冒險(xiǎn)類讀后續(xù)寫課件高三下學(xué)期英語作文復(fù)習(xí)專項(xiàng)

2022浙江1月卷whenDr.Hendersonwasassigning(指定)projectmatesforhispsychologyclass,IsecretlyhopedthathewouldpairmewithmybestfriendoratleastaclassmateIcouldhavesomefunwith.Aboveall,Ihopeshewouldn’tassignmetoworkwiththefiercelycompetitiveandextremelyseriousfellowwhoalwaysworedarkclothesandapparentlyhadapersonalitytomatch.Asfate(命運(yùn))wouldhaveit,Dr.HendersonverydeliberatelymatchedeveryoneinclassandannouncedthatIwouldbeworkingwiththeonepersoninclassIwantedtoavoid.Iwentuptomynewteammateandintroducedmyself,HelookedatmeasthoughIweren’tthere.Ifelt

hetreatedmeasthoughIwouldholdhimbackandprobablymakehimfailtogetanAinthecourse.Hewasn'tmeanorabusive;hejustgavemetheimpressionthathecoulddowhateverprojectwedreamedbetterifhediditalone.Needlesstosay,Ididn'tlookforwardtoanentiretermofbeingbrushedoff,butItriedtomakethebestofitanddidn'tsayanythingforfearthatIwouldmakethingsworse.Theprojectrequiredeachteamtodevelopahypothesis(假說),setupanexperimenttotestthehypothesis,dothestatisticalanalysisandpresentthefindings.Whatevergradetheteamreceivedwouldbesharedbybothstudents.WhenmyteammateandImettodiscussourproject,Iwasuneasy.Herewasthischallengingstudentwhohadareputationforsingle-mindednessandgoodgrades--theexactoppositeofme.Iactuallywantedtodroptheclassatonepoint,butstoppedshortbecauseIdidn'twanttogivehimthesatisfactionofmychickeningout.Idecidedtosticktoitnomatterwhat.Afterlongdiscussionswesomehowagreedtodoastudyonthepsychologicalwell-beingofteenagers.Iwasn'tsurewhatitmeantexactly,butatleastwehadatopic.Para1.WestartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplansPara2.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtothehospitalforaseriousdisease.Westartedtomeetregularlytodrawupourplans.Themorewemet,themoreIknewabouthisability.IwasawarethatmyteammatewasmuchmoreadvancedthanI.Heknewtechnicalthingsandapproachedeverydetailwithgreatpatience,I,onthecontrary,hadlittletoshare,Wediscussedalotanddecidedonanintelligentyetsimpleexperiment,Partofourjobwastoselectstudentswhohadvolunteeredtobesubjectsforourproject.Idecidedtodevotemyselftothetaskofworkingwiththesubjects,whilehedevelopedthescientificmodel.OnedayIgotwordthathewasadmittedtothehospitalforaseriousdisease.Apparently,thestressofgettingthebestgradehadmadehisbodybreakdown.Whenvisitinghim,Inoticedhisweaknessanddepressionforthefirsttime,IassuredhimIwouldfinishtheprojectaloneandthatIwouldn'tlethimdown,Ipouredmoretimeandenergyintothatproject.Finally,myhardworkpaidoff-wegotanA,whichgavemegreatsatisfaction.Moreimportantly,Iearedmyteammate’srecognitionandwehavebecomegoodfriendssincethen.2021浙江卷續(xù)寫-我和父親Mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.Aquietman,hedidn’tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.Andhisdad,Albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.Ididn’treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andIthoughtthatIwouldsurpass(超過)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimeIwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.Summersinthemid-70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.Inpoorweather,Ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(長(zhǎng)號(hào)).ThesummerbeforemyeighthgradeIwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.Afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpointedataweedwhichwemissed.Thenwebeganagain.Thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb’s-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.Itwastiringwork,butIlookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughIwasn’tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.Athome,mydadsaid,“Ajob’sabigsteptogrowingup.I’mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold.”Mydad’swordsmademerealizethatmyearningsmightnotbeminetodowithasIwished.Mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butIwasn’tinterested.IdecideditwasnotfairthatIhadtocontributemymoney.Para1.WhenIcamehome,mydadseemedtosaysomethingtomePara2:IwassurprisedthatmyparentsallowedmetospendmoneyofmyownWhenIcamehome,mydadseemedtosaysomethingtome.Thenmymothercameoverandtoldmethatthefarmerwaswaitingformeinthefarm,ButIliedtoherthatIhadfinishedthetiringworkthere.Realizingmydishonestyfrommywords,Momaskedmewhathadhappened,"Idon'tthinkitisfairtohandinallmyearningstothefamily.Ishouldhavetherighttomanagemyearnings,"Isaidinanunpleasantvoice.AfterhearingwhatIsaid,Momsmiled,pattingmeontheshoulder,"Everyoneisamemberofthefamily.Asaman,youaresupposedtoshoulderyourresponsibility,However,yourdadandIagreethatyoucanstilluseyourmoneyasyouwish.”

