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作文講解及模板(后附寫作七項(xiàng)原則及常用句型)收集整理編寫:肖慶華陳明四級作文可分為:記敘類,圖表類,應(yīng)用文類,闡述類(常見的如問題解決型,觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)型,觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)型一般也要求對某一問題進(jìn)行討論和提出解決方案),辯論式議論類(正反觀點(diǎn)),其實(shí)辯論式議論類也可歸為闡述類,要注意的就是它一定會(huì)要求作者對一個(gè)現(xiàn)象的兩種正反觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行闡述,而后再提出自己的觀點(diǎn)。近年來應(yīng)用文類和闡述類考得比較多,記敘類的文章按照題目的要求寫出相關(guān)內(nèi)容即可(當(dāng)然要邏輯表達(dá)清楚,內(nèi)容要充實(shí),因?yàn)閮?nèi)容相差很大,所以沒有統(tǒng)一的模板可以遵循,尤其需要平時(shí)的積累,但由于內(nèi)容貼近生活,一般都不會(huì)太難),其他的類型規(guī)律性要強(qiáng)些,可以總結(jié)出一些模板,但模板并非萬能的,不能囊括所有的情況,而且大家都用模板,很容易引起閱卷老師的反感,如果死板的運(yùn)用模板,結(jié)果可能會(huì)弄巧成拙。一個(gè)有效的建議:多看優(yōu)秀范文,多記句型,根據(jù)優(yōu)秀范文DIY屬于自己的模板。下面我們來一起看些優(yōu)秀范文并DIY模板。(關(guān)于應(yīng)用文類另外還有一個(gè)名為應(yīng)用文的一個(gè)ppt講解,注意下面每種類型范文后還有一個(gè)大眾模板,全篇為藍(lán)色字,慎用?。?圖表類Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicABoominContinuingEducation.Youshouldwriteatleast120words,andbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below:1)上圖為某城市2002-2008年參加繼續(xù)教育的人數(shù)情況,請描述其中的變化;2)分析導(dǎo)致該變化的原因;3)談?wù)勀銓^續(xù)教育的看法?!痉段摹浚▓D表類)ABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraph,wecanlearnthenumberofcontinuingeducationparticipantshaskeptincreasingfrom2002to2008inXcity.In2002therewereonly20thousandpeopletakingpartinthecontinuingeducation,butin2004thenumbergrewto70thousand,andin2006,andby2008,thenumberhasreached230thousand.Itcanbeseeneasilythatcontinuingeducationisgainingmoreandmorepopularity。Thefollowingreasonsareresponsibleforthisboomincontinuingeducation.Firstly,duringtheworkmanypeoplebegintorealizewhattheyhavelearnedinschoolsisfarfromenough.Sotheyturntocontinuingeducationtogainmoreknowledgeandskills.Moreover,asthescienceandtechnologyinChinaaredevelopingveryfast,adultsaftergraduationhavetorefreshthemselves.Inaddition,inmodernsociety,thosewithoutbachelor'sdegreesorabovearelesscompetitive。AsfarasIamconcerned,theboomincontinuingeducationisanecessity.Itprovidesthoseon-the-jobpeoplewithchancestogetadvanceddegreesandgainmoreknowledge.Asoursocietydevelops,moreandmorepeoplewillreceivecontinuingeducationinthefuture。DIY模板ABoominContinuingEducationFromthegraph,wecanlearnthenumberof…(主題)haskeptincreasingfrom…(時(shí)間)to…(時(shí)間)in…(地點(diǎn)).In…(時(shí)間)therewereonly…(數(shù)量),butin…(時(shí)間)thenumbergrewto…(數(shù)量),andin…(時(shí)間),andby…(時(shí)間),thenumberhasreached…(數(shù)量).Itcanbeseeneasilythat…(主題)isgainingmoreandmorepopularity.Thefollowingreasonsareresponsiblefor…(主題).Firstly,...(原因一)Secondly,…(原因二)Inaddition,…(原因三)AsfarasIamconcerned,…(主題)isanecessity.Itprovides…(對象)with…(好處)to...(好的行為).Asoursocietydevelops,moreandmorepeoplewill…(趨勢)inthefuture.圖表類大眾模板之一Itisobviousinthegraph/tablethattherate/number/amountofYhasundergonedramaticchanges.Ithasgoneup/grown/fallen/droppedconsiderablyinrecentyears(asXvaries).Atthepointof(接近)X1,Yreachesitspeakvalueof…(多少).Whatisthereasonforthischange?Mainlythereare…(多少)reasonsbehindthesituationreflectedinthegraphic/table.Firstofall,…(一個(gè)原因).Moreimportantly,…(一個(gè)原因).Mostimportantofall,…(一個(gè)原因).Fromtheabovediscussions,wehaveenoughreasontopredictwhatwillhappeninthenearfuture.Thetrenddescribedinthegraph/tablewillcontinueforquitealongtimeifnecessarymeasuresarenottaken.2闡述類(問題解決型)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicOnWaterShortage.