高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)分類訓(xùn)練萬(wàn)能句型及模板

高考英語(yǔ)書(shū)面表達(dá)分類訓(xùn)練萬(wàn)能句型及模板(權(quán)威資料)一提高作文必背句型背誦下列語(yǔ)句常用文章開(kāi)頭的句型：1．Itiswell-knownthat眾所周知，……。2．Thereisnodoubtthat毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，……。3．Somepeopleclaimthat有人認(rèn)為……。4．Itisgenerallybelievedthat普遍認(rèn)為……。5．Itiswidelyacceptedthat普遍認(rèn)為……。6.Currentlythereisawidespreadconcernover...現(xiàn)在，人們普遍關(guān)注的問(wèn)題是……。7．Withtherapidgrowingpopularityof...,thequalityofourliveshasbeenconsiderablychanged.隨著……的快速普及，我們的生活質(zhì)量已經(jīng)發(fā)生了極大變化。8．Withthedevelopmentof...,anincreasingnumberofpeoplecometorealizethat..隨著……的發(fā)展，越來(lái)越多的人意識(shí)到……。9．Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtorealizethat...正在越來(lái)越多的人逐漸意識(shí)到……。10．SomepeoplethinkthatTobefrank,Icannotagreewiththeiropinionforthereasonsbelow.有人認(rèn)為……，坦率地說(shuō)，我不同意他們的觀點(diǎn)，理由如下。11．Foryears,...hasbeenseenas...,butthingsarequitedifferentnow.多年以來(lái)，……一直被看著是……，但現(xiàn)在情況大不一樣了。12．Lastweek,wemade/conducted/carriedoutasurveyabout...上周，我們做了一項(xiàng)關(guān)于……的調(diào)查。13．Recentlywehavehadadiscussionover...最近我們討論了……這個(gè)問(wèn)題。14．Accordingtoarecentsurvey,fourmillionpeopledieeachyearfromdiseaseslinkedtosmoking.依照最近的一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，每年有4000000人死于與吸煙有關(guān)的疾病。15．Thelatestsurveysshowthatquiteafewchildrenhaveunpleasantassociationswithhomework.最近的調(diào)查顯示相當(dāng)多的孩子對(duì)家庭作業(yè)沒(méi)什么好感。常用于文章正文的句型：1．People’sviewson...varyfrompersontoperson.人們對(duì)……的觀點(diǎn)因人而異。2．Asapopularsayinggoes,“Everycoinhastwosides.”常言道，“事物都是一分為二的?！?．Asaproverbsays,“Nopains,nogains”．俗話說(shuō)，“不勞則無(wú)獲?！?．Contrarytothepopularthought,Iprefer與普遍的想法正相反，我更喜歡……。5．IcannotentirelyagreewiththeideathatIbelieve….我不完全贊同這樣的一個(gè)觀點(diǎn)……，我認(rèn)為……。6．Thereisnodenyingthefactthat...不可否認(rèn)，……。7．Beforegivingmyopinion,Ithinkitisessentialtolookattheargumentofbothsides.在提出我自己的觀點(diǎn)之前，我們有必要了解正反雙方爭(zhēng)論的焦點(diǎn)。8．Itishightimethatweplacedgreatemphasisontheimprovementof…到了改進(jìn)……的時(shí)候了。9．Itishightimethatweputanendto...到了結(jié)束……的時(shí)候了。10．Thereisnoeasysolutiontotheproblemof...,but...mightbeuseful.對(duì)……這一問(wèn)題，沒(méi)有輕松解決的辦法，但……或許有所益處。11．