高中英語寫作指導課課件

WritingClass——ViviWarmingup考考反響力：隨著音樂拍手跺腳，老師說turnleft,同學就turnright；老師說turnright,同學就turnleft；老師說turnround,同學就juststand；老師說raiseyourighthand,同學就raiselefthand;老師說raiseyourlefthand,同學就raiserighthand;。老師閱卷看什么？一看字體〔字體工整〕二看語言〔語言高級〕三看內容〔要點齊全〕四看結構〔三段式結構〕一看字體二看語言〔語言高級〕高級詞匯與句式修辭手法有效的連詞名人名句、諺語的運用1.高級詞匯短語根本原那么詞組優(yōu)先原那么防止重復原那么后高長原那么——后學到、較高級、較長詞匯1.詞組優(yōu)先原那么【原文】Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.[修正]Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2.防止重復原那么[原文]Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【修正】Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision3.后高長原那么

——后學到、較高級、較長詞匯

原詞：HardVeryPayattentiontoHappyMoreandmore替換詞：DiligentlyRather,extremelyAttachimportancetoDelightedenjoyableTheincreasingnumberof電腦在我們的生活中是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.Computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.為了學習音樂，她去了美國ShewenttoAmericainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAmericaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.我突然想到了個好主意SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.2.句式多樣，文章增“靚”各種從句非謂語動詞倒裝句強調句被動句With的復合結構…….他昨天下午來的。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.(倒裝句〕Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.〔強調句〕Game:連詞滾雪球每人拿一張寫有連詞的紙條，向后一個同學傳達自己的連詞，后一個同學給后面的同學傳達時需要先講前面同學的連詞再講自己的連詞。最后一個同學，把自己一組所有的連詞講出來，對一個加小組加一分，漏了不扣分。第一組：Atfirst(首先〕;firstly〔首先〕;beside(此外〕;secondly(第二〕；Afterall(畢竟〕；fortunately(幸運地〕；Asaresult(結果〕；finally〔最后);第二組：Firstofall(首先〕；now〔現在〕Infact(事實上〕；forexample〔例如〕Luckily〔幸運地〕；inspiteof〔盡管〕Atlast(最后〕；inaword(總之〕第三組：Lately(最近〕；tostartwith(首先〕Inorderto(為了〕；then(然后〕Anyway〔無論如何〕；however(然而〕Allinall(總之);finally〔最后〕第四組：Asaresult(結果〕therefore〔最后〕Infact(事實上〕；unfortunately(不幸福地〕Beside(除此〕；forexample(例如〕Firstly(首先〕；recently(最近〕3.連詞一〕表示“起”的詞/詞組：用于開篇引出擴展句。atfirst最初；firstly第一；inthebeginning起初firstofall首先；onetheonehand…ontheotherhand一方面….另一方面………〔二〕有關“承”的常用詞語：用來承接上文。Besides/what’s

more

而且；此外

in

other

words

換句話說in

fact

事實上

……..〔三〕有關“轉”的常用詞語：用來表示不同或相反的意見luckily

幸運地however

然而；無論如何though/although

盡管……..

〔四〕有關“合”的常用詞語：用于小結上文或結束本段落的內容。eventually

最后

in

conclusion

總之，最后in

a

word

總之……….

名人名言、諺語Thereisanoldsayingthat…….(常言道，〕Game:將打亂的單詞組成一句完整的名言或諺語。搶答，哪個小組對了加一分，錯了不扣分。1.mothersuccessofisthefailure

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。willaistheretherewhere,wayais

Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。3.RomeroadstoleadallAll

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。4.louderspeakthanwordsactionAction

speak

louder

than

words

事實勝于雄辯impossibletoamindiswillingnothingNothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無難事，只怕有心人6.ishalfwelldonebegunhalfWell

begun

is

half

done

好的開端是成功的一半7.thandonesaideasierEasier

said

than

done

說起來容易做起來難

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。All

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。Action

speak

louder

than

words

事實勝于雄辯Nothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無難事，只怕有心人Well

begun

is