高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)專題之親情類+家庭禮貌計(jì)劃：從抵觸到理解+講義

閱讀下面材料，根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開(kāi)頭語(yǔ)續(xù)寫(xiě)兩段，使之構(gòu)成一篇完整的短文。Mamanoticesthattherehasbeenariseinbadmannersinthefamilylately,suchasSistertakingthingsfromBrotherwithoutasking,andBrotherpushingSisterwithoutsaying"Excuseme".

Itthenturnsintoashoving（推搡）matchbetweenthekids,withthemcallingeachothernames

andmakingfaces.Theirtablemannersaregettingworse,asinsteadofaskingtopassitemsacrossthetable,BrotherandSisterstufftheirmouthswithfoodandusesomeofittoengageinafoodfightandkickeachotherfromunderthetable.Mamatriestocoax(用好話勸)thekids,thencomplains,andfinallyshouts.ShealsotriestoaskPapaforhelp,butheisalsopartoftheproblem,aswhenPapagetsangryatthekids,hebangs(猛錘)onthetable.NothingforMamaworks,soshedecidestotakeoutabigpieceofcardboardandwritesoutherpolitenessplan.Whensheisdone,MamacallsafamilymeetingandintroducestheplantoPapaandthekids;iftheydosomethingrudesuchasforgettingtosay

"please"or"thankyou",thepunishmentistosweepthefloor.BrotherandSisterobjecttothe

politenessplan,tellingMamathatshe'snotbeingfair.Mama,however,remindsthekidsthatthey'retheoneswhoaren'tbeingfairtothemselvesorotherpeople.ShethenexplainswhatmannersareandwhytheyareimportantuntilPapainterruptsher.WhileMamaisthankfulforPapa'scomment,shenotesthathebreaksoneoftherules.Shehandshimafeatherdusterandhashimdusttheroom.BrotherandSisternotehowserioustheplanisandbothcomeupwiththeideaofbeingsuperpolitetogetMamatocalloffthepolitenessplan.注意：1.

續(xù)寫(xiě)詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.

請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答.Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.

_______________________________________________________________________________Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.

