廣東高考基礎(chǔ)寫(xiě)作提出建議

提出建議主題：給交友有困難的同學(xué)提建議。I’msorryyouarehavingtroubleinmakingfriends.However,thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.[引出建議]Herearesometipstohelpyou.[列舉建議]First,whynotgoandtalktopeoplestandingontheirown?Iagreethisisdifficultbutthatpersonmaybelonelytoo.Ifyoudothis,Iamsureyouwillsoonhaveanewfriend.Second，youcanbegintheconversationbyaskingabouttheirlikesanddislikes,(理由)whichwillmakeyoufindpeoplewiththesameinterests.Finally，youshouldtrytojoininadiscussion,(理由)lettingpeopleknowhowfriendlyyouare.Ihopeyoufindtheseideasuseful.靈活運(yùn)用超級(jí)模仿一、篇章結(jié)構(gòu)引出建議→列舉建議與理由(→希望)二、句式模板1.引出建議可以用：⑴Herearemysuggestionsonhowto...3.在列舉的建議后常常會(huì)用起補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明作用的分詞短語(yǔ)、定語(yǔ)從句等說(shuō)明提出此建議的理由或原因。三、語(yǔ)篇模板Itisknowntousallthatnothingismoreimportantthantokeephealthy.[引出]Thewaysforustokeepfitcanbesuggestedasfollows.[列舉]Firstly,weshouldhaveahealthydiet,whichmeansavarietyoffoodincludingmeat,freshfruitsandvegetables.

Secondly,drinkmorewaterinsteadofalotofdrinks.Lastly,dosomeexerciseeveryday,suchasrunning,swimming,playingbasketballandsoon,fortheyhelptorelaxourselvesaswellasbenefitourhealthalot.二、根底寫(xiě)作假定你是李華。在一個(gè)英文網(wǎng)絡(luò)論壇上,你看到一個(gè)名叫Grown-up的中學(xué)生發(fā)帖(post)尋求幫助：[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]請(qǐng)根據(jù)以上帖子內(nèi)容,給Grow-up回貼,并包括以下要點(diǎn)：1.你對(duì)這一問(wèn)題的看法(已給出)；2.告訴Grown-up要理解而不要傷害母親；3.給Grown-up提出解決問(wèn)題的具體建議:多與母親交流;行動(dòng)上證明自己已成年。Hi,Grown-up，...Hi,Grown-up，Asastudentofyourage,Iunderstandyoursituationandtheproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongusteenagers.However,youshouldunderstandyourmotheranditiswisenottodoanythingthatmayhurtyourmother’sfeelings.[引出建議]Suggestionsonhowtodealwiththeproblemcanbelistedasfollows.[列舉建議]First，it’sadvisabletotalkmorewithyourmom，(理由)whichwillhelpyouunderstandeachotherbetter.Second，youshouldlearntodoyourownthingswellbyyourself，(理由)provingtoyourmomthatyouarealreadya“grown-up〞.It’sevenbetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework，(列舉)suchascleaning，washingandcooking.◆課堂練習(xí)假設(shè)你是小明的好朋友李華，小明參加了一個(gè)英語(yǔ)演講比賽，他比照賽非常擔(dān)憂(yōu)，向你求助，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給他寫(xiě)一封建議信。[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]1.說(shuō)明回信的意圖；2.向小明提出建議；3.預(yù)祝小明比賽成功。DearXiaoming，...Yours，LiHua[參考范文]DearXiaoming,YouhavetoldmethatyouareverynervousaboutthecomingspeechcontestandIwilltrytomakesomesuggestionswhichIhopecanhelpyou.Inmyopinion,youshouldgetwellpreparedbeforethespeechcontestbypracticingbeforeamirror.Besides,youhadbetteruseabriefandconcise〔簡(jiǎn)明的〕languageinyourspeechsothatyoucanleaveadeepimpressiononthejudges.Whenyouaregivingthespeech,remembertokeepsmileandevenifyouforgetyourwords,don’tbepanic〔驚慌的〕andjustcontinueyourspeech,becausenoonewillnoticeit.Wishyousuccessinthespeech! Yours， LiHua[精華點(diǎn)評(píng)]建議信的寫(xiě)作關(guān)鍵在于作者給出建議的語(yǔ)氣委婉而中肯,使對(duì)方容易接受。很多考生習(xí)慣使用祈使句或者Youshould的句型表示建議,這樣比較生硬，因此考生轉(zhuǎn)換不同的句型使語(yǔ)言豐富,如范文中使用了youshould...,youhadbetter...,remembertodo等句型。在最后祝愿對(duì)方成功的時(shí)候,可以用簡(jiǎn)明扼要的句型,如wishyougoodluck/wishyousuccess/mayyousucceed,使文章長(zhǎng)短句結(jié)合得當(dāng)?！舫孔x背誦1.covertopicslike...涵蓋的主題有……2.arouseone’sinterest激發(fā)某人的興趣3.getinvolvedin參與，涉及4.bewell-received廣受歡送5.makesomesuggestions提一些建議相關(guān)短語(yǔ)6.protectourenvironment保護(hù)我們的環(huán)境7.theenvironmentalpollution環(huán)境污染8.beofgreatbenefitto...對(duì)……大有好處9.getwell-prepared(for)(為……)做好充分的準(zhǔn)備10.takeresponsibilitytodosth.有責(zé)任做某事11.thecomingspeechcontest即將到來(lái)的演講比賽12.leaveadeepimpressionon給……留下深刻的印象13.takemysuggestionintoconsideration考慮我的建議14.havethechancetodosth.有時(shí)機(jī)做某事15.helpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish幫助學(xué)生提高英語(yǔ)水平1.Themainreasonisthatthepressurefromtheirparentsallowsthemalmostnotimeforotheractivities.其主要原因是父母的壓力使他們幾乎沒(méi)有時(shí)間參加其他活動(dòng)。2.ThereasonwhyI’mlateisthatImissedthebus.我遲到的原因是沒(méi)趕上公共汽車(chē)。相關(guān)句式3.Ilikeitverymuchmainlyfortworeasons.我喜歡它,主要有兩個(gè)原因。4.Inmyopinion,therearethreereasonsfor