Iwassurprisedthatmyparentsallowedmetospendmoneyofmyown.Atthemoment,Ilearnedwhatmydadmeantandbecamewillingtocontributemoretoourfamily.InolongerfeelconfusedaboutwhyIshouldhandinmyearnings,withwhichIhadplannedtobuyanewfootball,asit'sindeedmyresponsibilitytosupportmyfamily.2021浙江卷1月卷續(xù)寫-萬圣節(jié)南瓜Pumpkin(南瓜)carvingatHalloweenisafamilytradition,WevisitalocalfarmeveryOctober.inthepumpkinfield,Icompetewithmythreebrothersandsistertoseekoutthebiggestpumpkin.Mydadhasarulethatwehavetocarryourpumpkinsbackhome,andastheeldestchildIhaveanadvantage--Icariedan85-pounderbacklastyear.Thisyear,itwashardtotellwhethermyprizeortheonechosenbymy14-year-oldbrother,Jason,wasthewinner,Unfortunatelyweforgottoweighthembeforetakingouttheirinsides,butIwasdeterminedprovemypoint.Allofuswerehardatworkatthekitchentable,withmymomfilmingtheannualevent.I’munsurenowwhyIthoughtforcingmyheadinsidethepumpkinwouldsettlethematter,butitseemedtomakeperfectsenseatthetime.Withthepumpkinrestingonthetable,holeuppermost,Ibentoverandpressedmyheadagainsttheopening.AtfirstIgotjammedjustabovemyeyesandthen,asIwentonwithmytask,unwillingtoquit,mynosebrieflypreventedentry.FinallyImanagedtoputmywholeheadintoit,likeacork(軟木容)forcedintoabottle.Iwasabletostraightenupwiththehugepumpkinrestingonmyshoulders.Myexcitementwasshort-lived.Thepumpkinwasheavy."I'mgoingtosetitdown,now,"Isaid,andwithJasonhelpingtosupportitsweight,Ibentbackoverthetabletogiveitsomewheretorest.ItwasonlywhenItriedtoremovemyheadthatIrealizedgettingoutwasgoingtobelessstraightforwardthangettingin.WhenIpulledhard,mynosegotintheway.IgotintoapanicasIpressedfirmlyagainstthetableandmovedmyheadaroundtryingtofindtherightangle,butitwasnouse.“Ican’tgetitout!”Ishouted,myvoicesoundingunnaturallyloudintheenclosedspace.Para1:IwasstruckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlongerPara2.ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloweenIwasstruckforfiveorsixminutesthoughitfeltmuchlonger.Iwasoverwhelmedbyafeelingofregretandannoyance,whilemyparentsandJasonburstintolaughter.Ipointedtothepumpkinonmyhead,saying“Helpme!Ican’tsupportitsweight.”Muchsoonerthancouldbeexpected,mydadwasdeterminedtobreakthepumpkinwiththehelpofasharpknife.Eventually,Icouldtakeabreathoffreshair,onlytofindthatmymomwasengagedinfilmingmyembarrassingandawkwardsituation.ThatvideowaspostedthedaybeforeHalloween.Nosoonerhadtheclipbeenpostedontheinternetthanitmanagedtoattracttheattentionofpeopleonline,rackinguphundredsandthousandsofviews.ItwaswhenreporterscalledfortheinterviewthatIrealizedhowpopularthevideowas.Wildwithjoy,Ibecameacelebrityinmycity.TherewasnodenyingthatthiswasthemostunforgettableHolloweenIhadeverhad.2020浙江卷續(xù)寫-人站北極熊Onefall,mywifeElliandIhadasinglegoal:tophotographpolarbears.Wewerestayingataresearchcampoutside“thepolarbearcapitaloftheworld”—thetownofChurchillinManitoba,Canada.Takingpicturesofpolarbearsisamazingbutalsodangerous.Polarbears—likeallwildanimals—shouldbephotographedfromasafedistance.WhenI’mfacetofacewithapolarbear,Ilikeittobethroughacamerawithatelephotolens.Butsometimes,thatiseasiersaidthandone.Thiswasoneofthosetimes.AsElliandIcookeddinner,ayoungmalepolarbearwhowasplayinginanearbylakesniffed,andsmelledourgarlicbread.

