使用定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)提升寫作

ImproveWritingwithAttributiveClauseandAppositive

使用定語(yǔ)從句和同位語(yǔ)提升寫作2018.10.14Recall用恰當(dāng)?shù)年P(guān)系詞填空1．IborrowedthebookSherlockHolmesfromthelibrarylastweek,________myclassmatesrecommendedtome.2．Acompany________profits(利潤(rùn))fromhomemarketsaredecliningmayseekopportunitiesabroad.3．We'llreachthesalestargetsinamonth___________wesetatthebeginningoftheyear.4．Amongthemanydangers_________sailorshavetoface,probablythegreatestofallisfog.whichwhose(Which/that)(Which/that)Recall5．Manycountriesarenowsettingupnationalparks______animalsandplantscanbeprotected.6．Wehavelaunchedanotherman-madesatellite,______isannouncedintoday'snewspaper.7．Finallyhereachedalonelyisland___________wascompletelycutofffromtheoutsideworld.8．Thatevening,______Iwilltellyoumoreaboutlater,Iendedupworkingverylate.whichWhich/thatwhichwhereRecall用定語(yǔ)從句合并下列簡(jiǎn)單句Mr.

Smith

is

a

teacher.

He

is

very

strict.

2.ThegirliscalledMary.Isawheryesterday.3.Thisisthefactory.Ivisiteditlastyear.4.ThehouseisTom’s.Itsdoorfacessouth.Mr.Smithisateacherwhoisverystrict.ThegirlwhomIsawyesterdayiscalledMary.Thisisthefactorywhich/thatIvisitedlastyear.ThehousewhosedoorfacessouthisTom’sWritingpractice根據(jù)提示，完成下面的小作文。1．珍妮(Jenny)，是一個(gè)著名的小說(shuō)家(novelist)，上周出版了一部新的小說(shuō)。(publish)2．它描繪了一次不同尋常的冒險(xiǎn)經(jīng)歷。(extraordinaryadventure)3．主人公(hero)騎駱駝來(lái)到一個(gè)廢棄的城堡。(camel，desert)4．在城堡里他遇到了一位美人(beauty)。5．他們相愛(ài)了并一起出發(fā)去探索神秘的沙漠。(explore)Onepossibleedition:Jennyisafamousnovelist，andshepublishedanewnovellastweek.Itdescribesanextraordinaryadventure.Theherorodeacameltoadesertedcastle，andhemetabeautythere.Theyfellinlovewitheachotherandtheytogethersetofftoexplorethemysteriousdesert.Oneadvancededition:Jenny，whoisafamousnovelist，publishedanewnovellastweek，whichdescribesanextraordinaryadventure.Theherorodeacameltoadesertedcastle，wherehemetabeauty.Theyfellinlovewitheachotherandtheytogethersetofftoexplorethemysteriousdesert.Appositive同位語(yǔ)Appositive同位語(yǔ)表示與前面的名詞處于同一關(guān)系，在語(yǔ)法上是“名詞+名詞”結(jié)構(gòu)，在意義上，后一個(gè)名詞解釋前一個(gè)名詞。例如，在句子“我們的語(yǔ)文老師，陳老師，教書非常出色”中，劃線部分就是同位語(yǔ)。英文“Mr.Chen,

ourteacherofChinese,teachesusexcellently”，劃線部分就是同位語(yǔ)。Appositive1．

China,

whichisacountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,isnowdevelopingveryfast.

（定語(yǔ)從句）改為：China,

acountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,

isnowdevelopingveryfast.Appositive

2．

Finally,SuDongpo,

whowasagreatpoet,arrivedinHuizhou,

whichwasthenacityfamousforitsbeautifullakes.改為：Finally,SuDongpo,

agreatpoet,

arrivedinHuizhou,

thenacityfamousforitsbeautifullakes.Appositive3．

Egypt,

whichisacountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,attractsmanytouristsfromallovertheworld.

（定語(yǔ)從句）改為：Egypt,

acountrywithalonghistoryof5000years,attractsmanytouristsfromallovertheworld.Practice1.Iamlookingtovisiting

Beijing.Itisacity

withmanyfamousplacesofinterest.2.Iamlookingforwardtovisiting

Beijing.Itisthecapitalofchina.

3.Hepaidavisitto

Mr.Bush.HewaspresidentoftheUnitedStatesofAmerica.

4.Mr.Bushsaw

apairoflittlepandas

inthezoo.TheywereakindofanimalonlyaliveinChina.

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