專題07 書面表達(dá)12篇-沖刺2024年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測(cè)（深圳專用）

沖刺2024年中考英語必考題型終極預(yù)測(cè)（深圳專用）專題07書面表達(dá)12篇(名校模擬+地區(qū)真題)1．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友John下個(gè)月將作為交換生來你的學(xué)校。他想了解你校社團(tuán)并計(jì)劃加入其中一個(gè)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示給他寫一封郵件，向他簡(jiǎn)要介紹并推薦其中一個(gè)。要點(diǎn)：1.名稱：武術(shù)社；京劇社；……（至少補(bǔ)充1個(gè)）2.內(nèi)容：①練習(xí)中國武術(shù)；②學(xué)唱京??；③……3.推薦理由：①豐富課余生活；②……；③……要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：武術(shù)社WushuClub

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豐富enrichDearJohn,IamexcitedtohaveyouwithusnextmonthandIknowyouareveryinterestedintheclubsinourschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Lookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,LiHua2．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）2月19日，深圳馬拉松比賽在深圳市民中心廣場(chǎng)鳴槍開跑，來自世界各地的參賽選手踏上賽道奮力奔跑。最終，中國選手何杰奪得冠軍，這也是深馬舉辦八屆以來首次有中國選手奪得全程馬拉松男子組冠軍。假如你是你們學(xué)校英語校報(bào)的記者，請(qǐng)報(bào)道本次賽事并發(fā)表自己的感想。內(nèi)容包括：活動(dòng)目的1.展現(xiàn)深圳良好的城市風(fēng)貌2.培養(yǎng)深圳人民熱愛運(yùn)動(dòng)、健康生活的習(xí)慣活動(dòng)詳情時(shí)間，地點(diǎn)，參賽人員，比賽結(jié)果你的感受1.應(yīng)該學(xué)習(xí)何杰堅(jiān)持不懈的精神2.補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)感想要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)在80詞左右。開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.必須包含以上全部要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.表達(dá)清楚，語句通順，意思連貫，書寫規(guī)范。提示詞:image形象;persistence堅(jiān)持不懈;ShenzhenCivicCentreSquare深圳市民中心Inrecentyears,moreandmorecitieshavebeenkeenonholdingmarathons.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你是李華，你的英國筆友Tony即將在暑假來深圳研學(xué)旅行。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示給他寫一封郵件，幫助他適應(yīng)在深圳的生活。內(nèi)容提示：（1）歡迎他來深研學(xué)旅行；（2）你的建議：學(xué)習(xí)一些中國習(xí)俗，如使用筷子等；購物時(shí)可以使用移動(dòng)支付；……（3）你對(duì)他的祝福。要求：（1）80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；（2）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；（3）可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；（4）標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：研學(xué)旅行studytrip

移動(dòng)支付mobilepaymentDearTony,Iamsogladthat_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua4．（2023·廣東深圳·校考二模）近期，深圳市電視臺(tái)對(duì)中學(xué)生閑暇活動(dòng)的安排進(jìn)行了采訪及調(diào)查，假如你是學(xué)生代表李華，請(qǐng)用英語寫一篇短文介紹你和同學(xué)們的閑暇活動(dòng)開展情況。要點(diǎn)提示：1.內(nèi)容：體育，如跑步；藝術(shù)，如唱歌繪畫；勞動(dòng)，如做家務(wù)、參加志愿者活動(dòng)；其它，如閱讀……2.好處：休息放松，學(xué)習(xí)新知識(shí)，學(xué)會(huì)新技能，結(jié)交新朋友等。3.個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)：……要求：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（首句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)提示均須涉及，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容；3.不用真實(shí)姓名、校名、地名。參考詞語：volunteer,relax,knowledge,skillFree-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________5．（2023·廣東深圳·南山實(shí)驗(yàn)教育集團(tuán)南海中學(xué)?？级＃﹤鹘y(tǒng)的長(zhǎng)途旅行常常讓人疲憊不堪，越來越多的人選擇在自家周邊方便輕松地度過周末。假如你是深圳市南山區(qū)的一名九年級(jí)學(xué)生李華，請(qǐng)?jiān)诎嗌辖o同學(xué)們介紹一些南山區(qū)的好去處以及可開展的活動(dòng)，并呼吁大家多出門走走。要點(diǎn)：1.大沙河公園（DashahePark）：野餐、放風(fēng)箏，……2.華僑城濕地公園（OCTWetlandPark）：觀鳥、騎自行車，……3.其他地點(diǎn)：……，……（自行補(bǔ)充至少2項(xiàng)活動(dòng)）要求：1.