上海市2021年高考英語沖刺模擬試卷分類匯編：書面表達 含答案

上海市2021年高考英語沖刺模擬試卷分類匯編

書面表達專題

2021屆上海高考英語沖刺模擬試卷1

V.GuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

如今，電子支付(electronicpayment)成為潮流，現(xiàn)金的使用頻率越來越低。請你簡要說明

電子支付在生活中的具體應(yīng)用，并談?wù)勀銜r電子支付是否會取代現(xiàn)金的看法。你的文章必

須包括：

1.簡耍說明電子支付在生活中的具體應(yīng)用；

2.電子支付是否會取代現(xiàn)金？為什么？

【答案】Thereisagrowingtrendthatelectronicpaymenthasdominatedourlives,andweare

graduallysteppingintoacashlesssociety.

Takeaquicklookatyourdailylife,andyouwillfinde-paymenthascoveredeveryaspectof

lifetoday.IfshardtoimaginewithoutAlipayhowyoucanmakeonlinepurchasesonTaobaowith

afewsimpleclicks.WithoutWeChat,howcanyouunlockasharedbikeandpayforthefee?E-

paymentsarealsoalmostuniversallyacceptedbybrick-and-mortarstores.Inonesense,wenow

literallyhaveeverythingatourfingertipsthankstoelectronicpayment.

Eventually,Ibelieve,e-paymentwillreplacecash.Foronething,itstandsoutforits

incomparableconvenience.Notonlydoesitspareusthetroubleofcarryingcasheverywhere,but

italsosavesusenormousamountsoftimethatwouldhaveotherwisebeenwasted,forexample,

inlongqueues.Foranother,iteliminatesthenecessitytoworryaboutwhetherthebanknotes

you'vereceivedarerealoffake.E-paymentalsomakesiteasierforthegovernmenttosupervise

thecirculationofmoneybyofferingatransparentenvironmentforelectronicpayments.

Admittedly,e-paymenthasitsowndrawbacks,suchaspotentiallysevereconsequencesif

one'saccountishackedorstolen.Butwiththeimprovementofrelevantlawandregulations,the

problemissuretobekeptatbay.

Toputitinanutshell,electronicpaymentcansimplifydailyaffairs,regulatetheflowof

moneyandwillultimatelydominateoureverydaylife.Iamlookingforwardtoaconvenient,

time-savingandsafecashlesssociety.

2021屆上海高考英語沖刺模擬試卷2

VLGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假設(shè)你是李華，學(xué)校學(xué)生會有四個社團正招募新人（如下圖所示），你希望加入其中一個。

請你寫一封應(yīng)征信，談?wù)勀愕南敕?。?nèi)容必須包括：

1.你希望加入的社團

2.選擇該社團的原因

3.你可以為該社團做些什么

注意：請勿透露本人真實姓名和學(xué)校名稱。

DearSir,

IamLiHua,aseniorhighschoolstudentfromClassoneGradethree.Hearingthenews

thatthestudentunionisrecruitingnewmembersforfourcommunitiesincludingScienceclub,

Englishtheatreclub,Ecoclubandsportsclubinmyschool,whichhasattachedmanystudents9

attention.NowIcanhardlywaittoforwardaformalapplication,hopingtojoina

communitythat1amkeenonafterclass

Asfaras1amconcerned,1ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardinordertoacquiremoreand

moreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.Inthesecond

place,thereasonwhyIpreferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemostusefulwaysto

havearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneed

ofcooperationamongstudentssuchasfootball,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteam

spiritsothatweareawarethatunionisstrengthandknowtheimportanceofcooperation.All

thesereasonsmakemebeabsorbedinjoiningSportsclub.If1amelectedtobeamemberof

Sportsclub,1willtakeactivepartinallactivities.What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionof

thecommunityisthatIcanconveythepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesand

awakenthemtotherealizationthatjoiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.lamfascinatedbybeing

amemberofSportsclub.

I'dappreciateitsomuchifyoucouldpossiblyconsidermyapplication.Lookingforward

toyoureply.

Yours,

LiHua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于提綱類作文，要求談?wù)勛约簩τ诩尤肷鐖F的選擇及內(nèi)心想法。

【詳解】第一步：審題

體裁：應(yīng)征信（夾敘夾議）

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)主要為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu)：總分法（或總分總）

要求：

1.你希望加入的社團

2.選擇該社團的原因

3.你可以為該社團做些什么

第二步:列提綱（重點詞組）

joinSportsclub

doexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness

oneofthemostusefulwaystohavearelaxation

cultivateourteamspirit

第三步：連詞成句

LAsfaras1amconcerned,!ameagertojoinSportsclubbecauseofthefollowingreasons.

2.wealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysicalfitness.

3.Inthesecondplace,thereasonwhy1preferSportsclubisthatdoingsportsisoneofthemost

usefulwaystohavearelaxationafterstudyingforalongperiod.

