Module 1 Wonders of the world 滿分范文必背-九年級英語上冊（外研版）

Module1Wondersoftheworld模塊話題滿分范文必背1．假設(shè)你是李輝。英語周報(bào)“旅游”欄目正在征集稿件，請你根據(jù)以下提示，以“OneofMyTravelExperiences”為題，用英語寫一篇短文投稿。提示：1.旅游方式、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；2.旅游經(jīng)歷；3.你的感受。要求：1.參考提示內(nèi)容，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)你的任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。（開頭已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）OneofMyTravelExperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OneofMyTravelExperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.Lastsummerholiday,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wetravelledtherebyplane.Aftergettingofftheplane,wetookataxitothehotel.Duringthefollowingdays,wevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.TheGreatWallmadeadeepimpressiononme.Itisanancientwallwithalonghistory.WewalkedalongtheGreatWallandenjoyedtheview.ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butalsolearnalot.ItmakesmerealizeChinaisreallygreat.【詳解】[總體分析]

①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文；

②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；

③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。

[寫作步驟]

第一步，開頭已給出，引出本文主題；

第二步，介紹去北京的旅游經(jīng)歷。

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①getoff下車②placesofinterest名勝古跡③makeadeepimpressiononsb給某人留下了深刻的印象[高分句型]

①ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.（though引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句）②Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.（賓語從句）2．某英文報(bào)社正在舉辦以“AnUnforgettableTrip”為題的征文活動(dòng)。請你根據(jù)以下提示，寫一篇英語短文介紹一次難忘的旅游經(jīng)歷，向該報(bào)社投稿。提示：1.Whereandwhendidyougo?2.Howdidyougothere?3.Whatdidyouseeanddothere?4.Whatdoyouthinkofthetrip?參考詞匯：scenery(風(fēng)景),localfood,takephotos,happyandrelaxed,…要求：1.可選擇使用參考詞匯，亦可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.語句通順，意思連貫，書寫工整；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何真實(shí)信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；4.詞數(shù)：不少于70詞。AnUnforgettableTrip____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableTripIhavebeentomanyplacesandamongthem,Hainanismyfavouriteplace.Lastsummerholiday,myfatherandIwentthere.Wewenttherebyplane.Theseatherewaswonderful.Theskywasblueandtheseawasblue,too.First,wewenttoswiminthesea.Then,welayonthebeachandenjoyedthesun.Next,wetriedsomeseafood.Itwasdelicious.Wealsotooklotsofphotosthere.Itwasanicetrip.Ifeltveryrelaxed.Iwillneverforgetthisexperience.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為材料作文。②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”。③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已經(jīng)給出，考查注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)；注意適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]

第一步，明確旅行的地點(diǎn)。

第二步，介紹旅行的時(shí)間、和誰去的、怎么去的、看了什么和做了什么。第三步，談?wù)勛约簩@次旅行的感受，和題目呼應(yīng)。

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①havebeento曾經(jīng)去過某地②byplane坐飛機(jī)③takephotos拍照