Itisessentialthateffectivemeasuresshouldbetakentopreventthesituation.有必要采取有效措施來(lái)阻止形勢(shì)進(jìn)一步惡化。12．Itissuggestedthatgreateffortsshouldbemadetocontrolthegrowthof...建議盡力控制出……的增長(zhǎng)。13．Itishopedthatgreateffortsshouldbefocusedon...人們希望在……方面做出努力。常用于文章結(jié)尾的句型：1．Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemaysafelydrawtheconclusionthat根據(jù)上述討論，我們可以得出結(jié)論，……。2．Takingintoaccountallthefactors,wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat考慮到各個(gè)因素，我們可以得出結(jié)論，……。3．Judgingfromalltheevidenceoffered,wemaysafelyarriveat/reachtheconclusionthat根據(jù)所提供的證據(jù)來(lái)判斷，我們可得出結(jié)論，……。4．Alltheevidencesupportsasoundconclusionthat所有證據(jù)都支持這樣一個(gè)結(jié)論，……。5．Tosumup,wefindthat總之，我們認(rèn)為……。6．Inshort/brief/conclusion/aword,簡(jiǎn)言之，……。表達(dá)個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的句型：1．AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththelatteropiniontosomeextent.就我個(gè)人而言，我贊同第二個(gè)觀點(diǎn)。2．AsfarasIamconcerned,Iamreally/completelyinfavorofthepolicy.就我個(gè)人而言，我完全支持這項(xiàng)政策。3．Inmyopinion/view,weshould我認(rèn)為我們應(yīng)該……。4．Asforme,I．...至于我，我……。5．Frommypointofview,我認(rèn)為……。6．Personally,Ithink我個(gè)人認(rèn)為……。7．Myviewisthat我的觀點(diǎn)是……。8．Iholdanegative/positiveviewof我對(duì)……持反對(duì)/肯定態(tài)度。9．Contrarytogenerallyacceptedviews,Iarguethat...與普遍的觀點(diǎn)相反，我認(rèn)為……。10．Itwouldbenaturaltothinkthat...,butitwouldbeabsurdtoclaimthat...人們很自然地認(rèn)為，……，但據(jù)此就以為……卻是很愚蠢的。11．Atfirstthought,itmayseemanattractiveidea,butonsecondthought,wefindthat...乍一看，這個(gè)觀點(diǎn)很有吸引力，但再一想，我們發(fā)現(xiàn)……。圖表作文常用句型：1．Thetable/diagram/graphshows/describes/reflectsthat該圖表表明/描述/反映了……。2．Asisshowninthechart,...hasbeenontheincrease/decrease.此圖表表明，……一直在增加/減少。3．Accordingtothefiguresgivenbythegraph,thenumberof...hasbeenrisingsteadily.從圖表給出的數(shù)據(jù)看，……的數(shù)量在穩(wěn)步增長(zhǎng)。4．Thedata/figureslead(s)ustotheconclusionthat這些數(shù)據(jù)可以讓我們得出這樣的結(jié)論，……。5．Asisshown/exhibitedinthediagram/graph/table，正如圖表中所展現(xiàn)的那樣，……。6．Itisclear/apparentfromthetable/diagram/figuresthat該圖表清楚地表明，……。7．A,whichaccountsfor...%,ranksthefirst;nextinlineisBwith...%,followedbyC,makingup...%;finallyD,E,Fat...%，...%and...%respectively.A占了……%，位居第一，第二位是B，占……%，接下來(lái)是C，占……%，最后是D、E、F，分別占……%……%……%。話題一：中學(xué)生的興趣愛(ài)好