this.在我看來(lái),有三個(gè)原因。5.Myviewsarebasedonthefollowing

reasons.我的觀(guān)點(diǎn)是基于以下理由。6.Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.其理由如下。7.SoIsuggestthatyoutakeyourfriends’advice.因此,我建議你接受你朋友的建議。8.HereIhavesomesuggestions.這里我有幾條建議。8.Itwouldbebetterifyoucouldsharemoreofthehousework,suchascleaning,washingandcooking.如果你能分擔(dān)更多的家務(wù),如掃地、洗衣、做飯,那就更好了?！艏记牲c(diǎn)撥1.在建議建議的寫(xiě)作中,應(yīng)開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山指出寫(xiě)作目的,陳述建議或建議的內(nèi)容。如：Iamwritingtogivesuggestionsabout...(建議信)或Inorderto...,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions(建議書(shū))。2.建議建議類(lèi)型的作文都有相關(guān)的一些固定句型,考生需要熟練掌握使用這些句型和相關(guān)的語(yǔ)法。比方,在句中使用到advise,suggest或advice,suggestion等表示建議的詞時(shí),要考慮到虛擬語(yǔ)氣的使用?！舻湫屠}廣州某電視臺(tái)打算開(kāi)辦一個(gè)面向中學(xué)生觀(guān)眾的英語(yǔ)節(jié)目,新聘任了來(lái)自英國(guó)的John作為節(jié)目編輯助理?，F(xiàn)在,John就節(jié)目?jī)?nèi)容向廣闊中學(xué)生征求意見(jiàn)。[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華,建議開(kāi)辦“廣州全接觸〞(All-roundGuangzhou)節(jié)目。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下節(jié)目設(shè)想給John寫(xiě)信：DearJohn，Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou〞....Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration. Sincerelyyours, LiHua[例題導(dǎo)寫(xiě)]確定文體。建議信屬于應(yīng)用文信件類(lèi)的范疇,寫(xiě)作的時(shí)候一般使用將來(lái)時(shí)或者一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。建議信在于給對(duì)方合理并且能夠接受的建議,考生應(yīng)該注意使用一些委婉的語(yǔ)氣。信息重組。我們可以把題中信息整合成以下5個(gè)漢語(yǔ)句子：1.節(jié)目包括廣州的歷史、教育、著名景點(diǎn)、飲食、名人。2.建議每周六、日舉辦，方便學(xué)生周末觀(guān)看。3.建議邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生參加節(jié)目,激發(fā)學(xué)生的收看興趣。4.這個(gè)可以使中學(xué)生更多地了解廣州文化,還有助于提高中學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)水平,這樣他們就能向外國(guó)游客介紹廣州。5.我肯定這個(gè)節(jié)目一定會(huì)收到中學(xué)生的歡送。詞語(yǔ)翻譯翻譯或完成以下詞或短語(yǔ)。句1：(1)包括……(節(jié)目)_____________(2)歷史，教育，景點(diǎn)，飲食，名人____________________________________________________________History,education,scenicspots/touristattractions,food,famouspeople/celebritiescover/include句3：(3)激發(fā)某人的興趣____________________________________句4：(4)提高英語(yǔ)水平______________________

