專題17讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)激動背誦與測試（詞-句-文）講義-2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典

《2024年高考英語讀后續(xù)寫高分寶典》專題17讀后續(xù)寫語料積累之如何表達(dá)激動背誦與測試（詞句文）講義解析版背誦積累區(qū)：背誦遷移舉一反三一、必背單詞1.激動類形容詞：excited,thrilled,exciting,thrilling2.激動類副詞：excitedly3.激動類名詞：excitement,thrill4.激動類動詞：excite，thrill二、高頻語塊1.cheerup振奮起來2.with/inexcitement激動地3.flushwithexcitement激動得滿臉通紅4.conceal/hideone’sexcitement難掩激動5.containone’sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動6.toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激動的是7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動的尖叫聲8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮三、佳句賞析1.His

voicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動,難以成聲。2.His

face

was

litupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩。3.Her

face

was

glowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。4.Arippleofexcitement

ranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。5.Herflushedfacewasshining

withexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動而發(fā)亮。6.Myheartisinmymouth

wheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動不已。7.Herheartwas

flutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。8.Ashiverofexcitement

passedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個消息,一陣激動的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefelt

asurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,

hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.

爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。12.Unableto

containhisjoyandexcitement，he

threwhimselfintomyarms,murmuring,“Thankyou,dearmum.”

不能抑制住他的高興和激動，他一下子撲到我的懷里，喃喃道：媽媽，辛苦了。測試鞏固區(qū)：分級測試步步為贏一、高頻語塊漢譯英1.振奮起來2.激動地3.激動得滿臉通紅4.難掩激動5.抑制內(nèi)心的激動6.令某人激動的是7.激動的尖叫聲8.一陣興奮【參考答案】1.cheerup振奮起來2.with/inexcitement激動地3.flushwithexcitement激動得滿臉通紅4.conceal/hideone’sexcitement難掩激動5.containone’sexcitement抑制內(nèi)心的激動6.toone’sexcitement/thrill令某人激動的是7.ascreamofthrill/excitement激動的尖叫聲8.aripple/shiver/wave/surgeofexcitement一陣興奮二、佳句賞析漢譯英1.他情緒激動,難以成聲。2.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩。3.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。4.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。5.她紅紅的臉因激動而發(fā)亮。6.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動不已。7.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。8.聽到這個消息,一陣激動的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。9.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。10.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。11.爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒?！緟⒖即鸢浮?.His

voicewaschokedwithemotion.他情緒激動,難以成聲。2.His

face

was

litupwithexcitement.他的臉由于激動而放出光彩。3.Her

face

was

glowingwithexcitement.她因興奮而顯得容光煥發(fā)。4.Arippleofexcitement

ranthroughthem.一陣興奮的漣漪掠過他們。5.Herflushedfacewasshining

withexcitement.她紅紅的臉因激動而發(fā)亮。6.Myheartisinmymouth

wheneverIhearthenationalanthem.每當(dāng)我聽到國歌就激動不已。7.Herheartwas

flutteringwithanxietyaswellasexcitement.她的心又興奮又不安，怦怦亂跳。8.Ashiverofexcitement

passedthroughherstomachwhensheheardthenews.聽到這個消息,一陣激動的戰(zhàn)栗傳到她的胃里。9.Theteacher'sencouragementwarmedhisheart.Hefelt

asurgeofexcitement.老師的鼓勵溫暖著他的心,他感到一陣興奮。10.Whenthehostannouncedthatshewontheprize,

awildexcitementtookholdofher.當(dāng)主持人宣布她獲獎時,她興奮得不能自已。11.Dadsaidwewouldgocampingnextweek,

hiseyesglittering\twinklingwithexcitement.

