高中英語北師大版必修一UNIT 1 Period 8　Writing-A Personal Email

Period8Writing—APersonalEmailUNIT1LIFECHOICES細讀文本寫作指導寫作實踐達標檢測細讀

文本1.WhatdoweknowaboutFangLan?A.ShemovedtoCanada.B.Sheisajuniorsecondarystudent.C.Shedoesn’tadapttohernewschoollife.D.Sheispreparingtoattendacompetition.Activity1

Readforsomedetails.√2.WhichclassesdoWangYingandXieZijunattendinthesameclassroom?A.Chineseandmath.B.Chineseanddance.C.DanceandEnglish.D.Englishandphysics.√3.WhatwillWangYingdotomorrow?A.Shewillattendacompetition.B.Shewilldeliveraspeechinfrontofclass.C.Shewillmeetherfriend.D.ShewilljoinintheDancingClub.√1.Anemailincludesthefollowingparts.ReadtheemailonP18andputthemintherightorder.a.endingandwishesb.greetingc.subjectlined.reasonstofinishwritinge.questionsabouttheotherpersonrmationaboutone’sownlifeg.signatureActivity2

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g2.FillintheblankstocompletethestructureaccordingtotheemailyoureadonP18.greetingquestionsinformationreasonsendingsignatureReadtheemailagainandfindoutthesentencesthatcanbeusedinanemail.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Activity3

Readforsomegoodsentences.How’syourlifeinCanada?Ihopeyouhaveadaptedwelltothenewsituationandareenjoyingyournewschool.Ilookforwardtohearingallaboutwhat’shappeningwithyousoon.返回寫作

指導本單元的寫作任務是寫一封私人電子郵件。英文電子郵件與英文書信格式基本一樣，其基本要素是主題、稱謂、正文、結(jié)尾及署名。電子郵件最重要的部分是主題，主題應當做到言簡意賅，并突出郵件的重要性。郵件段落最好控制在兩三段之內(nèi)。結(jié)束語在正文之后添加，通常用“Bestregards！”和“Bestwishes！”等表示美好祝愿的語句。最后需要署名，在結(jié)束語的下一行簽上自己的名字。常用表達1.Howhaveyoubeenrecently？/Howiseverythinggoing?你最近怎么樣？2.Ihopethatyoucan...我希望你能……3.Itissogoodtohaveafriendlikeyou.有你這樣的朋友真好。4.Iamwritingto...Pleaseletmeknowyourdecisionassoonaspossible.我寫信是要……請盡快告訴我你的決定。5.Thankyouverymuchforyourtimeandconsideration.非常感謝您的時間和考慮。6.Iamwritingtoshowmygratitude.Thankssomuchforthelovelydinnerlastnight.我寫信表示感謝。非常感謝昨晚美好的晚餐。7.Iwouldliketoinvitebothofyoutomyhousewhenyouareavailable.當你們有空的時候，我想邀請你們倆來我家。8.Iamlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.我期待著很快收到你的來信。返回寫作

實踐假設你是李華，進入高中學習已將近一個月了，最近收到澳大利亞好友Jack的電子郵件，他說他打算在2023年的10月份來你學校作為交換生學習一年。他讓你給他回封電子郵件介紹你新學校的基本情況。內(nèi)容包括：1.你對學校的總體印象(學校、老師、教學方法……)；2.你的學習情況(課程比初中更有挑戰(zhàn)性，但有信心學好)；3.生活和課外活動情況(與同學們相處融洽，積極參加各種課外活動)。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭及結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearJack，KnowingthatyouarecomingtoourschoolasanexchangestudentinOctober2023，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmynewschool._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yourstruly，LiHua第一步審題謀篇審題寫作要求是寫一封私人電子郵件。寫作時應注意下面幾點：1.確定文體：這是一篇應用文，寫作中應注意應用文的常規(guī)格式；2.主體時態(tài)：應以一般現(xiàn)在時為主；3.主體人稱：由于是寫關(guān)于自己的學校生活情況，所以應該以第一人稱為主。謀篇第一段：問候并說明寫郵件的目的；第二段：介紹自己的學校生活情況；第三段：表達祝愿。第二步遣詞造句核心詞匯1.校園

_______2.精力充沛的

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___________campusdynamicteachingmethodbedifferentfrompreviouschallenging7.對……有信心

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___________________10.各種課外活動

_________________________beconfidentthat...getalong/onwellwithtakeanactivepartinvariousafter-schoolactivities連詞成句1.我已經(jīng)在新學校學習了一個月了。

foronemonth.2.大大的校園和熱情的(enthusiastic)老師讓我很吃驚。Thebigcampusand

.3.這里的老師們精力充沛，學識淵博(intelligent)。Theteachershere

.4.他們對我們很有耐心。_____________________________________________________________IhavelearnedinmynewschooltheenthusiasticteachersamazemegreatlyaredynamicandintelligentTheyareverypatientwithus.5.他們的教學方法很有趣，與以前的老師截然不同。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________6.我們正在學的課程更有挑戰(zhàn)性。Thesubjectswearelearning

.7.我有信心學好它們。_____________________________________________________________8.我與同學們相處融洽，而且積極參加各種課外活動。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theirteachingmethodsareveryinterestingandquitedifferentfromtheonesofourpreviousteachers.aremorechallengingI’mconfidentthatIcanlearnthemwell.I’mgettingalong/onwellwithmyclassmatesandItakeanactivepartinvariousafter-schoolactivities.第三步句式升級1.請把句2改寫成what引導的主語從句。______________________________________________________________2.請用notonly...butalso...把句3和句4連成一句話。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.請用although把句6和句7連成一句話。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Whatamazemegreatlyarethebigcampusandtheenthusiasticteachers.Theteachersherearenotonlydynamicandintelligent，butalsoverypatientwithus.Althoughthesubjectswearelearningaremorechallenging，I’mconfidentthatIcanlearnthemwell.第四步組句成篇用適當?shù)倪^渡詞語，把以上詞匯和句式，再加上聯(lián)想內(nèi)容，組成一篇80詞左右的英語短文。[范文賞讀]DearJack，KnowingthatyouarecomingtoourschoolasanexchangestudentinOctober2023，I’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmynewschool.Ihavelearnedinmynewschoolforonemonth.Whatamazemegreatlyarethebigcampusandtheenthusiasticteachers.Theteachersherearenotonlydynamicandintelligent，butalsoverypatientwithus.Besides，theirteachingmethodsareveryinterestingandquitedifferentfromtheonesofourpreviousteachers.Althoughthesubjectswearelearningaremorechallenging，I’mconfidentthatIcanlearnthemwell.Inthemeanwhile，I’mgettingalong/onwellwithmyclassmatesandItakeanactivepartinvariousafter-schoolactivities.Iamlookingforwardtomeetingyouinmyschool.Bestwishes.Yourstruly，LiHua返回達標檢測假設你是李華，你的外國朋友Henry十分關(guān)心你，寫信詢問你是否適應了高中生活。請你根據(jù)以下提示，用英語回一封電子郵件，內(nèi)容如下：1.簡述高中校園生活；2.與同學相處情況；3.英語學習情況。注意：1.詞數(shù)80左右；2.開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；3.可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。DearHenry，Howiseverythinggoing?DelightedtohearfromyouandI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmylifeinseniorhighschool.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Withbestwishes!Yours，LiHua[參考范文]DearHenry，Howiseverythinggoing?DelightedtohearfromyouandI’mwritingtotellyousomethingaboutmylifeinseniorhighschool._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________