句5：(5)受到歡送____________________________________________________________________________bepopularamong/withsb./bewell-receivedby/bewelcomedbyspark/stimulate/arouseone’sinterestimproveone’sEnglish難句翻譯翻譯以下每組句子并合并成一句。句2：(1)(這個(gè)節(jié)目將于)每周六、日(播放)。(1)Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekends./Isuggestthattheprogrambebroadcastonweekends./Itisagoodideatobroadcastitonweekends.(2)方便學(xué)生周末觀(guān)看。(2)Westudentscanhavethechancetowatchit./Itwillbeconvenientforusstudentstowatchit.合并：Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.(因果關(guān)系,可以使用so...that...句型)句3：(3)(你也可以)邀請(qǐng)中學(xué)生參加節(jié)目。(3)Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram.(4)(這個(gè)節(jié)目可以)提高學(xué)生的收看興趣。(4)Itwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.合并：

Youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedin/takepartintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouse/spark/stimulateotherstudents’interestinit.(補(bǔ)充說(shuō)明關(guān)系,可以使用which非限制性定語(yǔ)從句)句4：(5)(這個(gè)節(jié)目幫助)中學(xué)生可以更多地了解廣州文化。(5)ThisprogramcangetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhou.(6)(中學(xué)生可以)向外國(guó)游客介紹廣州。(6)ThestudentscanintroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(7)(這個(gè)節(jié)目)有助于提高中學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)水平。(7)ThisprogramhelpsstudentsimprovetheirEnglish.合并：

NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.(第5個(gè)句子和第7個(gè)句子是并列關(guān)系,因此我們可以用notonly...butalso...這組連詞把它們連接起來(lái),并且注意統(tǒng)一主語(yǔ),第6句是作者提出建議的原因,可以用soasto引導(dǎo)出目的狀語(yǔ)。)[參考范文]DearJohn，Iknowyou’regoingtosetupanEnglishprogramformiddleschoolstudents.SoI’mwritingtosuggestaprogram—“All-roundGuangzhou〞.Thisprogramwillcovertopicslikethehistory,education,famousscenicspots,foodandfamouspeopleofGuangzhou.Itwouldbebettertobroadcastitonweekendssothatwestudentscanhavethechancetowatchit.Besides,youcanalsoinvitesomemiddleschoolstudentstogetinvolvedintheprogram,whichwillsurelyarouseotherstudents’interestinit.NotonlywillthisprogramhelpstudentsimprovetheirEnglish,butalsogetthemtoknowmoreaboutthecultureofGuangzhousoastointroduceGuangzhoutoforeignvisitors.Iamsureitwillbewell-receivedbythemiddleschoolstudents.Ihopeyoucantakemysuggestionintoconsideration. Sincerelyyours, LiHua連句成篇?？忌丫渥雍喜⒊善碌臅r(shí)候,需要注意建議信常用的一些句型結(jié)構(gòu)。如在建議信開(kāi)頭表示來(lái)信的目的,如：Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceon...andIwilltrytomakesuggestions./Thanksfortrustingme./Regarding...,I’dliketomakesomesuggestions等句型。在表示建議的時(shí)候,考生可以使用Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialif.../Iwouldliketosuggestthat...等句型。另外,考生假設(shè)是使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣的句子IfIwereyou,Iwould...,也會(huì)讓文章增色不少。[能力提高]ToWhomItMayConcernAs1__studentofthisuniversity,Iwouldliketotaketheopportunitytoexpressmyappreciation2___yourkindassistanceasalways.Meanwhile,Ifeelthat3__wouldbe4_________(benefit)toexpressmyviews5____________(concern)thequalityofthelibraryservice.concerningaforitbeneficialInthefirstplace,Ifindthatmostkeyboardsofthelibrarycomputersareinpooroperation,6_____bringsmuchinconveniencetotheusers.Iwouldalsorecommendthelibrary7_________(improve)theefficiencyofbuyingnewbooksandacademicjournals.Last8____notleast,thestudyroomsneedtobefurnished9____abetterlightingsystem.Ihopethatyoutakemysuggestionsintoserious10____________(consider). Yourssincerely, Johnwhichtoimprove

but

withconsideration假設(shè)你是李華，你的美國(guó)筆友Linda來(lái)信說(shuō)她家搬到了一個(gè)新城市，她幾乎沒(méi)有朋友，每天除了上課就是在家上網(wǎng)，感覺(jué)很孤獨(dú)。請(qǐng)你給她寫(xiě)一封信，勸她多結(jié)交朋友，參加社會(huì)活動(dòng)。

DearLinda,

Iknowit’shardtostartanewlifeinastrangecity.However,juststayingathomedoingnothingbutsurftheInternetisnotgoodforyou.You’dbettergooutandjoininsomesocialactivities.Bydoingthis,youcangettoknowmorepeoplearound,anditwouldbeagoodideatohelpothersifpossibleandshowthemyouareopenandfriendlyaswell.

