讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)類(lèi)+山洞探險(xiǎn)遇險(xiǎn)情+講義 高三英語(yǔ)一輪復(fù)習(xí)

廣東省六校聯(lián)考讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)原題

"Wow,

these

trees

are

so

tall!"

William

shouted

excitedly,whilewalking

with

hisclassmatesinaforestnearhisschool.Theywereonafieldtriptotheforestaspartofasciencelesson.

Overthere,theymettheforester(護(hù)林人),Victor.WhenWilliamlearnedVictorlivedinasimplewoodenhousethereforyears,helaughedathimwithhisfriends.

Then,theypassedbyanentrancetoacave.Williamwantedtoexploreinsidethecave,buthisteacherdidn'tallowit."I'llcomebackhere,"hethought.Onthewaybacktoschool,herememberedtheexactlocationofthecave.

Thenext

day,William

askedhis

four

friendstothe

cavetogether.Theytoldtheirparentstheywouldgotothelibraryandreturnhomeintheevening.Noneoftheteenagerstoldtheirparentsabouttheirplantovisitthecave.

Whentheteenagersreachedthecave,theylefttheirschoolbagsoutsidetoreducetheburden.Onebyone,theyenteredthecave.Justwhentheytookafewstepsinside,somerocksfromthecavewallfellandblockedtheentrance.

"Howarewegoingtogetoutnow?"oneoftheteenagersSarahshouted.Williamhadanideaandsaid,"Maybewecantrydiggingthroughthefallenrockswithourhandstoreachtheentrance.”Butrealizinggettingoutofthecaveonlybytheirhandswasimpossible,theyhadgreatfear.Thesunwasabouttogodown.Theteenagersstartedcallingforhelp,butnobodycouldhearthem.Theteenagerswerelosinghope.

Victorhappenedtopassbytheentrancetothecave,andfiveschoolbagscaughthisattention.Healsoheardsomesoundscomingfrominsidethecave."Who'sinthere?"

Victorshouted.

"I'mWilliam!We

camehereyesterdaywith

ourteacher!"Williamrepliedinstantly."Helpus,please!Wearestuck!Sarahcan'tbreatheherebecauseoffear."

"Okay,calmdown,children!"Victorsaid."I'llhelpyougetout!"注意：1.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para.1

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.

Para.2

Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.【前文分析】

本文是篇記敘文，主題是人與自然。一次科學(xué)課的野外考察，讓W(xué)illiam萌生了山洞探險(xiǎn)的念頭。第二天，他和他的四個(gè)朋友在沒(méi)有告知父母實(shí)情的情況下去了他記住的那個(gè)山洞。出人意料的是他們剛一進(jìn)去就被困在里面，情急之中，碰巧被他們?cè)?jīng)嘲笑過(guò)的救生員發(fā)現(xiàn)，撥打了救援中心的電話。William和他的朋友既經(jīng)歷了山洞探險(xiǎn)也經(jīng)歷了一次生活的洗禮。文章是一篇好故事，把歷險(xiǎn)和個(gè)人成長(zhǎng)結(jié)合起來(lái)，它告訴我們說(shuō)謊、不尊重人才是更大的冒險(xiǎn)。續(xù)寫(xiě)文章體現(xiàn)了友善、誠(chéng)信和尊重的道德觀和價(jià)值觀，適合高中生寫(xiě)作。

【續(xù)寫(xiě)框架】Paragraph1：[開(kāi)端]維克多撥打救援電話并返回家。[發(fā)展]設(shè)法返回將食物和水送給孩子們--孩子們不再害怕，靜靜等待救援--救援隊(duì)成功將洞口的石頭搬離。Paragraph2:[高潮]很快，孩子們走出洞穴，醫(yī)務(wù)人員進(jìn)行了仔細(xì)檢查，維克多松了一口氣。[高潮]威廉后悔道歉并感謝。[結(jié)局]維克多靜靜地離開(kāi)。[感悟]

【優(yōu)美句子展示】1.Thisincidentis

profound,

throughwhich

teenagersweregivenaperspectivethattheyshouldn'ttakesuchanadventureagain.

2.Themedicalstaff

gavetheteenagersathoroughcheck,onlytofindthattheywere

safeandsound

withoutanywounds.Atthesametime,theylearntthattheycan'tdoanydangerousthings

withoutparents’permission.

3.Therewasnodoubtthatthisunforgettableexperiencewaslikeaneverlastingflower,blooming

intheriverofhismemories.4.Theteenagersnoddedand

guaranteed

thattheywouldn'tdoitagain.

5.They

promised

thatwe,asateenager,shouldn'tbetoonaughtyandstubborn.