[高分句型]Theskywasblueandtheseawasblue,too.（and連接并列句）3．假設(shè)你是李輝。英語周報(bào)“旅游”欄目征集稿件，請你以“Oneofmytravelexperiences”為題寫一篇短文。要點(diǎn)如下：(1)旅游方式、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；(2)旅游經(jīng)歷；(3)你的感受。注意:(1)詞數(shù)80-100。開頭已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；(2)可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；(3)短文中不能出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名及學(xué)校名稱。OneofmytravelexperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文OneofmytravelexperiencesTravellingisusuallyahappyexperienceforeveryone.Lastsummerholiday,IwenttoBeijingwithmyparents.Wetravelledtherebyplane.Aftergettingofftheplane,wetookataxitothehotel.Duringthefollowingdays,wevisitedmanyplacesofinterest.TheGreatWallmadeadeepimpressiononme.Itisanancientwallwithalonghistory.WewalkedalongtheGreatWallandenjoyedtheview.ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.Ithinktravellingisrelaxingandeducational.Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butlearnalotaswell.ItmakesmerealizeChinaisreallygreat.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為一般過去時(shí)及一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：根據(jù)提示信息介紹自己難忘的經(jīng)歷，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出旅游方式、時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)；第二步，描述自己的經(jīng)歷；第三步，講述這次經(jīng)歷對自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①placesofinterest名勝古跡②madeadeepimpressionon留下深刻印象③educational有教育意義的[高分句型]①ThoughIwastired,Iwashappy.（though引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語從句）②Icannotonlyenjoymyself,butlearnalotaswell.（notonly…but句型）4．假如你是王潔，你在美國的筆友John想到中國旅行，請根據(jù)以下提示給他發(fā)一封email。詞數(shù)100左右，并注意格式。提示：1.北京是中國的首都，它歷史悠久，名勝古跡不勝枚舉。這里有萬里長城、故宮(theForbiddenCity)、頤和園(theSummerPalace)等。夏季和秋季是來北京的最佳時(shí)節(jié)；2.夏季到大連、青島的海濱沖浪(gosurfing)是一件樂事；3.還可以到海南，那里四季如春，可以旅游潛水，你一定會(huì)玩得很開心。__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DearJohn,I’veheardfromyou.IknowyouwanttovisitChina.That’sagoodidea.Asyouknow,BeijingisthecapitalofChina.Ithasalonghistoryandtherearemanyplacesofinterest,suchastheGreatWall,theForbiddenCity,theSummerPalaceandsoon.Summerandautumnisthebesttimetocomehere.Insummer,youcangosurfinginDalianorQingdao,andthewavesthereareterrific.YoucanalsovisitHainan,andtheweatherisalwayswarm.Nomatterwhetherinsummerorinwinter,youcangoscubadivingthere.Ithinkyou’llhaveagoodtime.Ihopeyou’llcomesoonandwishyoualotoffun.Yours,WangJie【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：根據(jù)所給提示完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹寫電子郵件的緣由；第二步，具體闡述中國一些旅游的著名城市及景點(diǎn)；第三步，最后表達(dá)對John表示祝愿。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①hearfrom收到……來信②wanttodosth想要做某事③haveagoodtime玩得開心[高分句型]①Summerandautumnisthebesttimetocomehere.（動(dòng)詞不定式作后置定語）②Ihopeyou’llcomesoonandwishyoualotoffun.（省略that的賓語從句）5．你校英語論壇正在開展“MyFavoriteTrip”的分享與交流活動(dòng)。請根據(jù)以下要求寫一篇短文，介紹一次你最喜歡的旅行及收獲。內(nèi)容：1.此次旅行的時(shí)間及目的地；2.你的所見所聞；3.你的收獲。要求：1.語句通順，意思連貫，語法正確，書寫規(guī)范；2.需涵蓋所有內(nèi)容，并做適當(dāng)拓展；3.詞數(shù)80左右。（文章開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）Hello,everyone,I’mverygladtosharemyfavoritetripwithallofyou.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Hello,everyone,I’mverygladtosharemyfavoritetripwithallofyou.Lastsummerholiday,IhadawonderfultriptoGuilinwithmyfamilybyplane.GuilinisfamousforLiRiver,sowewentthereforboatingfirst.Wecouldseefishswimminghappilybecauseoftheclearwater.Youcan’timaginewhatagreattimewewerehavingontheriver,enjoyingthebeautifulmountainsalong.OntheseconddaywewenttoShilinwhichhasmanystrangestones.TheyweresospecialthatItookalotofpictures.AndIalsocan’tforgetthelocalfoodlikeGuilinricenoodles.Theysmeltstrongbuttasteddelicious.Travelbroadensthemind!InthistripInotonlygetrelaxedbutalsolearntalotaboutthelocalculture.It’stheinterestingtripIlikemost.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：根據(jù)所給內(nèi)容完成寫作，注意標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號及大小寫等問題，不要犯語法錯(cuò)誤。注意上下文之間的邏輯關(guān)系，語意連貫。[寫作步驟]第一步，開篇點(diǎn)題；第二步，介紹一次你最喜歡的旅行及收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befamousfor因……而出名②becauseof因?yàn)棰踤otonly…butalso不但……而且[高分句型]OntheseconddaywewenttoShilinwhichhasmanystrangestones.（which引導(dǎo)定語從句）6．進(jìn)入初中以來，你的學(xué)校一定組織過很多有意義的外出研學(xué)活動(dòng)，讓你和同學(xué)們開闊了眼界，體驗(yàn)了快樂，增進(jìn)了友誼。新學(xué)期你的學(xué)?，F(xiàn)正舉辦“MyStudyTour”征文活動(dòng)，請你根據(jù)下面的提示問題，向大家介紹一次你所參加的外出研學(xué)活動(dòng)，說一說你去了哪，做了什么，以及你的收獲。提示詞語：historicalsites,museums,experience,fantastic,exciting提示問題：1.Wheredidyougoonthestudytour?2.Whatdidyoudoonthetour?3.Whathaveyoulearntfromthestudytour?MyStudyTour_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文MyStudyTour

