高中英語寫作-申請信范文及寫作指導(dǎo)課件

Letter

of

Application1高中英語寫作：申請信Appreciate

two

writing

examplesand

summarize how

to

writeletters

of

application2DearSir/Madam,I

am

Li

Hua.

I

know

from

our

school

website

thatsome

foreign

students

are

coming

to

visit

our

schoolnext

month.

I

am

writing

to

apply

for

the

chance

tobecome

a

volunteer.First

of

all,

I

speak

English

so

fluently

that

I

cancommunicate

with

native

speakers

without

difficulty.Secondly,

I

have

worked

as

a

volunteer

before,

so

Iknow

how

to

offer

help

to

those

in

need.

Moreimportantly,

I

want

to

study

abroad

after

graduation.

Iconsider

it

a

great

opportunity

to

learn

moreaboutwestern

culture.

I

think

I

am

qualified

for

the

position.Please

give

me

a

chance.I

would

appreciate

it

if

you

could

give

me

an

earlyreply.Yours,Li

Hua書信類型？文章結(jié)構(gòu)？開頭？中間？結(jié)尾？人稱、時態(tài)？連接詞？Example

132.

文章結(jié)構(gòu)？3.

人稱、時態(tài)？4.連接詞？1.書信類型？第一、二人稱

一般現(xiàn)在時、一般將來時first

of

all,

secondly,

more

importantly開頭：3句(自我介紹+信息來源+寫信目的）中間：6句重點介紹個人優(yōu)勢結(jié)尾：1句表達申請請求和期待回復(fù)這是一封

英文的申請信4Dear

Sir/Madam,I

am

Li

Hua,

an

18-year-old

boy

from

Xinhua

High

School.

I’velearned

from

the

Internet

that

some

volunteers

are

needed

for

theOlympic

Games

to

be

held

in

Beijing

and

Zhanjiakou

in

2022.

I’mwriting

to

recommend

myself.My

advantages

are

as

follows:

first,

I

am

friendly

and

helpful,

whichmakes

it

easy

for

me

to

get

along

well

with

others.

Second,IspeakEnglish

so

fluently

that

I

have

no

difficulty

communicating

with

nativespeakers.

In

addition,I

am

fond

of

sports

and

I

know

a

lot

aboutOlympic

Games.

I

think

I

am

fit

for

the

position.

Please

take

myapplication

into

consideration.I’d

be

grateful

if

you

could

give

me

an

early

reply.Yours,Li

HuaExample

251.題型特點?申請信也分很多種，比如志愿者、求職申請、加入某項活動或組織的申請、留學(xué)申請等，其目的在于讓對方了解自己的經(jīng)驗、能力、成就以及愿望等，所以個人情況的介紹應(yīng)該是申請信的核心內(nèi)容，應(yīng)盡可能向?qū)Ψ秸f明本人有哪些長處，以便給對方留下好印象，從而獲得面談的機會。由于此類題目常有較多的文字提示，寫作時除應(yīng)注意格式上的要求外，也應(yīng)注意審題全面，不要遺漏要點，且一定要注意人稱和時態(tài)的變化，避免出現(xiàn)邏輯上的混亂。6What

can

we

learn

from

the

writing

examples?A

Letter

ofApplicationP2P1

OpeningBodySelf-introductionbackgroundpurpose

of

writingcharacter/personalityLanguageabilityrelevant

experience2.

Thestructure？Your

advantagesP3

Closinghope/expectation7Lexical

chunks

ofan

application

letter8□

一...就...as

soon

as On

/

Upon

V-ingThe

moment

/

second

/

instant

...Hardly

/

Scarcely

...

when

...No

sooner

...

than

...

看到....see

/

find

/

read

/

notice

/

spot

/witness...catch

sight

of

/

catch

a

glimpse

of

...

廣告/通知/招募advertisement/notice、announcement

/recruitment第一部分：簡單說明寫信的目的9

急需........(

An

assistant)

is

wanted.be

in

bad

need /

be

badly

in

needneed

...

badly/urgently/

desperately

我想...I'd

like

to...I

want

/

desire

to...I'm

more

than

willing

to...I'm

extremely/

exceedingly

pleased

/

delighted

to...I'm

writing

torecommend

myself

as

a qualified

candidate

for...10我看了醫(yī)院發(fā)布的武漢急需志愿者的通告，我想要貢獻自己的一份力量。

I'v

read

the

announcementdelivered

by

our

hospital

that

volunteers

arebadly

needed

in

Wuhan

and

I'm

more

than

willing

to

make

a

contribution.我寫信是想告訴你,我適合做你們（在廣告上）刊登的這份工作。I

am

writing

to

tell

you

that

I'm

suitable

for

the

job

you

areadvertising.第一部分：簡單說明寫信目的11主修，專修major

in精通，掌握;熟悉master have

a

good

knowledge

/

command

ofbe

familiar

/

acquainted

with有...的資質(zhì)、資格be

qualified

for

/

qualification適合be

fit/

suitable

for

sth(5)較之...有優(yōu)勢第二部分：個人優(yōu)勢詞語表達have

an

advantage/

edge

over12更好地提升自我to

better

improve

/

promote

myselfself-

improvement

/

self

-promotion學(xué)以致用put

...