Thehungrybearfollowedhisnosetoourcamp,whichwassurroundedbyahighwirefence.Hepulledandbitthewire.Hestoodonhisbacklegsandpushedatthewoodenfenceposts.Terrified,ElliandItriedallthebeardefenseactionsweknew.Weyelledatthebear,hitpotshard,andfiredblankshotgunshellsintotheair.Sometimesloudnoiseslikethesewillscarebearsoff.Notthispolarbearthough—hejustkepttryingtoteardownthefencewithhismassivepaws(爪子).

Iradioedthecampmanagerforhelp.Hetoldmeahelicopterwasonitsway,butitwouldbe30minutesbeforeitarrived.Makingthebestofthiscloseencounter(相遇),Itooksomepicturesofthebear.ElliandIfearedthefencewouldn’tlastthrough30moreminutesofthebear’spunishment.ThecampmanagersuggestedIusepepperspray.Thesprayburnsthebears’eyes,butdoesn’thurtthem.SoIapproachedouruninvitedguestslowlyand,throughthefence,sprayedhimintheface.Withanangryroar(吼叫),thebearrantothelaketowashhiseyes.

Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcampPara2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.

Para1:Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp意識(shí)到噴霧無用，熊更兇狠我害怕，不知咋辦Elli行動(dòng)，扔面包行動(dòng)有用，熊跑去吃面包熊吃完又折回，驚險(xiǎn)時(shí)刻Para2:Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived.我們開心，得救(心理+語言)登直升機(jī)脫險(xiǎn)(動(dòng)作+心理)俯瞰營地，發(fā)現(xiàn)驚人一幕熊終于沖破柵欄吃食物我拍照，心想:“熊得逞了!”Afewminuteslater,thebearheadedbacktoourcamp.Thenwerealizedthatthesprayhadonlyangeredhimevenmore,forheseemedmuchfiercerthistimeandviolentlypushedthefencelikemad,Myheartracedwildly,notknowingwhattodo.Atthiscriticalmoment,Elligrabbedseveralpiecesofgarlicbreadandthrewthemoverthefence.Itworked!Thebearstoppedtheattackandrantothebread.Butitwasn'tlongbeforeheateupallthebreadandcamebackagain.Atthatverymoment,thehelicopterarrived,“Thankgoodnesswearesaved!”Ellicriedout.Oncethehelicopterlanded,wegotontoitinnotime,excitedandrelieved,Whenweweresafeonthehelicopterupintheair,Iwasamazedtospotthatthebearhadfinallytorndownthefenceandrantowardsthefoodweleftbehind.Iquicklytookoutthecameraandphotographedtherarescene-wewererobbedbyapolarbear!2016浙江卷續(xù)寫-荒野求生2016年10月浙江卷Para.1OneweekendinJuly,

Jane

andherhusband,

Tom,

haddriventhreehoursto

camp

overnightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthe

lake,

JanewassoangrythatshesaidtoTom.“I'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"and

walked

away.Para.2&3Withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.Aftershehad

climbed

toahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.Tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.“Tom!"shecried."Help!"Noreply.IfonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithTom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.Asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,JanewantedverymuchtobewithTomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.Para.4Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落）somewhere

atadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoa

stream.

Tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.Neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.Para.5Asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janehearda

helicopter.IsthatformeUnfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.Afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffher

yellow

blouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.

