讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)（硬幣勾起難忘回憶）+講義 高三英語(yǔ)二輪復(fù)習(xí)

讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)

閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。閱讀下面短文，根據(jù)所給情節(jié)進(jìn)行續(xù)寫(xiě)，使之構(gòu)成一個(gè)完整的故事。Iwasdoingabigclean-uprecentlyandmykidswerehelpingwhenmy

son,Freddo,cameacrossaknottedhandkerchiefwithanolddarkbrown

coin

inside."Mum,canIhavethis?CanIplaywiththiscoin"heasked.Itookonelookandwasimmediatelytransportedtoanothertime.In1991,therewasatimewhenmyfriendandIworkedinabackwardAfricancountry,Niger,hitbysandstormsandburningheat.ThereweremanythingsIfounddifficultaboutthisplace--theclimateand

beggars

weremybiggestheadaches.Soafterfinishingfivemonthsofnursingworkthere,wemovedontoworkatahealthclinicinneighbouringcountry,BurkinaFaso."It'smuchgreenerin

Burkina.EventheCoketastesbetter"thelocalsassuredus.Yetthefactwasquitetheopposite.ArrivingbytaxiatourdestinationinBurkina,webegantounload.Iwasreachingformylargerpieceofluggagewhen,outofthedarkness,amotorbikewithtwomenapproachedslowly.Withoutwarning,oneofthemengrabbedmydaypackasthemotorbikesweptcloseby.Withinseconds,thepairwereoutofsight,swallowedupbythenight.Withmypassport,money,traveller'schequesallinthebag,Iwasindeeptrouble.Howfrustrating!AllIwantedwastoleavethishellhole!Then,walkingthroughBurkina'sstreetsoneday,Iwasstoppedbyanold

woman

whothrustherhandinmyface."Cadeau

('gift'inFrench)!Cadeau!”shecried.I'dhadenough!Iwasextremely

tired

ofthecountry:its

poverty,itsthieves,theheat,thedustand...everything!ItoldherangrilyandfirmlyinFrench,“Ihaveno'Cadeau'.Ihavenomoney.AthiefstoleallmymoneytwoweeksagoandnowIcan'tgetoutofyourcountry.Icannotgiveyouanything.NOTHING!’Thebeggarwomanlistenedattentively.Tomygreat

surprise,afterhearingmywords,shegaveabroad

smile.注意：

1．所續(xù)寫(xiě)的短文的詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150詞左右；2．應(yīng)使用5個(gè)以上短文中標(biāo)有下劃線的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)；3．續(xù)寫(xiě)部分分為兩段，每段的開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)已為你寫(xiě)好；4．續(xù)寫(xiě)完成后，請(qǐng)用下劃線標(biāo)出你所使用的關(guān)鍵詞語(yǔ)。Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

【參考答案】Shereachedintothepocketsofherdress.

“ThenIwillgiveyoua

cadeau,”sheannounced.Kindly,sheplacedan

old

darkbrowncoininmyhand.Insurprise,Ilookedat

thecoin,thenatthe

woman.Atthatmoment,Ifeltratherashamed,ashamedofmyterribleattitudetowardstheoldwoman.Inspiteofher

poverty,shewasabletogivemesomethingpriceless.Ihadtakenitforgrantedthat

beggars

wouldonlyreceivesomethingfromothers,yetthecoinfromthebeggarwomanin

Burkina

trulychangedmyview

towardsthem,andher

smile

hitthedeepestofmyheart.Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

“Mum,canIhave

this?CanIplaywiththis

coin?”herepeated.“Youcan't

playwithit,honey.”Itouchedmy

son

ontheheadandsaid

slowly,“Thisone'sspecial.Itisanunforgettablepreciousmemorytome.Comeandletmetellyouastory."Version1Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Shetookabunchofmoney,countingitcarefully,andthentomysurprise,shehandeditalltomewithouthesitation.Thatisobviouslyallshehad!Ithoughttomyself.ItwasnotuntilthendidIrealizetherewerenotonlypovertyandthieves,butalsokindnessandloveinthiscountry.IwasrootedtothespotandthenIhugthewomantightly,withmytearsburstingout.“Thanks!”Isobbed.