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsaccordingtotheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:1.水資源短缺已成為嚴(yán)重問題;2.造成水資源短缺的原因;3.提出解決方案。OnWaterShortage【范文】闡述類(問題解決型)OnWaterShortageNoonecanhavefailedtonoticethefactthatwatershortageisagraveproblemwithwhichthewholeworldisconfronted.Actually,ithasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyaffectedpeople’sdailylifeandhinderedthedevelopmentoftheglobaleconomy.Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingmightbethecriticalones.Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentofagricultureandindustry,anincreasingamountofwaterisneeded.Inaddition,theever-increasingpopulationisanotherleadingcauseofwatershortage.Besides,theglobaltendencyofwarmingupalsocontributestotheproblem.What’sworse,pollutionandwasteoffreshwateraggravatethesituation.Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.First,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoprotectwaterresources.Secondly,peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessofsavingwater.Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustoexpectabrighterfuture.DIY模板OnWaterShortage(問題解決型)Noonecanhavefailedtonoticethefactthat…(問題)isagraveproblemwithwhich…(面對問題的人或事)is/areconfronted.Actually,ithasbecomesowidespreadthatithasseverelyaffected…andhinderedthedevelopmentof….Anumberoffactorscouldaccountfortheproblem,butthefollowingmightbethecriticalones.Tobeginwith,withthedevelopmentof….,anincreasingamountof…isneeded(原因一).Inaddition,…(原因二)isanotherleadingcauseof….Besides,…(原因二)alsocontributestotheproblem.What’sworse,…(原因二)aggravate(s)thesituation.Inviewoftheseriousnessoftheproblem,effectivemeasuresmustbetakenbeforethingsgetworse.First,itisessentialthatlawsandregulationsbeworkedoutandenforcedtoprotect….(指出第一個(gè)措施,此處立法并執(zhí)法,protect接對象).Secondly,peopleshouldenhancetheirawarenessof….(原因二,在此處是提高觀念).Withthesemeasurestaken,itisreasonableforustoexpectabrighterfuture.3闡述類(觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)型)2010.12真題Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledHowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Youshouldwriteatleast150wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow.1.目前不少父母為孩子包辦一切2.為了讓孩子獨(dú)立,父母應(yīng)該……【范文】闡述類(觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)型)HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentoBeIndependent?Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenon,thatis,someparentstakecareofalmosteverythingconcernedwiththeirchildren,includingstudy,work,andmarriage.Someparentsbelievethatthisislove,however,itisonlytodestroychildren’sindependencethoroughly.Forthefutureofthenextgeneration,moreeffortsshouldbemadebyparentstohelptheirchildrentobeindependent.Thefundamentaloneistocultivatetheawareness,namely,theimportanceandnecessityofbeingindependent,whichissupposedtobeginfromchildhood.Childrenshouldbetaughtthatnoonecanbestrongerandmorehelpfulthanthemselvesinthisworld.Thequalityofindependenceissoindispensableforusthatparentshadbetteractasatutor,notadictator.Andonlywithparents’trust,canthenextgenerationaccumulateconfidencestepbystep.DIY模板HowShouldParentsHelpChildrentobeIndependentNowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenon,thatis,...Some....(某種人)believethatthisis…(積極的內(nèi)容),however,itisonlytodestroy…(對象)thoroughly(消極的內(nèi)容).Forthefutureof(Forthesakeof)…(為了誰或什么著想),moreeffortsshouldbemadeby…(某種人)tohelp….(對象).Thefundamentaloneisto….(措施一)Moreover,…shouldbe…(措施二).…(討論的主題)issoindispensableforusthat…(某種人)hadbetter….(采取的措施).Andonlywith…(具備的條件),can…(討論的對象)accumulateconfidencestepbystep.大眾模板(問題解決型和觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)型都可用)Inrecentdays,wehavetofaceaproblem-----A,whichisbecomingmoreandmoreserious.--------(說明A的現(xiàn)狀).ConfrontedwithA,weshouldtakeaseriesofeffectivemeasurestocopewiththesituation.Foronething,---------------(解決方法一).Foranother-------------(解決方法二).Finally,--------------(解決方法三).Personally,Ibelievethat-------------(我的解決方法).Consequently,I’mconfidentthatabrightfutureisawaitingusbecause--------------(帶來的好處).4闡述類(正反觀點(diǎn)和自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)相結(jié)合)2005年12月全國大學(xué)英語四級作文PartVWriting(30minutes)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?YoushouldwriteatLeast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:
1.名校校園正成為旅游新熱點(diǎn)
2.校園是否應(yīng)對游客開放,人們看法不同
3.我認(rèn)為…【范文】闡述類(正反觀點(diǎn)和自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)相結(jié)合)ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadays,manyfamousuniversitycampuseshavebecomeoneofthepopulartouristattractions.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothateveryyearthousandsandthousandsofmiddleschoolstudentsvisitTsingHuaUniversityandPekingUniversitySofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingtoopentheuniversitycampusfortourists?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingforthestudentstovisitthefamousuniversitycampusinthatitcanenablethemiddlestudentstogetmoreinformationabouttheuniversityandtheycanhaveenoughtimeandopportunitytopreparethemselveswiththechancetogetintotheuniversity.Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,thepublictourismwillhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmtotheenvironmentbutalsototheintellectualatmosphere.Inmyopinion,thetourismtotheuniversitiesisnotagoodthing.Thecampusismainlyaplaceforstudy.Withtheincreasingtourismonthecampus,itwillruinthespiritualatmosphereinthislearningfield.DIY模板ShouldtheUniversityCampusBeOpentoTourists?Nowadays,…h(huán)avebecomepopular.IthasbeenshownonTVandontheradiothat….(列舉現(xiàn)象一).Moreover,….(列舉現(xiàn)象二)Sofarasthepresentsituationisconcerned,isitagoodorbadthingto…(主題)?Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinions.Ononehand,somepeoplearguedthatitisagoodthingfor…(某種人)to…(主題所講的行為)inthatitcanenable…(前面所講的某種人)to...