詞數(shù)80—100詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范整潔；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）2023年春節(jié)期間，深圳寶安區(qū)舉辦了首屆“民族美食嘉年華”活動(dòng)，將民族美食融入新春文化。假如你是李華，你在春節(jié)期間參加了這次美食嘉年華。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，給你的外教Mr.Smith寫一封郵件，介紹此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：1.時(shí)間地點(diǎn)：2023年1月15日，寶安萬達(dá)廣場(chǎng)2.內(nèi)容：①品嘗不同民族的美食；②欣賞少數(shù)民族舞蹈表演；③……（請(qǐng)自行補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)內(nèi)容）3.你的感受：……（請(qǐng)自行補(bǔ)充兩點(diǎn)感受）要求：1.80-100詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。參考詞匯：美食嘉年華FoodCarnival少數(shù)民族e(cuò)thnicminority萬達(dá)廣場(chǎng)WandaPlazaDearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua7．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）深圳是一座“愛閱之城”。假如你是李華，你的外教Sam發(fā)來一封郵件，說他對(duì)光明區(qū)隨處可見的24小時(shí)書香亭(self-servicelibrary)很感興趣，請(qǐng)你給他寫一封回信，向他介紹書香亭并邀請(qǐng)他參加書香亭推廣活動(dòng)。1.介紹書香亭：1)光明區(qū)有71臺(tái)書香亭，每臺(tái)可放置約200本書；2)可以從書香亭拿到網(wǎng)上預(yù)借的圖書；3)……2.你對(duì)書香亭的看法；3.活動(dòng)安排：1)時(shí)間：本周六下午3點(diǎn)；2)地點(diǎn)：光明區(qū)圖書館。要求：1.80詞左右，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整潔。提示詞：預(yù)借reserve;推廣promotionDearSam,Iamsohappytoreceiveyouremail.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua8．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考二模）為了發(fā)展學(xué)生興趣愛好、豐富職業(yè)體驗(yàn)，你校成功舉辦了題為“ExperiencingFutureJob”的職業(yè)體驗(yàn)游園活動(dòng)。學(xué)校英文報(bào)就此活動(dòng)展開征文比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容投稿。1.場(chǎng)景描寫：①多種職業(yè)②……2.體驗(yàn)描述：①你的選擇②……3.體驗(yàn)感悟：注意：1.詞數(shù)80詞左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。參考詞匯：career職業(yè)；gametester游戲測(cè)試師；astronaut宇航員；fitnessinstructor健身教練Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________9．（2023·廣東深圳·?？家荒＃┥钲谑亲F(xiàn)代化的花園城市，致力于率先實(shí)現(xiàn)碳中和。為了實(shí)現(xiàn)這個(gè)目標(biāo)，我們每個(gè)人都應(yīng)該為此盡一份力。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你寫一篇英語短文向?qū)W校英文報(bào)投稿，寫一封倡議信，介紹你的想法和做法并號(hào)召大家都積極行動(dòng)起來，為保護(hù)環(huán)境而貢獻(xiàn)自己的力量。要點(diǎn)：1）保護(hù)環(huán)境的意義。2）我們能夠做些什么：比如①做環(huán)保型消費(fèi)者；②節(jié)約水電……3）號(hào)召大家參加此活動(dòng)。要求：1）詞數(shù)80左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2）要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3）條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4）文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth,____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LiHua10．（2023·廣東深圳·校聯(lián)考二模）目前我國生態(tài)環(huán)境保護(hù)任務(wù)依然艱巨，生態(tài)環(huán)境部表示：2023年將積極推進(jìn)美麗中國建設(shè)實(shí)踐，扎實(shí)推動(dòng)綠色低碳高質(zhì)量發(fā)展，深入打好污染防治攻堅(jiān)戰(zhàn)，扎實(shí)推進(jìn)藍(lán)天保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)、碧水保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)、凈土保衛(wèi)戰(zhàn)，加強(qiáng)固體廢物和新污染物治理，深入推進(jìn)“無廢城市”高質(zhì)量建設(shè)，切實(shí)維護(hù)生態(tài)環(huán)境安全，加快健全現(xiàn)代環(huán)境治理體系。假設(shè)你校的英語校報(bào)正在征集有關(guān)“環(huán)保周”的文章，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇關(guān)于環(huán)保的英語短文。生態(tài)環(huán)境現(xiàn)狀河水變臟、天空變成灰色、一些地區(qū)沒有干凈的飲用水環(huán)保措施1.不往河里亂扔垃圾；2.節(jié)約用水3.……（補(bǔ)充1—2點(diǎn)措施）呼吁攜手共建美麗中國要求：1.內(nèi)容完整，條理清楚，意思連貫，語句通順，語法正確；2.詞數(shù)不少于80詞（開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；3.文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，卷面整潔。參考詞匯：rubbish垃圾