Lastterm,ItookpartinastudytourwithmyclassmatestoXi’an.WefirstwenttovisitEmperorQinshihuang’sMausoleumSiteMuseum,wherewesawthewisdomofancientChinesepeople.Intheafternoon,wewenttowatchsomeshadowplays,anancientformofChinesestorytelling.Thefollowingday,weclimbedthefamousGreatWildGoosePagoda.Standingonthetopofit,wehadagreatviewofthecity.Afterthat,wetastedsomedeliciouslocalfood.Wealsohadlotsofactivities,suchasclimbingthemountainsandsharingthestudytourreport.Thetripwasbothpleasantandeducational.

IfeelluckytohavesuchalovelytourinXian.ItwasanexcellentopportunitytoexperiencethelocalcultureandgainadeeperappreciationofChinesehistory.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏信息提示的內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并且突出寫作的要點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，開門見山，介紹一次你所參加的外出研學(xué)活動(dòng)；第二步，具體闡述要點(diǎn)提示內(nèi)容。重點(diǎn)寫你去了哪，做了什么；第三步，書寫結(jié)語，談?wù)勛约簠⒓恿舜舜瓮獬鲅袑W(xué)活動(dòng)的收獲。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加，加入②hadagreatviewof對……看得很清楚③suchas例如④lotsof許多[高分句型]①WefirstwenttovisitEmperorQinshihuang’sMausoleumSiteMuseum,wherewesawthewisdomofancientChinesepeople.（where引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②ItwasanexcellentopportunitytoexperiencethelocalcultureandgainadeeperappreciationofChinesehistory.（it作形式主語的強(qiáng)調(diào)句）7．假如你是天津的一名中學(xué)生李明，剛剛結(jié)束五一小長假旅游回到學(xué)校。請你根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示，以“ATriptoBeijing”為題寫一篇短文，向你的同學(xué)們講述一下你的北京之旅。(1)天氣晴朗，我和家人開始了兩天的旅程。(2)早上7:30我們出發(fā)，車程大約半小時(shí)。(3)上午我們參觀了故宮博物院，學(xué)到了許多歷史知識和傳統(tǒng)文化。(4)第二天清晨，我們登上了長城，雄偉的長城是世界著名奇觀之一；下午乘地鐵去王府井大街品嘗北京烤鴨。(5)我的旅游感受……參考詞匯：王府井大街：WangfujingStreet故宮：thePalaceMuseum

北京烤鴨：PekingRoastDuckDuringtheMayDayholiday,Iwentto_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文DuringtheMayDayholiday,IwenttoBeijingforavisitwithmyparents.WeleftTianjinat7:30onthemorningofMay1st,andwetooktheBeijing-TianjinIntercityRailwaytogetthere.Ittookusabouthalfanhourtoarrivethere.Toourjoy,theweatherwaspleasant.Andwebeganourtwo-daytripinBeijing.Firstofall,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegottoBeijing.Welistenedtothetourguide,andknewmoreknowledgeaboutourChinesehistoryandtraditionalculture.What’smore,Iboughtmygoodfriendsmanylovelypresents.Onearlymorningofthesecondday,wewenttowalkuptheGreatWall.Itwasoneofthemostfamouswondersintheworld.Afterthat,wetooktheundergroundtothecitycenter,WangfujingStreet.Atthatmoment,weallfeltveryhungry,sowedecidedtotryPekingRoastDuck.ThoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasameaningfulexperienceandIwillneverforgetit.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，要求以“ATriptoBeijing”為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出對北京之行的介紹；第二步，具體介紹在北京做了什么；第三步，表達(dá)自己的旅游感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①Firstofall首先②assoonas一……就……③Atthatmoment在那一刻④decidetodo決定做[高分句型]①Firstofall,wewenttoseethePalaceMuseumassoonaswegottoBeijing.（時(shí)間狀語從句）②ThoughIfelttiredafterthetrip,itwasameaningfulexperienceandIwillneverforgetit.（讓步狀語從句）8．假如你是李華，你正在英國牛津大學(xué)參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃下周末去倫敦旅游。某旅行社在網(wǎng)上發(fā)布的一則廣告引起了你的注意，但一些具體信息不明確。請你根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)提示，給這個(gè)旅行社的工作人員發(fā)一封電子郵件，詢問有關(guān)情況。