Spare

time,

hobby,

entertainment,

be

interested

in,

have

special

favor

to,

be

fond

of,

be

keen

on,

have

a

taste

in,

read

novels,

surf

the

Internet,

chat

online,

collect

stamps,

doing

sports,

develop

an

interest

in,

play

musical

instrument話題二：中學(xué)生健康

Physical

health,

mental

health,

overweight,slim,

thin,

loose

weight,

near\short

sighted,

energetic,

be

on

diet,

keep

healthy,

build

up

one’s

body,

take

regular

exercise,

good

living

habit,

get

into

the

habit

of,

nutrition,

nutritious,

eat

snacks,

skip

breakfast,

lose

appetite,

catch

cold\flu,

suffer

from

serious

disease,

pass

out,

runny

nose,

toothache,

dentist,

homesick,

depressed,

stay

up

all

night,

relaxation,

reduce

pressure話題三：勞動(dòng)、求職與就業(yè)

offer

service

to,

heart

and

soul(一心一意）,

physical

labor,

mental

labor,

honorable（光榮的）,

earn

pocket

money,part-timejob,full-timejob，enlarge

one’s

knowledge,

get

working

experience,

apply

for,

major

in,

graduate

from,

degree,

scholarship,

be

skilled

in,

confident,

experienced,

perform

well

in

school,

leadership,

communicative,

cooperative,

competitive,

diligent話題四：校園文明與安全

School

rules

and

regulations,

obey,

be

neatly

dressed（衣著整潔）,

respect

one’s

teachers

and

parents,

be

on

time,

keep

the

environment

clean,

break

the

rules,

spit,litter,

cheat

in

exam,

get

in

line（排隊(duì)）,

punish

sb.