environmentalprotection環(huán)保Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandworse.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________11．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考一模）為豐富校園生活，學(xué)校的英語俱樂部決定舉辦以“最美深圳”(AmazingShenzhen)為主題的英文繪本大賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一則活動(dòng)通知。要點(diǎn)：1.參賽對(duì)象：全校學(xué)生2.提交時(shí)間：下周五上午12:00前3.繪本內(nèi)容：選擇深圳這座城市的任一方面，如發(fā)展歷程、景點(diǎn)、文化、志愿服務(wù)等。4.參賽要求：①繪本必須原創(chuàng)；②……（至少補(bǔ)充一點(diǎn)）參考詞匯：內(nèi)容content；原創(chuàng)的original要求：1.詞數(shù)80左右（開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；2.要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；3.條理清楚，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名。NoticeInordertoenrichstudents’campuslife,theschoolEnglishclubdecidestoholdanEnglishpicturebookcompetitionwiththetheme“AmazingShenzhen”.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EnglishClub12．（2023·廣東深圳·統(tǒng)考一模）《濕地公約》第十四屆締約方大會(huì)在我國成功召開。深圳作為重要的濕地城市，也積極響應(yīng)公約（WetlandsConvention）號(hào)召。假如你是學(xué)生李華，是學(xué)校環(huán)保俱樂部一員，你們俱樂部舉行了“濕地保護(hù)節(jié)”（WetlandProtectionFestival）。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示給你的外國朋友Mike寫一封郵件，介紹此次活動(dòng)。要點(diǎn)：1.目的：見證深圳濕地建設(shè)的成就；提升環(huán)保意識(shí)2.內(nèi)容：①前往深圳紅樹林生態(tài)公園觀賞紅樹林和鳥類；②深圳濕地?cái)z影展；③……3.你的感受：①……②……要求：1.80詞左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)內(nèi)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名和校名；3.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使條理清楚、行文連貫；4.標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確，書面整節(jié)。參考詞匯：witness見證；awareness意識(shí)；mangroveforest紅樹林；ShenzhenMangroveEcologicalPark深圳紅樹林生態(tài)公園；DearMike,Asanimportantwetlandcity,ShenzhenismakingeffortstoanswerthecalloftheWetlandsConvention.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua參考答案：1．例文DearJohn,IamexcitedtohaveyouwithusnextmonthandIknowyouareveryinterestedintheclubsinourschool.Therearemanyclubsinourschool.Forexample,youcanjoinWushuClubtopracticeChinesemartialarts.YoucanalsojointheBeijingOperaClubtolearnhowtosingBeijingOperacorrectly.Ofcourse,youcanalsojointhePaperCuttingclubtolearnChinesePaperCutting.IwouldliketorecommendthePaperCuttingclubtoyou.PaperCuttingisoneofthetraditionalculturalformsinChina.Youcancutoutvariousflowers,birds,fish,andbeastsfromasimplepieceofpaper.Ifyoucome,youwilldefinitelylikeit.Byparticipatingintheseclubs,notonlycanweenrichourleisurelife,butalsowecanlearnsomeskills.Lookforwardtomeetingyousoon!Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，不能遺漏信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，向?qū)Ψ浇榻B你學(xué)校里的社團(tuán)；第二步，推薦對(duì)方加入一個(gè)社團(tuán)并介紹推薦理由；第三步，最后表達(dá)對(duì)方加入后可以收獲的東西。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①forexample比如②wouldliketodo想要做③participatein參加[高分句型]Ifyoucome,youwilldefinitelylikeit.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）2．例文：

Inrecentyears,moreandmorecitieshavebeenkeenonholdingmarathons.WiththehelpoftheChina’sReformandOpening-up,Shenzhenisbecomingapopularcity.NowIwouldliketohaveabriefintroductionofShenzhenInternationalMarathononFebruary19th.MarathonispopularamongShenzhen,evenacrosstheareaofAsia.Manypeopletakepartinit.