詢問要點(diǎn)包括：（1）費(fèi)用是否包括參觀景點(diǎn)的門票、午餐；（2）返程的準(zhǔn)確時(shí)間；（3）是否有購物的時(shí)間。要求：（1）可根據(jù)要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；（2）90詞左右；電子郵件的格式、開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：費(fèi)用feeDearSirorMadam,

I’mLiHua.I’mfromChina,butI’mstudyingatUniversityofOxfordnow.I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthetwodays’tourofLondon._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

ThankyouforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【答案】例文DearSirorMadam,

I’mLiHua.I’mfromChina,butI’mstudyingatUniversityofOxfordnow.I’mwritingformoreinformationaboutthetwodays’tourofLondon.Firstly,I’dliketoknowmoreaboutthefee.Doesitincludetheentrancefeesfortheplaceswewillvisit?Whataboutlunch?Isitincluded?OrdoIneedtobringmyownfood?Secondly,couldyoupleasetellmetheexacttimewhenIcanexpecttobeback?IhavesomethingimportanttodoonthatdaysoI’dliketoknowit.Thirdly,Iwonderiftherewillbetimeforshopping.IreallywanttohavealookatthebigstoresinLondon.ThankyouforyourtimeandI’mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一封電子郵件；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般將來時(shí)”、“現(xiàn)在進(jìn)行時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，學(xué)生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)提示”中給這個(gè)旅行社的工作人員咨詢下周末去倫敦旅游的介紹。咨詢內(nèi)容包括費(fèi)用是否包括參觀景點(diǎn)的門票、午餐，返程的準(zhǔn)確時(shí)間以及是否有購物的時(shí)間等。適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，介紹自己在英國牛津大學(xué)參加短期語言培訓(xùn)，計(jì)劃下周末去倫敦旅游；第二步，咨詢下周末去倫敦旅游的相關(guān)情況，咨詢內(nèi)容包括費(fèi)用是否包括參觀景點(diǎn)的門票、午餐，返程的準(zhǔn)確時(shí)間以及是否有購物的時(shí)間等；第三步，書寫結(jié)束語。表達(dá)“期待得到回復(fù)”的想法。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①twodays’tourofLondon兩天的倫敦之旅②knowmoreabout更多地了解③somethingimportant重要的事情④lookingforwardto盼望[高分句型]①Secondly,couldyoupleasetellmetheexacttimewhenIcanexpecttobeback?（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語從句）②Thirdly,Iwonderiftherewillbetimeforshopping.（Iwonder+if引導(dǎo)的賓語從句）9．旅行能讓我們感受到自然的魅力、歷史的積淀和文化的傳承。每個(gè)人在旅行中都有很多的收獲和不同的體會(huì)。同學(xué)們，在這個(gè)暑假里，你和家人或朋友去過哪里旅行呢？請以“AnUnforgettablePlaceIHaveBeento”為題，談一談你去過的一個(gè)難忘的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及它令人難忘的原因。要求：1.條理清晰，內(nèi)容完整，語句通順，書寫工整；2.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80詞。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：Ihavebeentomanyplacestheseyears.AnunforgettableplaceIhavebeentoisQingdao.Lastsummer,myfriendsandIwenttoQingdao.Wehadagreattimethere.Qingdaoisabeautifulcity.Wedidalotofthingsthere,suchasswimming,boatingandclimbingmountains.Wealsovisitedthetrestle.AsalandmarklandscapeofQingdao,ithasitsuniquecharm.Qingdaoisalsofamousforitsfood.Theseafoodthereisreallydelicious.Qingdaohasaveryuniquefestival—QingdaoBeerFestival.Themostexcitingthingistoseethesunrise.Whenthesunrosefromtheeast,wecheered.Forthefirstrayofsunshineinthemorning,peoplealwayshavedifferentemotions.Theseemotionsaretheexpectationofanewdayandthefinalfarewelltoyesterday.Itookmanyphotosaswell.Theycanbemybestmemories.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過去時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，注意不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出“最難忘的地方”這一話題；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容，在那里做了哪些事以及它令人難忘的原因；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。表達(dá)自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①haveagreattime玩得開心②befamousfor以……而著名③aswell也[高分句型]①Whenthesunrosefromtheeast,wecheered.（when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語從句）②AnunforgettableplaceIhavebeentoisQingdao.（定語從句）10．假如你是李晨，你的美國筆友Linda打算來中國度假。請你根據(jù)下面所給的要點(diǎn)提示給她寫一封電子郵件，簡單介紹一下中國的風(fēng)俗與餐桌禮儀。詞數(shù)：80—120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。參考要點(diǎn)：1.赴宴要準(zhǔn)時(shí)，見面