Unit+2+Travelling+Around+Reading+for+Writing 高中英語人教版（2019）必修第一冊

Unit2TravelingaroundReadingforwriting1Learnabouttravelingathomeandabroad.Phrases:lookforwardto32Words:request；view；sight；statue；BC；tomb；unearth；comment；theEiffelTower；Neuschwanstein；Castle；Iceland；Disneyland；Peru；theAndesLearningobjectivesWorkingroups.Discussthequestions.Whatweshouldpayattentiontowhenwetravelathomeandatabroad?Lead-in1.ReadRichard’semail,tohisfriendandthebrochurethathefound.Doyouthinkhisplansoundsinteresting?Why?

Yes,itsoundsquiteinteresting.TheTerracottaArmyisanationaltreasureandoneofthelargestandmostimportantarchaeologicalfindsintheworld.AtravelplantoXi’anDearXiaoLi,MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday,myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I’veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan’twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It’samazingthattherearemorethan8,000statues,andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We’realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi’an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”!We’realsogoingtotheXi’anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We’retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsWe’rearrivingat9:30a.m.andwillstartsightseeingrightaway,soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat’sallfornow!I’llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos!Doyouhaveanyplansforthecomingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend,RichardEachstatuehasdifferentface,leadingresearcherstobelieve（thateachoneiscopyofrealsoldier）.現(xiàn)在分詞短語作結果狀語，that引導的賓語從句每座雕像都有一個不同的面孔，這使得研究人員相信每座雕像都是一個真實士兵的復制品。Eachstatuehasadifferentface,leadingresearcherstobelievethateachoneisacopyofarealsoldier.(doing表自然而然的結果；而用onlytodo來表示出乎意料的結果)仿寫：這家醫(yī)院最近得到一批新的醫(yī)療設備，這使得更多的病人能夠得到治療。Thehospitalhasrecentlyobtainednewmedicalequipment,___________________________________________.allowingmorepatientstobetreated拓展：

我到了商店，卻發(fā)現(xiàn)錢全落在家里了.Iarrivedattheshop,_________________Ihadleftallmymoneyathome.onlytofind考點提煉：

現(xiàn)在分詞(短語)作結果狀語現(xiàn)在分詞(短語)作結果狀語的用法：(1)語法含義：表示自然而然的結果或意料之中的結果，現(xiàn)在分詞前有時可加thus以示強調(diào)。(2)時態(tài)特征：現(xiàn)在分詞表示的動作發(fā)生在謂語動詞所表示的動作之后。(3)邏輯主語：句子的主語或現(xiàn)在分詞前的整個句子。當現(xiàn)在分詞的邏輯主語為前面的整個句子時，其作用相當于一個非限制性定語從句。(4)位置：一般位于句末，且常用逗號與前面的句子成分隔開。(5)擴展性：一般可轉化為sothat引導的結果狀語從句。Anumberofnewmachineswereintroduced,thusresultinginanincreaseinproduction.由于引進了許多新機器，產(chǎn)量得到了提高。

Thestatuesfillonlyonepartoftheemperor'shugetomb,whichstillhasnotbeencompletelyunearthed.句式剖析：Thestatuesfillonlyonepartoftheemperor'shugetomb,whichstillhasnotbeencompletelyunearthed.這些雕像只占秦始皇陵的一部分，這座陵墓現(xiàn)在尚未完全出土。which引導非限制性定語從句，修飾先行詞theemperor'shugetomb主句2.Studytheorganisationandlanguagefeatures.Summarisetheemailinthetable.ParagraphMainideaDetail1mainpurposeforthetrip2otherplansforthetrip3transport4finalthoughtsgotoXi’antoseetheTerracottaArmygototheShaanxiIlistoryMuseum,theXi’anCityWall,andafewotherfamoussightstakethetrain,leavethedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybeginsandarriveat9:30a.m.writeagainsoonandsendphotos.旅游計劃是一種常見的應用文寫作。旅游可分為觀光游、文化游、美食游及探險游等不同類型，因此旅游計劃也要根據(jù)不同的旅游目的進行設計。常規(guī)的旅游計劃需要明確以下幾個方面的問題:TravelplanWhenwillyouleavefor？Whereisyourthedestination?Howwillyougetthere?Whatwillyoudothere?Howlongwillyouthere?Isthereaclearpurposeforthetrip?寫法指導為了提升旅行計劃的層級，還需注意以下幾個方面的問題:1.每段是否有明確清晰的主題;2.用一般現(xiàn)在時代替一般將來時:3.用更高級的形容詞詞匯。例如:表達“好”時，不要總用“nice”,我們還可以用“smart,clean,excellent,exciting,beautiful,wonderful,clever,famous,grand”等表達更具有指向性的同匯:4.用更高級的動詞詞匯。比如:我們可以用“seemstand,liegetstay,remain,look.sound,become.keep,grow”等代替"be";5.所有“專有名詞”要大寫:6.文章最后要有適當?shù)目偨Y性語言。寫法指導[常用句式]placeofinterest名勝古跡touristattractions旅游景點historicsites歷史遺跡Must-seeattractions必看景點goonaholiday/takeavacation去度假checkin登記人住checkout結賬退房enjoythesceneryofnature欣賞自然美景gosightseeing觀光feellikedoingsth.想要做某事寫法指導[常用句式]mean/intend/plantodosth.打算/計劃做某事decide/bedeterminedtodosth.決定做某事lookforwardtodoingsth,盼望做某事long/hope/wish/wanttodosth,渴望/希望/想做某事wishsb.apleasantjourney祝某人旅途愉快Whenwearetiredfromwork,whynotstopandgoouttoenjoy…當我們因工作而感到疲憊時，為什么不走出.....AsfarasI'mconcerned,thetripisverymeaningful.據(jù)我所知，該旅行十分有意義。Ontheonehand,wecan...Ontheotherhand,itwillhelpus…一方面，我們可以..另.方面.它可以幫助我們...Theplacewherewe'll...is…我們.....地方超....寫法指導packup整理，把……打包aroundthecorner即將來臨takeabus/train乘公共汽車/火車goonatour/sightseeing旅行/觀光bookaticket訂票makearrangementsfor…為……安排inadvance/aheadoftime提前broadenone’sview/horizons開闊眼界takeadvantageof/makeuseof利用asfollows如下setoff/out動身，出發(fā)leaveforaplace動身去某地enjoythescenery欣賞風景寫作常用詞匯

格式準確、要點齊全、結構完整、層次清晰。尤其是關聯(lián)詞語的運用要恰到好處，使整個語篇結構緊湊。敘述具體、語言得當，邏輯通順，要具有很強的感染力。高級詞匯

精彩短語和關聯(lián)詞

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詞句品鑒delightedchoiceenjoysurelydeeply

I'mdelightedInmyopinionthefirstchoiceforyouBesidesthis,helpyouunderstandChineseculturemoredeeply.showyouaroundotherplacesofinterest.LookingforwardtoI'mdelightedtoreceiveyourletter,askingforhelptotravelinBeijing.Inmyopinion,theGreatWallisthefirstchoiceforyou,whichisoneoftheSevenWondersoftheWorld.Imagineyouaremakingplansfortheholiday.Chooseoneofthesituationsbelowandrole-playaphonecall.withapartner.

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breakfastInternet?Kindofroom

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