ThepurposeofthisactivityistoshowthegoodcityshapeofShenzhen.What’smore,itcanhelppeopledevelopthehabitoflovingsportsandkeepingfit.Theroutestartedandendedatthesameplace—ShenzhenCivicCentreSquare.ItwasinspiringthatHeJie,acontestantfromChina,wonthefirstprize.AnditwasthefirsttimethatChinesecontestantwonthechampionoftheman’smarathons.

IreallythinkthatweshouldlearnfromHeJieofhisspiritofpersistence,andweshoudnevergiveup.Furthermore,asfarasIamconcerned,everyoneshoulddosportsandkeephealthy.Marathonisnotonlyanactivitytorun,butalsoachanceforpeopletoappreciatethebeautyofShenzhenandshowtheirlovetothismoderncity.Ihopeyoucancomeandloveourcity.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，介紹深圳馬拉松活動(dòng)；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“活動(dòng)目的、活動(dòng)詳情、感受”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹此次馬拉松活動(dòng)的細(xì)節(jié)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)希望大家多運(yùn)動(dòng)，保持身體健康。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①bekeenon喜歡②ispopularamong受歡迎③giveup放棄[高分句型]①ItisinspiringthatHeJie,acontestantfromChina,wonthefirstprize.（itisinspiringthat...某事是很激勵(lì)人心的）②Marathonisnotonlyanactivitytorun,butalsoachanceforpeopletoappreciatethebeautyofShenzhenandshowtheirlovetothismoderncity.（notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……）3．(Onepossibleversion)DearTony,IamsogladthatyouaregoingtohaveastudytripinShenzhenthissummerholiday.Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.Second,whenyoushop,youcanpaywithmobilepayment.Besides,thetrafficrulesaredifferentfromthoseintheUK.Thedriversdriveontherightsideoftheroad,sowhenyoucrosstheroad,youshouldlookleft.IhopethatyoucanhaveagoodtimeinShenzhen.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考生注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合要點(diǎn)進(jìn)行適當(dāng)?shù)陌l(fā)揮。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題，歡迎他來深圳進(jìn)行研學(xué)旅行；第二步，具體介紹給他的一些建議；第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)他的祝福。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①andsoon等等②bedifferentfrom與……不同③haveagoodtime玩得開心④lookforwardto期盼[高分句型]①Tohelpyouliveahappyandsafelifehere,Ihavesomeadviceforyou.（不定式作目的狀語）②First,youcanlearnsomeChinesecustoms,suchashowtousechopsticks,howtogreetpeopleandsoon.（疑問詞+不定式）4．例文Free-timeActivitiesFree-timeactivitiesaregoodforusteenagers.Differentpeoplehavedifferentfree-timeactivities,andI’dliketoshareouractivitieswithyou.Firstly,bothmyfriendsandIpaymuchattentiontophysicalhealth,soweoftendosportstogether,suchasrunning,playingbasketballandsoon.Theseactivitiescanalsohelptorelaxourselves.Secondly,wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.Thirdly,labouristhesourceofhappiness.Iusuallyhelpmymotherdosomehouseworkandjoininsomevolunteeractivitiesinordertohelppeopleinneed.Atthesametime,Icanlearnsomenewskills.Finally,readingisoneofmyhobbies,andIcanalwayslearnsomeknowledgebyreading.Inaword,free-timeactivitiescannotonlyenrichourlife,butalsohelpuslearnsomethingnew.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文，所需要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充發(fā)揮，注意語句的通順，使用正確的詞匯和句型，使得行文連貫有邏輯。[寫作步驟]第一步，表明寫作意圖，以“想和你分享我們的活動(dòng)”引出下文；第二步，按照要點(diǎn)提示，從體育，藝術(shù)，勞動(dòng)等方面闡述自己的閑暇活動(dòng)，并注意補(bǔ)充內(nèi)容，可使用Firstly，Secondly，Thirdly等詞語使得文章連貫，并注意說明這些活動(dòng)的好處；第三步，結(jié)尾表達(dá)自己的看法，表示自己對(duì)閑暇活動(dòng)的贊同。