Unit2TravellingAroundReadingforWriting寫(xiě)一封旅行計(jì)劃的郵件講義高中英語(yǔ)人教版

ReadingforWriting寫(xiě)一封旅行計(jì)劃的郵件一．教材原文范文詮釋教材原文名師解析DearXiaoLi,MytimehereinChinaisgoingwell.Ilovemynewschoolandclassmates.OvertheOctoberholiday,myparentsandIareplanningtogotoXi'antoseetheTerracottaArmy.I'veheardthatitisanamazingsight,andIcan'twaittogo.Tome,thestoryoftheTerracottaArmyisalmostunbelievable.It'samazingthattherearemorethan8,000statues,andnooneinmoderntimesknewaboutthemuntilthe1970s.We'realsoplanningtovisitseveralotherplacesinXi'an.MydadandIarebothlookingforwardtogoingtotheShaanxiHistoryMuseum,becausemydadloveshistoryandIhaveheardthatthismuseumisknownasa“Chinesetreasurehouse”!We'realsogoingtotheXi'anCityWallandafewotherfamoussights.We'retakingthetrain,leavingthedaybeforetheOctoberholidaybegins.We'rearrivingat9:30a.m.andwillstartsightseeingrightaway,soIhopewesleepwellonthetrain!Iguessthat'sallfornow!I'llwriteagainsoonandsendphotos!Doyouhaveanyplansfortheingholiday?Hopetohearfromyousoon.Yourfriend，Richard[學(xué)語(yǔ)言]第一段1.本段使用了amazing和unbelievable,說(shuō)明兵馬俑栩栩如生，令人稱奇。短語(yǔ)can'twaittodosth意為“迫不及待做某事”，展示了作者的迫切心情。2.本段運(yùn)用了不定式短語(yǔ)(toseetheTerracottaArmy)作目的狀語(yǔ);賓語(yǔ)從句(I'veheardthat...);it作形式主語(yǔ)而that從句為真正的主語(yǔ)(It'samazingthat...)以及not...until句型(nooneinmoderntimes...untilthe1970s),這些高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用描繪出兵馬俑是令人向往之處。第二段1.本段使用了短語(yǔ)lookforwardto，描述了作者和父親對(duì)參觀陜西歷史博物館盼望許久。2.本段使用了because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句(becausemydadloveshistory...)以及that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句(Ihaveheardthatthismuseum...)，寫(xiě)出了作者和父親打算參觀陜西歷史博物館的原因。第三、四段1.第三段中短語(yǔ)rightaway的使用表達(dá)出作者去觀光的急切心情。2.第三、四段運(yùn)用了現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)表將來(lái)(We'retakingthetrain...,We'rearrivingat9:30a.m.);現(xiàn)在分詞短語(yǔ)作狀語(yǔ)(leavingthedaybefore...);賓語(yǔ)從句(Ihopewesleepwell...,Iguessthat'sall...)以及不定式作賓語(yǔ)(Hopetohearfromyousoon.),這些高級(jí)句式的運(yùn)用描繪出作者打算乘坐的交通工具、出發(fā)及到達(dá)時(shí)間以及盼望盡快收到來(lái)信等細(xì)節(jié)。[學(xué)結(jié)構(gòu)]短文由四部分組成:第一部分:開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山地指出旅游的目的地和時(shí)間;第二部分:簡(jiǎn)單介紹其他旅游景點(diǎn);第三部分:介紹交通工具及動(dòng)身時(shí)間;第四部分:詢問(wèn)計(jì)劃并表達(dá)期望。文章使用了副詞also，從屬連詞because和并列連詞and,使文章渾然一體。二．佳句背誦1.旅行計(jì)劃的開(kāi)頭:交代時(shí)間和目的地。=1\*GB3①Thismonth,IwilltraveltoChangshaandZhangjiajiewithmytwobestfriends,whichissupposedtobeasevendaytrip.這個(gè)月，我要和兩個(gè)好朋友去長(zhǎng)沙和張家界旅游,這應(yīng)該是一次七日之旅。=2\*GB3②I'mplanningtotraveltoSuzhou,acitycalledEasternVenice.我計(jì)劃去蘇州旅游，一個(gè)被稱為東方威尼斯的城市。=3\*GB3③TheMayDayising,andIamgoingtotraveltoShanghaitoseeitsbeautifulscenery.五一節(jié)就要來(lái)了,我打算去上海欣賞其美景。2.主體段落:交代動(dòng)身時(shí)間、所乘坐的交通工具、停留的時(shí)間等。=1\*GB3①Wewillsetouton10June.我們6月10日出發(fā)。=2\*GB3②Iwillstaythereforaboutthreedays.我要在那兒待大約三天。=3\*GB3③I'mplanningtogotherebytrainandebackbybus.我計(jì)劃乘火車去那兒,乘公共汽車回來(lái)。3.旅行計(jì)劃的結(jié)尾:自己的想法和對(duì)對(duì)方的期待或要求。=1\*GB3①DoyouhaveanyplansfortheingMayDayholiday?對(duì)于即將到來(lái)的五一假期,你有計(jì)劃嗎?=2\*GB3②Lookforwardtohearingfromyousoon.盼望著盡快收到你的回信。三．仿佳句·找差距[題目要求] 假定你是李華,寒假即將來(lái)臨,你打算和家人下周去北京游覽長(zhǎng)城。請(qǐng)你給你的好友王明寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，分享你的出行計(jì)劃。要點(diǎn):1.對(duì)長(zhǎng)城的認(rèn)識(shí);2.其他旅游目的地(故宮和頤和園)及交通方式;3.表達(dá)期望。注意:1.詞數(shù)80左右; 2.可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。參考詞匯:故宮theImperialPalace;頤和園theSummerPalace [仿寫(xiě)步驟] Step1一仿結(jié)構(gòu)布局合理 第一段:旅游時(shí)間和目的地介紹。第二段:簡(jiǎn)單介紹其他旅游景點(diǎn)及交通工具。第三段:詢問(wèn)計(jì)劃并表達(dá)期望。Step2二仿語(yǔ)言規(guī)范美觀我和我的父母計(jì)劃去游覽長(zhǎng)城。(現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí))MyparentsandIareplanningtovisittheGreatWall.長(zhǎng)城有著悠久的歷史。TheGreatWallhasalonghistory.它是由古代中國(guó)人民創(chuàng)造的一個(gè)偉大奇跡。ItisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.長(zhǎng)城已經(jīng)成為中國(guó)最著名的旅游景點(diǎn)之一。TheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostwellknowntouristattractions.我們迫不及待地想去參觀。Wecan’twaittopayavisittoit.我們還計(jì)劃參觀北京的其他地方，如故宮、頤和園。WearealsoplanningtovisitotherplacesinBeijing,liketheImperialPalaceandtheSummerPalace.我們將乘火車去那兒。(take)Wearetakingthetraintogothere.希望早日收到你的來(lái)信。(hope) Hopetohearfromyousoon.Step3三仿句間過(guò)渡自然 用并列連詞連接句2和句3 TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbyancientChinesepeople.2.用表示因果關(guān)系的并列連詞連接句4和句5TheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostwellknowntouristattractionsinChina,sowecan’twaittopayavisittoit.Step4謄寫(xiě)DearWangMing,I'mgladtotellyoumyparentsandIareplanningtopayavisittotheGreatWallnextweek.TheGreatWallhasalonghistoryanditisagreatwondercreatedbytheancientChinesepeople.NowtheGreatWallhasbeeoneofthemostfamoustouristattractionsinChina,sowecan'twaittovisitit.Besides,we'r