Unit1Dreamhomes單元話題寫作指導(dǎo)與演練（必做）

Unit1Dreamhomes單元寫作指導(dǎo)與演練單元寫作早知道寫作任務(wù)本單元的話題是“夢(mèng)想中的家”。家是避風(fēng)的港灣,是人們不變的牽掛。當(dāng)然,每個(gè)人心中都有自己夢(mèng)想的家。在具體的寫作中,學(xué)生應(yīng)做到以下幾點(diǎn):1.能描述夢(mèng)想中的家的方位、大小以及特點(diǎn);2.能使用一些方位詞描述夢(mèng)想中的家的內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)以及設(shè)施;3.能對(duì)夢(mèng)想中的家進(jìn)行評(píng)價(jià)或總結(jié)。常用表達(dá)常用詞匯1.dream夢(mèng)想 2.centre中心 3.house房屋4.floor樓層;地板 5.garden花園 6.bedroom臥室7.bathroom浴室 8.balcony陽臺(tái) 9.study書房10.kitchen廚房 11.near靠近 12fortable舒適的13.livingroom起居室 14.dinningroom餐廳 15.inthecentreof...在……中心16.nextto緊鄰;在……旁邊 17.infrontof在……前面 18.befullof充滿……19.bedifferentfrom和……不同 20.thesameas和……一樣21.sharesthwithsb與某人分享某物 22.ofone’sown屬于某人自己的23.atthefootof在……腳下常用句子1.Mydreamhomeliesatthefootofahill.我夢(mèng)想的家坐落在山腳下。2.Ithasfourfloors.它有四層樓。3.Therearetwosofasinthelivingroom.在客廳里有兩個(gè)沙發(fā)。4.There’sabiggardenbehindthehouse.房子后面有個(gè)大花園。5.Iwouldliketoinvitemyfriendstoplaygameswithmeontheweekend.我想邀請(qǐng)我的朋友們周末和我一起玩游戲。6.Whatabeautifulplaceitis!這是一個(gè)多么漂亮的地方啊!7.Thehouselooksbigandfortable.那座房子看起來又大又舒適。8.Itisagoodplacetolivein.它是個(gè)居住的好地方。如果讓你選擇一個(gè)夢(mèng)想中的家，它會(huì)是什么樣子呢？跟大家分享一下你夢(mèng)想中的家吧。請(qǐng)以“MyDreamHome"為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【寫作框架設(shè)計(jì)】【范文賞讀】My

Dream

HomeMy

dream

home

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in

thecentre

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city.

It

has

twofloors.On

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first

floor,

there

isa

big

and

clean

kitchen,

andthere

is

a

large

fridge

in

it.

Onthe

second

floor,

there

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fourrooms.

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of

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study,and

there

are

many

interestingbooks

and

a

puter

in

it.

I

caninvite

my

friends

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like

my

dream

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verymuch.①這篇短文用了一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)且以第一人稱介紹理想的家

②作者采用三個(gè)自然段來寫，段落分明，構(gòu)思清晰，既注重了外觀又注重了內(nèi)部結(jié)構(gòu)。最后作者用一句話表達(dá)自己對(duì)理想的家的喜愛之情一為了激發(fā)中學(xué)生創(chuàng)意靈感，提高學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)英語的熱情，舉辦了“Mydreamhome”的演講比賽。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面所提供的信息，完成演講稿。1.房子大，有兩層，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花園；2.房間多，至少有8個(gè)房間；一層有廚房、臥室等；二層有浴室、書房等；3.很舒適，放學(xué)后在書房做作業(yè)；早上在花園讀書；可以和朋友在家聚會(huì)；4.其他。要求：1.字?jǐn)?shù)不少于80個(gè)。開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。2.所寫短文必須包括以上要點(diǎn)，省略處適當(dāng)發(fā)揮使短文通順流暢。3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名、地名等相關(guān)信息。4.表達(dá)清楚，語法正確，上下文連貫。Ladiesandgentlemen,I’dliketotellyouaboutmydreamhome.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.【答案】Ladiesandgentlemen,I’dliketotellyouaboutmydreamhome.Itisalargehouseinthecountry.Ithastwofloors.Myfamilycanlivetogether.Thereisagardenbehindthehouse.Thereareatleast8rooms.Onthefirstfloorthereisakitchen,adiningroom,asittingroomandabedroom.Onthesecondfloortherearetwobedrooms,abathroomandastudy.Mydreamhomeisveryfortable.AfterschoolIdomyhomeworkinthestudy.InthemorningIreadbooksinthegardenandIcanalsogrowsomeflowersinit.Icanaskmyfriendstohaveparties,watchfilmsorplaygamestogetherinthehouse.Itisgreatfun!Ilovemyhome.That’sall.Thankyou!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏提示，并適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，根據(jù)開頭提示，介紹房子大，有兩層，可以和家人住在一起，后面有花園；第二步，介紹房間多，至少有8個(gè)房間；一層有廚房、臥室等；二層有浴室、書房等；第三步，介紹很舒適，放學(xué)后在書房做作業(yè)；早上在花園讀書；可以和朋友在家聚會(huì)；第四步，表達(dá)自己的感受。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①wouldliketodosth.想做某事。②doone’shomework做家庭作業(yè)③atleast至少④playgames玩游戲