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①sharesthwithsb和某人分享某物②paymuchattentionto很注意③befondof喜愛④enrichourlife豐富我們的生活[高分句型]①Wearefondofsinginganddrawing,whichhelpusmakemorefriends.（which引導(dǎo)的非限制性定語從句）5．例文Nowadaysmoreandmorepeoplechoosetodo“staycation”.LetmeintroducesomeoftheattractionsinNanshanDistricttoyou.First,youcangototheDashahePark.Itisbeautifulforitsnaturalscenery.Youcanhavepicnicswithyourfamilyorfriendsthere.Whentheweatherisfine,youcanflykitesandplaygameswithyourchildren.Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.Second,OCTWetlandParkisalsoagoodplacetorelax.Thereareallkindsofbirds.Youcangobird-watchingwithyourclassmates.Whenyougocyclingalongtheriver,youcanseefascinatingcloudsintheskyandenjoythesunset.Itisgreat.YoucanvisitsomeplacesofinterestandtakebeautifulphotosinNanshanDistrict.Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.【詳解】［總體分析］①題材：本文是一篇應(yīng)用文，為材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：本文為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生不要遺漏“信息提示”中大沙河公園中野餐、放風(fēng)箏；華僑城濕地公園中觀鳥、騎自行車等要點(diǎn)介紹，并自行補(bǔ)充至少2項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，注意保證選詞準(zhǔn)確，條理清晰，語句通順，意義連貫，書寫規(guī)范整潔。［寫作步驟］第一步，表明寫作意圖。以“介紹深圳市南山區(qū)的景點(diǎn)來度過輕松的周末，”來引出重點(diǎn)介紹的內(nèi)容；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。大沙河公園中野餐、放風(fēng)箏；華僑城濕地公園中觀鳥、騎自行車等要點(diǎn)介紹，和其他一些活動(dòng)；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。南山區(qū)還有更多其他景點(diǎn)可供放松和玩樂。［亮點(diǎn)詞匯］①staycation居家度假②attraction有吸引力的（事物）③scenery風(fēng)景④fascinating極有吸引力的；迷人的［高分句型］①Therearelotsofotheractivitiesthatyouareinterestedin.(that引導(dǎo)定語從句)②Itwillhelpyourelaxyourselvesaswellashavefun.(aswellas和……一樣；除……以外還）6．例文：DearMr.Smith,DuringtheSpringFestival,weheldaFoodCarnivalinShenzhen.ItwaswonderfulandIwouldliketotellyousomedetailsaboutit.TheFoodCarnivalwasheldatWandaPlazainBaoan,onJanuary15,2023.PeoplecelebratedtheSpringFestivalbyenjoyingdeliciousfood.Firstly,wetasteddifferentethnicfoodfromalloverthecountry,suchasTibetanfoodanddrinksandMiaofood.Then,weenjoyedadanceshowfromEthnicminorities.Thedancersworebeautifulclothes.Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.What’smore,thereweremanylanternsandpeoplecouldtrytosolvethepuzzlesonthelanterns.Thecarnivalwasreallyinterestingandunforgettable.WecanexperiencecolorfulChinesecultureinadifferentway.IhopeyoucanattendtheFoodCarnivalnextyear.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件，屬于電子郵件寫作；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：信件開頭以及要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，按照提示的要點(diǎn)逐點(diǎn)闡述，可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接書信開頭，引出話題；第二步，根據(jù)要點(diǎn)提示介紹活動(dòng)的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)，以及活動(dòng)的具體內(nèi)容，需要自行補(bǔ)充至少兩個(gè)活動(dòng)內(nèi)容，可列舉具體的事例；第三步，抒發(fā)此活動(dòng)帶來的感受并書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①fromalloverthecountry來自全國各地②solvethepuzzlesonthelanterns猜燈謎[高分句型]①Theperformancewassofantasticthatitattractsmanyaudiences.（so…that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語從句）②Also,therewasaDIYactivitywhichwecouldjoininandmakehandicraftsbyourselves.（which引導(dǎo)限制性定語從句）7．