大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作評(píng)分實(shí)例及范文

大學(xué)英語四級(jí)寫作評(píng)分實(shí)例題目1：PositiveandNegativeAspectsofSports 1、參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)有許多好處 2、但也有副作用 3、你的體會(huì)【樣卷1】得分：2分 Ilikesports.Ittakememoreprofit.Thefirstoneishealthaswellknown.Thesecondisrelaxion.Afterlearninginschool,Ilikemakesomemovement,justasrunning.Itcanrelaxmyself.Althoughtherehassomanyotherpositiveaspectsofsports.Therealsohassomanynegativeaspectsofsports.Itmakesomeonedamagours.Becauseyouwouldhurtinsport,justlikefootball.It’smostlikelytohappenbutitcouldn’tproventpeoplefromsports. Ithinkthatsportstakemoreprofitthandamaguostome.Ilikesports.【樣卷2】得分：5分 Sportscanprovideusgoodhealthy.Especiallywhenweareinchildhood.Sportscanbebenefitofourgrowing.Itcanstrengthenourbody,brightenourbrain,widenourallkindsofinterestsandmakeyouencouragable.Asastudentstudyingincollegesportsisessentialandimportantforourstudy.Positivesportscanmakeyousucceedinallkindsofthings. Butitdoesn’tfollowthatsportshasnotanyshortcoming.Ifoccupyingallofyousparetime,sportwillinfluentotherhobbiesofyours.Ifyoudothatforalongtime,youwillbecomeahollow-brainman.Itisterribleforyourfuture.Ilikesportsverymuch.Becausesuitablesportsreallycanhelpmystudy.Anditmakemeconfident.Icansoluteanyquestiondependingonmyenergyandstoringbody.【樣卷3】得分：8分 Therearealotofpositiveaspectsofsports.Peopletakespartinsportsandgamesfromtimetotimeislikelytohaveagoodbody.Whilehavingsports,peoplecanstrengthenhismuscles,fastenhisspeedofresponse,andincreasehisabilityofresistingdisease.Sportsarealsohelpfultotrainpeople’scharactorsanddetermianation. Butyoucanneverneglectthenegativeaspectsofsports.Peoplemayhurthimselforotherswhenhejoinsports,especiallythoseareviolent. Ontheend,havingsportshasmoreadvantagesthandisvantages.Ienjoyplayingbasketballandthishasbroughtmesuchexcitement.AndIhavemakesomegoodfriendswhenweplayedbasketballtogether.WealwayssticktotherulessothatIneverhurtothersorbehurted.【樣卷4】得分：11分 Sportshavealotofgoodeffects.Itcanmakeyoustrongerandmoreintelligent.Propersportscanalsomakeyoufeelenergeticforwork.Forexample,ifyouplayfootball,yourmusclesexerciseandbecamestrongerandstronger.Ifyouplaychess,yourbrainmovesquickly.That’sgoodforthedevelopmentofyourintelligence. Ontheotherhand,sportshaveafewilleffects.Itmaymakeyoufeeltiredifyouexercisetoomuch.Andoldpeoplemaybehurtbyimpropersports.Furthermoresportsmayevenleadtosuddendeath. Iprefertoplayfootball.I’mamemberofcollegeteam.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafterit,Ifeelrelaxed.That’stosay:it’sgoodformyhealth.