高三深圳二模讀后續(xù)寫講解課件

深圳二模讀后續(xù)寫消除流言01.續(xù)寫前文文本分析02.命題角度分析首句03.基于命題角度寫作比例分析04.范文及下水作文contents目錄行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/續(xù)寫前文文本分析行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/

Ididn'tlikeDelsomuch.Healwayscalledmethenickname“Germy,"whichmeant“dirty,"insteadofmyrealname“Jamie.”Besides,hewasknownasatrouble-makerinschool.SowhentheheadteacherMr.SmithaskedDeltocometohisoffice,InaturallythoughtthatDelhaddonesomethingmeantosomeone.Throughthewindow,Icaughtsightofasmallerboycrying.Delseemedunhappy,too.Hedidnotreturntoclassthatday.Allofuswerediscussingwhathadhappenedtohim.Whatelsecouldsuchanannoyingboydo?“Hemusthavehittheboyandwassenthome,"Iwhisperedtomyfriends.Theireyeswidened.ItfeltgoodtoseethemsointerestedinwhatIsaid.Thenextmorning,thewholeschoolwastalkingaboutDelbeingexpelled(開除)forbeatingupakid.Iwassurprisedthatmyassumptionswerepassedonsoquickly.SowhenDelwalkedintotheclassroom,allthekidswereshocked.Thekidsnexttohimshiftedtheirdesksaway.“What'syourproblem?"Delasked.“Idon'twantyoutoattackme,”onekidsaid.Somelaughed.“Yeah,Imight,”saidDel.Icouldtellhewasjoking,butmanykidsthoughtheadmittedhedidbeatupsomeone.Duringrecess(課間休息),Deltriedtojointhekickballgame.“Neitherteamwantsyou,”oneoftheplayerssaid.“Why?”Delasked,lookingconfused.“Ialwaysplaywithyouguys.”Theyignoredhimandwentonplaying.Delsatbyhimselfwhiletherestoftheschoolenjoyedtheirrecessawayfromhim.Dellookedlonelyandsad,muchdifferentfrombefore.Istartedtofeelsorryforhim.Laterthatday,Ilearnedwhatreallyhappened.ThekidwasDel'slittlebrotherandhewascryingbecausetheirmotherfellillandwassenttohospital.IfeltevensorrierforwhatIsaidbefore.Istartedarumor(謠言).Para1:Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.Para2:NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforetherecesswasover.行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/①Ididn'tlikeDelsomuch.Healwayscalledmethenickname“Germy,"whichmeant“dirty,"insteadofmyrealname“Jamie.”Besides,hewasknownasatrouble-makerinschool.SowhentheheadteacherMr.SmithaskedDeltocometohisoffice,InaturallythoughtthatDelhaddonesomethingmeantosomeone.Throughthewindow,Icaughtsightofasmallerboycrying.Delseemedunhappy,too.Hedidnotreturntoclassthatday.Allofuswerediscussingwhathadhappenedtohim.Whatelsecouldsuchanannoyingboydo?“Hemusthavehittheboyandwassenthome,"Iwhisperedtomyfriends.Theireyeswidened.ItfeltgoodtoseethemsointerestedinwhatIsaid.②Thenextmorning,thewholeschoolwastalkingaboutDelbeingexpelled(開除)forbeatingupakid.Iwassurprisedthatmyassumptionswerepassedonsoquickly.SowhenDelwalkedintotheclassroom,allthekidswereshocked.Thekidsnexttohimshiftedtheirdesksaway.“What'syourproblem?"Delasked.“Idon'twantyoutoattackme,”onekidsaid.Somelaughed.“Yeah,Imight,”saidDel.Icouldtellhewasjoking,butmanykidsthoughtheadmittedhedidbeatupsomeone.Duringrecess(課間休息),Deltriedtojointhekickballgame.“Neitherteamwantsyou,”oneoftheplayerssaid.“Why?”Delasked,lookingconfused.“Ialwaysplaywithyouguys.”Theyignoredhimandwentonplaying.Delsatbyhimselfwhiletherestoftheschoolenjoyedtheirrecessawayfromhim.Dellookedlonelyandsad,muchdifferentfrombefore.Istartedtofeelsorryforhim.③Laterthatday,Ilearnedwhatreallyhappened.ThekidwasDel'slittlebrotherandhewascryingbecausetheirmotherfellillandwassenttohospital.IfeltevensorrierforwhatIsaidbefore.Istartedarumor(謠言).Part1

問題產生根源：Delcalledmenickname,whichIhated.Andhewasnaughty.問題產生導火線：IsawDelwasinheadteacherofficeandsawalittleboywascrying.Part2

問題產生1：MyguessingcausedDeldeprivedofthechancetoplaywithothersatrecess.問題產生2：DelwassadandIwassorryforhim.Part2

真相：Del’smotherwasinhospitalandthebrothersweresadaboutit.行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Del’sproblemandtrouble:①callingJamienickname②motherwasillandbrotherwassadMyproblemandtrouble:①spreadingrumorsandcausingmisunderstanding②beingguiltyofwhathadbeendone命題角度分析首句行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Para1:Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.