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Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

Iwasimmediatelypulledbackintothereality.ItoldthisStorytomyson.“Withoutthesemoney,Momcan’tgohome.”Iendedmstorywiththesewords.“Sheisreallyakindwoman!”saidmyson.Staringatthecoin,hiseyessuddenlylitup.“Iwanttobeakindpersonlikeher!”Itriedtofightbacktears,onlytofindmyselfburyingmyfacetomyson’ssshoulder.“Momisproudofyou,honey.”Actually,whenyouaredown,itisloveandkindnessthatwillserveasabunchoflight,drivingawaythedarkness.

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Version2Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Smilestillhangingonherface,shetookoutsomecoinsfromherdress.Curioustoknowwhatshewoulddo,Istaredatherface.Then,thewomangraspedmyhands,puttingthecoinsonmyhandsfirmly.Awarmglowcrossingmyheart,itwaslikeagentlebreezesweepingmyinnerheart.Howkindshewas!Thoughshewasasslenderasanoldbranch,shewaswillingtogiveherownmoneytohelpme.ItwasatthatmomentthatIrealizedthekindnessinthiscountry.

Iwasoverwhelmedwiththewarmmemory.

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Therewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.Hiseyeswereshiningwithdelight.Ikneltdownsaying“ofcourseyoucanhaveit.”Withhappiness,Itoldhimthestoryaboutthecoin,sayinghowmeaningfulthecoinwasforme.Theboyjumpedwithexcitement,promisinghewouldcherishit.Sincethewomangaveittome,theoldfigurealwayscrowdedinonme,remindingmetospreadthekindnesstoothers.Ihopemysoncouldunderstandit,whichenablesustofindhappinesssurroundingus.(80words)

Version3Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Curiousandangry,Istoodthere,wantingtoknowwhatshewasdoing.Sheheldmyhand,putsomethinginit.Tomysurprise,itwasacoin.Ilookedatherconfusedly.”ItisallthatIhave.”Shesaid,withasmileonherface.”Takeitandbuysomethingwithit.”Whatshesaidwasjustlikepinshittingmyheart.Anoldpoorwomangaveoutallshehavejusttohelpastrangerintrouble.ItwasthefirsttimethatIfeltwarmthinthiscountry.”Thankyou.”Iexpressedmygratitudetoher,tearsrollingdownmycheeks.

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Thesewasaslighttouchonmyhand;lookingdown,Isawmysonlookingatme,curious.

Itookthecoin,andthekindnessthatnightstruckmeagain.“No,youcan’tplaywithit.It’sveryimportanttome.”“Why?Itisjustacoin!”Hesaidcuriously.“Right,itisjustacommoncoin,butitmeansalottome.Thekindnessandwarmthithaschangedmylife.”Itoldthestorytomyson,givinghimanothercointohim.Thirtyyearsago,theoldwomanplantedkindnessinmyheart.Andnow,Iplantthekindnessinmyson’sheartwiththesamecoin.Finally,Iputthecoinintoametalbox,placingitonmydesktoremindmyselfalwaysbekindtoothersnomatterhowrichorhowpooryouare.

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Version4Shereachedintothepocketofherdress.

Ididn’thearthesoundwhenonecoinhittheother.Itseemedthatshewashavingahardtimeherself.Finally,shetookherhandoutandcaughtmyhand,puttingabrowncoininmyhand.Icouldn’tbelievemyeyes.Shewasold,poor,maybealsoill.Andthiscoinmightbeherlastmoney.Iturnedmyheaduptolookintohereyes.Shewatchedmewarmlylikeamother