____________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意這篇文章講述了一個(gè)家庭中由于孩子們的行為越來(lái)越粗魯，母親決定制定一個(gè)禮貌計(jì)劃來(lái)改善家庭中的不良行為。起初，母親嘗試勸說(shuō)孩子們，但效果不佳，甚至父親也因?yàn)閼嵟又亓藛?wèn)題。母親隨后推出了一個(gè)規(guī)定，如果孩子們有失禮行為，比如忘記說(shuō)“請(qǐng)”或“謝謝”，就會(huì)被懲罰掃地。孩子們最初反對(duì)這個(gè)計(jì)劃，但后來(lái)他們決定表現(xiàn)得極為禮貌，希望能夠讓母親取消這個(gè)計(jì)劃。他們的行為有了顯著的改善，最終母親感到滿意，并取消了禮貌計(jì)劃，因?yàn)楹⒆觽円呀?jīng)真正理解并實(shí)踐了良好禮儀的重要性。原文中設(shè)置的伏筆及其在續(xù)寫(xiě)中的回應(yīng)如下：伏筆：母親注意到家中孩子們的行為越來(lái)越粗魯，比如互相推搡和用食物打仗。回應(yīng)：母親制定了一個(gè)禮貌計(jì)劃，希望通過(guò)懲罰來(lái)糾正孩子們的行為。伏筆：父親在憤怒時(shí)也會(huì)猛錘桌子，成為問(wèn)題的一部分?；貞?yīng)：當(dāng)父親違反了禮貌規(guī)則時(shí)，母親也給了他一根羽毛撣子，讓他打掃房間，體現(xiàn)了規(guī)則的一致性。伏筆：母親在家庭會(huì)議上介紹了禮貌計(jì)劃，孩子們最初反對(duì)，認(rèn)為不公平?；貞?yīng)：孩子們后來(lái)通過(guò)表現(xiàn)得極為禮貌來(lái)試圖讓母親取消禮貌計(jì)劃，這表明他們開(kāi)始理解并接受母親關(guān)于禮貌的教導(dǎo)。伏筆：母親解釋了禮貌是什么以及為什么它們很重要，但父親打斷了她。回應(yīng)：孩子們通過(guò)實(shí)際行動(dòng)來(lái)展示他們已經(jīng)理解了禮貌的重要性，不再需要言語(yǔ)上的解釋。伏筆：孩子們最初對(duì)禮貌計(jì)劃的反對(duì)和認(rèn)為不公平的態(tài)度?；貞?yīng)：孩子們后來(lái)通過(guò)實(shí)際行動(dòng)的轉(zhuǎn)變，從反對(duì)變?yōu)榻邮懿⒎e極參與禮貌計(jì)劃，體現(xiàn)了他們對(duì)禮貌價(jià)值的認(rèn)識(shí)和成長(zhǎng)。續(xù)寫(xiě)要點(diǎn)Para1:孩子們實(shí)施超級(jí)禮貌的計(jì)劃描述孩子們?nèi)绾卧诩抑袑?shí)施他們的超級(jí)禮貌計(jì)劃，包括在餐桌上的禮貌請(qǐng)求和感謝。孩子們之間以及對(duì)父母的尊重行為，以及他們?nèi)绾伪苊馊魏慰赡軐?dǎo)致沖突的行為。Para2:母親對(duì)孩子們行為改變的滿意反應(yīng)敘述母親如何注意到孩子們行為上的積極變化，以及這些變化如何影響了家庭氛圍。母親對(duì)孩子們的持續(xù)禮貌行為感到滿意，并考慮是否取消禮貌計(jì)劃，因?yàn)樗麄円呀?jīng)學(xué)會(huì)了重要的禮貌課程。參考答案Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Thenextdayatbreakfast,BrotherandSisterweretheepitomeofpoliteness."MayIpleasehavethebutter?"askedBrotherwithasmile,asSisterchimedin,"Couldyoupassthesyrup,please?Thankyousomuch!"Theycomplimentedeachother'soutfitsandheldthedooropenforoneanother.Evenwhenaminordisagreementarose,theyquicklyresolveditwithapolite"I'msorry"and"No,please,afteryou."TheirtransformationwassodrasticthatMamacouldn'thelpbutnoticethedifferenceintheirbehavior,andasenseofharmonyfilledthehousehold.Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.Asthedayswentby,thepolitenesscontinued,andMamafoundherselfwithanewfoundpeace.Theoncechaoticfamilymealswerenowfilledwithpleasantconversationandgenuinegratitude.Thekidshadnotonlylearnedtosay"please"and"thankyou"butalsotolistenattentivelyandshowempathytowardseachother.Mamarealizedthatthepolitenessplanhadnotonlyimprovedtheirmannersbutalsostrengthenedtheirbondasafamily.Seeingthepositiveimpact,shedecidedtorewardthekidswithaspecialtreatandannouncedthesuspensionoftheplan,confidentthattheyhadtrulyinternalizedtheimportanceofgoodmanners.下水文1Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Every"please"and"thankyou"wasdeliveredwithexaggeratedsweetnessandeverybumpwasfollowedbyasheepishapology.Moreover,mealtimesbecamequietaffairspunctuatedonlybytheclinkingofsilverware.Mama,atfirstamusedbytheirtheatrics,soonfoundgenuinepleasureintheirnewfoundmanners.EvenPapaseemedtoenjoythepeace,hisnewspaperrustlinglessfrequently.AsPapaandthechildrenbecamemoreaccustomedtothenewrules,whatbeganasaplayfulattempttounderminethepolitenessplantransformedintoaheartywelcomeofchange.Mamaispleasedwiththechange.Oneevening,astheysataroundthedinnertable,acomfortablesilencedescendedafteraparticularlydeliciousmeal.Brother,unprompted,offeredtoclearthetable,andSister,withagenuinesmile,thankedhim.MamametPapa’ssurprisedgaze,asilentunderstandingpassingbetweenthem.Itwasasiftheonce-volatilevolcano,spewingangeranddisrespect,hadfinallysettled.Inthatmoment,bathedinthewarmglowofthekitchenlight,theyallknewthatoutoftheashesofchaos,they'dcreated

somethingtrulyspecial,afertilelandoflove.下水文2Para1:Theyputtheirideaintopractice.Atthedinnertablethatevening,BrotherandSisterexecutedtheirplanwithprecision."Couldyoupassthepeas,please?"Brotherinquiredwithacourteousnod,whileSisterofferedawarm"Thankyou"aftereachpoliterequest.Theymadeaconsciousefforttokeeptheirhandstothemselvesandtheirwordskind.Evenwhenplayfullyteasing,theydidsowithalight-heartedspiritthatavoidedcrossingintodisrespect.TheirexaggerateddisplayofetiquettewasnotlostonMama,whoobservedthesiblingswithamixofamusementandapproval.Para2:Mamaispleasedwiththechange.