for,

it’s

shameful

to,

library

card,

student

ID,

permit,

be

absent

from,話題五：友誼

Make

friends

with,

friendship,

friendly,

trust

each

other,

honesty,

knowledgeable,

standard,

precious,

be

loyal

to,

keep

in

touch

with,

keep

company

with

sb,

have

a

lot

in

common,

share

happiness

and

bitterness

with

each

other,

treasure,

good-tempered，A

friend

is

a

present

which

you

give

yourself.

A

life

without

a

friend

is

a

life

without

a

sun.話題六：環(huán)境保護(hù)

Pollution,

protect

the

environment,

give

off

a

bad

smell,

send

out

smoke

and

poisonous

gases

into

the

air,

pour

waste

water

into

the

river,

cut

down

trees,

throw

litter,

sandstorm,

global

warming,

Green

House

Effect,

live

in

harmony

with,

take

proper

measures

to,

improve

the

environment,

pose

a

great

threat

to,

die

out,be

endangered,

become

extinct,

species,

be

from

bad

to

worse,

Spring

up

like

mushrooms,

flood

into記住下列模板模板1：一般信件Dear________，Iarrivedsafelybackin________.Thanksagainforallyourhelpandkindnessduringmystayin________.YoureallymadesureIhadasafeandenjoyabletime.Ihopeyouarewellandeverythingisfinewithyou.Unfortunately,Ihaveaverysmallfavortoask.________(事情描述).________(必須做的原因).Iwonderifyouwouldmind________.Ofcourse,Iwillhappily________(你的回報(bào)).________(事情應(yīng)怎樣做).Thanksinadvance.Yours,LiHua模板2：求職信Dear________，Ihavelearntfromyesterday’snewspaperthatyouareemployinga/an________.Iwishtobeconsideredasanapplicantfortheposition,andbegtostatemyqualificationsasfollows:Iam________yearsold,aseniorstudentof________performanceandhavebeenawardedfirstclassscholarshipeachyear.Inadditiontomyeducationalbackground,Ihavetherichworkexperienceinthefieldsof________.Therefore,IbelieveIcanbeofvaluetoyourcompany.Enclosedismyresumeforyourreference,andIshallbegladtocallatyourofficeifyoudesireaninterview.Thankyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua模板3：觀點(diǎn)對(duì)比Thetopicabout________isbecomingincreasinglypopularinourschool.Therearetwosidesofopinionaboutit.Somestudentsprefertoconsider________(做某事).Somestudentssay________istheirfavorite.Theythinkthat________(理由一).What’smore,________(理由二).Moreover,________(理由三).However,othersbelieve________isabetterchoiceforthreereasons.Tobeginwith,________(理由一).Next,________(理由二).Inaddition,________(理由三).Frommypointofview,theformerissurelyawisechoice.Thereasonisthat________(AsfarasIamconcerned,Ifirmlysupporttheviewthat________.)模板4：解決方法題型Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaseriousproblemthat________.First,________(說(shuō)明問(wèn)題的現(xiàn)狀)．Second,________(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀).Confrontedwiththeproblem,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,______(解決方法一).Foranother,______(解決方法二).Finally,______(解決方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat________(我的解決方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause________(帶來(lái)的好處)．模板5：說(shuō)明利弊題型Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer_______(某事物)becauseithasasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.First______(優(yōu)點(diǎn)之一).Besides,______(優(yōu)點(diǎn)之二).Buteverycoinhastwosides.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat________(缺點(diǎn)一)．Tomakemattersworse,________(缺點(diǎn)二).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsoverweighthenegativeones.Therefore,Iwouldliketo________(我的看法)．模板6：圖表作文Asisshownbythefigureinthetable,________hasbeenontherise/decrease.Fromthesharprise/declineinthechart,itgoeswithoutsayingthat________.Thereareatleasttwogoodreasonsaccountingfor________.Ontheonehand,________.Ontheotherhand,________duetothefactthat________.Inaddition,________isresponsiblefor________.Maybetherearesomeotherreasonstoshow________.Butitisgenerallybelievedthattheabovementionedreasonsarecommonlyconvincing.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iholdthepointofviewthat________.Iamsuremyopinionisbothsoundandwell-grounded.模板7：話題作文Nowadays,therearemoreandmore________in________.Itisestimatedthat________.Whyhavetherebeensomany________？Maybethereasonscanbelistedasfollows.Thefirstreasonisthat________.Besides,________.Thethirdoneisthat________.Tosumup,themaincauseofitisdueto________.Itishightimethatsomethinghadtobedoneaboutit.Foronething,______.Foranother,_______.Allthesemeasureswillcertainlyreducethenumberof________.1.