(好的結(jié)果).Ontheotherhand,somepeopleholdanegativeviewaboutthisphenomenon.Intheiropinion,…(主題)willhavenegativeeffectontheuniversitiesbecauseitwillnotonlydoharmto…(所涉及的對象)butalsoto….(所涉及的對象).Inmyopinion,…(主題)isnotagoodthing.Thereasonis...(列舉原因)Withtheincreasing…(主題),itwillruin….(列舉結(jié)果)大眾模板闡述類(正反觀點(diǎn)和自我觀點(diǎn)表達(dá)相結(jié)合)ThereisnoconsensusofopinionsamongpeopleaboutX(爭論的焦點(diǎn))。Somepeopleareoftheviewthat…(觀點(diǎn))because…(原因),whileotherstakeanoppositeside,firmlybelievingthat…(相反的觀點(diǎn))because…(觀點(diǎn))。AsfarasIamconcerned,theformer/latternotionispreferableinmanysenses.Thereasonsareobvious.Firstofall,…(論據(jù)1).Furthermore,…(論據(jù)2).Amongallofthesupportingevidences,oneisthestrongest.Thatis,…(論據(jù)3).Anaturalconclusionfromtheabovediscussionisthat…(總結(jié)觀點(diǎn)).Asacollegestudent,Iamsupposedto…(表決心).或Fromabove,wecanpredictthat…(進(jìn)行預(yù)測)5闡述類(辯論式議論類(正反觀點(diǎn)))2006年12月全國大學(xué)英語四級考試真題和答案PartIWriting(30minutes)
注意:此部分試題在答題卡1上。
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutetowriteashortessayonthetopicofstudentsselectingtheirlectures.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbellow:
1.許多人喜歡在除夕夜看春節(jié)晚會(huì)
2.但有些人提出取消春節(jié)晚會(huì)
3.我的看法【范文】闡述類(辯論式議論類(正反觀點(diǎn)))OnSpringFestivalGalaTheapproachoftheChineseLunarNewYearposesanationalissueconcerningthenecessityofholdingtheCCTVSpringFestivalGala.Itsestablishedstatusisbeingchallengedbyagrowingnumberofpeople,especiallybyyoungergenerations.Itisincreasinglydifficulttocaterforalltastes.Someindividualsdeemthatitshouldbecanceledorreplacedbyotherprograms.TheseyoungpeoplefocustheirattentiononotherformsofcelebrationinsteadofimmersingthemselvesinTV.Despitethat,themajorityofmid-agedpeopleandseniorcitizensupholdtheimportanceofthetraditionalperformance.Themoststrikingfeatureofthisgalaisitstraditionallycloselinkwithordinarypeople'slives.MostofpeopleviewthisgalaasanannualstapleonthetraditionalChineseSpringFestivalEve.Theyallhavearestlessnightandgluetheireyesonthetelevision.Iamnotsupportiveoftheviewthatthegrandgalashouldbeabandoned.Undoubtedly,itplaysavitalroleinthecelebrationofChineseNewYear.Toincreaseitsappealandmeetyoungadults'need,theupcomingperformanceshouldinvitesomebignamesincludingsuperstarsfromHongkongandTaiwan.Wearealleagerlyanticipatingthisunforgettableeveningshow.DIY模板OnSpringFestivalGala…(和主題相關(guān)的情況)posesanationalissueconcerningthenecessityofholding…(主題).Itsestablishedstatusisbeingchallengedbyagrowingnumberofpeople,especiallyby…(某種人).Itisincreasinglydifficulttocaterforalltastes.Someindividualsdeemthatitshouldbecanceledorreplacedby….(和主題相類的其他事物).…(前面some所指的人)focustheirattentionon…(關(guān)注主題以外的其他方面)insteadof…(關(guān)注主題).Despitethat,themajorityof…(另外一種人)upholdtheimportanceof….(繼續(xù)支持主題)Themoststrikingfeatureof…(主題)is….(具體的特征).Mostofpeopleview…(主題)as….(具體的觀點(diǎn))Iamnotsupportiveoftheviewthat…(主題)shouldbeabandoned.Undoubtedly,itplaysavitalrolein…(具體的領(lǐng)域).Toincreaseitsappealandmeet…need(反對的人的需求),…should...(采取的具體措施).Wearealleagerlyanticipating….(積極的方面).