13祝賀信-2023年新高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作提分技能(模板素材策略)

2023年新高考英語應(yīng)用文寫作提分技能(模板+素材+策略)類型模板之建祝賀信(2008年，全國(guó)卷I）假定你是李華，從小喜愛大熊貓（panda）,一直通過有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封信：自我介紹；祝賀蘇琳生日；感謝工作人員；索取蘇琳三歲生日照。注意：1、詞數(shù)100左右；2、可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3、開頭語已為你寫好。DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourstruly,LiHua【參考范文】DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChian!I’mLiHua,astudentinSichuan.I’vebeenapandaloversinceIwasachild.AboutthreeyearsagoIwasdelightedtolearnthatBaiyungavebirthtoherdaughterSulinandI’vebeenwatchinghergrowonyourwebsite.Nowshe’sgoingtobethere.I’dliketowishherahappybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahappyandhealthylifeintheUS.Bytheway,couldIhaveaphotoofSulintakenonherthirdbirthday?Thankyouverymuchinadvance.Yourstruly,LiHua【范文點(diǎn)評(píng)】本文寫作的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：1.自我介紹；2.信息來源；3.祝賀生日；4.感謝照顧；5.索取照片；6.合適的結(jié)尾。這封信格式正確，行文規(guī)范，描述有條不紊，稱呼、正文中的開頭及結(jié)尾、結(jié)束語均表達(dá)到位。文章行文要活潑，感情真摯，語言表述準(zhǔn)確，注意結(jié)合簡(jiǎn)單句和復(fù)合句，流暢自然，不露痕跡。亮點(diǎn)詞匯：.delightedadj.欣喜的，快樂的2.expressv.表達(dá)3.givebirthtov.產(chǎn)生，生育亮點(diǎn)句式：I’dliketowishherahaybirthdayandtoexpressmythankstoyouforyourhardwork,becauseofwhichSulinandherparentsarelivingahayandhealthylifeintheUS.我祝福它生日快樂并且對(duì)你們的辛勤工作表達(dá)我的感激之情，正是你們的努力工作讓蘇琳和它的父母在美國(guó)過著幸福和健康的生活。評(píng)析：定語從句的使用。開頭常用句式Itwasexcitingnewsformetolearnof…Pleaseacceptmysincere/hearty/warmcongratulationson…Itwasagreatpleasuretosendyoumycongratulationson…Iwasdelightedtolearnofyoursuccess/achievementsin…Iamreallyhappytolearnthatyouhavebeenelected…結(jié)尾常用句式Wishyougoodluck!Wewishtoshareyourhonorandjoy.Iwishyousuccessandfulfillmentintheyearsahead.Mayallgowonderfullyinyournewpost!Mayeveryhappinessbeyours!Allmybestwishesforanevenmoreprosperousfuture/successfulcareer!Mayeachsucceedingyearbringyougreathappinessandprosperity.Everygoodwishtoyouformuchhealth,happiness,andprosperity!模板①Dear______,Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______（祝賀事由）.Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson______.Youmustbe______.AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.______（所取得的成績(jī)）isquiteexcitingnews!Iknowthisissurelyowingto______（被祝賀人過去的努力）.Itisarewardyourichlydeserveforyour______（被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)）.Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou______（咨詢對(duì)方何時(shí)有空）.Ihope______（表達(dá)自己的愿望）.Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板②Dear_____________,Goodnewstravelsfast!Itwasdelightfulformetohearthat______________.Pleaseacceptmysincerecongratulationstoyour___________.Ihavebeenwatchingyourprogresswithadmirationalltheyears,andIknowmorethananyoneelsehowmucheffortyouhaveputin.Nowyouprovetomeamaturedandwell-rounded________ineveryrespect.Judgingfromyourcurrentsuccess/achievement,Iamconfidentthatinthefuture___________.Mayalltheyearsaheadfulfillyourdreams!Yourssincerely,LiHua模板③Dear_____________,Congratulationsonyour_______.IknowhowhardyouhavebeenworkingandIamveryproudofyouforyourachievement.Iunderstandforsurethatitisyourhardwork/yourexcellentabilitythatleadsyoutothecurrentsuccess.Thisnewposition,ontheotherhand,addsanewdimensiontoyourlifeandisboundto________.What’smore,Ialsobelievethat.Mayallgoesbeautifullyinyournewpost!Yourssincerely,LiHua日常生活中，無論是親朋好友畢業(yè)、晉升、獲獎(jiǎng)、開業(yè)，還是訂婚、結(jié)婚、生日，都需要寫上一封信向?qū)Ψ奖硎咀ＹR。信中應(yīng)表示為對(duì)方而高興。祝賀信應(yīng)當(dāng)充滿真誠(chéng)和熱情，收信人讀后會(huì)感到喜悅和振奮。祝賀信既可以正式寫，也可以隨便寫，具體視場(chǎng)合而定。對(duì)不太熟悉的朋友適合正式寫，以表示禮貌和尊重；對(duì)熟悉的朋友則可以隨便一些。但無論采用哪種方式，祝祝賀信是社交中的一種禮儀性信函。祝賀信通常包括以下幾個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：說明祝賀事由，表達(dá)熱烈、誠(chéng)摯的祝賀；圍繞祝賀事件表述賀喜內(nèi)容；表達(dá)美好祝福。祝賀信寫作分三步走:說明事由并表達(dá)自己衷心的祝賀->展開評(píng)論事件、贊揚(yáng)收信人->再次表達(dá)良好祝愿。在寫作主要內(nèi)容的時(shí)候，可以重點(diǎn)贊揚(yáng)一下當(dāng)事人的優(yōu)秀能力和取得成就的原因、并展望他將來的美好發(fā)展前景等。賀信必須表達(dá)由衷的感情，而且寫信要及時(shí)。Dear_______,(1)Ihavelearnedwithdelightthatyou______.(2)Iwouldliketoextendtoyoumyutmostcongratulationson____.(3)Youmustbeveryproudofyour______.(4)AndIfeelveryhappyforyou.(5)_____isquiteexcitingnews!(6)Youarereally__.(7)Iknowthisissurelyowingto___.(8)Itisarewardyoudeserveforyour__.(9)Withyour_____,Iamsurethatyouwillbeasuccessinwhateveryouundertake.(10)Kindlyletmeknowwhenyou____.(11)Ihope.(12)Mybestwishesforyourfurthersuccess.SincerelyYours,LiHua(1)獲悉值得祝賀的消息，說出祝賀事由(2)表達(dá)祝賀(3)描述對(duì)方的心情(4)表達(dá)自己的心情(5)被祝賀人所取得的成績(jī)(6)對(duì)對(duì)方的贊美(7)對(duì)方取得成績(jī)的原因(8)對(duì)對(duì)方取得成績(jī)的肯定，說出被祝賀人的優(yōu)點(diǎn)(9)被祝賀人的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)，表達(dá)對(duì)對(duì)方的祝福(10)咨詢對(duì)方的情況和時(shí)間(11)表達(dá)愿望(12)表達(dá)自己真誠(chéng)的祝福假如你是高三學(xué)生李華，得知你的英國(guó)筆友Reed被劍橋大學(xué)(UniversityofCambridge)錄取，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封電子郵件。要點(diǎn)如下：1.向Reed表示祝賀；2.介紹自己目前的學(xué)習(xí)情況；3.請(qǐng)教學(xué)習(xí)方法注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫；DearReed,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【參考范文】DearReed,Iamveryexcitedandinspiredbythenewsin