2025屆高考英語大作文讀后續(xù)寫寫作思路與技巧課件

讀后續(xù)寫老師：時(shí)間：5月21日Whatarethekeyelementsofastory?5WWhoWhenWhereWhyWhat1.Onasunnyearlyspringmorning,Anna,togetherwithhergrandchildrenJulie,FredandErik,wasplayinghappilyinthebackyard.Whileplaying,Annasaidtothekids,“Iamgoingtoplantsomethinginthegarden.Whowouldliketohelpme?”2.“Whatareyougoingtoplant,Grandma?”askedJulie.“Ilikecharming,bright-coloredroses.”3.“ButIlikelively,big,yellowsunflowers!”saidFred.4.“Well,I'mgoingtoplantsomevegetablessothatwecanhavefreshvegetablestoeatwhentheyareready,”saidAnna.5.“Howlongdoesthattake?”askedErik.Helikedvegetablessometimes,especiallytomatoes.6.“Itwilltakeseveralmonthsbeforeanythingisreadytoeat,”answeredAnna.Thekidsweresurprised.WhenWhoWhatWhere7.“Severalmonths?Whywouldyoudoallthatworkandthenhavetowaitsolong?”askedJulie.“Whynotjustgotothestoreandbuythem?”8.“Patience,mysweeties!Don’t

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“Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon’tbetoomuchwork.”9.“I’llhelpyou,Grandma,”offeredErik.HeputdownthebasketballandwenttolookatthegardeningtoolsAnnahadlaidout.“Whatshouldwedofirst?”FredandJuliecameovertohavealook,too.10.Firstly,AnnataughtErikhowtouseatrowel(小鏟子)todigrowsofsmallholesfortheseeds.Next,sheshowedJuliehowtopourtheseedsintoeachholecarefully.AndthenitwasFred'sjobtocoveruptheholeswithsoillittlebylittle.Finally,JuliewrotethevegetablenamesonsticksthatErikpushedintotheground.“Thiswaywecanrememberwhichvegetableseedswehaveplanted,”saidAnna.討論在花園種植什么決定種植蔬菜奶奶教孫子們?cè)趺捶N植11.Afterplantingeverything,thekidstookturnsinfillingupthewateringpotsothatAnnacouldmakethesoilniceandwetfortheseedstostarttogrow.12.“Fromnowon,wejustwaterthemalittleeachday,andwithsometimeandsunshine,we'llhavesomedeliciousthingstoeatinthesummer,”saidAnna.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。種好后等待what/plot(情節(jié)):后院玩耍討論在花園種什么決定種蔬菜奶奶教孫子怎么種種好等待??Feelings(情感):1.Onasunnyearlyspringmorning,Anna,togetherwithhergrandchildrenJulie,FredandErik,wasplayinghappilyinthebackyard.Whileplaying,Annasaidtothekids,“Iamgoingtoplantsomethinginthegarden.Whowouldliketohelpme?”2.“Whatareyougoingtoplant,Grandma?”askedJulie.“Ilikecharming,bright-coloredroses.”3.“ButIlikelively,big,yellowsunflowers!”saidFred.4.“Well,I'mgoingtoplantsomevegetablessothatwecanhavefreshvegetablestoeatwhentheyareready,”saidAnna.5.“Howlongdoesthattake?”askedErik.Helikedvegetablessometimes,especiallytomatoes.6.“Itwilltakeseveralmonthsbeforeanythingisreadytoeat,”answeredAnna.Thekidsweresurprised.7.“Severalmonths?Whywouldyoudoallthatworkandthenhavetowaitsolong?”askedJulie.“Whynotjustgotothestoreandbuythem?”8.“Patience,mysweeties!Don’t

you

know

food

always

tastes

best

when

you

grow

it

yourself?”

replied

Anna.

“Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon’tbetoomuchwork.”9.“I’llhelpyou,Grandma,”offeredErik.HeputdownthebasketballandwenttolookatthegardeningtoolsAnnahadlaidout.“Whatshouldwedofirst?”FredandJuliecameovertohavealook,too.10.Firstly,AnnataughtErikhowtouseatrowel(小鏟子)todigrowsofsmallholesfortheseeds.Next,sheshowedJuliehowtopourtheseedsintoeachholecarefully.AndthenitwasFred'sjobtocoveruptheholeswithsoillittlebylittle.Finally,JuliewrotethevegetablenamesonsticksthatErikpushedintotheground.“Thiswaywecanrememberwhichvegetableseedswehaveplanted,”saidAnna.11.Afterplantingeverything,thekidstookturnsinfillingupthewateringpotsothatAnnacouldmakethesoilniceandwetfortheseedstostarttogrow.12.“Fromnowon,wejustwaterthemalittleeachday,andwithsometimeandsunshine,we'llhavesomedeliciousthingstoeatinthesummer,”saidAnna.注意：1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右；2.請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。what/plot(情節(jié)):后院玩耍討論在花園種什么決定種蔬菜奶奶教孫子怎么種種好等待?happysurprisedwillingcarefulhopeful?(情感):沖到花園干什么？接下來干什么？收獲的蔬菜用來做什么？心情？感悟?夏天到了，蔬菜長(zhǎng)出果實(shí)。Happyending?道理升華？照料蔬菜的過程？他們的反應(yīng)，心情如何？打算做什么主題：

正是這次經(jīng)歷讓他們意識(shí)到成功需要團(tuán)隊(duì)合作和耐心?！癊verytimethekidscametovisit,theywoulddashintothegardenasfastaspossible.Eventually,Annasaid,“itwasabouttimeforthefirstharvest.”happyending?需要解決什么問題？蔬菜能否順利長(zhǎng)大并結(jié)果？蔬菜長(zhǎng)出果實(shí)，取得大豐收主題？teamworkpatience8.“Patience,mysweeties!Don’t

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food

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tastes

best

when

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grow

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yourself?”

replied

Anna.

“Andifallofyoucometohelp,itwon’tbetoomuchwork.”what/plot+feelings(情節(jié)+情感):查看蔬菜生長(zhǎng)進(jìn)度澆水、施肥、除草結(jié)果Para1急切、迫不及待耐心開心、興奮采摘果實(shí)用其做飯并品嘗迫不及待、興奮開心、感動(dòng)Para21.toseehowwellthevegetablesweregrowing3.tallerandstronger/producefruits2.water,fertilizethevegetablesandremoveweeds4.pickupthefruits5.Usingthefruitstomakemeals查看蔬菜生長(zhǎng)進(jìn)度澆水、施肥、除草結(jié)果采摘果實(shí)用其做飯并品嘗急切、迫不及待耐心開心、興奮迫不及待、興奮開心、感動(dòng)1.could’twaitto/Out

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