7月Jane和Tom去森林野營，爆發(fā)爭(zhēng)吵，Jane獨(dú)自離開Jane迷路了，呼救得不到回應(yīng)，在黑暗中睡去，非常想念和愛著Tom,非常后悔吵架Jane蘇醒時(shí)找到河流，吃了漿果，沿著河流尋找露營地聽到直升機(jī)的聲音，樹木太密，他跑到空曠的地方，揮舞黃色上衣，希望被直升機(jī)看到P1：

Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.1.突然，絕對(duì)的黑暗控制了森林，一波恐懼感席卷了他Immediately,anabsolute+n.+ruledthe＋地點(diǎn)n。+andawaveof+情緒n.+sweptoversb.P1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.Immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforestandawaveofterrorsweptoverher.2.他的心臟狂(fiercely)跳，手掌出汗，內(nèi)心有一個(gè)聲音告訴自己要找一個(gè)安全的地方。One'sheartpoundingfiercelyandone'spalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldsb.that.P1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Herheartpoundingfiercelyandherpalmsweating,aninnervoicetoldherthatshehadtofindasafeplace.3.盡管她又累又害怕，Jane掙扎著站了起來,盡量不讓身心都崩潰。adj.andadi.assb.was,sb.didsth,doingsthP1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Tiredandterrifiedasshewas,Janestruggledtoherfeet,tryingnottohaveabreakdownbothphysicallyandmentally.4.幸運(yùn)的是，不久后他就找到了一個(gè)洞穴。Luckily/Fortunately,itdidn'ttakelongbeforesb.did...P1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Luckily,itdidn'ttakelongbeforeshefoundacave.5.如釋重負(fù)地嘆了口氣，他感覺到一絲希望，感覺似乎這個(gè)山洞在安慰他，并對(duì)他說“快進(jìn)來，你一定很累?！眘ighingwithrelief,shesensedaglimmerofsth,

and

felt

asifsthhadbeendoingandsayingP1：Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.

Sighingwithrelief,shesensedaglimmerofhopeandfeltasifthecavehadbeencomfortingherandsaying,"Comein,youmustbeexhausted!"6.從周圍安靜的環(huán)境中判斷，很顯然Jane仍然困在森林，沒有人來救援他Judgingfromsth，itwasevidentthatsbwasstilltrappedin(withoutanyhelp).sb.wasatalosswhattodo.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.Judgingfromthequietsurrounding,itwasevidentthatJanewasstilltrappedintheforestwithoutanyonecomingtotherescue.7.他突然想到他應(yīng)該首先找個(gè)開闊地，令他開心的是，不久他就找到了這個(gè)地方，并且他聽到震耳欲聾的噪音在靠近。Itsuddenlydawnedonsb.thatsb.shoulddo...

Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.Tohergreatjoy,itdidn'ttakeherlongtospotsuchaplaceandsheheardthedeafeningnoisecomingcloser.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.7.他突然想到他應(yīng)該首先找個(gè)開闊地，令他開心的是，不久他就找到了這個(gè)地方，并且他聽到震耳欲聾的噪音在靠近。Itsuddenlydawnedonsb.thatsb.shoulddo...

Itsuddenlydawnedonherthatsheshouldfindabigopenareafirst.Tohergreatjoy,itdidn'ttakeherlongtospotsuchaplaceandsheheardthedeafeningnoisecomingcloser.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.8.抬起頭并看到了直升機(jī)，Jane感覺一股強(qiáng)烈的激動(dòng)涌上心頭，并涌遍全身Seeing/Hearingsth,sb.feltagreatsenseof+情緒+wellingupinsb'sheartandsurgingthroughsb.Lookingupandseeingahelicopter,Janefeltagreatsenseofexcitementwellingupinherheartandsurgingthroughher.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.9.迫切（eager）又激動(dòng)(excited),她揮舞(flagged)著黃村衫(yellowblouse),不遺余力地大喊(yell),為了吸引別人的注意力。情緒+and+情緒,sb.sparednoefforttodo…soasto…Eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers'attention.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.10.幸運(yùn)的是，她被注意(notice）到了，并被帶上了直升機(jī)。在這里，她看到了文夫，注視著(staringat)自己，滿臉安慰Fortunately,shewasnoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.Here,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.11.就是在那一時(shí)刻他們決定再也不爭(zhēng)吵，而要學(xué)會(huì)妥協(xié)。多么寶貴的經(jīng)驗(yàn)教訓(xùn)啊Itwasatthemomentthatsb.didnotdo。。。anymore，butdid......Whatavaluablelessonforsbtolearn!

Itwasatthemomentthattheydecidednottoquarrelanymorebutlearnedtocompromise.Whatavaluablelessonforthecoupletolearn!P2：ItwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.2017浙江卷續(xù)寫-野狼追擊Onabright,warmJulyafternoon,MacHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoAlaskawithhisfriends.Oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedMactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.AsMacpedaled(騎行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.ThenMacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“Man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.Mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.Withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.Abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtoMac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.ThenitattackedthebackofMac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追趕).Mac