讀后續(xù)寫+和母親一起參加生日會(huì)+講義 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文，Iwantedtogotoaparty.Especiallyitwasabeachparty.Ithadbeenalmosttheonlythingmyfriendshadbeentalkingaboutforthelastcoupleofweeks.ButMymomhadsaidno.ThemoredesperatelyIpleadedhercase,themoreforcefullymymothersaidno.“Idon'tcarewho'sgoing,"saidcoldlymymother,"youarenotgoing."Iwasheartbroken.Thiswasmybestfriend'sparty.我想去參加一個(gè)聚會(huì)。尤其是海灘派對。在過去的幾周里，這幾乎是我朋友們談?wù)摰奈ㄒ灰患?。但我媽媽說不。我越是拼命地為她辯護(hù)，我媽媽就越是堅(jiān)決地說不?！拔也辉诤跽l去，”我媽媽冷冷地說，“你不去?！蔽液軅摹＿@是我最好朋友的聚會(huì)。Sundaydinnercamearoundandmygrandmotherjoinedthefamilyforthemeal.Grannoticedmydepressionbutdidn'tsayaword.ItwasmyturntowashupandGransaid,“Letmehelpyou."“What'sup?”askedGranasIdumpedthedishesintothefoamingwater.Granwipedaplatewithateatowel.“Momwon'tletmegotomybestfriend'sparty."Isaidsadly.“Hasmomexplainedwhyshedoesn'twantyoutogo?"askedGran.“No."Ireplied.“Thenforamoment,putyourselfinherposition.”saidGran.“Ifyouweremom,whatwouldyourobjectionsbe?”星期天的晚餐來了，我的祖母和家人一起吃飯。奶奶注意到了我的沮喪，但一句話也沒說。輪到我洗碗了，奶奶說：“我來幫你?！薄霸趺戳?？”我把盤子倒進(jìn)泡沫水中時(shí)，奶奶問道。奶奶用茶巾擦了擦盤子?！皨寢尣蛔屛胰⒓游易詈门笥训木蹠?huì)?！蔽冶瘋卣f。“媽媽解釋過她不想你去的原因了嗎？”奶奶問道?！皼]有?！蔽一卮?。“那你就設(shè)身處地想一想吧?！蹦棠陶f?！叭绻闶菋寢?，你會(huì)有什么反對意見？”Ihadn'tstoppedtothinkaboutmymom'sside.“Well,"Ianswered,"it'sabeachparty.Maybeshedoesn'ttrustusorthinkswe'llgetintotrouble.”我沒有停下來思考我媽媽的一面?！昂冒?，”我回答，“這是一個(gè)海灘派對。也許她不信任我們，或者認(rèn)為我們會(huì)遇到麻煩?！薄癆retheregoingtobeanyadultsthere?”askedGran.“No,"Isaid,“whowantstheirparentshangingaroundwhenyou'retryingtohavefun?”“Mightitjustbe,"saidGran,“yourmotherdoesn'twantanythingunfortunatetohappentoyou.""Nothingwillhappen."Iobjected.“Maybeyou'reright,"saidGran,"butmaybemom'sworriedincaseitcould."“那里會(huì)有成年人嗎？”奶奶問道?！安唬蔽艺f，“誰想讓他們的父母在你玩得開心的時(shí)候陪在你身邊？”“也許只是，”奶奶說，“你媽媽不希望你發(fā)生任何不幸的事情。”“什么都不會(huì)發(fā)生?！蔽曳磳??！耙苍S你是對的，”奶奶說道，“但也許媽媽很擔(dān)心，以防發(fā)生這種事?！盙ranlookedatmegently,seemingtoexpectmyagreement.Foraminuteorso,Ikeptsilent,ponderingforawhileaboutmyeagernessfortheparty.“Maybe,youareright,however,istherenohope?"Iinquired.“Notnecessarily."answeredGran,lostinthought.奶奶溫柔地看著我，似乎期待著我的同意。有一分鐘左右的時(shí)間，我保持沉默，思考了一會(huì)兒我對派對的渴望。“也許，你是對的，但是，沒有希望嗎？”我問道?！安灰欢??！蹦棠坛了贾卮稹Ｗ⒁?1，續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2，請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.

