Module12Writing課件英語九年級(jí)上冊(cè)

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discussingwhatyoucandoaboutpollutionModule12SaveourworldLet'swatchavideo.WhatdoyouthinkofthevolunteersDoyouthinktheirjobismeaningfulDoyouwanttobesomeonelikethemLet'sdosometeststocheckifyoucanbea

volunteer.Test1Test2Test3Test4HowtobegreenDoyouknowthekindsofpollutionHowtodealwithproblemsAreyoucarefulTest1WhatkindsofpollutiondoyouknowWhatcausesthepollutionpollutionairpollutionwaterpollutionwastepollutionlightpollutionnoisepollutionTest1WhatkindsofpollutiondoyouknowWhatcausesthepollutionairpollutionwaterpollutionwastepollutionTheresomanycarsontheroads,theyusesomuch

andcausepollution.oilPollutionfromfactoriesspreadsovercitiesandvillages,itmakespeople

,andmayeven

them.Iftheriversare

,farmerscan'tusethewaterfortheircrops.illkillpollutedSomepeople

rubbishwithoutsorting（分類）it,it'sveryharmfultoourenvironment.throwawayTest2Doyourememberhowtobegreen(Unit2)Thethree“R”ReduceReuseRecycleReduceReuseRecyclemeans:means:means:uselessuseagainchangethingsintosomethingelseDonotordermorefoodthanyoucanfinish.Turnoffthelightwhenyoudon'tneedthem.Donotusepapercupsorpaperbags.It'sbettertousechinacupsandclothbags.Divideyourrubbishintoplastic,glass,paperandrubber.RevisesomeimportantsentencesinUnit2withthehelpofthepictures.Earthcansurvivewithoutus,butwecannotsurvivewithouther.地球不需要人類，但人類離不開地球。Toprotectourearthistoprotectourselves！保護(hù)地球就是保護(hù)我們自己！PossibleversionTrytowalkorrideabiketoschool.Weshouldplantmoretrees.It'sbettertoturnoffthetapswhenwedon'tneedwater.Donotthrowtherubbishintotheriverorthesea.Dividetherubbishbeforethrowingit.Takeyourownbagwhenshopping.Test4AreyoucarefulenoughOurenvironmentisveryimportantforourlives.Weneedfreshair,cleanwaterandsoon.Inthepast,thereweremanytreesaroundus,theairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean.Butnow,manypeoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbisheverywhere.Airpollutionandwaterpollutionbecomeveryserious.Thegovernmenthastakensomepoliciesforthepollution,buttheenvironmentaroundusisstillterrible.Soweshoulddosomethingtoprotectourenvironment.First,weshouldplantmanytreestokeeptheairfresh.Second,wecanrideabikeorwalktoschoolandwork.Third,weshouldn'tthrowthedirtythingsintotheriver.Fourth,weshouldn'tusetheplasticbags.Atlast,wecanaskmorepeopletojoinus.Ifeveryonestartstodosomething,theworldwillbesaved.Q1:WhatweretheairandthewaterlikeinthepastQ2:WhydoairpollutionandwaterpollutionbecomeseriousnowQ3:WhohasdonesomethingforthepollutionQ4:HowmanysuggestionsdoesthewritermentionQ5:What'sthewriter’spurposeofwritingthepassageTheairwasfreshandtheriverwasclean.Becausemanypeoplecutdowntreesandthrowrubbisheverywhere.Five.Toaskpeopletoprotecttheenvironment.Thegovernment.Congratulations!!Now,youhavequalification（資格）tobeavolunteerofenvironmentalprotection（環(huán)保志愿者）！Youdidit!!Ineedyourhelp!!Writing:(15minutes)當(dāng)今社會(huì)，人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)越來越強(qiáng)，但是污染環(huán)境的現(xiàn)象仍然不時(shí)發(fā)生，作為一名志愿者，請(qǐng)你就身邊發(fā)生的污染事件來呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。（詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)單列舉發(fā)生在你身邊的污染現(xiàn)象(至少2種）;2.保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施（至少3點(diǎn)）;3.呼吁大家共同努力，保護(hù)環(huán)境，保護(hù)地球。時(shí)態(tài)：