涌入

flood

into

2.

雨后春筍般涌現(xiàn)

spring

up

3.

呈現(xiàn)出新面貌

take

on

a

new

look

4.

實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想

realize

one’s

dream

5.

被欺騙

be

taken

in

6.

阻止

prevent

from

7.

實(shí)現(xiàn)人生價(jià)值

achieve

the

worth

of

one’s

life

8.

名勝古跡

places

of

interest

9.

國(guó)內(nèi)外知名

be

famous

at

home

and

abroad

10.浪費(fèi)時(shí)間的

time-consuming

11.

充實(shí)自我

enrich

oneself

12.

致力于

devote

to

13.

感激

be

grateful

for

14.

精心打扮

be

dressed

up

15.

贊美

speak

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of翻譯下列句子1．不用說(shuō)早睡早起是值得的。_________________________________________________________________________2．我深信預(yù)防勝于治療。_________________________________________________________________________3．在各種運(yùn)動(dòng)中，我尤其喜歡慢跑。_________________________________________________________________________4．時(shí)間最珍貴是很容易證明的。_________________________________________________________________________5．就我所知，下列方法對(duì)我?guī)椭艽?。_________________________________________________________________________6．毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，近視在我國(guó)的年輕人中是一個(gè)嚴(yán)重的問(wèn)題。_________________________________________________________________________7．根據(jù)我個(gè)人經(jīng)驗(yàn)，微笑已帶給我許多好處。_________________________________________________________________________8．在我的求學(xué)過(guò)程中，我忘不了學(xué)習(xí)英文所遇到的大困難。_________________________________________________________________________9．隨著臺(tái)灣經(jīng)濟(jì)的快速發(fā)展，許多社會(huì)問(wèn)題產(chǎn)生了。_________________________________________________________________________10．在這信息的年代，計(jì)算機(jī)扮演非常重要的角色。_________________________________________________________________________11．世上沒(méi)有什么比到快餐店吃漢堡更令我高興的。_________________________________________________________________________12．我們保持公共場(chǎng)所清潔是應(yīng)當(dāng)?shù)?。_________________________________________________________________________13．每當(dāng)我想到我家附近那一條清澈的小溪，我就忍不住感到悲傷。_________________________________________________________________________14．一般相信閱讀增加我們的知識(shí)、擴(kuò)大我們的心胸。_________________________________________________________________________15．青少年犯罪的主要理由是社會(huì)環(huán)境日益敗壞。_________________________________________________________________________16．俗話說(shuō)得好：誠(chéng)實(shí)為上策。_________________________________________________________________________17．人們學(xué)外語(yǔ)有三個(gè)理由。_________________________________________________________________________18．為了維護(hù)健康，我們每天至少可做三件事。_________________________________________________________________________19．我們生活需要有規(guī)律。也就是說(shuō)，早睡早起，戒除煙酒。_________________________________________________________________________20．基于這個(gè)理由，我已決定把行醫(yī)作為未來(lái)的職業(yè)。_________________________________________________________________________21．事實(shí)上，健康才是最重要的。_________________________________________________________________________22．此外，我們不應(yīng)忽視每個(gè)人都想要一個(gè)溫馨祥和的社會(huì)。_________________________________________________________________________23．相反，少數(shù)學(xué)生似乎還在鬼混。_________________________________________________________________________24．政府應(yīng)嚴(yán)格執(zhí)法，另一方面，大眾也應(yīng)該培養(yǎng)減少污染的好習(xí)慣。_________________________________________________________________________25．換言之，我會(huì)盡最大的努力完成我的目標(biāo)。_________________________________________________________________________26．從此之后，我已發(fā)現(xiàn)微笑是日常生活中避免沖突的最好辦法。_________________________________________________________________________27．更嚴(yán)重的是，我們不珍惜野生動(dòng)物。_________________________________________________________________________28．做這些簡(jiǎn)單之事，我們一定可以快樂(lè)出門平安回家。_________________________________________________________________________29．唯有通力合作，我們才能期望臺(tái)灣不久有新的面貌。_________________________________________________________________________30．最后，但并非最不重要，教育上的缺失是助長(zhǎng)青少年犯罪的原因。_________________________________________________________________________31．總而言之，好國(guó)民應(yīng)該遵守交通規(guī)則。_________________________________________________________________________32．因此，我們能下個(gè)結(jié)論，那就是世上自由最珍貴。_________________________________________________________________________33．如果我們能做到如上所述，毫無(wú)疑問(wèn)，我們就能精通英語(yǔ)。_________________________________________________________________________35．中國(guó)在世界上人口最多，占到了20%，其次是印度，占到17%。_________________________________________________________________________34．根據(jù)一項(xiàng)調(diào)查，中國(guó)學(xué)生半數(shù)以上患有近視，位居世界第一。