intopractice做出貢獻make

a

contributionto...提供平臺provide

sb

with

sthplatform13我認為沒人比我更適合申請這個職位。I

assume

no

one

is

more

qualifiedthan

me

for

theposition.我做志愿者工作五年多，非常熟悉如何照顧有需要的人。I’ve

been being

a

volunteer

for

more

than

5

years

and

I'mwellacquainted

withhow

to

attend

to

those

inneed.而且，面對突發(fā)情況，我能足夠冷靜解決它。What's

more,

faced

with

what happened

unexpectedly,

I'm

calm

enoughto

keep

coolheaded

to

find

a

solutioninstantly.我認為我具備了報上刊登一職所要求的必要條件和經(jīng)驗。I

feel

that I

have

the

necessaryqualifications needed

/

essentialexperience

for

the

position

advertised

in

the

newspaper.突出自己優(yōu)勢,具體說明勝任理由14如果...我將非常感激I

will

be

much

grateful

if

...

/

I'd

appreciate

it

if

...給我一個（...的）機會;加以考慮offer

me

this

(

great

/

precious)

chance

/opportunitytake

...

into

account

/consideration期待盡快收到你的回復(fù)Looking

forward

tohearing

from

yousoon.your

early

/

earliest

reply.your

reply

at

your

earliest

convenience.第三部分：表示感謝，期待回復(fù)15(1)如果能盡快回復(fù)并給到我這個機會，我將非常感激。I

would

highly

appreciate

it

if

you

could

respond

to

me

and

give

me

theopportunity

at

your

earliest

convenience.Should

you

respond

to

me

and

grant

me

this

precious

opportunity

at

yourearliest

convenience,

I

would

be

greatly

thankful.我樂意接受挑戰(zhàn)，我也將全身心地投入其中。I

should

be

pleased

to

accept

the

challenge,

and

afterwards

I

couldcommit

myself

to

itheart

and

soul.我堅信我一定不會讓您失望的。I

firmly

believe/

am

firmly

convinced

that

I

won't

disappoint

you

/

let

youdown.16Are

you

ready?17Put

what we

have

learnt

into

practice.Writing

task:(2019年全國Ⅰ卷書面表達）假定你是李華，暑假在倫敦學(xué)習(xí)，得知當?shù)孛佬g(shù)館要舉辦中國畫展。請寫一封信申請做志愿者，內(nèi)容包括：寫信目的：個人優(yōu)勢：能做的事情。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。185.

writing

task：6.notes：the

Analysis

of

the

Writing

Task(寫作任務(wù)分析)①

the

purpose

of

writing②

the

advantages

Li

Hua

has③

what

he

can

do

if

admitted①

100

words②

add

somedetailstype

of

writing(體裁)：a

letter

of

applicationwriter:

Li

Hua,

a

Chinese

studentaddressee：the

organizer

of

the

Chinese

painting

exhibitionbackground：The

Chinese

painting

exhibition

is

looking

for some

volunteers. Li

Hua

intends

to

be

one.197.

the

structure

of

a

letter

of

applicationBody

Paragraph主體段Closing

lines

結(jié)束語Opening

lines

開場白

P1P3P2Point

1Point

2Point

320Dear

Sir/Madam,P1: self

introduction,

background, purpose

of

writing8.

the

contents

of

each

paragraph(每段寫作內(nèi)容）①

topic

sentence②

advantages: A,B,

C③

things

you

can

do

if

admittedP2:

bodyP3:

Looking

forward

to

receiving

a early

replyYours，21Li

Hua9.

tense（時態(tài)）the

future

tense, the

present

tense,10.

person（人稱）the

first

person(第一人稱)，the

second

person(第二人稱)22Dear

Sir

orMadam,I

am

Li

Hua,

a

Chinese

student

studying

in

London

now.

I

am

pleased

tolearn

that

there

will

be

a

Chinese

painting

exhibition

at

the

local

gallery.

Iam

writing

with

the

purpose

of

being

accepted

as

avolunteer.I

am

fully

convinced

that

I'm

qualified

for

the

job.

For

one

thing,

I

have

agood

command

of

English,

so

I

can

express

myself

fluently,

which

helps

mecommunicate

with

the

visitors

efficiently.

For

another,

I

have

learnt

Chinese

painting

for

more

than

ten

years.

If

I

am

accepted,

I

can

share

myprofessional

knowledge

with

visitors.I

think

I

am

the

very

person

for

the

position.

I

hope

you

can

give

me

achance.【sample

1】Yours,Li

Hua23【sample

2】Yours,Li

Hua24Dear

Sir/Madam,I'm

Li

Hua,

an

exchange

student

from

China

studying

in

London

duringthe

summer

vacation.

Knowing

that

a

Chinese

painting

e