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寫作中怎樣使用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)和高級(jí)詞匯1/27一.復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu):

1.使用適當(dāng)時(shí)態(tài)2.適當(dāng)語(yǔ)態(tài)3.使用不定式4.使用過去分詞5.使用V.+ing形式6.使用名詞性從句7.使用狀語(yǔ)從句8.使用定語(yǔ)從句9.使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣10.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句,倒裝句,感嘆句11.使用并列句2/27一、怎樣利用復(fù)雜結(jié)構(gòu)：1.改變時(shí)態(tài)Thebellisringingnow.(普通)2.改變語(yǔ)態(tài)Peoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.(普通)Theregoesthebell.(高級(jí))Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.(高級(jí))3/273.使用不定式4.使用過去分詞Heissokindthathecanhelpme.(普通)Heissokindastohelpme.

(高級(jí))Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.(普通)Followedbymanystudents,she….

(高級(jí))Onceitisseen,itcanneverbeforgotten.(普通)Onceseen,itcan….(高級(jí))4/275.使用v-ing形式Whenhearrivespleasegivemeane-mail.(普通)Iftheweatherpermits,I’llcometomorrow.(普通)Onhisarriving/arrival,pleasegive….

(高級(jí))Weatherpermitting,I’llcometomorrow.

(高級(jí))Nowourschoolhasthreeteachers.Theyteach48pupils.(普通)NowourSchoolhasthreeteachers,teaching48pupils.

(高級(jí))5/27Itdisappointedeverybodythathedidn’tturnup.(普通)Ihappenedtohavemethim.(普通)6.使用名詞性從句Thefactthathedidn’tturnupdisappointedeverybody.

(高級(jí))IthappenedthatIhadmethim.

(高級(jí))Tohissurprise,thelittlegirlknowssomanythings.(普通)Whatsurprisedhimisthatthegirl….

(高級(jí))6/277.使用狀語(yǔ)從句Iwon’tbelievewhathesays.(普通)Ifyoucomebackbeforesixo’clock,youcangoout.(普通)Themealwasverynice.Weallenjoyeditverymuch.(普通)Nomatterwhathesays,Iwon’tbelieve.

(高級(jí))Youcangooutonconditionthatyoucomebackbefore….

(高級(jí))Themealwassonicethatweall….

(高級(jí))7/278.使用定語(yǔ)從句Thegirlisspokenhighlyof.Hercompositionwaswellwritten.(普通)Thegirlwhosecompositionwaswellwrittenwasspokenhighlyof.

(高級(jí))IstudiedChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputeratschool.(普通)ThesubjectsIstudiedatschoolincludedChinese,maths,English….

(高級(jí))8/279.使用虛擬語(yǔ)氣Theshipdidn’tsinkbecausethereweretheeffortsofthecaptain.(普通)Iwasn’tinvitedtotheparty,soIdidn’tattendit.(普通)IfIhadbeeninvitedtotheparty,Iwouldhaveattendedit.

(高級(jí))Butfortheeffortsofthecaptain,theshipwouldhavesunk.

(高級(jí))9/2710.使用強(qiáng)調(diào)句、倒裝句、感嘆句Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.(普通)Itwasnotuntil1920thatregularradio….

(高級(jí))WeakasIam,I’llmaketheeffort.

(高級(jí))ThoughI’mweak,Iwillmaketheeffort.(普通)Howgladweweretoseethecropsand...!

(高級(jí))Weweregladtoseethecropsandvegetablesgrowingverywell.(普通)10/2711.使用并列句Ifyougothroughthegate,you’llfindtheentrancetoBearCountry.(普通)Gothroughthegate,andyou’llfind….

(高級(jí))Igotuplatethismorning,otherwiseIcouldhavecaughttheearlybus.

(高級(jí))Igotuplatethismorning.Ididn’tcatchtheearlybus.(普通)Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.

(高級(jí))Whenhespoke,hefeltmoreandmoreexcited.(普通)11/27四、怎樣利用高級(jí)詞匯：Asaresult,theplanwasafailure.(普通)ShewenttoAustriainordertostudymusic.(普通)Becausetheweatherwasgood,ourjourneywascomfortable.(普通)Theplanturnedouttobeafailure.

