestrongerandstronger.3.Hespendsallhissparetimeinreading.(devote)→Hedevotesallhissparetimetoreading.4.Assoonashearrived，hebeganhisresearch.(介詞短語作狀語)→Onhisarrival，hebeganhisresearch.5.Developingagoodhabitisalsoimportant.(of＋n.)→Developingagoodhabitisalsoofimportance/significance.6.MoreandmoreAmericansarecuriousaboutChineseculture.(number)→Agrowing/AnincreasingnumberofAmericansarecuriousaboutChineseculture.■完美文章(電子郵件/普通書信)用高級詞匯升級下面考生作文中的加黑詞匯并背誦【題目要求】(2020·淮北高三模擬)假定你是李華，想給英國朋友Jason寫一封信，介紹你的家鄉(xiāng)泉州，內(nèi)容包括：1.泉州的發(fā)展情況；2.泉州面臨的問題。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫?！究忌魑摹緿earJason，I’m1.very(→extremely/morethan)happytohearfromyouandknowaboutyourbeautifulhomecityLondon.NowI’dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownQuanzhou.Quanzhouisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendeveloping2.fast(→rapidly)duringthepasttenyears.Newbridgesandroadshavebeen3.built(→constructed)withhigh-risebuildingsstandinginmanypartsofthecity.4.Moreandmore(→Agrowing/Anincreasingnumberof)schoolsandhospitalsare5.useful(→ofgreatuse)forthenativepeople.Itisdevelopingintoamodernand6.beautiful(→attractive)city.7.But(→Nevertheless，)therearestillsomeproblems，suchasheavytrafficinrushhoursand8.serious(→severe)airpollution，whichhaveabad9.effect(→influence)onpeople’sdailylife.10.Ithink(→Iholdtheviewthat)Quanzhoushoulddevelophealthilyandscientifically，sothatwecouldhaveabetterhometowninfuture.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yours，LiHua■常用表達(dá)Ⅰ.首段常用語1.Iamverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.我非常高興收到你兩周前寄給我的信。2.I’mveryglad/pleasedtotellyouthat...我很高興告訴你……Ⅱ.中段常用語1.ThepurposeofthisprogrammeistodevelopourinterestinEnglishlearningandpracticalabilitiesinlisteningandspeaking.這個(gè)活動的目的是培養(yǎng)我們在英語學(xué)習(xí)方面的興趣和在聽說方面的實(shí)際能力。2.Itoffersteenagers，likeyouandme，achancetoenjoysportsandlearnaboutChineseculture.它給像你和我一樣的青少年提供了一個(gè)享受運(yùn)動和了解中國文化的機(jī)會。3.Inmyopinion，themostimportantdutyforyoutodayistolearnknowledgeandlearnhowtodealwithdifferentdifficultiesathomeandatschool.依我看來，當(dāng)今對你來說最重要的職責(zé)是學(xué)習(xí)知識以及學(xué)會如何處理家中和學(xué)校中出現(xiàn)的不同困難。4.Therefore，Ithinkitquitenecessarytotak