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高考英語(yǔ)讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)語(yǔ)篇練習(xí)在機(jī)場(chǎng)誤以為別人偷了自己的東西，

真相大白后誠(chéng)懇道歉題目再現(xiàn)題目分析

范文呈現(xiàn)

努力方向讀后續(xù)寫(xiě)Part

1題目呈現(xiàn)Danniswaswaiting

at

the

airline

ticket

counterwhenhe

first

noticed

the

youngwomanwithshiny

black

hair.She

wore

black

boots

ofsoft

leather.Dannis

struggled

to

see

her

face.She

was

ahead

ofhim

in

line,but

it

was

not

until

she

bought

her

ticket

and

turned

to

walk

away

that

he

realizedhowbeautiful

shewas,whowasfair-skinnedandbig-eyed.She

seemedaware

that

he

was

staring

ather

and

loweredhergaze

abruptly.Hisflightwasleavinginanhour.Tokilltime,Dannis

stepped

into

an

airport

bar

and

ordereda

cup

of

Scotch.While

sipping

it,he

caught

sight

of

black-haired

girl

in

the

leather

coat

again,

deepinconversationwithablondegirl.“Inviteher

for

a

drink?”Dannis

hesitated

and

didn't

come

upto

her.續(xù)寫(xiě)原文When

next

he

saw

her,Dannis

was

buying

a

magazine

and

became

aware

someone

waspushinghim.Atfirst,hewasstartled(受驚嚇的)thatanyonewouldbe

so

close

asto

touch

him,but

whenhesawwhoitwas,he

smiled.“Busyplace,”Dannissaid.Shelookedupathimandblushed.Wordlessly,she

moved

away

andjoinedthe

crowdsin

the

terminal.續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Dannis

wasatthecounterwithhismagazine,butwhenhereachedintohispocketforhiswallet,the

pocket

was

empty.Where

could

I

have

left

it?His

mind

was

racing,the

credit

cards,thecash,the

identificationcard,etc.Hisstomachstirredwithsomething

verylikefear.“Thegirl

whowas

so

near

to

me!”he

said

to

himself.All

at

once

he

understood

she

had

picked

his

pocket.What

should

he

do?First,find

a

policeman,and

tell

him

what

has

happened.He

would

probably

never

see

his

wallet

again.Dannis

gritted

his

teeth.When

glancing

around

for

the

police,suddenly,he

spottedthe

black-haired

girl,seated

against

a

frontwindow

ofthe

terminal.She

seemed

absorbed

in

a

book.續(xù)寫(xiě)原文Para1:Aseatbesideherwasempty,andDannisoccupied

it.Para2:Thegirlranand

Dannis

ran

after

her.段首句Part

2題目分析本文以時(shí)間為線(xiàn)索展開(kāi)，講述了主人公在機(jī)場(chǎng)遇到了一個(gè)美麗的年輕女人，十分心動(dòng)，但是在后來(lái)誤以為這個(gè)女人在靠近他時(shí)偷走了他的信用卡和現(xiàn)金等，于是主人公

對(duì)女人大喊大叫，把她下得跑掉，結(jié)果警察告知有人在廁所里撿到了他的東西。主人

公非常慚愧，向女人誠(chéng)懇道歉。9續(xù)寫(xiě)原文分析點(diǎn)1:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段首，流暢銜接

前面的記敘文和第一段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)2:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段段尾，流暢銜接

第二段段首句；點(diǎn)3:位于續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段段首，續(xù)寫(xiě)銜接

第二段段首語(yǔ)；點(diǎn)4:文章結(jié)尾升華，給予讀者正能量，

揭示和強(qiáng)調(diào)主題。段首句2點(diǎn)2

點(diǎn)3

點(diǎn)4(升華)情節(jié)構(gòu)建的重點(diǎn)段首句1點(diǎn)1續(xù)寫(xiě)第一段

續(xù)寫(xiě)第二段10>Para1:A

seat

beside

her

was

empty,and

Dannis

occupied

it.由第一段首句內(nèi)容“她旁邊的一個(gè)座位空著，丹尼斯坐了下來(lái)?！笨芍谝欢慰擅鑼?xiě)

丹尼斯質(zhì)問(wèn)女人，女人感到很困惑并被嚇了一跳。續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析11>Para

2:The

girl

ran

and

Dannis

ran

after

her.由第二段首句內(nèi)容“女孩跑著，丹尼斯在后面追?！笨芍?，第二段可描寫(xiě)丹尼斯追上了

女孩，這時(shí)有警察詢(xún)問(wèn)，并告知有人在廁所里撿到并上交了他丟失的東西。續(xù)寫(xiě)思路分析12續(xù)寫(xiě)素材質(zhì)問(wèn)——困惑——憤怒——嚇到——追趕——警察詢(xún)問(wèn)——找到失物——道歉續(xù)寫(xiě)素材13續(xù)寫(xiě)素材續(xù)寫(xiě)素材>

行為類(lèi)①變得：turn/grow>②抓?。篻rab/pounce

at>③發(fā)生：happen/occur

→情緒類(lèi)①困惑的：confused/puzzled②憤怒：anger/rage續(xù)寫(xiě)素材續(xù)寫(xiě)素材[高分句型1]The

girl

turned

deadly

pale,looking

so

restless

that

words

failed

her.

(運(yùn)用

了現(xiàn)在分詞作伴隨狀語(yǔ))[高分句型2]At

exactly

that

moment,a

policeman

approached

them

andaskedabout

whathappened.(由連接代詞what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句作介詞about的賓語(yǔ))[高分句型3]What

a

mistake

he

had

made!

(

由what

引導(dǎo)的感嘆句)Part

3范文呈現(xiàn)A

seat

beside

her

was

empty,and

Dannis

occupied

it.He

felt

a

wave

ofanger

sweptover

him.“Where

is

my

wallet?”he

yelled.The

black-haired

girl

glanced

up

from

herreading,with

a

confused

look

on

her

face.Dannis

stood

up,glared

at

her

and

shouted,

“You

stole

my

wallet!”The

crowds

began

to

gossip.The

girl

turned

deadly

pale,looking

so

restless

that

words

failed

her.A

strange

silence

hung

in

the

air.Abruptly,she

leaped

from

the

seat.范文呈現(xiàn)17The

girl

ran

and

Dannis

ran

after

her.After

a

while,Dannis

finally

grabbed

herbythearm.At

exactly

thatmoment,a

policeman

approached

them

and

asked

about

what

happened.Dannis

hastened

to

explain

it

while

the

girl

frowned

with

ashakeof

herhead.Afterfurtherenquiries,thepolicemantook

out

awalletand

handed

it

to

Dannis,adding

that

someone

had

found

it

in

the

toilet.What

a

mistakehe

had

made!Overwhelmed

by

guilt,Dannis

made

an

apology

to

the

girl.范文呈現(xiàn)18她旁邊的座位是空的，丹尼斯坐了下來(lái)。他覺(jué)得一陣怒火席卷了他?！拔业腻X(qián)包在哪里?”

他喊道。黑發(fā)女孩從閱讀中抬起頭來(lái)，

一臉困惑。丹尼斯站起來(lái)，怒視著她喊道：“你偷了

我的錢(qián)包!”人群開(kāi)始閑聊起來(lái)。女孩臉色變得慘白，看起來(lái)坐立不安，說(shuō)不出話(huà)來(lái)?？諝?/p>

中彌漫著一種奇怪的寂靜。突然，她從座位上