爸爸說下星期去露營，他的眼中閃爍著興奮的光芒。三、情感表達(dá)片段運(yùn)用請運(yùn)用以上必備單詞或高頻語塊，把下面的語篇補(bǔ)充完整。Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnewtentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedtocampalongtheriver.Theviewsonthejourneyweresurprisinglybeautiful,1(媽媽激動不已).Everytimewegottoanewplace，Momcouldhardly2(抑制興奮),andwould3(振奮起來)likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthecar,laughinganddancingaround4(興奮地).Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,5(激動得尖叫起來),Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent6(眼里閃著激動的光芒)，wesatonthegrass,enjoyingthesplendidnature.【參考答案】Thenextdaywerememberedthebrandnew

tentwehadbroughtwithus.Wedecidedto

campalongtheriver.Theviews

onthejourney

were

surprisinglybeautiful,awaveofexcitement

taking

holdofMom.Every

timewegottoanewplace，Mom

couldhardly

containherexcitement,and

would

cheerup

likeachild.Shewouldgetoffthe

car,laughinganddancingaround

withexcitement.Themomentwearrivedatthecampingplace,

lettingoutascreamofthrill,Momlocatedaclearingandimmediatelyguidedustopitchthetent.

Witheyesglittering/twinklingwithexcitement,wesatonthe

grass,enjoying

the

splendid

nature.四、情感表達(dá)語篇運(yùn)用1.（2023上·廣西·高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。I’veforgottenalmosteverythingaboutmyearlychildhoodexcepttheconcert,andmymotheralsoremembersit.WhenIwasafiveyearoldboy,Iwaslearningtoplaythepianoinamusicalschool.Oneday,afamouspianomasterwassaidtoholdapianoconcertinourcity.Wishingtoencouragemyprogressonthepiano,mymothertookmetotheconcert.Afterwewereseated,mymotherspottedafriendintheaudience,whoshehadn’tmetforalongtime.Soshetoldmetostayinmypositionandthenwalkeddownthepassagetogreetherfriend.Mymotherandherfriendstoodchattinghappilyforawhilebeforetheperformance.Meanwhile,IwassoexcitedtoseetheconcertstagethatIstoodupandeventuallymademywaythroughadoormarked“NoAdmittance”toexplorethewondersoftheconcerthall.Whenthehouselightsbecamedimandtheconcertwasabouttobegin,mymotherreturnedtoherseat.AndshediscoveredthatIwasmissing.Mymothersaidshefeltreallyguiltyatthattimeandthatshesaidtoherself,“It’smyfault.Ishouldn’thaveleftmylittlesonaloneinhisplace.”Confusedandanxious,shelookedaround,butIwasnowheretobeseen.Suddenly,thecurtainpartedandspotlightsfocusedontheimpressivepianoonthestage.Tohersurprise,shesawmesittingbythekeyboardinnocentlyplayingTwinkleTwinkleLittleStaronthepiano.Atthatmoment,thepianomastermadehisentrance.Seeingme,alittleboy,sittingatthecenterofthestageandplayingthepiano,heseemedtobepletelyataloss.Butthenhequicklymovedtothepianoandwhisperedinmyear,“Don’tquit.Keepplaying.”Leaningover,hereachedaroundtotheothersideofmeandsoonaddedarunningobbligato(伴奏).Together,wetransformedafrighteningsituationintoacreativeexperience.Theaudiencehadneverseensuchaperformanceform.Theylistenedcuriouslyandattentively,lostinthewonderfulmusicworld.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右：2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Whenthepiececametoanend,thepianomasterbreathedasighofrelief.Heturnedtome,huggedmeandsaid,“Myboy,youreallydidagoodjob.”Heroseandtookmetothecenterofthestage.Warmandloudapplausebrokeoutintheaudiencebeforehecouldsayaword.Peopleclappedandcheeredforourwonderfulcooperation.Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother’sarmsandtookmyseatagain.Welistenedtothemusicmorecarefullyandsatthroughtheconcerttogether.Aftertheconcert,mymotherandIwaitedforthepianomasterbackstage.Seeinghiming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,“Itakemylittlesontoyourconcertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.Ididn’texpectthathe’druntothestage...”Herepliedwithasmile,“Ilikeyourboy.Oneday,heisgoingtobesomebody.”Hearingthewords,mymotherwassorelievedandtouched.Thankstothemaster,Igotnotonlythechancetosteponstagebutalsotheconfidenceformyfuturepathofmusic.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了小時候媽媽帶著作者去看音樂會，作者誤走入舞臺上彈鋼琴的故事。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“當(dāng)這首曲子結(jié)束時，鋼琴大師松了一口氣。”可知，第一段可描寫作者彈完鋼琴后鋼琴大師鼓勵作者，觀眾也給作者鼓掌，作者很高興。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“音樂會結(jié)束后，我和媽媽在后臺等鋼琴大師?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫媽媽向鋼琴大師道歉，大師很欣賞作者，認(rèn)為作者以后會有所作為，多虧了大師，作者現(xiàn)在能登上舞臺，而且對未來的音樂之路充滿信心。2.續(xù)寫線索：彈完曲子——鋼琴大師鼓勵作者——觀眾鼓掌——高興，回到座位上欣賞音樂——音樂會結(jié)束——向大師道歉——大師很欣賞作者——作者如今音樂有所作為3.詞匯激活行為類①擁抱某人：hugsb./givesb.ahug②鼓掌：clap/applaud③走近：eupto/approach情緒類①興奮地：Excitedly/withexcitement②感動的：touched/moved【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]Excitedlyandhappily,Iranintomymother’sarmsandtookmyseatagain.（由副詞作伴隨狀語）[高分句型2]Seeinghiming,mymothercameuptohimandsaidapologetically,“Itakemylittlesontoyourconcertinthehopethathecanbenefitfromit.（由現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語和that引導(dǎo)的同位語從句）2.（2023上·湖南岳陽·高三校聯(lián)考階段練習(xí)）閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Forsomeweeks,Ihadnoticedanelderlywomanwalkingpastourhouse,pushingagrocerycartfilledwithtrashbags.Icouldn’thelpbutfeelsorryforherassheshuffled(拖著腳走路)along.Occasionally,shewouldpauseandpickupacanfrombesidetheroad.Shewouldcarefullyputitintooneofthebagsandcontinueonherway.Iwonderedwhatcircumstanceshadbroughthertothispointinlife.Didshehavenofamily?Wastherenoonetolookafterher?Oneevening,Icouldnolongerstandit.Asshewalkedby,Iwentouttothestreetandstoppedher.“Madam,”Isaid.“CanIaskyousomething?”Sheturnedtolookatmewithbeautiful,darkeyesthattwinkledinherwrinkledface.Iknewthenthatshewasnoordinaryhomelessperson.Therewasdignityand,yes,evenjoyabouther.Suddenly,Ifeltembarrassedtoaskhermyquestions,butIinsisted.“I’veseenyouforafewweekspickingupcans,”Iexplained.“Doyousellthemtobuygroceries?”“No,”shesaidwithasmile.“Idothistohelpthechildren.”Imusthavelookedconfusedbecauseshewentontoexplain.“Ihadcancer—twice—andbothtimesIwenttoabighospitalinanothertown.Theycuredme.ButwhileIwasthere,Imetthechildren,andI’veneverforgottenthem.Idon’thaveanymoney,butIcanstillwalk,andIpickupthesecanstosellthemformoneyforthehospital.”Shetoldmethatshespendsmanyhoursaweekcollectingcans;atleasttwobusinessessavecansforher.Whenshehasenough,sheloadsthemallintoafriend’spickup,andthetwoofthemtakethemtothecitywherethehospitalislocated.Theretheygetcashedout.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Aswecontinuedtotalk,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】Aswecontinuedtotall,Ilearnedmoreaboutwhatshethought.“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,”shesaid.