Withtimegoingon,peoplewillknowyoubetterandliketomakefriendswithyou.

Bestwishes!讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)閱讀下面的短文,然后按照要求寫(xiě)一篇150個(gè)詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文。ShiFangspendsmorethan4,000yuanamonthshopping,butsherarelygoestotheshoppingmall.“WhyneedashoppingmallifyouhaveTaobao?IamaTaobaoer,〞saysShi,28,afreelancewriter(自由作家)inBeijing.Taobao,China’slargestonlineshoppingsitehasbecomeanessentialpartofShiFang’slife.ShespendshalfofhermonthlysalarytoTaobao,loggingontothewebsiteeveryday,evenwhenshedoesn’tneedanything,simplyto“stayupdatedtothelatestitems〞.AgrowingnumberofChineseInternetuserslikeShihavediscoveredthejoysofonlineshopping.TheChinaInternetNetworkInformationCenter(CNNIC)announcedinDecemberthatmorethan87millionChinesemadepurchasesontheInternetinthefirsthalfyear,whichmeansoneoutoffourChinesenetizens(網(wǎng)民)haveonlineshoppingexperience.

Itisestimatedthattheannualconsumptionfromonlineshoppingwillreachmorethan250billionyuanthisyear,and80percentofthisiscarriedoutthroughTaobao.com,China’sfast-growinge-commercehub(電子商務(wù)中心)establishedin2003.

[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]1.以約30個(gè)詞概括短文的內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)；2.然后以約120個(gè)詞就“網(wǎng)購(gòu)〞為主題發(fā)表你的看法,內(nèi)容包括:(1)表達(dá)你自己或身邊朋友的一次網(wǎng)購(gòu)經(jīng)歷。(2)分析現(xiàn)實(shí)購(gòu)物與網(wǎng)購(gòu)的各自的好處。(3)對(duì)于購(gòu)物你有何建議?ThepassagemainlytellsusthatmoreandmorenetizensinChinalikeShiFangbuygoodsontheInternet,amongwhichTaobaoisthelargestonlineshoppingsite.Almosttwomonthsago,Iwantedtobuymymotherabirthdaypresent,butIdidn’thavemuchtimetogoshopping.IsurfedtheInternetandfoundapinkhandbagwhichIthoughtwouldfitmymotherperfectly.Ipaidandreceiveditsevendayslater.Tomydelight,mymotherlikeditverymuch.Thereisnodoubtthatshoppingonlinehassomeadvantages.Firstofall,it’squiteconvenienttoshoponlineforweneedn’tgofromoneshoptoanother,sowecansavelotsoftime.Inaddition,,shoppingonlineisalsocheaperandmorecolorfultousandtheInternetprovidesuswiththegoodscominginallshapes,sizesandcolors,whichcanmeetourdemands.

However,traditionalshoppingalsohasitsownbenefits.Foronething,ourpersonalinformationmaybeletoutwhenshoppingonline.Foranother,whengoingshoppinginperson,youcanexperiencethecolor,shape,andqualityofgoodsandenjoydiscussingyourchoiceswithfriends.Inmyopinion,shoppingontheInternetandbuyinginstoresarebothimportanttousinourdailylife.Weshouldconsidercarefullyandchoosewhatwewanttobuyaccordingourownsituations.

◆課外作業(yè)由于廢氣、污水、白色垃圾等環(huán)境污染已危及到人類(lèi)的健康與生存,為鼓勵(lì)大家節(jié)能環(huán)保,你們學(xué)校將舉辦一次“低碳行動(dòng)〞的環(huán)?；顒?dòng),假設(shè)你是高三6班的一名學(xué)生,將要在這個(gè)活動(dòng)中向全體師生發(fā)起“低碳生活〞的建議,以下是建議的內(nèi)容：1.盡量綠色出行：采取步行或自行車(chē)方式;2.少喝一次瓶裝水；3.盡量不用一次性制品,如一次性木筷子和塑料袋；4.每周至少手洗衣服一次；5.每周少開(kāi)、電視一天。[寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容]1.活動(dòng)背景;2.建議目的;3.建議內(nèi)容。Helloeveryone,IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree....Ibelieveeveryone,asamemberofthisglobalvillage,shouldtakeresponsibilitytotakepartintheglobalgreencampaign![參考范文]IamLiHuafromClassSix,SeniorThree.Wehumanbeingsareseriouslythreatenedby

theenvironmentalpollution,suchaswastegases,dirtywaterandwhitepollution.Inordertoencourageallofustosaveenergyandprotectourenvironment,Iamgoingtomakethefollowingsuggestions.Itissuggestedthatweshouldwalkortakebikesifwegoout.Toavoidwhitepollution，wecanreducetheuseofbottledwaterandunrecyclabl