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全家從悲傷中走出來(lái)
Myfamilyisstillrecoveringfromtherainyseasonofthepastcoupleofyears.Itbeganwiththeuntimelydeathofoneofmyhusband’sbestfriends,thenthelossoftwobelovedpetsandhealthconcernswithagingparents.Butthenthebottomdroppedout:Myteenagestepson(繼子)becameseriouslyill.
Asanyonewhohascaredforasickchildorteenagerknows,thestressdoesn’tgoaway.MyhusbandandIwereverytired,anditwaslikeweforgothowto
communicate—wecouldn’thaveasimpleconversationwithoutfightingandtears.Ouronce-happyhomehadbecometenseandsmileless.(伏筆)
Andthenithappened…
Inarareeventofcommunication,mystepsonandIwerediscussinggifts.Irememberedthathisdadgavemeakazoo(短笛)asabirthdaygift.Myinitialreactiontothisgiftwascuriosity,whichquicklyturnedtofrustration(沮喪)andshamewhenI,aprofessionalsaxophone(薩克斯)player,couldn’tgetittomakeasound.
(伏筆)ThekazooeventuallygotpackedawayinacaseandIhadn’tthoughtofitforyearsuntilthisparticularevening.
Mystepsonwasinterested.Hewantedtoseeit.SoIlookedaroundinthemusicroomandfounditburiedinabox.
“Youcouldn’tgetasound?”(伏筆)heasked.“What’ssohardaboutit?”
“Idon’tknow.Itjustneverworked,”Isaid.續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;
Paragraph1:Myhusbandgrabbed(抓起)thekazoo._______________________________________________________
Paragraph2:Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.________________________________故事情節(jié)01Para1:theuntimelydeathofoneofmyhusband’sbestfriendsthelossoftwobelovedpetsMyteenagestepson(繼子)becameseriouslyillPara2:weforgothowtocommunicateonce-happyhomehadbecometenseandsmilelessPara3-4:Inarareeventofcommunicationdiscussagift——akazoocouldn’tgetittomakeasoundPara5-7:lookedaroundinthemusicroomandfounditburiedinabox.續(xù)寫(xiě):Paragraph1:Myhusbandgrabbed(抓起)thekazoo.Paragraph2:Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.續(xù)寫(xiě)思路02Paragraph1:丈夫拿起笛子→吹笛子→竟然吹響了,發(fā)出奇怪的聲音→我們都笑了→房間里充滿笑聲Paragraph2:這是我們度過(guò)的最好的十分鐘→我們忘記了煩惱,一起度過(guò)了這段歡樂(lè)的時(shí)光→這使我們意識(shí)到即使在困難時(shí)期,仍然能找到快樂(lè)→那天晚上,我們坐在一起講笑話,吹笛子。房間里再一次充滿笑聲吹笛子Hetookadeepbreath,putittohislips,andstartedtoblow."Letmetry,"hesaidwithasmile.Hetookadeepbreathandblew.有沒(méi)有吹響Tomyamazement,thekazoomadeasound!Itproducedsomestrangeandfunnysounds.Wecouldn'thelpbutlaugh,andthetensionintheroominstantlydisappeared.Thatsmallmomentofjoybroughtusclosertogether.吹響后的反應(yīng)Wecouldn'thelplaugh.Thetensionintheroomdisappearedandwasreplacedbyalightandjoyfulatmosphere.Thelaughterandjoyfilledtheroom,replacingthetensionandsadness.最好的十分鐘帶給我們什么Foramoment,weforgotaboutourtroublesandenjoyedthesimplepleasureofbeingtogether.Forthatbriefmoment,weforgotaboutallthetroublesandenjoyedthelight-heartedmomenttogether.Forthatbriefmoment,weforgotaboutourtroublesandsimplyenjoyedeachother'scompany.接下來(lái)做了什么Westartedsharingfunnystories,playingsimplegames,andhavingmorequalitytimetogether.Thatevening,wesattogetherandplayedwiththekazoo,sharingstoriesandlaughter.Ourhomewasonceagainfilledwiththesoundsofjoyandlove.Weplayedthekazooandsangsillysongs,andforabriefmoment,ourhomewasfilledwithhappinessandlaughteragain.主題升華感悟、笛子作為提醒物Werealizedthateveninthemidstofchallengesandhardships,wecouldstillfindhappinessandlaughter.Itremindedmethateveninthetoughesttimes,therearestillmomentsofjoyandlaughter.Itwasareminderthateveninthedarkestoftimes,thereisalwaysaglimmerofhopeandjoy.續(xù)寫(xiě)范文03
Paragraph1:Myhusbandgrabbed(抓起)thekazoo.