大眾模板闡述類(辯論式議論類(正反觀點(diǎn)))模板一Whenaskedabout______________(主題),somepeopleholdtheideathat_________________________(觀點(diǎn)A).Asfarastheyareconcerned,_________________________(展開觀點(diǎn)A).ButIcouldnotagreewiththeminseveralpoints.Inmyopinion,______________________________(觀點(diǎn)B).Thereasonsformychoicearelistedasfollows.Inthefirstplace,___________________________(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由1).Inthesecondplace,______________________________(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由2).Inthethirdplace,_______________________________(支持觀點(diǎn)B的理由3).Forthereasonsmentionedabove,Ifirmlybelieve____________(重申觀點(diǎn)B).模板二(有明顯的利弊傾向)Nowadaysmanypeopleprefer__________(主題)becauseitplaysasignificantroleinourdailylife.Generally,itsadvantagescanbeseenasfollows.Ontheonehand,________________(主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)1).Ontheotherhand,___________________(主題的優(yōu)點(diǎn)2).Buteverythingcanbedividedintotwo.Thenegativeaspectsarealsoapparent.Oneoftheimportantdisadvantagesisthat___________________(主題的缺點(diǎn)1).Tomakemattersworse,__________________________(主題的缺點(diǎn)2).Throughtheaboveanalysis,Ibelievethatthepositiveaspectsfaroutweighitsnegativeaspects.Whatevereffectsithas,onethingiscertain,________(主題)itselfisneithergoodnorbad.Itistheusestowhichitisputthatdetermineitsvaluetooursociety.6應(yīng)用文類的范文幾篇2005年1月全國大學(xué)英語四級考試作文PartVWriting(30minutes)
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteacampaignspeechinsupportofyourelectiontothepostofchairmanofthestudentunion.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1.你認(rèn)為自己具備了什么條件(能力、性格、愛好等)可以勝任學(xué)生會(huì)主席的工作
2.如果當(dāng)選,你將為本校同學(xué)做些什么
ACampaignSpeechGoodmorning,ladiesandgentleman!TodayIamverygladtorunforthepresidentofthestudents’union.IamjuniorinChemicalDepartment.SinceIcameintotheuniversity,Ihavealwaysbeenthemonitorofmyclass.Ihavedoneaverygoodjobformyclassmates,andmyclassmatesandmyteacherallgivemeagoodpraise.Iamgoodatcommunicationandorganizing.AndIliketohelpothers.
Moreover,Ihaveavarietyofhobbies,forexample,basketball,football,pingpong,etc.IamsurethatIamqualifiedforthisposition.IfIbecomethepresident,Iwilltrymybesttodowell.Iwillorganizesomesuitableactivitiesforyou.Iwilldomanythingsforyoutomeetyourdemandsaswell.Iamsincerelyhopeyouwillgivemeachance,andpleasebelievemethatIwillbeagoodpresident.Thankyou!2006年6月全國大學(xué)英語四級考試作文PartVWriting(30minutes)Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessayentitledAnannouncementforavoluntaryprogram.YoushouldwriteatLeast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.校學(xué)生會(huì)組織依次暑假志愿活動(dòng)現(xiàn)招聘志愿者2.本次志愿都活動(dòng)的目的內(nèi)容及安排3.報(bào)名條件和聯(lián)系方式AnAnnouncementforaVoluntaryProgramFollowStudents,Thehardandhectic(busyandbustling)semesterisdrawingtoclose.TheStudents’Unionisscheduledtoorganizeaclean-upprogramtotheZhongshanLakeTheprogramproceduregoeslikethis:nextSaturdaymorningat9:00volunteersof50willgototheZhongshanlake.Aroundthelakewewillputupsignsandposterscallingpeople’sattentiontotheimportanceofinenvironmentprotectionandpickupthetrashbysometourists.Thiswillcertainlyattractalotofpeoplesinceitisaweekendandtheparkisparticularlypopularwithtourists.Eachdaythereisanestimatednumberof2000peoplevisitingtheplace,sight-seeingandpicnic-going.Thismustbebothexitingandrewarding.Wewelcomeanystudentswholiketotakethetimeandtroubletodosomethingforenvironmentconservation.Interestedstudentscanregisteryourselveswithusnow.