_________________________________________________________________________二快速升格你的作文使用高級(jí)詞匯常用到的高級(jí)詞匯例如：“此外”：addition,furthermore“同樣地”inthesameway→likewise,similarly,equally,incomparison“然而”however→incontrast,ontheotherhand,onthecontrary“因?yàn)椤眀ecauseof→dueto,owingto,onaccountof,thanksto,asaresultof“雖然”though/although→despitethefactthat,inspiteofthefactthat“總之”inaword/inshort/allinall→inbrief,insummary,tosumup,tosummarize,toconclude“現(xiàn)今”today/now→nowadays,currently“同時(shí)”should→besupposedto“有時(shí)候”sometimes→occasionally又如：beinterestedin→becrazyabout;beabsorbedin;verygood→perfectlygood;mostof...→themajorityof...bemadeupof→consistof;as/solongas→onconditionthat;tryone’sbesttodo...→sparenoefforttodo...;growfast→growrapidly/growamazinglyfast再如：SuddenlyIhadanideathatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.→AnideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouseThankyouverymuchforyouhelp.→Weappreciateyourhelpverymuch.PlentyofmemoryworkisundoubtedlyhelpfultoEnglishstudy.→PlentyofmemoryworkwillundoubtedlycontributetoEnglishstudy.2.用短語(yǔ)代替單詞例如：Asaresult,theplanwas/turnedouttobeafailure.ShewenttoAustriatostudy/forthepurposeofstudyingmusic.Becausetheweatherwasgood/Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourneywascomfortable.Shecan’tcorrectlypronounce/hastroublepronouncingtheword.使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)1.改變語(yǔ)態(tài)Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(一般)Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高級(jí))2.使用不定式Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(一般)Heissokindastohelpme.(高級(jí))3.使用過(guò)去分詞Shewalkedoutofthelabandmanystudentsfollowedher.(一般)Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutofthelab.(高級(jí))4.使用V-ing形式Whenhearrives,pleasegivemeane-mail.(一般)Onarriving/hisarrival,pleasegivemeane-mail.(高級(jí))5.使用名詞性從句Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(一般)Thefactthathedidn’tturnupdisappointedeverybody.(高級(jí))6.使用定語(yǔ)從句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(一般)Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenisspokenhighlyof.(高級(jí))7.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句①Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(一般)Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan.(高級(jí))②ThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(一般)WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.(高級(jí))③Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell.(一般)Howgladweweretoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingwell!(高級(jí))添加過(guò)渡語(yǔ)1.表示時(shí)間、順序關(guān)系的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)foronething,foranother,shortlyafterwards,afterthat,firstly,secondly...,then,next,finally,eventually,intheend2.表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)besides,furthermore,what’smore,inaddition,moreover,worsestill,tomakemattersworse,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall,aswell3.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)but,yet,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,otherwise,while,afterall4.表示對(duì)比關(guān)系的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand...ontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,inthesameway,atthesametime,meanwhile5.表示解釋、說(shuō)明關(guān)系的過(guò)渡語(yǔ)namely(也就是),actually,suchas,forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothis使用套語(yǔ)1.陳述原因1)Therearethreereasonsforthis.2)Thereasonsforthisareasfollows.3)Therearethreereasonsthataccountforthisphenomenon.例如：Therearethreereasonsforthechangesthathavetakenplaceinourlife.Firstly，people’slivingstandardhasbeengreatlyimproved.Secondly，mostpeoplearewellpaid,andtheycanaffordwhattheyneedorlike.Lastbutnotleast，moreandmorepeopleprefertoenjoymodernlife.2.陳述重要性、必要性、可能性或困難1)Itisimportant(necessary，difficult，convenient,possible)forsb.todosth.2)Wethinkitnecessarytodosth.3)Itplaysanimportantroleinourlife.例如：Computersarenowbeingusedeverywhere，whetherinthegovernment，inschoolsorinbusiness.Soon,computerswillbefoundineveryhome，too.WehavegoodreasontosaythatcomputersareplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourlifeandwehavesteppedintotheComputerAge.3.陳述變化1)Somechangeshavetakenplaceinthepastfiveyears.2)Agreatchangewillcertainlybeproducedintheworld’scommunications.3)Thecomputerhasbroughtaboutmanychangesineducation.例如：Somechangeshavetakenplaceinpeople’sdietinthepastfiveyears.Themajorreasonsforthesechangesarenotfartoseek.Nowadays，moreandmorepeopleareswitchingfromgraintomeatforprotein，andfromfruitandvegetabletomilkforvitamins.4.