2024年江蘇省G4聯(lián)考應(yīng)用文求助信請(qǐng)求幫助指導(dǎo)外刊閱讀講義-高考英語(yǔ)作文復(fù)習(xí)專(zhuān)項(xiàng)

應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作——求助信（江蘇G4聯(lián)考：天一、淮陰、海門(mén)、姜堰）假定你是李華，在外刊閱讀中遇到了困難，嘗試一些方法后仍未達(dá)到預(yù)期效果。請(qǐng)你給外教Marcus寫(xiě)一封郵件尋求幫助，內(nèi)容包括：1.嘗試方法；2.請(qǐng)求指導(dǎo)。DearMarcus,Yourssincerely，LiHua本次應(yīng)用文大家的問(wèn)題集中在：用詞不當(dāng)；拓展不當(dāng)（或沒(méi)有）；沒(méi)有禮貌一、修改錯(cuò)誤1.Iattempttolookthroughmydictionarytosearchforthemeanings.2.Iaskedmyteacherforanswer,buthewastooignoranttoanswer.3.IusedthedictionarytocheckwordswhenIcouldn’tunderstand.4.SinceyouareexpertinEnglish,Iwishyouwouldtranslatethetextsformeinperson.5.CouldyoutellwhatkindofforeignmagazinesshouldIchoose?應(yīng)用文高分關(guān)鍵：切中要點(diǎn)；因果拓展（不能廢話(huà)，要圍繞要點(diǎn)）；句子精致（各種句型和短語(yǔ)）二、下面的版本專(zhuān)門(mén)針對(duì)主體，語(yǔ)法沒(méi)有大問(wèn)題，但太過(guò)于簡(jiǎn)單，請(qǐng)思考如何拓展：1.Despiteefforts,IfounditstillhardformetounderstandsomesentencesandphrasesbyreferringtotheInternet.2.I’vetriedseveralmethodssuchasusingtranslationsoftwareandsearchforthecontentsontheInternet.However,itdidn’timprovemysituation.3.DearMarcus,IamwritingtoaskforyourhelpbecauseImetmanynewwordsinreadingEnglishjournals.Ithuslookedupallthenewwordsinthedictionary.Itcausedinefficiency.Iwonderwhetheryoucouldgivemesomeguidance?Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmewiththehardnuttocrack.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua三、范文賞析Version1:（官方）DearMarcus,Hopethisemailfindsyouwell.Facedwiththedifficultiesin

readingEnglishjournals,

I’mwritingforyourgenerousassistance.Inabidto

enhancemyEnglishskills,Istarted

readingEnglishmagazinesthissemester,

but

numerousnewexpressions

preventedmefrom

readingfluentlyandacquiringpleteprehension.

Toaddresstheproblem,Ihaveexperimentedwithseveralmethodssuchas

referringtoadictionaryoraskingclassmatesforhelp,readingthesamearticlemultipletimes.

However,Ihaveyettoachievethedesiredresults.Thus,Iwonderwhetheryou,asaprofessionalEnglishteacher,couldprovidemewithsomepracticalstrategies.Iwouldbeveryindebtedifyoucouldreplywitheffectivesuggestions.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Version2:（下水文）DearMarcus,IamreachingouttoseekyourassistanceduetothesignificantchallengeIfacewhen

readingEnglishjournals.

Icameacrossmanynewwordsduringmyreading,

whichforcedmeto

frequentlyconsultthedictionary.

Notonlydidit

consumealotoftime,

butit

robbedmethejoyofreading.SoIboughtavocabularybookanddevotedmyselftomemorizingallthewordsinit.

However,despitemyefforts,Icontinuedtostruggleto

prehendthepassagesinthejournals.

Givenyourexpertisein

teachingreading,

Iamhopefulthatyoucouldoffermesomeguidance.

Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpmetacklethischallengingissue.Lookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Verson3:(下水文）DearMarcus,

Sorrytotroubleyou,butwhatpuzzlesmeishowtoreadforeignmagazineseffectively.

Asyoumayknow,mywaysofreadingseemtoproveinefficient.WhatIfocusonischeckingeverynewwordImeetwhenreadingandtakingdownitsusage.Meanwhile,I’llextractbeautifulwordsandsentencesforreferencelater.Andsometimes,I’llaccumulatetheidiomsforabetterunderstandingaboutthelanguage.However,evenwhenIknoweverywordandeverysentence,Istillcan’tunderstandthewholepassage,whichreallybringsmepuzzles.Wouldyoupleaseoffermesomeconstructivementsonmywaysofreading?Anysuggestionsfromyouarewele.Thanks.(110words)

Yourssincerely,

LiHuaVersion4(下水文）DearMarcus,Ihopethisemailfindsyouwell.Iamwritingtoseekyour

illuminating

helpregardingmydifficultiesinreadingforeignmagazines.Recently,Ihavebeenstrugglingwithprehendingthearticlesinthemagazinesdespitetryingdifferentstrategies.Ihavetriedreadingslowlyandcarefully,underliningunfamiliarwords,andlooking

themup

inthedictionary.However,thesemethodshavenotyieldedtheexpectedresults.Therefore,Iwouldgreatlyappreciateitifyoucouldprovidemewithsomeguidanceonhowtoimprovemyreadingskills.Perhapsyoucouldsuggestsomeeffectivetechniquesorremendadditionalresourcesthatcouldassistmeinbetterunderstandingthecontentofthesemagazines.Thankyouverymuchforyourtimeandattention.Ilookforwardtoyourvaluableadvice.Yourssincerely,LiHua

Version5(下水文）DearMarcus,

Howiseverythinggoing?Ihavetriedalotofwaystoimprovemyforeignjournalreadingbutalltheseattemptshaveyetreachedthedesiredresults.Therefore,I’mwritingtoaskforyourhelpandgivemesomeguidanceonhowtoimproveit.

OnemethodIhavetriedistowritedowntheunknownwordsIcameacrossduringreadingandreviewitattheendoftheday.AnotherwayistotranslateitorallyandcheckitwiththeChineseversiontoseeifIhavemisunderstanding.However,bothwaystakealotoftime.Worsestill,theforeignjournalreadingstillposesalanguagebarriertome.Thus,Iwouldappreciateitgreatlyifyoucouldbekindenoughtogivemesomeadvice.

Thanksforyourtimeandenerg