高中英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作指導(dǎo)課課件

WritingClass——ViviWarmingup考考反響力：隨著音樂(lè)拍手跺腳，老師說(shuō)turnleft,同學(xué)就turnright；老師說(shuō)turnright,同學(xué)就turnleft；老師說(shuō)turnround,同學(xué)就juststand；老師說(shuō)raiseyourighthand,同學(xué)就raiselefthand;老師說(shuō)raiseyourlefthand,同學(xué)就raiserighthand;。老師閱卷看什么？一看字體〔字體工整〕二看語(yǔ)言〔語(yǔ)言高級(jí)〕三看內(nèi)容〔要點(diǎn)齊全〕四看結(jié)構(gòu)〔三段式結(jié)構(gòu)〕一看字體二看語(yǔ)言〔語(yǔ)言高級(jí)〕高級(jí)詞匯與句式修辭手法有效的連詞名人名句、諺語(yǔ)的運(yùn)用1.高級(jí)詞匯短語(yǔ)根本原那么詞組優(yōu)先原那么防止重復(fù)原那么后高長(zhǎng)原那么——后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯1.詞組優(yōu)先原那么【原文】Anewrailwayisbeingbuiltinmyhometown.[修正]Anewrailwayisunderconstructioninmyhometown.2.防止重復(fù)原那么[原文]Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherlikeswatchingtelevision.【修正】Ilikereadingwhilemybrotherenjoyswatchingtelevision3.后高長(zhǎng)原那么

——后學(xué)到、較高級(jí)、較長(zhǎng)詞匯

原詞：HardVeryPayattentiontoHappyMoreandmore替換詞：DiligentlyRather,extremelyAttachimportancetoDelightedenjoyableTheincreasingnumberof電腦在我們的生活中是十分重要的。1.Computersareveryimportantinourlife.2.Computersplayaveryimportantroleinourlife.3.Computersareofgreatimportanceinourlife.為了學(xué)習(xí)音樂(lè)，她去了美國(guó)ShewenttoAmericainordertostudymusic.ShewenttoAmericaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.我突然想到了個(gè)好主意SuddenlyIthoughtoutagoodidea.SuddenlyIcameupwithagoodidea.Agoodideasuddenlystruckme.2.句式多樣，文章增“靚”各種從句非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞倒裝句強(qiáng)調(diào)句被動(dòng)句With的復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)…….他昨天下午來(lái)的。Hecamehereyesterdayafternoon.Hedidn’tcomehereuntilyesterdayafternoon.Notuntilyesterdayafternoondidhecomehere.(倒裝句〕Itwasyesterdayafternoonthathecamehere.〔強(qiáng)調(diào)句〕Game:連詞滾雪球每人拿一張寫(xiě)有連詞的紙條，向后一個(gè)同學(xué)傳達(dá)自己的連詞，后一個(gè)同學(xué)給后面的同學(xué)傳達(dá)時(shí)需要先講前面同學(xué)的連詞再講自己的連詞。最后一個(gè)同學(xué)，把自己一組所有的連詞講出來(lái)，對(duì)一個(gè)加小組加一分，漏了不扣分。第一組：Atfirst(首先〕;firstly〔首先〕;beside(此外〕;secondly(第二〕；Afterall(畢竟〕；fortunately(幸運(yùn)地〕；Asaresult(結(jié)果〕；finally〔最后);第二組：Firstofall(首先〕；now〔現(xiàn)在〕Infact(事實(shí)上〕；forexample〔例如〕Luckily〔幸運(yùn)地〕；inspiteof〔盡管〕Atlast(最后〕；inaword(總之〕第三組：Lately(最近〕；tostartwith(首先〕Inorderto(為了〕；then(然后〕Anyway〔無(wú)論如何〕；however(然而〕Allinall(總之);finally〔最后〕第四組：Asaresult(結(jié)果〕therefore〔最后〕Infact(事實(shí)上〕；unfortunately(不幸福地〕Beside(除此〕；forexample(例如〕Firstly(首先〕；recently(最近〕3.連詞一〕表示“起”的詞/詞組：用于開(kāi)篇引出擴(kuò)展句。atfirst最初；firstly第一；inthebeginning起初firstofall首先；onetheonehand…ontheotherhand一方面….另一方面………〔二〕有關(guān)“承”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)承接上文。Besides/what’s

more

而且；此外

in

other

words

換句話(huà)說(shuō)in

fact

事實(shí)上

……..〔三〕有關(guān)“轉(zhuǎn)”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用來(lái)表示不同或相反的意見(jiàn)luckily

幸運(yùn)地however

然而；無(wú)論如何though/although

盡管……..

〔四〕有關(guān)“合”的常用詞語(yǔ)：用于小結(jié)上文或結(jié)束本段落的內(nèi)容。eventually

最后

in

conclusion

總之，最后in

a

word

總之……….

名人名言、諺語(yǔ)Thereisanoldsayingthat…….(常言道，〕Game:將打亂的單詞組成一句完整的名言或諺語(yǔ)。搶答，哪個(gè)小組對(duì)了加一分，錯(cuò)了不扣分。1.mothersuccessofisthefailure

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。willaistheretherewhere,wayais

Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。3.RomeroadstoleadallAll

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。4.louderspeakthanwordsactionAction

speak

louder

than

words

事實(shí)勝于雄辯impossibletoamindiswillingnothingNothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人6.ishalfwelldonebegunhalfWell

begun

is

half

done

好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半7.thandonesaideasierEasier

said

than

done

說(shuō)起來(lái)容易做起來(lái)難

Failure

is

the

mother

of

success.

失敗是成功之母。Where

there

is

a

will,

there

is

a

way

.有志者,事竟成。All

roads

lead

to

Rome.

條條大路通羅馬。Action

speak

louder

than

words

事實(shí)勝于雄辯Nothing

is

impossible

to

a

willing

mind

世上無(wú)難事，只怕有心人Well

begun

is