例文：DearSam,Iamsohappytoreceiveyouremail.Knowingthatyouareinterestedintheself-servicelibrariesinGuangmingDistrict,Iamwritingtotellyousomethingaboutit.Thereare71self-servicelibrariesinGuangmingandeachofthemcanholdabout200books.Oneofthegreatestthingsabouttheselibrariesisthatyoucanborrowbooksyouhavereservedonlinedirectlyfromthem.What’smore,withtheself-servicelibraries,youcanborrowandreturnbooksanytime,anywhere.Personally,theself-servicelibrariesarefantastic.Theynotonlyprovideconvenientaccesstoawiderangeofbooks,butalsotheycreateacultureofreadinginourcommunity.Apromotionactivityabouttheself-servicelibrarieswillbeheldat3p.m.onSaturdayinGuangmingLibrary.Ifyouareinterestedinit,letmeknowandwecanmeetupatthelibraryentrance.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇書信作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)以及開頭，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，語句通順，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，承接開頭，開門見山，交代寫作目的，介紹光明區(qū)圖書館；第二步，具體介紹書香亭以及對(duì)書香亭的看法；第三步，介紹書亭推廣活動(dòng)的具體情況。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beinterestedin對(duì)……感興趣②what’smore其次③notonly...butalso...不僅……而且……[高分句型]①Oneofthegreatestthingsabouttheselibrariesisthatyoucanborrowbooksyouhavereservedonlinedirectlyfromthem.（表語從句）②Ifyouareinterestedinit,letmeknowandwecanmeetupatthelibraryentrance.（if引導(dǎo)的條件狀語從句）8．例文：Lastweek,theactivity“ExperiencingFutureJob”washeldinourschool.Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.Wecouldchoosethejobweliked.Ichosetobeateacherasmyjob.BecauseIwantedtobeateacherlikemymother.Itaughtourstudentsalotofknowledge.Ialsotalkedwiththemabouttheirdreamsandfuturelives.WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意要點(diǎn)齊全，不要遺漏，語句通順，表述完整。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，直接引出職業(yè)體驗(yàn)游園活動(dòng)；第二步，具體介紹活動(dòng)場(chǎng)景和內(nèi)容；第三步，介紹自己的體驗(yàn)感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①alotof大量的②talkwith交流[高分句型]①Thereweremanyjobsforustochooseintheactivity,suchasteachers,doctors,astronauts,fitnessinstructorsandsoon.（therebe句型）②WhenIwaswithmanystudents,Ifeltrealizedteachingisagreatprofession.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）9．例文：Dearfollowstudents,WehaveonlyoneEarth.Earthisouronlyhome.Asweallknow,ourearthfacesmanychallenges,suchasglobalwarming,environmentalpollution,naturaldisastersandsoon.Thesethingsaremakingourearthworseandworse.Protectingtheenvironmentisprotectingourselves.Sowemustdosomethingtoprotectit.First,beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers.Weshouldtrytogotoworkbybikeoronfootinsteadofbycars.Secondly,savewaterandelectricityinourdaily.Inaddition,wecanworkasvolunteerstotellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment.Let’stakeactiveactiontocontributeoureffortstoprotectingtheenvironment.Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.Lihua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：這是一篇材料作文，為應(yīng)用文；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：3個(gè)寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，需要具體化；這是一篇倡議信，所以“能夠做些什么”部分可以用祈使句和情態(tài)動(dòng)詞來表達(dá)。[寫作步驟]第一步，描寫保護(hù)環(huán)境的意義；第二步，描寫為了保護(hù)環(huán)境我們能夠做的事情；第三步，號(hào)召大家積極行動(dòng)起來保護(hù)環(huán)境。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beenvironmentallyfriendlyconsumers成為環(huán)保型消費(fèi)者②inaddition另外③tellpeopletheimportanceofprotectingtheenvironment告訴人們保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性④contributeoureffortsto為……做出貢獻(xiàn)[高分句型]Iamsureourcitywillbecomebetterandbetter.（賓語從句）10．例文Asisknowntoall,theenvironmentaroundusisgettingworseandwors