HowtosolvetheproblemofDelbeingisolatedbyplaymates?Para2:NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforetherecesswasover.

What

wasthethingthatIdidbesidesapologizing?行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Para1:Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.

HowtosolvetheproblemofDelbeingisolatedbyplaymates?Myproblemandtrouble:①spreadingrumorsandcausingmisunderstanding②beingguiltyofwhathadbeendonesolution①Iconfessedmygroundlessguessing,whichcausedDel’sisolationandapologized.②IcalledfortheplaymatestoacceptDelasbefore.行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/solution①ItalkedtotheschoolmatesaboutDel’sfamilytrouble.②Isuggestedtakinghisbrotherintotheplaytime.③DelchangedmynicknameintoJade,whichmeantfinePara2:NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforetherecesswasover.

What

wasthethingthatIdidbesidesapologizing?Del’sproblemandtrouble:①callingJamienickname②motherwasillandbrotherwassad基于命題角度寫作比例分析行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Para1:Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.詳細寫：HowIfinallydecidedtoapologizetoDelinfrontofalltheplaymatesofthekickballgame;WhatdidItellthem?Howdidtheyreact?WhatdidDelsay?行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Para2:NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforetherecesswasover.詳細寫：WhatwasthethingthatIdidbesidesapologizing?WhatdidIsayaboutDel’sfamilytroubletotheschoolmates?WhatdidIsuggest?WhatdidDelsay?范文及下水作文行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/參考范文一Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.Ihatedthenickname“Germy,”butseeinghimisolatedwasalsonotwhatIwanted.Guiltpushedmetohim.“Whatdoyouwant,Germy?”Delasked,hisvoicesoundingmorehurtthanangry.Isatnexttohimandgraduallyutteredthewholethingabouthowmyhastyassumptionturnedintosuchaterriblerumor.“I’msorry.IwishIhadneversaidthat,”Iapologized,daringnottolookintohiseyes.Annoyanceandsurpriseflickeredacrosshisface.Butsecondslater,heloweredhisheadandsaidquietly,“It’sokay.IguessIwasn'tverynicetoyou,either.”Hiswordssoothedme,butIcouldfeelhewasstillsad.(112詞)

NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforetherecesswasover.Iwalkedtowardsthekickballplayersandcalledfortheirattention.Everyonestoppedinsurprise.“Deldidn'tbeatupanyone,”Istated,explainingwhatactuallyhappened.Whispersofastonishmentspreadandfinallyoneplayershouted,“Alright,Del,doyouwanttojoinmyteam?”AsmilebrokethroughDel'sgloomyface,“Yes,andIwantJamieonit,too!”Heglancedatmeshyly,andIcouldtellhisuseofmyrealnamewashiswayofmakinganapology.Soontheplaygroundwasfilledwithlaughterandtalks.Butthistimetheymademerealizesomething-wordshavethepowertohurtandheal.(106詞)詳寫—道歉及道歉后的反應詳寫—幫助Del重新回歸kickballgame行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/參考范文二

Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.Iwalkeduptohim,sonervousthatIcouldhardlytalk.“Hey,”Isaid.“Whatdoyouwant,Germy?”Delsaidimpatientlywithouttakinghiseyesoffthegame.Icouldfeelsomethinginhisvoicesoundedmorehurtthanangry.Isummonedupmycourageandexplainedtohimthewholestory.Surprisedandangry,Dellookedatmewithanunbelievablelook.“Iwilltelleveryonethetruth,“Ipromised.Del'sfacesoftenedabit.“Okay,Jamie.Ioweyouanapologytoo,”hesaidwithashrug.Itwasthefirsttimehe'dusedmyrealname.Ialmostsmiled.IknewIhaddonetherightthing.(111詞)

NowthatDelhadforgivenme,Idecidedtodomorebeforerecesswasover.Thegamewasstillgoingon.Iapproachedtheplayersandaskedthemtostopforamoment.Everyone,includingDel,wassurprised.“Guys,Iamsorry,butIgotsomethingtosay.”IadmittedthatitwasIwhostartedtherumor.“Deldidn'tbeatupanyone,"Isaid.Uponhearingthis,theplayerswereconfusedforabriefmomentbutsoonfiguredoutwhathadreallyhappened.“Hey,welcomeback,”TheywavedtoDel.Delnoddedwillingly,withahappylookbacktohisface.SeeingDelplayingthegamevigorously,IfinallyfeltrelievedthatIeventuallymendedabigmistake.(109詞)詳寫—道歉及道歉后的反應詳寫—幫助Del重新回歸kickballgame行業(yè)PPT模板http:///hangye/Zoe下水作文

Atrecessthenextday,IsawDelsittingalonewatchingthekickballgame.Icouldn’tbeartheoverwhelmingguiltandshameanymoreandmadeupmymindtoconfesswhatIhaddone.SoIstrodetoDelandlookeddirectlyintohiseyes,apologizing“Imusttellyouthetruth,Del.ItwasIwhostartedthe