高中英語高考復(fù)習(xí)-短文改錯筆記+練習(xí)

二輪復(fù)習(xí)-短文改錯

必須爛熟于心的做題技巧！??！

標(biāo)準(zhǔn)流程：

1.一遍粗讀看“意思”，意思不對一定錯；

2.一遍精讀看“形式”，形式用錯一定錯；

3.一遍用來數(shù)（最后幾個）

①數(shù)個數(shù)：一刪、一添、八改

②數(shù)句子：一句一錯，長句兩錯（主從復(fù)合句）

③數(shù)考點：名動形副，介冠連代，并列邏輯，固定搭配

4.掌握規(guī)律：

1）名詞+謂語動詞+非謂語動詞：4-5個

2）其余考點總共5-6個，且考點不重復(fù)

做題步驟：

①第一步和第二步往往合成一步--第一遍拼盡全力改出明顯的意思錯誤

和形式錯誤；

②第一遍，一個句子一個錯，就心滿意足??！

③第一遍，介詞和冠詞可以不著急改??！

重中之重：：：做短文改錯不要傻吧拉吉的念英語，一定要中文翻譯?。。?！

【2014全國卷1】

NearlyEveyearsbefore(ago),andwiththehelpby(of)ourfather,mysister

andIplantedsomecherrytomatoes【圣女果】inourbackgarden,sincethen-forall

theseyear(years)---wehad(have)beenallowingtomatoestoselfseedwherethey

please.As(a)result,theplantsaregrowingsomewhere(everywhere).Thefruits

aresmallinsize,butjuicyandtaste(tasty).Therearesomuch(many)thatweoften

sharethemwithourneighbors.Althoughweallowtomatoplantstogrowinthesame

placeyearafteryear,butwehaveneverhadanydiseaseorinsectattackproblems.We

aregrowingwonderfully(wonderful)tomatoesatnocost!

介代星耀題：

【2014全國卷2】

Mydreamschoolstartsat8:30a.m.andendsat3:30p.m.They意思不對

Therearethreelessonsinthemorningandtwointheafternoon.Wedidn,tdon't

needtodosomanymuchhomework.Therefore,wehavemoretime(with)for

星耀題after-schoolactivities.Forexample,wecandoreadingforoneanda

halfhourhoursandplaysportsforonehoureveryday.

Mydreamschoollooklookslikeabiggarden.Thereareallkindsofthe

flowersandtreesaroundtheclassroombuildings.Wecanlieonthegrassfora

rest,orsatsitbythelakelisteningtomusic.Theteachersherearekindand

helpfully.Theyarenotonlyourteachersbutalsoourfriends.

腦子里面時十分清楚的，做題做的非常多了的同學(xué)

【2015全國卷1】

WhenIwasachild,Ihopedtoliveinthecity.Ithink(thought)Iwouldbe

happythere.NowIamlivinginacity,butImissmyhomeinthecountryside.

Theretheairiscleanorandthemountainsaregreen.Unfortunately,onwiththe

developmentofindustrialization,theenvironmenthasbeenpolluted.Lotsof

studieshavebeenshownthatglobalwarminghasalreadybecomeavery

seriouslyseriousproblem.Theairsairwebreatheinisgettingdirtieranddirtier.

MuchManyrareanimalsaredyingout.Wemustfoundfindwaystoprotect

yourourenvironment.Ifwefailtodoso,we511livetoregretit.

【2015全國卷2】

Oneday,littleTonywenttoashoppingcenterwithhisparent

parents.Itwasverycrowded.Tonysawatoyoninashopwindow.He

likeditsoverymuchthathequicklywalkedintotheshop.After

lookingatthetoyforsometime,heturnedaroundandfoundwhere

thathisparentsweremissing.Tonywasscaredandbegantocry.A

womansawhimcryingandtellingtoldhimtowaitoutsideatheshop.

Fiveminuteslater,Tonysawhisparents.Momsaid,“Hownicetosee

youagain!DadandIwereterribleterriblyworried.^^Tonypromised

herthatthiswouldneverhappenagain.

13.(2016全國卷I)

MyuncleistheownerofarestaurantclosetothatwhereI

live.Thoughnotverybig,btt^therestaurantispopularinourarea.Itis

alwayscrowdedwithcustomersatmealtimestime.Somepeopleeven

had(have)towaitoutside.Myuncletellsmethatthekeytohis

successishonesthonesty.Everydayhemakessurethatfresh

vegetablesorandhighqualityoilareusingforcooking.Myunclesays

thatheneverdreamsofbecomingrichintheashortperiodoftime.

Instead,hehopesthatourhisbusinesswillgrowsteady.

14.（2016全國卷n）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Thesummerholidayiscoming.MyclassmatesandIaretalkingabouthowtodo

duringtheholiday.Wecanchosebetweenstayingathomeandtakeatrip.Ifwestayat

home,itiscomfortablebutthereisnoneedtospendmoney.Butinthatcase,wewill

learnlittleaboutworld.Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgain

knowledgeswecannotgetfrombooks.Someclassmatessuggestwecangotoplaces

ofinterestnearby.Ithoughtthatitisagoodidea.Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecan

stilllearnalot.