提出方法措施1)Weshouldtakesomeeffectivemeasures.2)Weshouldtryourbesttoovercome(conquer)thedifficulties.3)Weshoulddoourutmostindoingsth.4)Weshouldsolvetheproblemsthatweareconfronted(faced)with.例如：Thehousingproblemthatweareconfrontedwithisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.Thereforewemusttakesomeeffectivemeasurestosolveit.5.進(jìn)行比較1)ComparedwithA，B...2)IprefertoreadratherthanwatchTV.3)Thereisastrikingcontrastbetweenthem.例如：Comparedwithcars，bicycleshaveseveraladvantagesbesidesbeingaffordable.Firstly，theydonotconsumenaturalresourcesofpetroleum.Secondly，theydonotcausethepollutionproblem.Lastbutnotleast，theycontributetopeople’shealthbygivingthemduephysicalexercise.使用諺語(yǔ)1.Thetruevalueoflifeisnotinwhatwegetbutinwhatwegive.人生的價(jià)值不在于索取，而在于奉獻(xiàn)。2.Lifeisnotallroses.人生并非處處鳥(niǎo)語(yǔ)花香。3.Ifwintercomes,canspringbefarbehind？冬天來(lái)了，春天還會(huì)遠(yuǎn)嗎？4.AllroadsleadtoRome.條條道路通羅馬。5.Itisnevertoolatetomend.亡羊補(bǔ)牢，為時(shí)未晚。6.Wherethereisawill,thereisaway.有志者事竟成。7.Rome8.Failureisthemotherofsuccess.失敗是成功之母。9.Wellbegunishalfdone.良好的開(kāi)端是成功的一半。10.Strikewhiletheironishot.趁熱打鐵。11.Helaughsbestwholaughslast.笑在最后，笑得最好。12.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。13.Afriendinneedisafriendindeed.患難見(jiàn)真交。14.Actionsspeaklouderthanwords.事實(shí)勝于雄辯。15.Allthatglittersisnotgold.發(fā)光的未必都是金子。16.Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps.觀其交友，知其為人。17.AllworkandnoplaymakesJackadullboy.只工作不玩耍，聰明的孩子也變傻。18.Easiersaidthandone.說(shuō)來(lái)容易做時(shí)難。19.It’snevertoolatetolearn.活到老，學(xué)到老。20.Opportunityknocksatthedooronlyonce.機(jī)不可失，時(shí)不再來(lái)。滿分作文欣賞1作文題目：美國(guó)中學(xué)生Jeff將要來(lái)你所在的紅星中學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)中文，經(jīng)協(xié)商安排住在你家。假設(shè)你是李華，請(qǐng)給Jeff寫一封信，按照下圖順序介紹他來(lái)中國(guó)后的生活安排。注意：詞數(shù)不少于120。滿分作文：MynameisLiHuaandIamwritingtointroducemyselftoyouandletyouknowmoreaboutyourupcomingstayinChina.MyfamilyandIareveryexcitedtohaveyoucometostaywithus!IamastudentatHongxingMiddleSchoolstudying.WewillbeabletorideourbikestoschooltogethereverydayandIcanintroduceyoutomanyactivitiesavailableoncampussuchasping-pong,basketballandsoccer.There’salargedininghalloncampusforlunch.ThemealsthereareverydeliciousandagoodintroductiontoChinesefood.Atourhouse,youwillhaveyourownbedroomandbathroom.Mymomanddadhopeyouwillhaveacomfortablestayhere.Anideaoccurredtomethatsomeonehadbrokenintomyhouse.WelookforwardtowelcomingyoutoChinaandourhome.Pleaseletmeknowifyouwouldliketoknowanythingelsebeforeyouarrive. Kindregards,LiHua亮點(diǎn)分析：文章涵蓋了四幅圖畫的所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，使用了較復(fù)雜的語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)和較高級(jí)的詞匯，沒(méi)有任何語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤。段落劃分合理，內(nèi)容條理，結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊。語(yǔ)言地道，如upcomingstay,cometostaywithus,manyactivitiesavailable,agoodintroductionto等。復(fù)雜語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)，如whereyouwillalsobestudying,lookforwardtowelcomingyoutoChina等。2作文題目：假設(shè)你是新華中學(xué)的學(xué)生李華，得知某英文報(bào)招聘兼職記者，你有意應(yīng)聘，請(qǐng)按下列要點(diǎn)給報(bào)社寫一封自薦信。表示感興趣說(shuō)明優(yōu)勢(shì)：知識(shí)面、英語(yǔ)水平、合作精神、相關(guān)經(jīng)歷希望得到回復(fù)注意：詞數(shù)不少于120。滿分作文：DearSirorMadam,IamintheninthgradeatXinhuateachertoldmethatyourmagazineislookingforpart-timereporters.IbelieveIhavetherightskillsandenoughmotivationtotakeonthejob.IworkedasavolunteerattheCommonWealthGamesinAustralialastspring.Therefore,IhadexperienceofworkinginEnglishandinteractingwithpeoplewithdifferentbackgrounds.Infact,Imadefriendswithpeopleworldwide.Ialsohadachancetopracticeteamabilities.WhenIcamebacktoChina,Iwroteafront-pagestoryaboutmytripforourschoolnewspaper.Istandoutamongmypeersbykeepingastronginterestinlearningthingsbeyondmytextbooks.Byreadingnewspapersdaily,Iamabletofollowtheimportanteventsanddiscussthemwithparentsorclassmates.IwouldbeveryhappytoshowyoumypublishedstoryifIhaveanopportunityforaninterview.Thankyouforyourtime!Sincerely,LiHua亮點(diǎn)分析：文章涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)，內(nèi)容充實(shí)，表達(dá)條理，有層次感。語(yǔ)言使用準(zhǔn)確地道，還使用了therefore,infact,also等過(guò)渡語(yǔ)。句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜多變，詞匯豐富，如enoughmotivationtotakeonthejob,madefriendswithpeopleworldwide,standout,byreadingnewspapersdaily,opportunityforaninterview等。3作文題目：暑假即將來(lái)臨。你班同學(xué)討論了假期計(jì)劃，提出了不同看法，請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示寫一篇有關(guān)討論的英語(yǔ)短文，并談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/p>

