讀后續(xù)寫+Find+back+my+dog-Spider+講義 高三英語二輪復(fù)習(xí)

山東濰坊一模讀后續(xù)寫真題呈現(xiàn)：Iwaseightyearsoldandwasn'tawareofallthearrangementsbeingmadeforour

journeyasafamilytoLondonin1950.MymotherwasingreatpainandwishedtovisitspecialistsinLondon.MyfatherreluctantlyhadtosellourpropertyinQueensland.Thedaybeforeweboardedtheship,Fatherunwillinglysaidgoodbyetohisfive-year-oldcattledog,Spider,whowaslovedbyusall.Father'sfriendSandywastobehisguardianwhilewewereoverseas,ashehadbeengettingtoknowSpiderformanyweeks.Sixweekslater,anairletterarrivedfromSandy,givingmyfatherthenewsthatSpiderhadrunawayjusttwoweeksafterwehadsailed.SandyhadadvertisedconstantlyonABCandotherregionalnewspapers.Despitemany"sightings",thedogwasneverfound.ItseemsSpiderjustkeptrunningandsearchingforus.Ashewascattledog,myfatherthoughthewouldshoeordingo-trapped,becauseofhisappearance.ButourfamilythoughtthatFatherheldasecretshopethatSpiderwasstillalive.WesailedbacktoAustraliatwoyearslaterandre-establishedourhome.MyimmediatelybeganhisownsearchforSpider.Onecoldwinter'sSaturdaymorningeightmonthsafterourreturn,myfatherhadacallfromanelderlyladylivingonherownontheoutskirtsofthetown.Asshetoldmyfatheronthetelephone,itwas"justglimpsesofadingo-typedogintheshadows"ofherdisusedtenniscourt.Thatwasenoughformyfathertointerruptmyhomework.WesetoffinhisblueandblackJensencarwhichhehadbroughtbackfromEngland.Itwashardlytherightvehiclefortheroughroadswetravelledthatday.Fiveandahalfhourslater,wefoundtherun-downoldproperty.Sadly,shetoldmyfatherthatthe"dingodog"hadn’tbeenaroundforafewdays.Myfatherhadastrangelookinhiseye.HeputtwofingerstohislipsanddidhisspecialwhistleforSpider.注意：1.

續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150個(gè)左右；2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles

(刺)

offhim.這份續(xù)寫其實(shí)和強(qiáng)基聯(lián)盟續(xù)寫是同一文本，但是這份改編的更好??。0.

確定人稱1.

梳理原文情節(jié)

--

人物：Spider/

我

/father

；mother/oldwoman/Sandy2.

構(gòu)思情節(jié)P1:

Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.①

銜接1：我和爸爸的反應(yīng)：緊張期待②Spider：出現(xiàn)

+

沖向父親③

爸爸和Spider

的互動(dòng)：熱淚

+

愛撫；狗：舔/搖尾巴/發(fā)出聲音④

場景人物：我和老太婆感動(dòng)哭⑤

銜接2：感謝了老太婆，我們把Spider

帶回了家P2:Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles(刺)offhim.①

銜接3：prickle的引申

--Spider

這些年很苦②

細(xì)節(jié)添加：給Spider洗澡

+Spider的反應(yīng)：超乖超配合③

細(xì)節(jié)添加：爸爸還帶Spider去檢查

+

萬事ok④

從那以后，Spider再也沒有離開過我們⑤

結(jié)尾：某天下午，我看著Spider

跟著我父親進(jìn)進(jìn)出出，突然覺得好幸福。【下水作文1】P1:Suddenlytherewasasoundinthebush.Therustlingintheundergrowthcausedmyhearttorace,andIcouldseemyfather'sfacetensewithanticipation.Inaburstofmovement,athin,familiarfigureemergedfromthebushes,anddartedintomyfather’sarmswithunrestrainedjoy.Myfather'seyesbrimmedwithtearsashegentlystrokedSpider,whorespondedbycrazilylickingmyfather'sfaceandwagginghistail.TheelderlyladyandIstoodby,movedtotearsbytheprofoundreunionunfoldingbeforeus.Afterofferingearnestappreciationtotheoldwoman,wecarefullyplacedSpiderinthecar,andbroughthimbacktothelovinghomehesorightfullydeserved.P2:Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles(刺)offhim.Aswecarefullyremovedeachpricklefromhim,itbecamepainfullyapparentthatSpidersufferedalotduringthepastlongyears.Also,wegavehimagentleandthoroughbath,duringwhichSpiderbehavedremarkablywell,clearlyrelievedandhappytobebackhome.Myfather,withgreatconcern,eventookSpidertothevetforacomprehensivecheck-up,andfortunately,everythingwasokay.Fromthatdayforward,Spiderneverwanderedfarfromourside,becominganinseparablepartofourfamilyoncemore.Oneafternoon,watchingSpidertrotbesidemydad,Iwassuddenlyoverwhelmedwithhappiness,realizingourgreatfortuneinbeingreunited.【下水作文2】Suddenlytherewasabarkinthebush.

“ItmustbeSpider!”

myfatheryelledexcitedly.Andthenextmomenthewasoutinthebush,followingthesoundofthebark.Curiously,Ifollowedmyfather’sfootsteps,prayingthatsomemiraclewouldcomeup.Yes,thereinthebushlayadog,skinnyandhungry,AnditwasourSpider,thedogwehadbeenmissingbadlyandlookingformadly.Hestruggledtohisfeet,approachedusandthrewhimselfintomyfather’sarms,whichmadehiseyesmoisten.Asiffindingbackhislong-losttreasure,myfatherscoopedupthedog,putitintothecarand,withheartfeltgratitudetotheoldlady,headedbackhome.Oncehomewehadthetaskofgettingalltheprickles

(刺)

offhim.Wegavehimathoroughbath,cleaninghimupwithsoap,andcarefullyexaminedhisteethandears.Laterwewouldwalkalongthebeachandwatchtheshipscomeinandoutoftheharbor.

Spiderenjoyedthisroutine

andmyfatherwouldtellhimstoriesaboutalltheexperienceshehadwhilehewasaway.Spiderwasalwaysbyhisside,faithfulandloyalasever.Theyhadbeenthroughsomuch,but

yearsandvastdistancescouldn'tbreaktheirbond.

Spiderfoundhiswaybacktous

againstall

odds.

Weweregratefultohavehimback,andweknewthathewouldalwaysbeacherished

memberofourfamily.參考范文：Suddenlythere

wasasoundinthebush.Outofthegrowthflewthisbattereddogrightinto

myfather'sarms.Spiderhadleapedoverthetenniscourtfencewithgreatforceandcertainty.

Myfather'seyesshone,andtheoldladyandIstoodtherewithtearsinoureyes.Hekeptlicking

myfather'sfaceandmakingchokingnoises.Hesmeltdreadful.Wewrappedhiminanold

blanketandIheldhimonmylaponthewaybac