[高分句型]①Onthefirstfloorthereisakitchen,adiningroom,asittingroomandabedroom.（therebe結(jié)構(gòu)）②Icanaskmyfriendstohaveparties,watchfilmsorplaygamestogetherinthehouse.（asksb.todosth.讓某人做某事）二每個(gè)人都有自己夢(mèng)想的家園。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下列要點(diǎn)提示，寫一篇名為Mydreamhome的短文。1.小區(qū)在山腳下的一個(gè)小鎮(zhèn)上，臨近大海……2.公交車站就在附近，小區(qū)四周有……3.我住在九樓，我家有臥室，客廳……4.鄰居友好，各有技藝，大家互相幫助……注意事項(xiàng)：1.文章80詞左右，包含以上全部要點(diǎn)；2.語句通順連貫，字跡清晰；3.文中不得出現(xiàn)真是校名、人名。MydreamhomeEastorwest,homeisthebest.Everybodyknowsthat.Butstillwehaveadreamhomeinourmind.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MydreamhomeEastorwest,homeisthebest.Everybodyknowsthat.Butstillwehaveadreamhomeinourmind.Mydreamhomeisinasmalltownatthefootofahill.Itisnearthesea.Theairisfresh.Therearemanyflowers,treesandgreenhills.EverymorningIcansmelltheflowersandhearthebirdssing.Therearemanybusesandundergroundstothetowncenter.It’sveryeasyforpeopletodosomeshopping.Therearemanyfamiliesinourtown.Neighborshereknoweachother.Theyareallkindandhelpful.Theyoftensharetheirdifferentskillsandhelpuswithallkindsofproblems.Therearemanytallbuildings.Iliveontheninthfloor.Therearesomeroomsinit,suchasbedroomsandlivingroom.Ilovetositonthebalconyandlookoutatthesea.It’sgoodformetoliveinatownlikethat.Ihopetohavemydreamhomeoneday!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇材料作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：要求以Mydreamhome為題，結(jié)合提示內(nèi)容進(jìn)行寫作，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫作重點(diǎn)。[寫作步驟]第一步，引出對(duì)夢(mèng)想家園的介紹；第二步，具體闡述寫作內(nèi)容。從“位置、周邊設(shè)施、居室和鄰居”幾個(gè)方面重點(diǎn)介紹；第三步，書寫結(jié)語。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inourmind在我們的腦海中②dosomeshopping購物③eachother彼此④allkindsof各種各樣的[高分句型]①Therearemanybusesandundergroundstothetowncenter.（Therebe句型）②It’sgoodformetoliveinatownlikethat.（It固定句型）三請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下表中的提示，以“Mydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhood”為題，談?wù)勛约豪硐肷鐓^(qū)中的夢(mèng)想家園。社區(qū)情況社區(qū)很大；鄰居友善；病有人醫(yī)，壞有人修，老有人問，學(xué)有人幫……周圍環(huán)境在一座小山腳下，可以……房子概況兩層，一個(gè)花園……內(nèi)部設(shè)施有多個(gè)房間、一個(gè)大陽臺(tái)……要求：1.短文不少于80詞，開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；2.語句通順，意思連貫，字跡工整；3.內(nèi)容必須包括表格中的所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。MydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhoodMydreamhomeisatthefootofahill.Ithastwofloors.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】MydreamhomeinthedreamneighbourhoodMydreamhomeisatthefootofahill.Ithastwofloors.Thereisabeautifulgardenwithdifferentkindsofflowers.Ther