讀后續(xù)寫課件-2023屆高考英語作文備考

讀后續(xù)寫TheContinuationWriting1李華今天出門，————————————————，最后得到了路人的稱贊。Brainstorming(makeupastory)2選評(píng)注選材特點(diǎn)評(píng)分參考需要注意Explanation3①選材特點(diǎn)：（1）所需閱讀的短文詞數(shù)在350左右；（2）多以記敘文故事類文章或者夾敘夾議類文章為主，故事情節(jié)有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事線索的邏輯性比較強(qiáng)。4②評(píng)分參考：（1）與所給短文及段落開頭語的銜接程度；（2）內(nèi)容的豐富性；（3）應(yīng)用語法結(jié)構(gòu)和詞匯的豐富性和準(zhǔn)確性；（4）上下文的連貫性；（5）字跡工整。5③需要注意：（1）所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右（詞數(shù)少于130的，從總分中減去2分）；（2）續(xù)寫部分分為兩段，每段的開頭語已為你寫好。6Writingsteps7Step5做到首尾呼應(yīng)，結(jié)構(gòu)完整合理Step1Step2Step3Step4瀏覽所給信息，確定大意主題梳理已知段落，確定主要情節(jié)借助段落開頭，確定續(xù)寫內(nèi)容刻畫細(xì)節(jié)沖突，優(yōu)美連貫表達(dá)5w+h開端、發(fā)展、高潮、結(jié)局conflict,solution8閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.9

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1： But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

Para2:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.10Step1瀏覽所給信息，確定大意主題whowhatwherewhenwhyMainideaThemeJane,TomJanewaslostInaforestOneweekendinJulyAquarrelwithTom,herhusbandJanewaslostintheforestforthreedaysandsurvivedintheendJanelearnedhowtocontrolemotionsanddealwithconflicts11PersonalStep2梳理已知段落，確定主要情節(jié)How(feeling)

Mainplotsbeginning

developmentclimaxending…startedtoquarrel…waslost…keptmoving…h(huán)adtostopforthenight…Roseatthebreakofday…Begantowalkalongthestreamandhope…h(huán)eardahelicopter待定angry,frightenedregretful,confused,hopeful,joyfulhopeful12思考：故事發(fā)展順序？時(shí)間順序Group閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。

OneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,Tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom,“I’mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp.”andwalkedaway.angry13

Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace,sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.

“Tom!”shecried.“Help!”frightened14

Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.regretful,confused15

Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow,Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.joyful,hopeful16Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.Isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.17注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。Para1： But

no

more

helicopters

came

and

it

was

dark.

Para2:It

was

daybreak

when

Jane

woke

up.18Step3借助段落開頭，確定續(xù)寫內(nèi)容研讀續(xù)寫段落的開頭語Para.1Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.(切入點(diǎn)）Jane是如何熬過這個(gè)夜晚的？具體寫什么？1.HowdidJanefeelthen?2.HowdidJanestrugglethroughthenight?3.Didshefallas