(高級(jí))ShewenttoAustriaforthepurposeofstudyingmusic.

(高級(jí))Thankstothegoodweather,ourjourney….

(高級(jí))12/27Atthenewsofherdeath,hewent….

(高級(jí))Shehastroubleinpronouncingtheword.

(高級(jí))Whoseturnisittobeondutytoday?

(高級(jí))Whenheheardshehaddied,hewentpalewithsorrow.(普通)Shecan’tcorrectlypronouncetheword.(普通)Whowillbeondutytoday?(普通)怎樣利用高級(jí)詞匯：13/27Shedoesn’tlikesports.Shecaresnothingforsports.Wehadtogohome.Whatwehadtodowasgohome.14/27五、常見語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤分析：1.句子缺謂語(yǔ)1)Thebuildinglikeamatchbox.

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Hetoldmethatallmyclassmatessittingintheclassroom.

1)Aworkerofthefarmleadustothefield.2)Allthestudentslikebooksthatwaswrittenby LuXun.2.主謂不一致，尤其是單數(shù)第三人稱作主語(yǔ)時(shí)，謂語(yǔ)單復(fù)數(shù)形式出現(xiàn)錯(cuò)誤。15/273.時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)誤

4.詞性混用1)Whenhecameback,hefoundthathiswifehasgonetobed.2)Whatareyoudoingthistimeyesterday?1)SheenjoysstudyEnglish.2)Ifanyoneagainsttheplan,pleaseletmeknow.16/275.介詞誤用

6.冠詞誤用

1)Inmysurprise,hehasgotthefirstprize.2)Hecameheretoattendthemeetingbyanewcar.3)Don’treadunderthesun.1)WeelectedLiHuathemonitoroftheClassFive.2)Onceuponatime,therewasanone-eyedlion.3)Thehistoryisactuallyaveryinterestingsubject.17/277.名詞數(shù)混同

8.動(dòng)詞使用方法錯(cuò)誤

1)ItisraretoseesuchaniceweatherinBeijing.2)Thereisalwaystrafficjam.1)Whereareyoucomefrom?2)WhenIarrivedHongKong,mymotherwastherewaitingforme.3)Hedidn’tnoticetheteachertocomeintotheclassroom.4)Theaccidentwashappenedin1999.18/279.習(xí)慣使用方法錯(cuò)誤

1)Theactorinthismovieisverybeautiful.2)IandMyparentswereworkinginthefieldsatthattime.3)Thereasonisbecausehedoesnotknowwhattodonext.19/27六、學(xué)會(huì)使用恰當(dāng)關(guān)聯(lián)詞：1.表示平行、對(duì)等或選擇關(guān)系and，both…and,aswellas,togetherwith,neither…nor,also,notonly…butalso,either…or,aswell.2.表示轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系but,yet,however,nevertheless(然而),inspiteof,although,otherwise,while,afterall.20/273.表示對(duì)比關(guān)系4.表示因果關(guān)系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand…ontheotherhand,justlike,unlike,inthesameway,atthesametimeso,for,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto,onaccount(理由)of.21/275.表示時(shí)間、次序關(guān)系6.表示遞進(jìn)、強(qiáng)調(diào)關(guān)系shortlyafterwards,first,second…,then,next,finally,foronething,foranother,intheend,eventually(最終,終于)besides,furthermore(另外),what’smore,inaddition,moreover(而且),worsestill,tomakemattersworse,indeed,certainly,surely,aboveall22/277.表示解釋、說(shuō)明關(guān)系8.表示結(jié)論namely(也就是),actually,suchas,forexample,forinstance,thatistosay,inotherwords,andsoon,totellyouthetruth,accordingtothisinshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,asyouknow,asfarasIknow,onthewhole,inconclusion,atlast,finally23/27七、背誦一些題材常識(shí)性語(yǔ)句：通知：開頭語(yǔ):

結(jié)束語(yǔ):

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