Hetookadeepbreath,putittohislips,andstartedtoblow.Tomyamazement,thekazoomadeastrangeandfunnysound!Wecouldn'thelplaugh.Thelaughterandjoyfilledtheroom,replacingthetensionandsadness.
Paragraph2:Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.Forthatbriefmoment,weforgotaboutourtroublesandsimplyenjoyedeachother'scompany.Werealizedthateveninthemidstofchallengesandhardships,wecouldstillfindhappinessandlaughter.Thatevening,wesattogetherandplayedwiththekazoo,sharingstoriesandlaughter.Ourhomewasonceagainfilledwiththesoundsofjoyandlove.版本1
Myhusbandgrabbed(抓起)thekazoo.Heputittohismouthandstartedtoplay.Tooursurprise,itproducedaclearandloudsound.Wealllaughed,includingmystepson,whowassmilingforthefirsttimeinalongtime.Thetensionintheroomdisappeared,replacedbyalightandjoyfulatmosphere.
Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.Weforgotaboutourtroublesandenjoyedthemoment.Thekazoobecameasymbolofhopeandremindedustofindjoyinthesimplethings.Fromthenon,wemadeanefforttocommunicatemoreandsupporteachother.Mystepson'shealthalsoimprovedgradually.Althoughlifewouldstillhaveitschallenges,weknewwecouldgetthroughthemtogether,withalittlebitofmusicandlaughter.版本2
Myhusbandgrabbedthekazoo."Letmetry,"hesaidwithasmile.Hetookadeepbreathandblew.Thekazoomadeasound,asoundthatfilledourhomewithjoyandhope.MystepsonandIlookedateachother,thenatmyhusband,andweallburstoutlaughing.Itwasasifaweighthadbeenliftedfromourhearts.
Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.Itremindedusofthesimplepleasuresinlifeandtheimportanceoffamily.Werealizedthateveninthemidstofchallengesandhardships,wecouldstillfindhappinessandlaughter.Thatevening,wesattogetherandplayedwiththekazoo,sharingstoriesandlaughter.Ourhomewasonceagainfilledwiththesoundsofjoyandlove.版本3
Myhusbandgrabbedthekazoo.Helookedatitforamoment,thenheplaceditbetweenhislipsandbegantoblow.Tomyamazement,thekazoomadeasound!Itwasasimpletune,butitfilledtheroomwithmusic.MystepsonandIlookedateachother,thenatmyhusband,andweallbegantolaugh.Thesoundofthatkazoobrokethesilenceinourhomeandbroughtbackthejoywehadlost.
Itwasthebest10minutesinthepastcoupleofyears.Asmyhusbandplayed,Irealizedthatthekazoohadbeenmorethanjustagift.Itwasasymbolofourfamily’sabilitytoovercomechallengesandfindhappinessagain.Themusicfilleduswithhopeandremindedusthateveninthemidstofdifficulty,therewasstillbeautyandjoytobefound.Thatevening,wesattogetherandlaughedandplayedwiththekazoountilthemusicfilledourhomeonceagain.版本4
Myhusbandgrabbedthekazoo.Hesmiledatmeandsaid,"Letmeshowyouhowit'sdone."Withaconfidentair,hetookadeepbreathandblewintothekazoo.Immediately,abright,happysoundfilledtheroo
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