(orsignupyournamesatouroffice.)Ournumberis88807777.TheStudentsUnion寫作的“七項(xiàng)基本原則”一、長短句原則工作還得一張一馳呢,老讓讀者讀長句,累死人!寫一個(gè)短小精辟的句子,相反,卻可以起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。而且如果我們把短句放在段首或者段末,也可以揭示主題:Asacreature,Ieat;asaman,Iread.Althoughoneactionistomeettheprimaryneedofmybodyandtheotheristosatisfytheintellectualneedofmind,theyareinawayquitesimilar.如此可見,長短句結(jié)合,抑揚(yáng)頓挫,豈不爽哉?牢記!二、主題句原則國有其君,家有其主,文章也要有其主。否則會(huì)給人造成“群龍無首”之感!相信各位讀過一些破爛文學(xué),故意把主體隱藏在文章之內(nèi),結(jié)果造成我們稀里糊涂!不知所云!所以奉勸各位一定要寫一個(gè)主題句,放在文章的開頭(保險(xiǎn)型)或者結(jié)尾,讓讀者一目了然,必會(huì)平安無事!特別提示:隱藏主體句可是要冒險(xiǎn)的!Tobeginwith,youmustworkhardatyourlessonsandbefullypreparedbeforetheexam(主題句).Withoutsufficientpreparation,youcanhardlyexpecttoanswerallthequestionscorrectly.三、一二三原則領(lǐng)導(dǎo)講話總是第一部分、第一點(diǎn)、第二點(diǎn)、第三點(diǎn)、第二部分、第一點(diǎn)…如此羅嗦??僧吘惯€是條理清楚??脊賯兛次恼乱脖厝灰ㄟ^這些關(guān)鍵性的“標(biāo)簽”來判定你的文章是否結(jié)構(gòu)清楚,條理自然。破解方法很簡單,只要把下面任何一組的詞匯加入到你的幾個(gè)要點(diǎn)前就清楚了。1)first,second,third,last(不推薦,原因:俗)2)firstly,secondly,thirdly,finally(不推薦,原因:俗)3)thefirst,thesecond,thethird,thelast(不推薦,原因:俗)4)inthefirstplace,inthesecondplace,inthethirdplace,lastly(不推薦,原因:俗)5)tobeginwith,then,furthermore,finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)6)tostartwith,next,inaddition,finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)7)firstandforemost,besides,lastbutnotleast(強(qiáng)烈推薦)8)mostimportantofall,moreover,finally(強(qiáng)烈推薦)9)ontheonehand,ontheotherhand(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)10)foronething,foranotherthing(適用于兩點(diǎn)的情況)建議:不僅僅在寫作中注意,平時(shí)說話的時(shí)候也應(yīng)該條理清楚!四、短語優(yōu)先原則
寫作時(shí),尤其是在考試時(shí),如果使用短語,有兩個(gè)好處:其一、用短語會(huì)使文章增加亮點(diǎn),如果老師們看到你的文章太簡單,看不到一個(gè)自己不認(rèn)識(shí)的短語,必然會(huì)看你低一等。相反,如果發(fā)現(xiàn)亮點(diǎn)—精彩的短語,那么你的文章定會(huì)得高分了。其二、關(guān)鍵時(shí)刻思維短路,只有湊字?jǐn)?shù),怎么辦?用短語是一個(gè)辦法!比如:
Icannotbearit.
可以用短語表達(dá):Icannotputupwithit.
Iwantit.
可以用短語表達(dá):Iamlookingforwardtoit.
這樣字?jǐn)?shù)明顯增加,表達(dá)也更準(zhǔn)確。
五、多實(shí)少虛原則
原因很簡單,寫文章還是應(yīng)該寫一些實(shí)際的東西,不要空話連篇。這就要求一定要多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞。我這里所說的虛詞就是指那些比較大的詞。比如我們說一個(gè)很好的時(shí)候,不應(yīng)該之說nice這樣空洞的詞,應(yīng)該使用一些諸如generous,humorous,interesting,smart,gentle,warm-hearted,hospital之類的形象詞。再比如:
走出房間,general的詞是:walkoutoftheroom
但是小偷走出房間應(yīng)該說:slipoutoftheroom
小姐走出房間應(yīng)該說:sailoutoftheroom
小孩走出房間應(yīng)該說:danceoutoftheroom
老人走出房間應(yīng)該說:staggeroutoftheroom
所以多用實(shí)詞,少用虛詞,文章將會(huì)大放異彩!
六、多變句式原則
1)加法(串聯(lián))
都希望寫下很長的句子,可就是擔(dān)心寫錯(cuò),怎么辦,最保險(xiǎn)的寫長句的方法就是這些,可以在任何句子之間加and,但最好是前后的句子有先后關(guān)系或者并列關(guān)系。比如說:
Ienjoymusicandheisfondofplayingguitar.
如果是二者并列的,我們可以用一個(gè)超級句式:
Notonlythefurcoatissoft,butitisalsowarm.