15.（2016全國卷ni）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Theteenageyearfrom13to19werethemostdifficulttimeforme.Theywere

alsothebestandworseyearsinmylife.Atthefirst,IthoughtIkneweverythingand

couldmakedecisionsbyyourself.However,myparentsdidn'tseemtothinksuch.

Theyalwaystellmewhattodoandhowtodoit.Atonetime,Ievenfeltmyparents

couldn'tunderstandmesoIhopedIcouldbefreelyfromthem.IshowedthemIwas

independentbywearstrangeclothes.NowIamleavinghometocollege.Atlast,Iwill

beonmyown,butIstillwanttohavemyparentstoturntowheneverneedhelp.

10.（2017全國卷I）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Inthesummerholidayfollowingmyeighteenbirthday,Itookdrivinglessons.I

stillrememberhowhardfirstdaywas.Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhad

learnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindgoesblank.Iforgot

whathehadsaidtomealtogether.Theinstructorkeptrepeatingtheword,"Speed

up!""Slowdown!""Turningleft!"IwassomuchnervousthatIcouldhardly

tellwhichdirectionwasleft.Afewminuteslate,theinstructoraskedmetostopthecar.

ItwasareliefandIcametoasuddenlystopjustinthemiddleontheroad.

11.（2017全國卷II）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Mr.andMrs.Zhangallworkinourschool.Theylivefarfromtheschool,andit

takesthemaboutahourandahalftogotoworkeveryday.Intheirsparetime,they

areinterestinginplantingvegetablesintheirgarden,thatisontherooftopoftheir

house.Theyoftengetupearlierandwaterthevegetablestogether.Theyhavealso

boughtforsomegardeningtools.Beside,theyoftengetsomeusefulinformationsfrom

theInternet.Whensummercame,theywillinvitetheirstudentspickthefresh

vegetables!

12.（2017全國卷IU）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

WhenIlookatthispictureofmyself,Irealizeofhowfasttimeflies.Ihadgrown

notonlyphysically,andalsomentallyinthepastfewyears.Aboutonemonthafterthis

photowastook,Ienteredmysecondyearofhighschoolandbecomeanewmember

oftheschoolmusicclub.Aroundmeinpicturearethethingstheywereveryimportant

inmylifeatthattime:carmagazinesandmusicalinstruments.Ienjoyedstudying

differencekindsofcarsandplanes,playingpopmusic,andcollectingthelatemusic

albums.Thispictureoftenbringsbacktomemanyhappymemoriesofyourhigh

schooldays.

7.（2018全國卷I）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmy

grandparents.Ifindachangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivingina

smallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthere

again,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmall

pond,whichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotby

sellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,Itoldmy

fatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.

8.（2018全國卷H）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

WhenIwaslittle,Friday'snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,we

wouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.Asthekid,Ilovedtowatch

cartoons,butnomatterhowmanytimesIaskedtowatchingthem,myparentswould

nottoletme.Theywouldsaytousthatplayingcardgameswouldhelpmybrain.Still

Iunwillingtoplaythegamesforthemsometimes.Ididn'trealizehowrightmy

parentsareuntilIenteredhighschool.ThegamesmyparentstaughtmewhereIwasa

childturnedouttobeveryusefullaterinmylife.

9.（2018全國卷IU）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

ItwasMondaymorning,andthewritingclasshadjustbegin.Everyonewassilent,

waittoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.Someofus

wereconfidentandeagertakepartintheclassactivity,otherswerenervousand

anxious.IhaddonemyselfhomeworkbutIwasshy.Iwasafraidthattospeakinfront

ofalargergroupofpeople.Atthatmoment,Irememberedthatmyfatheroncesaid,

"Theclassroomisaplaceforlearningandthatincludelearningfromtextbooks,and

mistakeaswell."Immediate,Iraisedmyhand.

4.（2019全國卷I）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

Ibecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.Oneafternoon

whereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenly

footballfeeljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedit

hardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone'ssurprising,theballwentintothenet.All

thefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.

Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagood

playernow.

5.（2019全國卷H）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

SinceIwasakid,I'veconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwanted

tobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,I

wantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.WhenIstudied

chemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmggoalordecidedtobeadoctor.Theywere

tworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthatasickperson

couldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedto

helppeopleinneed.

6.（2019全國卷HD短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

I'vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.

Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnot

justanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuch

aslike"TangDynasty".Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistorical

environmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.I

wishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhavea

differentthemeandanuniquestyle.

1.（2020全國卷I）短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

TodayItriedcookingasimplydishmyself.Ilikeeatingfryingtomatoeswith

eggs,andIthoughtitmusttobeeasytocook.Mymomtoldmehowtopreparingit.

FirstIcutthetomatoesintopiecesbutputthemaside.NextIbroketheeggsintoa

bowlandbeatthemquicklywithchopstick.AfterthatIpouredoilintoapanand

turnedoffthestove.Iwaitedpatientlyunlesstheoilwashot.ThenIputthe

tomatoesandthebeateneggsintopantogether."Notthatway,"mymomtri