一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)人稱：

第一人稱Tobeginwith,generallyspeaking,What’smore,what’sworse,infact,afterall,anyway,aboveall,atthesametime,ontheonehand,…ontheotherhand,…h(huán)owever,inaddition(to),aswellnotonly...butalso...過渡語：核心句型：可遷移句式/可直接或間接使用句式：1.Weareintherightplacetotalkaboutthat.2.However,canmoneyhelpsolvealltheseproblems3.Pollutionisourgreatenemy,andwehavetofightit.4.Pollutionisadangertoourhealth.5.It’snousetalkingaboutthingswecan’tdo.We'vegottothinkthingswecando.6.Everyclasscollectswastewhichcanberecycledorusedagain.7.Thoughpollutionisheavynow,Idon’tthinkit’shopeless.8.Ifeveryonestartstodosomethingnow,theworldwillbesaved.

9.It’sbettertousechinacupsandclothbagsbecausetheycanbeusedmanytimes.10.Divideyourrubbishintoplastic,glass,paperandrubber.11.Developarecyclingpolicyforthewholecommunity.12.Let’stryourbestto...13.Let’stakeactionsnow!14.Actionsaremoreimportantthanwords.當(dāng)今社會(huì)，人們的環(huán)保意識(shí)越來越強(qiáng)，但是污染環(huán)境的現(xiàn)象仍然不時(shí)發(fā)生，作為一名志愿者，請(qǐng)你就身邊發(fā)生的污染事件來呼吁大家保護(hù)環(huán)境。（詞數(shù)80左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)）內(nèi)容包括：1.簡(jiǎn)單列舉發(fā)生在你身邊的污染現(xiàn)象。(至少2種）2.保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施（至少3點(diǎn)）3.呼吁大家共同努力，保護(hù)環(huán)境，保護(hù)地球。Content.1First,second,then,what'smore,atlast....Donot.......Weshould......Tryto......It'sbetterto......Ifeveryone.......,ourearthwill........Let’s……寫作方法指導(dǎo)（mind-map)BeginingBodyEndingNowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundus.污染的現(xiàn)象Content.2措施............呼吁Readyourpassagealoud,thencheckitbyyourself.1.要點(diǎn)齊了嗎？2.句子結(jié)構(gòu)對(duì)了嗎？3.句子連貫嗎？4.單詞都寫對(duì)了嗎？5.有沒錯(cuò)誤的語法？6.書寫整潔嗎？Checkbyyourself

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內(nèi)容（7分）語言:人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、連貫（8分）合計(jì)

要點(diǎn)1（2分）要點(diǎn)2（3分）要點(diǎn)3（2分）個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤（8分）少數(shù)錯(cuò)誤（6-7分）一些錯(cuò)誤（4-5分）較多錯(cuò)誤（1-3分）15分自評(píng)

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人稱：第一人稱時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundus.作文展評(píng)，小組討論評(píng)分，作文滿分15分Post-writing(8minutes)Ending結(jié)尾Body正文Beginning開頭部分簡(jiǎn)單列舉發(fā)生在你身邊的污染現(xiàn)象（至少2種）12保護(hù)環(huán)境的措施（至少3點(diǎn)）.呼吁大家共同努力，保護(hù)環(huán)境，保護(hù)地球內(nèi)容（7分）語言:人稱、時(shí)態(tài)、連貫（8分）合計(jì)

要點(diǎn)1（2分）要點(diǎn)2（3分）要點(diǎn)3（2分）個(gè)別錯(cuò)誤（8分）少數(shù)錯(cuò)誤（6-7分）一些錯(cuò)誤（4-5分）較多錯(cuò)誤（1-3分）15分自評(píng)

Nowadays,moreandmorepeoplehaverealisedtheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment,butthepollutionstillhappensaroundusfromtimetotime.

Forexample,therearesomanycarsontheroadsandtheyuse

somuchoilthatcauseairpollution.Andsomepeoplethrowawayrubbisheverywhere,ontheroad,inthepark,andeveninthesea!

Inordertoprotecttheenvironmentfromgettingevenworse,wemustdosomethingtofightagainstthepollution.Firstofall,weshouldwalkorrideabiketoschoolandworkaspossibleaswecan,itcannotonlyavoidpollutingtheairbutalsokeepushealthy.Secondly,it’sbettertousechinacupsandclothbag