其它的短語可以用:
besides,furthermore,likewise,moreover
2)轉(zhuǎn)折(拐彎抹角)
批評某人缺點(diǎn)的時(shí)候,我們總習(xí)慣先拐彎抹角說說他的優(yōu)點(diǎn),然后轉(zhuǎn)入正題,再說缺點(diǎn),這種方式雖然陰險(xiǎn)了點(diǎn),可畢竟還比較容易讓人接受。所以呢,我們說話的時(shí)候,只要在要點(diǎn)之前先來點(diǎn)廢話,注意二者之間用個(gè)轉(zhuǎn)折詞就夠了。
Thecarwasquiteold,yetitwasinexcellentcondition.
Thecoatwasthin,butitwaswarm.
更多的短語:
despitethat,still,however,nevertheless,inspiteof,despite,notwithstanding
3)因果(so)
昨天在街上我看到了一個(gè)女孩,然后我主動(dòng)搭訕,然后我們?nèi)タХ葟d,然后我們認(rèn)識(shí)了,然后我們成為了朋友…可見,講故事的時(shí)候我們總要追求先后順序,先什么,后什么,所以然后這個(gè)詞就變得很常見了。其實(shí)這個(gè)詞表示的是先后或因果關(guān)系!
Thesnowbegantofall,sowewenthome.
更多短語:
then,therefore,consequently,accordingly,hence,asaresult,forthisreason,sothat
4)失衡句(頭重腳輕,或者頭輕腳重)
有些人腦袋大,身體小,雖然我們不希望長成這個(gè)樣子,可如果真的是這樣了,也就必然會(huì)吸引別人的注意力。文章中如果出現(xiàn)這樣的句子,就更會(huì)讓考官看到你的句子與眾不同。其實(shí)就是主語從句,表語從句,賓語從句的變形。
舉例:ThisiswhatIcando.
Whetherhecangowithusornotisnotsure.
同樣主語、賓語、表語可以改成如下的復(fù)雜成分:
Whentogo,Whyhegoesaway…
5)附加(多此一舉)
那就是定語從句和同位語從句或者是插入語。
Themanwhomyoumetyesterdayisafriendofmine.
Idon’tenjoythatbookyouarereading.
MrLiu,ouroralEnglishteacher,iseasy-going.
其實(shí)很簡單,同位語--要解釋的東西刪除后不影響整個(gè)句子的構(gòu)成;定語從句—借用之前的關(guān)鍵詞并且用其重新組成一個(gè)句子插入其中,但是whomorthat關(guān)鍵詞必須要緊跟在先行詞之前。
6)排比(排山倒海句)
文學(xué)作品中最吸引人的地方莫過于此,如果非要讓你的文章更加精彩的話,那么我希望你引用一個(gè)個(gè)的排比句,一個(gè)個(gè)的對偶句,一個(gè)個(gè)的不定式,一個(gè)個(gè)的詞,一個(gè)個(gè)的短語,如此表達(dá)將會(huì)使文章有排山倒海之勢!
Whetheryourtastesaremodernortraditional,sophisticatedorsimple,thereisplentyinLondonforyou.
Nowadays,energycanbeobtainedthroughvarioussourcessuchasoil,coal,naturalgas,solarheat,thewindandoceantides.
Wehavegottostudyhard,toenlargeourscopeofknowledge,torealizeourpotentialsandtopayforourlife.(氣勢恢宏)
要想寫出如此氣勢恢宏的句子非用排比不可!
七、挑戰(zhàn)極限原則
既然是挑戰(zhàn)極限,必然是比較難的,但是并非不可攀!
原理:在學(xué)生的文章中,很少發(fā)現(xiàn)諸如獨(dú)立主格的句子,其實(shí)也很簡單,只要花上5分鐘的時(shí)間看看就可以領(lǐng)會(huì),它就是分詞的一種特殊形式,分詞要求主語一致,而獨(dú)立主格則不然。比如:
Theweatherbeingfine,alargenumberofpeoplewenttoclimbtheWesternHills.
Africaisthesecondlargestcontinent,itssizebeingaboutthreetimesthatofChina.