4.Lastbutnotleast,doingsportsthatareinneedofcooperationamongstudentssuchas

football,basketballandvolleyballcancultivateourteamspirit.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

用詞參考：

Asfaras1amconcerned

notonly...butalso...

Firstandforemost

Inthesecondplace

Lastbutnotleast

【點睛】[高分句型1]Firstandforemost,notonlyshouldwegotoalllengthstostudyhardin

ordertoacquiremoreandmoreknowledge,butwealsoshoulddoexercisestostrengthenphysical

fitness.（notonly位于句首的部分倒裝）

[高分句型2]If1amelectedtobeamemberofSportsclubjwilllakeactivepartinallactivities,

（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）

[高分句型3]What1candevotemyselftotheconstructionofthecommunityisthat1canconvey

thepositivetheoriesofsportstomyfriendsandclassmatesandawakenthemtotherealizationthat

joiningSportsclubisthebestchoice.（what引導(dǎo)的主語從句）

2021屆上海高考英語沖刺模擬試卷3

VILGuidedWriting

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

現(xiàn)在中國購物網(wǎng)站非常繁榮，很多人選擇網(wǎng)上購物而不是去商場實體店購物，你更傾向于哪

種購物方式，并說出你的理由。

注意：請勿出現(xiàn)真實的學(xué)校及姓名。

Nowadays,onlineshoppinghasbecomeanirreversibletrend.Somepeopleclaimthatonline

shoppinghasmoreadvantageswhileothersmaintainthatphysicalstoresarebetter.

Frommyperspective,Ipreferonlineshoppingforthreereasons.Firstofall,itssuper

convenienceisofvitalimportancetomebecauseitenablesmetosavemoretimeandenergyfor

mywork.Secondly,morechoicesandmoredifferentkindsofcommoditiesareofferedonthe

InternetsothatIcancompareprices,types,qualitiesandcanevenrefertopeople'scomments

beforechoosingtheappropriateoneforme.Lastbutnotleast,onlineshoppingenablesmetobuy

thingsacrossdifferentcountrieswithouttravellingaroundtheworld,whichisofgreat

convenienceonadailybasis.

Allinall,onlineshoppingismoreappealingtomeandwilldefinitelykeepaccompanying

meinthefuture.

2021屆上海高考英語沖刺模擬試卷4

V.GuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

假如你是Tom,在網(wǎng)上訂了一款MP3作為生日禮物送給好朋友，但收到的MP3卻存在

質(zhì)量問題。請你給銷售經(jīng)理寫一封投訴信。內(nèi)容包括：

1.MP3有質(zhì)量問題；

2.給你造成的損失；

3.你的合理要求.

Dearmanager,

I'mwritingtotellyouabouttheMP3IboughtlastweekfromyourcompanyontheInternet,

whichwasintendedformygoodfriendasabirthdaygift.

WhenIopenedthedelivery,Iwassurprisedtofindthewrappingpaperbroken.Whatwas

worse,IfindtheMP3doesn'twork,nomatterhowmanymeasuresIhavetaken.

WithreferencetomyorderNo.1314,thereisnodoubtthattheMP3youdeliveredreally

comesfromyourcompany,whosepoorqualitymademeverydisappointed,anditisthepoorMP3

thatmademesufferagreatlossfromit.Anyway,itcostme200yuan,whichIsavedfornearly

halfayear.Tosomeextent,thebrokenMP3hasnotonlybroughtmegreateconomiclossbutalso

lessenedmytrustasaconsumer.

Asmyfriend\birthdayisdrawingnear,IamanxioustoknowwhetheranewMP3canbe

redeliveredassoonaspossible.Pleasetakemycaseintodeepconsiderationratherthanturna

blindeyetomyrequirement.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifmuchattentioncouldbepaidto

myrequirement!

Yourstruly,

Tom

2021屆上海高考英語沖刺模擬試卷5

WLGuidedWriting（25分）

Directions:WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgiven

belowinChinese.

學(xué)校學(xué)生廣播正在醞釀改版，擬從現(xiàn)有的三個欄目（科學(xué)技術(shù)、興趣愛好、文學(xué)藝術(shù)）

中去除一個，并從三個備選欄目（旅行、環(huán)保、健身）中挑選一個納入該電視臺節(jié)目。假設(shè)

你是該校學(xué)生李華，給廣播臺長寫一封電子郵件，表達你的觀點。郵件須包括以下內(nèi)容：

1.你建議去除的欄目及去除的理由；

2.你建議增加的欄目及增加的理由。

參考范文：

GuidedWriting

DearPresent,

I'mwritingtoexpresssomeofmyopinionstowardsourschool'sbroadcastwhichintendsto

changeoneoftheprogramsfromsciencetechnology,interesthobbyandliteratureartandselect

oneofthemfromtravelling,environmentalp