2024年1月8號(hào)浙江高考英語(yǔ)首考讀后續(xù)寫浙江首考讀后續(xù)寫-走完全程（堅(jiān)持到底）講義

續(xù)寫原文素材第一段GoingtheDistance走完全程（堅(jiān)持到底）Riyaspentthefirstweekofhighschooltryingtokeepherheadabovewater.Shewasoverwhelmedbythehugebuilding.Shedecidedthatshewouldmemorizewhereherclasseswereandthenpretendthattherestoftheplacedidn'texist.Allthedifferenthallwaysandwingsweretoomuchtothinkabout,letalonecommittomemory.麗亞在高中的第一周試圖保持清醒。她面對(duì)這棟巨大的建筑不知所措。她決定記住她的課在哪里，然后假裝這個(gè)地方的其他地方都不存在。她很難去思考所有不同的走廊和大廳側(cè)面，更不用說(shuō)記住它們了。第二、三段InP.E.,CoachWallacesentherreelingwhenheannouncedthateveryonehadtorunonemilearoundthetrackoutside.在體育上課上，當(dāng)華萊士教練宣布每個(gè)人都必須在外面的跑道上跑一英里時(shí)，她都驚呆了。Riyasearchedthefacesofherclassmatesforsignsofpanic.Therewasnothingshedreadedmorethanhavingtorunawholemile.ToRiya,amilewasusedtodescribelongdistances.Itwastenmilestohergrandfather'shouse,andthatalwaysseemedlikealongway,eveninacar!麗婭在她同學(xué)的臉上尋找恐慌的跡象。沒有什么比跑一英里更讓她害怕的了。對(duì)麗亞來(lái)說(shuō)，一英里被用來(lái)描述很長(zhǎng)的距離。離她祖父家有十英里遠(yuǎn)，即使在車?yán)?，也一樣！第四、五段WhenCoachWallaceblewhiswhistle,Riyafiguredshewouldbeleftinthedust.However,whilesomeofherclassmatesedgedahead,othersactuallylaggedbehind.It'sjustthebeginning,shethought.I'llcomeinlastforsure.當(dāng)華萊士教練吹響口哨時(shí)，麗亞認(rèn)為她會(huì)被拋在塵土中。然而，當(dāng)她的一些同學(xué)逐漸領(lǐng)先時(shí)，其他人實(shí)際上卻落后了。這只是個(gè)開始，她想。我肯定會(huì)跑最后。Riyastartedusingamindtrickonherself.Shestoppedthinkingaboutthewordmile.Instead,shefocusedonreachingtheshadowcastonthetrackbyanoaktreeupahead.Thensheconcentratedonjoggingtothespotwherethetrackcurved.Afterthat,shetriedtoseeifshecouldcompleteherfirstlap.Onelapturnedintotwo,thenthree,thenfour.麗婭開始對(duì)自己使用一種心理戲法。她不再在想“英里”這個(gè)詞了。相反，她專注于到達(dá)前面一棵橡樹投射在軌道上投射的陰影。然后，她集中精力慢跑到跑道彎曲的地方。在那之后，她想看看能不能完成她的第一圈。一圈變成兩圈，然后三輪，然后四圈。第六、七段WhenCoachWallacegaveherahighfiveandsaid,"Nicework,"Riyawasshocked.Sheneverwouldhaveguessedthatshehadjustrunawholemile.當(dāng)華萊士教練跟她機(jī)長(zhǎng)并且說(shuō)“干得好”時(shí)，麗婭驚呆了。她從來(lái)沒有想到她剛剛跑了整整一英里。AsRiyawalkedbacktotheschoolbuildingafterP.E,shenoticedthatshefeltlessoverwhelmedbyitssize.Maybeshewouldcometoknowtheplace,onelapatatime.當(dāng)麗婭畢業(yè)后回到學(xué)校時(shí)，她注意到她對(duì)于學(xué)校的龐大沒有那么手足無(wú)措了。也許她會(huì)逐漸去了解這個(gè)地方，一次走一圈那樣。續(xù)寫情節(jié)分析和下水作文題目：1.Eva在第一周高中生活感覺很迷茫，教學(xué)樓是six-story的，像迷宮，但是里面有l(wèi)ibrary，cafeteria，andagym.2.Eva方向感不好，決定除了自己課的路，pretend其他placedidn'texist.3.CoachPitt組織了一個(gè)1milerun，對(duì)于Eva來(lái)說(shuō)很長(zhǎng)很長(zhǎng)，她去外婆家都要10mile她都覺得長(zhǎng)，即使在車上。