如果您可一些出這樣的句子,會(huì)給文章起到畫龍點(diǎn)睛的作用。最后再次忠告:如果對句式的使用沒有十足的把握,還是謹(jǐn)慎行事為妙,寫得簡單總比寫錯(cuò)好!四級常用句型一、引出開頭1:Itiswell-knowntousthat……(我們都知道……)==Asfarasmyknowledgeisconcerned,…(就我所知…)2:Recentlytheproblemof……h(huán)asbeenbroughtintofocus.==Nowadaysthereisagrowingconcernover……(最近……問題引起了關(guān)注)3:Nowadays(overpopulation)hasbecomeaproblemwehavetoface.(現(xiàn)今,人口過剩已成為我們不得不面對的問題)4:Internethasbeenplayinganincreasinglyimportantroleinourday-to-daylife.Ithasbroughtalotofbenefitsbuthascreatedsomeseriousproblemsaswell.(互聯(lián)網(wǎng)已在我們的生活扮演著越來越重要的角色,它給我們帶來了許多好處但也產(chǎn)生了一些嚴(yán)重的問題)5:Withtherapiddevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,moreandmorepeoplebelievethat……(隨著科技的迅速發(fā)展,越來越多的人認(rèn)為……)6:Itisacommonbeliefthat……==Itiscommonlybelievedthat……(人們一般認(rèn)為……)7:Alotofpeopleseemtothinkthat……(很多人似乎認(rèn)為……)8:Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子(全世界都知道...)二、表達(dá)不同觀點(diǎn)1:People'sviewson……varyfrompersontoperson.Someholdthat……However,othersbelievethat……(人們對……的觀點(diǎn)因人而異,有些人認(rèn)為……然而其他人卻認(rèn)為……)2:Peoplemayhavedifferentopinionson……(人們對……可能會(huì)持有不同見解)3:Attitudestowards(drugs)varyfrompersontoperson.==Differentpeopleholddifferentattitudestowards(failure)(人們對待吸毒的態(tài)度因人而異)4:Therearedifferentopinionsamongpeopleasto……(對于……人們的觀點(diǎn)大不相同)三、表示結(jié)尾1:Inshort,itcanbesaidthat……(總之,他的意思是……)2:Fromwhathasbeenmentionedabove,wecancometotheconclusionthat……(從上面提到的,我們可以得出結(jié)論……)3:Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration,wenaturally/reasonablycometotheconclusionthat……(把所有的這些因素加以考慮,我們自然可以得出結(jié)論……)4:Hence/Therefore,we'dbettercometotheconclusionthat……(因此,我們最好的出這樣的結(jié)論……)5:Thereisnodoubtthat(job-hopping)hasitsdrawbacksaswellasmerits.(毫無疑問,跳槽有優(yōu)點(diǎn)也有缺點(diǎn))6:Allinall,wecannotlivewithout……,butatthesametimewemusttrytofindoutnewwaystocopewiththeproblemsthatwouldarise.(總之,我們沒有……無法生活,但同時(shí)我們必須尋求新的解決辦法來面對可能出現(xiàn)的新問題)四、提出建議1:Itishightimethatweputanendtothe(trend).(該是我們停止這一趨勢的時(shí)候了)2:Thereisnodoubtthatenoughconcernmustbepaidtotheproblemof……(毫無疑問,對……問題應(yīng)予以足夠重視)3:Obviously,ifwewanttodosomething…itisessentialthat……(顯然,如果我們想要做么事,很重要的是……)4:Onlyinthiswaycanwe……(只有這樣,我們才能……)5:Sparenoeffortto+V(不遺余力的)五、預(yù)示后果1:Obviously,ifwedon'tcontroltheproblem,thechancesarethat……willleadusindanger.(很明顯,如果我們不能控制這一問題,很有可能我們會(huì)陷入危險(xiǎn))2:Nodoubt,unlesswetakeeffectivemeasures,itisverylikelythat……(毫無疑問,除非我們采取有效措施,否則我們很可能會(huì)……)3:Itisurgentthatimmediatemeasuresshouldbetakentostopthesituation(很緊迫的是應(yīng)立即采取措施阻止這一事態(tài)的發(fā)展)六、表示論證1:Frommypointofview,itismorereasonabletosupportthefi
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