【樣卷5】得分：14分 Sportsbenefitusinmanyrespects.Whentakingpartinsports,wegetthechancetotrainalmostallpartsofourbodies.Thereisnodoubtthatpropersportsactivitieskeepourphysicalfitness.Furthermore,sportscanenrichourlifeandmaintainourpsychologicalhealth.Throughparticipation,everyonecanlearnthatontheplaygroundhenotonlystrugglesforhimselfbutalsofightsforhisteam.Sportsteachusaboutconsideration,cooperationandoptimismtofailure. Butsportscandosomeharmtothosepeoplewhocannotplantheiractivitiesproperly.Toohardtrainingmyhurttheirbodies,exhausttheirvigor,andevencausethemtobesick. Ingeneral,Ilovesports.Ienjoysports.IfeelthatInotonlygainawell-balancedlifethroughgoinginforsports,butalsogetmorechancestomoveclosertonature.SportsaddhappinesstomyeverydaylifewhenIperforminadecentway.解釋說明型模板首段（描述現(xiàn)象）模板1①Nowadays,withthereformof（現(xiàn)象的背景）,（描述現(xiàn)象）.②Thisphenomenonhasbeenbroughtintopublicfocusandcalledforfurtherconcern.模板2believethatthesituationwillbeimprovedinthenearfuture.問題解決型2000年1月大學(xué)英語四級(jí)作文題目及范文題目：HowIFinanceMyCollegeEducation1.上大學(xué)的費(fèi)用（tuitionandfees）可以通過多種渠道解決2.那種渠道適合于我（說明理由）[范文]Nowadays,tuitionandfeesforcollegeeducationaremuchhigherthaneverbefore.Howtofinancecollegeeducationhasbecomeamatterofconcernformanystudents.Differentpeoplehavedifferentwaystosolvethisproblem.Somegetallofthemoneyfromtheirparents.Someapplyforaloanespeciallysetupforcollegestudents.Someacquirethemoneycompletelybythemselves,doingafull-timejobinsummerorwinterholiday.Someotherstudentsmayasktheirparentsformostofitandearntherestintheirsparetimeincollege,bydoingapart-timejob.AsfarasI’mconcerned,Ipreferthelastway.Havingacquiredmostofthetuitionandfeesfrommyparents,Ineedn’tworrytoomuchaboutthemoneyandcanconcentrateonmystudy;ontheotherhand,apart-timejobinmysparetimemakesmycampus-lifecolorful.Icanmakealotoffriends,improvemyabilitiesandlearnlotsofknowledge.So,Ichoosethiswaytocovermytuitionandfees.問題解決型模板首段（提出問題）

模板1①Nowadays,withtherapideconomicaldevelopmentandintensecompetition,peopleareattachingmoreandmoreimportanceto（提出問題）。②Soitisofgreatimportanceforusto（關(guān)注問題的要性）.③Ontheonehand,（問題后果一）.④Ontheotherhand,（問題的后果二）.⑤Asaresult,wemustsparenoeffortstotakesomemeasurestosolvethisproblem.模板2①Alongwiththeadvanceofthesocietymoreandmoreproblemsarebroughttoourattention,oneofwhichisthat（提出問題）。②Itisofgreatsignificancethat（解決問題很必要）.③Ontheonehand,（解決問題的必要性一）.④Ontheotherhand,（解決問題的必要性二）.⑤Accordingly,howtosolvetheproblembecomesthetoppriorityforus.中間段（解決問題的辦法）模板1⑥Therearemanystepswhichcanbetakentoundothisproblem.⑦Firstofall,(途徑一).⑧Inaddition,anotherwaycontributingtosuccessofthesolvingproblemis(途徑二).模板2⑥Manywayscancontributetosolvingthisseriousproblem,butthefollowingonesmaybethemosteffective.⑦Firstofall,.⑧Anotherwaytosolvetheproblemis.⑨Finally,.⑩Thesearenotthebestandtheonlytwo/threemeasureswecantake,butitshouldbenotedthat______.本模版中第6句為主題句，第7、8和9句提供3個(gè)途徑，第10句為結(jié)論。結(jié)尾段（總結(jié)+個(gè)人選擇+前景展望） ⑾Infact,morethanthreewayscanbeadoptedtosolvetheproblemof(具體問題),⑿Asforme,Iwouldprefertosolvetheprobleminthisway,thatistosay,（方法）.⒀Anyway,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitinguswhenallofusmakejointefforttosolvethisproblem.觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比型模板1、傾向型分析其中一種觀點(diǎn)People’sopi