4.Coach吹了口哨，開始了，同學(xué)們開始跑，即使是跑步剛開始，Eva覺得自己肯定跑最后了。5.在絕望中，Eva突然想出一個(gè)mindtrick，關(guān)注橡樹的倒影，關(guān)注轉(zhuǎn)彎等spot，而不是“mile”，就這樣跑完一圈又一圈。段首句：Paragraph1：WhenCoachPittsaid"Greatwork"toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Paragraph2：Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.1.故事主線：主人公Eva剛到高中，面對(duì)各種教室、房間茫然失措。Eva面對(duì)不適應(yīng)，選擇只記住自己上課的路。（伏筆）體育課上教練Pitt組織Eva最畏懼的1英里（約1.6公里）跑步，她認(rèn)為自己肯定排倒數(shù)。盡管很絕望，她開始使用心里技巧來(lái)暗示自己，即不再關(guān)注1英里，而是讓自己先跑到樹影那兒，然后跑到轉(zhuǎn)彎處，然后試著跑一圈，再繼續(xù)。2.故事要素：Eva在體育課上跑一英里，以為自己肯定跑最后一名，結(jié)果卻跑了一個(gè)好成績(jī)。因?yàn)?，她在比賽中使用了一個(gè)心里戰(zhàn)術(shù)。這個(gè)經(jīng)歷讓她開始鼓起勇氣去逐步探索學(xué)校里的各處地方。3.故事情節(jié)（故事情節(jié)線/人物情感線）(1)已知線索：初入高中，心情茫然→體育課上跑一英里，害怕失敗→積極心理暗示，拆解目標(biāo)→跑過(guò)終點(diǎn)，教練夸獎(jiǎng)，難以置信→跑步帶來(lái)成就感，相信自己→鼓足勇氣，探索校園→適應(yīng)校園，如魚得水→……Paragraph1：WhenCoachPittsaid"Greatwork"toheratthefinishline,Evawassurprised.Bathinginthewarmsunshine,Evarealizedthatshecouldn’tmakeitasifshehadn’tusedthemindtrick,whosekeylayinbreakingdownthetoughdestinationintosmallonesandbeingpersistent.”Iendedthe1mileinmiracle!”Evaexclaimedwildwithjoy.Afterwhatseemedacentury,itoccurredtoherthattheshadowoftheoaktreewasjustlikethelandmarkofalongdistance.Havingfinishedthe1milesuccessfully,therewasnodoubtthatshecouldexploreherschoolbythesameapproach!Paragraph2：Evadecidedtousethesametricktodealwiththeschoolbuilding.Hugeastheschoolstillwas,sheconqueredherfearandsteppedoutofhercomfortzone.Neverwouldsheponderaboutknowtheplaceinstantlyagain,shebegantoexplorestoreybystorey.Feelingontheoceanofhappiness,shespottedfancycafeteria、thegym、theclassicallibraryandsoon.NotonlydidEvabroadenherlivingspace,butalsoshegottobeinvolvedinvarietiesofactivities.Althoughshewouldbeoverwhelmedbyfrustrationfacingnewchallenges,everytimeshepracticedthemindtrick,shealteredlongdistanceintoshortlandmarks，whichlikeclustersofstarsdecoratingthevastsky，remindingherconstantly:Ajourneyofathousandmilesbeginswithsinglestep!續(xù)寫譯文：第一段：當(dāng)皮特教練在終點(diǎn)線對(duì)她說(shuō)“做得好”時(shí)，伊娃很驚訝。沐浴著溫暖的陽(yáng)光，伊娃意識(shí)到她不會(huì)成功如果沒有使用那個(gè)心理技巧，這個(gè)技巧的核心在于分解大的目標(biāo)，并且堅(jiān)持?！拔移孥E般地結(jié)束了這1英里的路程！”伊娃高興得狂叫道。好像過(guò)了一個(gè)世紀(jì)，她想到橡樹的影子就像很長(zhǎng)一段距離的地標(biāo)。成功完成了1英里，毫無(wú)