優(yōu)點(diǎn)缺點(diǎn)呆在家中花費(fèi)少、舒適方便不能親身了解外界外出旅游增長(zhǎng)知識(shí)、開(kāi)闊眼界花費(fèi)多、旅途不便注意：詞數(shù)不少于120。滿分作文：Yesterday,ourclasshadadiscussionaboutoursummerholidayplans.Theclasswassplitbetweenthestudentsthatwouldstayathomeandthestudentswhoprefertravel.Thestudentsthatplantostayathomewanttosavemoney.Theyknowthathomeismorecomfortablebecausetheirparentswilllookafterthem.Ontheotherhand,theydon’tgetachancetoexploretheoutsideworld.Theotherstudentsarekeentotraveleventhoughitwillbeexpensive.Theyrealizetheywillmeetdifficulties,buttheybelievetheexperiencewillexpandtheirviewoftheworld.Inmyopinion,itisbettertoexpandourhorizonsthroughtravelwhileweareyoungandourparentscanaffordit.亮點(diǎn)分析：內(nèi)容全面，涵蓋了所有要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)條理清楚。使用了較多句式結(jié)構(gòu)，如定語(yǔ)從句，狀語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句等。過(guò)渡語(yǔ)的使用，如ontheotherhand,but,inmyopinion，也給文章增色不少。詞匯也很豐富，如prefertravel,exploretheoutsideworld,keen,expand等。學(xué)生習(xí)作評(píng)析1作文題目：假定你是李華，從小喜愛(ài)大熊貓(panda)，一直通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站(website)關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓“蘇琳”和她的母親“白云”?，F(xiàn)在蘇琳即將三歲。請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)給動(dòng)物園工作人員寫一封不少于120詞的短信。1.自我介紹；2.祝賀蘇琳生日；3.感謝工作人員；4.索取蘇琳三歲生日照。學(xué)生習(xí)作DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!IamahighschoolstudentfromNo.1middleschool1.Iwrite2thislettertocelebrateSulin’sthree3birthday.Ilove4pandassinceIwasachild.Ihavebeentaking5attentiontoSulinandBaiyunforthreeyears.6Thankyoufortakingcareofthem.Ithinkyoumayfeeltiredbutalsofeelveryinterested7,right?IalwaysdreamthatifIwereyou,Iwouldbecomeahappiness8girl.Finally,IhopethatIcangetaSulin’sthree9birthdayphoto.Couldyougiveittome?Ilookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourstruly,LiHua教師批改1.如加上該校所在的省份，信息就顯得更真實(shí)。“middleschool”的首字母要大寫。2．正確的時(shí)態(tài)是現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)“amwriting”。3．“三歲生日”應(yīng)是“three-year-oldbirthday”或“thirdbirthday”。4．since短語(yǔ)應(yīng)與現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)連用。5．要改用payingattentionto。6．缺少過(guò)渡語(yǔ)。7．用“althoughyouaretired,youarealsoverypleased,right？”更好。8．happiness要改用happy。9．three改為third。點(diǎn)評(píng)：文章涵蓋了題目中給出的大部分要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，遺憾之處是漏掉了一個(gè)次重點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，即“通過(guò)有關(guān)網(wǎng)站關(guān)注三年前在美國(guó)圣迭哥動(dòng)物園出生的大熊貓”。作者在行文中使用了復(fù)雜句型，用到了時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句(IlovepandassinceIwasachild)、賓語(yǔ)從句(Ithinkyoumayfeeltiredbut...)和虛擬語(yǔ)氣(IfIwereyou,Iwouldbecomeahappinessgirl)等，不足之處是文章個(gè)別地方過(guò)渡得不夠自然，略顯突兀，而且行文中多處出現(xiàn)了語(yǔ)法和詞匯的錯(cuò)誤。經(jīng)典范文DearSir/Madam,GreetingsfromChina!ThisisLiHua,ahighschoolstudent1fromNo.1MiddleSchool,JilinProvince.Ihavebeenapandalover2sinceIwasalittlechild.Threeyearsago,Sulin,thedaughter3ofBaiyun,wasborninyourzoo.Sincethen,Ihavebeenwatching4Sulin’sgrowthfromyourwebsite,andIamverydelightedtolearnthatSulinandhermotherarelivinghappilyinAmerica.Iamconvinced5thatyoumusthaveputalotofeffortsin6takingcareofthem.Thankyouverymuch!Now,Sulinisgoingtobethreeyearsold,andIwishherahappybirthday.Ifpossible7,IhopethatIcangetaphotoofSulintaken8onherthree-year-oldbirthdayparty.Wishyouahappydayandlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.Yourstruly,LiHua亮點(diǎn)提取1.同位語(yǔ)，使句子結(jié)構(gòu)復(fù)雜了。2．比havebeenlovingpandas更地道。3．插入語(yǔ)，能豐富寫作時(shí)的名型。4．現(xiàn)在完成進(jìn)行時(shí)態(tài)用得恰到好處。5．Iamcon