6.Fiveteenagersrealizedthatthey

shouldn'tjumptotheactionwithoutcarefulconsideration.

7.

Sensingtheboy'sintegrityandbravery,

hegavehimahugasareply.Afterall,itwastheboy'sgrowthandhealththatplaythebestpart.

8.Becauseofthisexperience,Williamexperiencedamemoriallessonthat

safetyisthemostimportantone

andweshouldnotletourbelovedoneworryus.

9.Williamandtheirfriends

woreaburningface,guaranteeingthattheywon'tgointoaplacewhereitwasfulloftheunknownthing10.Hedugthroughtherocks

withhisbarehandwholeheartedly.11.Atthismoment,theteenagers

castaneyeon

Victorwhohadhelpedthemout

guiltily.

華英12.

Howwarm-heartingthescenewas!13.Hedidn't

giveasecondthoughtto

springintoaction.

14.Alongtheprocess,thoughhe

metalotofbarriersandobstacles,hestill

kepthismindonthetarget,kepthisfeetonthegroundandkeptgoingtowardsit.

15.Theinstanthearrivedathome,he

fetchedthetoolstoassisttheteenagers.

16.Although

therewasalongdistancebetween

thecaveandVictor'shome,hestillsparednoeffortstotakeactions.

17Thisarduoustask

seemedimpossibletobefinished

byhim,butvictordidn'tgiveup.

18.

Afterendlessrepetitions,

theenterentrancetothecavewasopened.

19.

Intimidatedthoughtheyfelt,theytriedtheirbesttosavethemselves.

【范文展示】

Samplewriting1

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Anxiousandconcerned，Victordescribedthespecificlocationindetail,urgingthattheycometorescueinstantly.Meanwhile,hefetchedspadesandothertoolsinhaste，fullyawarethattimewascriticaltorescuingthoseteenagerstrappedinthecave.Occasionallyhemadeinteractionswiththestudentsinside,hopingtorelievetheiranxiety.WithVictoraccompanyinghimoutside,Williamfeltassured,encouraginghisfriendstostayawake.lnnotimedidprofessionalstafffromthefirst-aidcentrecome.Familiarwiththecomplexgeographicalenvironment,Victorassistedtheworkingstaffefficiently,whowiththeirjointefforts,gottherockscollapsedwithouthurtingasingleman.

Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.Nosoonerhadtheysteppedoutsidethecavethanalltherescuecrewpresentheavedasighofrelief.Staringattherescuersoutside,theteenagerscouldn'thelpsheddingtearsofgratitude.Neverhavetheyfeltsoterrifiedbefore.Ashamedandguilty,WilliamstrodetowardsVictordirectlyandmadeasincereapologytothefaithfulforesterforhispreviousrudemanners.Eachindividualknewifithadn'tbeenforVictor'ssharpreactionandeffectivemeasures,therescueworkwouldnothaveprogressedsosmoothly.ExhaustedthoughVictorwas,hisheartswelledwithasenseofpride.Bathedinthenaturalscenery,Williamengraveditinhismindthatanyoccupationshouldn'tbeunderestimatedforitsuniquevalue.

Samplewriting2

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Severalminuteslater,hereturnedwithahoe,sweatdroppingdownhisface.NosoonerhadVictorgotbacktotheentranceofthecavethanhebegantoswingthehoe,digginghardintotheground,hopingtoloosentherocksandlowertheheight“Stepawayfromtherocks!”shoutedVictor,afraidthefallingrocksmighthurttheyoung.HearingVictor'svoiceagainandknowingVictorwastryingtoremovetherocks,Williamandhisclassmatesfeltrelieved,andtheytriedtocomfortSarah.Finally,hardworkpaidoff.TherocksinthebottomrolledintothepitVictorhaddugallowinglighttoshinethroughthegapintothecave,whichsparkedhopeintheheartsoftheteenagers.

Soon,theteenagerswalkedoutsidethecaveandtookadeepbreathinthefreshair.Justthenthefirst-aidpersonnelarrivedatthespotandcheckediftheywerefine.Luckily,Sarahfeltmuchbetteraftergettingoutofthecave.WilliamandhisclassmatesshowedsinceregratitudetotheforesterforhistimelyhelpRegretfulforwhathehaddonewhenmeetingtheforesterforthefirsttime,WilliammadeabowtoVictorandapologizedforhisrudeness.Thentheteenagerspromisedtheywouldneverlietotheirparentsandrisktheirlivestodosomethingdangerouswithoutpermissionanymore.Afterall,safetyismoreimportantthananythingelse.

Samplewriting3

Victorimmediatelycalledthefirst-aidcenterandrushedhome.Arrivingathiswoodenhouse,Victorjumpedontoasmalldiggerandstartedit,headingto