Paragraph1:“Thenmaybethinkofacompromise."suggestedGran.Paragraph2:Thelong-awaitedbeachpartyfinallycame.文本分析：故事大意---我想去參加一個(gè)最好朋友舉辦的海灘派對，可媽媽一直不同意。晚餐時(shí)，奶奶注意到了我的沮喪，提出幫我洗盤子并讓我站在媽媽的角度思考一下。經(jīng)過一番交流，我問奶奶還有希望去嗎，奶奶說還是有可能的。續(xù)寫情節(jié)發(fā)展：-媽媽提出讓她跟我一起去，她會(huì)答應(yīng)的。我不得不妥協(xié)。奶奶微笑讓媽媽保證不會(huì)打擾我們。媽媽終于向我屈服了。我的情緒逐漸好轉(zhuǎn)，給了奶奶一個(gè)大大的擁抱。令人期待這場精彩的聚會(huì)終于來了。-我和朋友們一起去玩。我們高興又興奮，唱歌、跳舞、聊天。媽媽拿著一本書，靠在不遠(yuǎn)處的樹上。聚會(huì)結(jié)束后，天就黑了。我和朋友們道別，然后轉(zhuǎn)向媽媽。幸福的淚水模糊了我的雙眼，我緊緊地拉著她的手，回家去了。官方范文，"Thenmaybethinkofacompromise."suggestedGran.

ButIsobbeduncontrollablyandcouldn'tsayaword."Well,ifyoucouldletmegowithyou,I'dsayyes."Mymomadded.Iwasn'tfondofmymomhangingaroundlikeabodyguard,buttogettothepartyIhadtoacompromise.“Isupposeyourmotherwon'tdisturbyourparty,willshe?”Granlookedatmomwithakindsmile.“Well,IpromiseIwon't.”Momfinallygaveintome.Mymoodgraduallyimproved.Irantomygrandmotherandgaveherabighug.Iwaslookingforwardtothewonderfulpartydesperately.Thelong-awaitedbeachpartyfinallycame.

Imadeitatthebeachwithmymom.Atatreenearthedestination,momstoppedsuddenly,takingoutaredmattositonandsignalingtometojoinmyfriends.Irushedforthecrowd.Joyfulandexcited,wesang,dancedandchatted.Occasionally,theredmatintheneardistancecaughtmyeye.Momheldabook,leaningagainstthetree.Themomentmyeyefellonher,awaveofappreciationsurgedthroughme.Itbecamedarkwhenthepartywasover.Isaidgoodbyetomyfriendsandturnedtomom.Underthetreesatmomwaitingpatiently.Tearsofhappinessblurringmyeyes,Itookherhandtightly,headinghome.參考范文一，

“Thenmaybethinkofacompromise."suggestedGran.

Iloweredmyheadandbegantothinkhowtofixit.Afteralongthought,Imadeupmymindandwenttofindmom.“Mum,Iwantto…”beforeIcouldfinishit,momsnapped,“no,youcan’tgo!”Isoftenedmyvoiceandputonasmilingface,“thisismybestfriend’sbirthdaypartyandIreallywanttogo.Canyoucomewithme?Iknowyou’reworriedaboutme.”Momhesitatedandthennodded.Ijumpedwithjoyandhuggedmom.

Thelong-awaitedbeachpartyfinallycame.

GettingthepresentIhadchosenandmom,Icouldn’twaittohaveagreattime.Seeingme,myfriend’seyeslitupandgreetedmewarmly.Igaveherthepresentandwishedher“happybirthday!”Gettinginside,manyfriendswerealreadythere,accompaniedbytheirownmoms.Itturnedoutthatallmomswereworriedabouttheirkids.Soon,thepartybegan,weateandplayed,enjoyingourselves.Momtalkedwithothermom,sharingtheirexperiencesinraisingchildren.Iwasgratefulthatthecompromisesetbothofusfreeandhappy.

參考范文二，“Thenmaybethinkofacompromise."

suggestedGran.

"Whatkindofcompromise?"IaskedGran,eagerforasolution.Gransmiledknowingly."Perhapsyoucouldproposeaplantoyourmotherthatassuresherofyoursafetywhilestillallowingyoutoenjoytheparty,"shesuggested.Theideasparkedaglimmerofhopewithinme.Ithoughtforawhileandthenapproachedmymomonceagain.Thistime,insteadofpleadingandarguing,Icalmlyinvitedhertocomewithme,assuringherthatIwouldbehavemyselfwithhercompany.

Tomysurprise,mymotherlistenedattentivelyandagreedtomyproposal.Itwasatthatmomentthat

IfeltasenseofgratitudetowardsGranforherwisecounselandanewfoundappreciationforthepowerofcompromise.Thelong-awaitedbeachpartyfinallycame.

Aswearrived,thevibrantmusicandthescentofsaltyseaairfilledtheevening.Myfriendsgreeteduseagerly,surprisedtoseemymomintow.Withmymombymyside,IfeltasenseofsecurityandresponsibilitythatIhadn'tanticipated.Throughouttheparty,Imadesuretointroducemyfriendstomymomandkeptherinformedofmywhereabouts.Wejoinedintheactivitiestogether,playingbeachvolleyballandbuildingsandcastles.Itwasheartwarmingtoseemymomlaughinganden