“Iknowit’snotmuch,buteverylittlebitcounts.AndwhenIseethechildrensmile,itmakesallthehardworkworthit.I’vebeenblessedinmylife.Iwanttodosomething,andthisissomethingIcando.Apartfromthat,thereisnothingIcandotoensurepersonslikemeareblessed.Itdoesn’tcostmemuch—onlythecostofthegas—andithelpsthechildren.”Hearingthis,Ireachedintomypurseandpulledsomebillsout.“No,no.Idon’twantyourmoney,”sherepliedwithawaveofherhand,backingawayabit.“ButIwantyoutotakeit,”Itoldher.“Useitforgasorwhateveryouwant.”ShesmiledandfinallytookthebillsIheldout.Shethengavemeahug.Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stoppingoccasionallytopickuponeortwo.Atthecorner,sheturned,smiled,wavedandwasgone.AndIrealizedatthatmomentthatnotallangelshavelightandwings.Somehavegrocerycarts.【導(dǎo)語】本文以人物為線索展開，講述了幾個星期以來，作者注意到了一個推著一輛裝滿垃圾袋的購物車的老婦人，于是詢問老婦人的個人情況，在得知了老婦人遇到的困難后，作者想要給老婦人錢，但是開始被拒絕了，在我的堅(jiān)持下她收下了錢。作者認(rèn)為老婦人像天使一樣。【詳解】1.段落續(xù)寫：①由第一段首句內(nèi)容“隨著我們繼續(xù)交談，我越來越了解她的想法”可知，第一段可描寫作者和老婦人交談以及老婦人的感受。②由第二段首句內(nèi)容“‘不，不。我不要你的錢，’她回答說，揮了揮手，后退了一點(diǎn)?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫老婦人拒絕了作者的錢，作者如何說服她收下錢以及作者的感悟。2.續(xù)寫線索：交談——深入了解——拿錢幫助——被拒絕——說服老人收下——作者感悟3.詞匯激活行為類①撿起：collect/pickup②看見：see/spot/notice③確保：ensure/makesure情緒類①幸運(yùn)：blessed/lucky②值得：worthit/worthwhile【點(diǎn)睛】[高分句型1]“Iknowhowyoufeelwhenyouseealadyofmyagestillwalkontheroadtomakesomemoneybycollectingcans,”shesaid.(運(yùn)用了how引導(dǎo)賓語從句和when引導(dǎo)的時間狀語從句)[高分句型2]Iwatchedasshebeganwalkingdownthestreetagain,pushingthecartofcans,stoppingoccasionallytopickuponeortwo.(運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語)3.（2023·全國·模擬預(yù)測）閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。WhenIenteredmyfirstrodeo(牛仔競技比賽),Iwas12yearsold.Itwasmorelikeaplaydaythanarodeo,buttoa12yearoldgirllikeme,IfeltlikeIwasattheNationalFinalsRodeo!Astobarrelracing(繞桶賽),Ididn’tknowmuchaboutit,onlywhatmydadhadtoldme.ButIhadbeendeterminedtoentertheplayandwintheplayeversinceIwastoldthatmynotsomucholderpetitivecousinCourtneywouldbethere.ThiswasmynighttofinallyshowherthatIcouldrideahorsejustasgoodorbetter,anddoanythingelseshecoulddo.Shewasinforasurprise!Courtneyalwaysthoughtshewasbetterthanme.Shealwayssaidherhorsewasbetterthanmine,too.CourtneyhadaPalominohorsenamedBuck.Hewasfast,andbeautiful.MyhorsewasabigAppaloosanamedZipper.Hewasn’tbeautifulorflashylikeBuckbuthewaskindandwillingtopleasetheskinnylittlegirlthatfedhimsugarseverydayafteradayofriding.ThatwasthereasonIknewwecouldbeatCourtney,becausewehadsomethingshedidn’t—apartnership,onewebothrespected.CourtneyandIwereinthe1214agegroup.AsIwatchedthemeninthearena(競技場)setthethreebarrelsupintheirplaces,Ifeltnervousandalittlescaredforthefirsttimethatnight.ThoughIhadpreviouslypracticedalotwithZipper,andZipperracedfastandmadeturnsstably,IstillgotupsetwhenthinkingaboutracingagainstCourtney!Iclosedmyeyes,takingadeepbreath.Suddenly,Ifeltawarmfamiliarhandonmyshoulder.ItwasDad.Hesmiledatme,saying,“Areyouscaredornervous?Orboth?”“Both,butI’mmorescaredthatI’mgoingtomessup,”Ireplied,truthfully.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請按如下格式作答?！癥ouwon’t.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,”Dadsaid._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Gameover,ItookZippertorest,givinghimsugarsforajobwelldone._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【滿分范文】“Youwon’t.Justhavefaithinyourself,andZipper,”Dadsaid.That’swhenIrealizedIwasnotgoingintothatarenaalone,butwit