壓軸題20書(shū)面表達(dá)（一）話題類-2023年中考英語(yǔ)壓軸題專項(xiàng)訓(xùn)練

壓軸題20書(shū)面表達(dá)（一）話題類中考書(shū)面表達(dá)題貼近學(xué)生實(shí)際生活，緊密聯(lián)系熱點(diǎn)話題，寫(xiě)作話題真實(shí)從而讓考生有話可寫(xiě)。書(shū)面表達(dá)情景實(shí)用性程度高，各地試題都符合同學(xué)們的認(rèn)知水平和日常生活經(jīng)歷，題目設(shè)計(jì)關(guān)注學(xué)生成長(zhǎng)，注意培養(yǎng)其良好的道德品質(zhì)和健全的人格：另外，所涉及話題關(guān)注社會(huì)，富有時(shí)代特色，能喚起同學(xué)們強(qiáng)烈的主人翁意識(shí)和責(zé)任感。這種貼近生活、立足基礎(chǔ)、發(fā)揚(yáng)個(gè)性的命題理念仍將是今后幾省各地中考書(shū)面表達(dá)的基本思路。認(rèn)真審題。審好題是寫(xiě)好書(shū)面表達(dá)的關(guān)鍵。審題時(shí)要注意試題的要求，抓住要點(diǎn)，詞數(shù)符合要求。構(gòu)思提綱。有了提綱，我們就可以根據(jù)提綱和主題確定相關(guān)寫(xiě)作材料。通常書(shū)面表達(dá)給出的話題是開(kāi)放的，而具體的內(nèi)容要求學(xué)生自己發(fā)揮，因此選擇恰當(dāng)?shù)乃夭囊彩鞘苟涛闹行耐怀?、明確的關(guān)鍵。初寫(xiě)短文。一切都準(zhǔn)備就緒，就可以動(dòng)筆寫(xiě)作了，在寫(xiě)作的過(guò)程中我們要注意句子的準(zhǔn)確性、連貫性以及簡(jiǎn)潔性。使用的詞語(yǔ)、短語(yǔ)及句型盡量用自己有把握的詞。同時(shí)還要注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，使句子銜接自然。修改潤(rùn)色。修改潤(rùn)色是獲取高分的必要步驟。這一步我們除了檢查短文的各種錯(cuò)誤外，還要檢查語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)是否合理，有無(wú)重復(fù)、啰嗦的語(yǔ)言，大小寫(xiě)是否正確，格式是否正確，詞數(shù)是否符合要求等。1．（2023·山東濟(jì)寧·統(tǒng)考二模）假如你班將要以“如何為中考做準(zhǔn)備”為主題開(kāi)一個(gè)英語(yǔ)主題班會(huì)，請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下內(nèi)容提示從生活作息習(xí)慣、學(xué)習(xí)習(xí)慣、面對(duì)困難等方面寫(xiě)一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀阏J(rèn)為在中考準(zhǔn)備過(guò)程中要注意的事項(xiàng)及理由。內(nèi)容提示：HowwillyoupreparefortheHighSchoolEntranceExam?Whatwillyoudoifyoufacedifficulties?Areyouingoodmoods(心情)?注意：1.須包括以上所有提示信息，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。2.文中不得出現(xiàn)任何透露個(gè)人真實(shí)身份的信息。3.100詞左右，開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Boysandgirls,theHighSchoolEntranceExamising.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Boysandgirls,theHighSchoolEntranceExamising.Whatshouldwedoinordertopreparewellfortheexam?Herearesomesuggestions.Firstly,it’sveryimportantforustobeingoodmoods.Don’tbenervousorstressed.Otherwise,wewillnothavethecouragetofacedifficulties.Secondly,weshouldhaveproperaims.Ifweaimtoolow,wemaybeelazy.Ifweaimtoohigh,wemayloseconfidence.Thirdly,don’tstayuplatesothatwecanmakeourselvesenergeticinclassandpayattentiontoourstudy.Fourthly,we’dbetterhavemoremunicationwithourparents,teachersandclassmates.Theycanhelpusgetoutoftrouble.Finally,ahealthydietisveryusefulaswell.Withthesedone,Ibelievewecanbesuccessfulintheexam.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，需圍繞“為中考做準(zhǔn)備“展開(kāi)；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主；③提示：內(nèi)容提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮，使用正確的詞匯和句型以及時(shí)態(tài)，并注意行文連貫；[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，以“如何為考試準(zhǔn)備，以下是一些建議”引出下文；第二步，從各方面展開(kāi)闡述自己的備考建議，可運(yùn)用連接詞語(yǔ)如firstly，secondly，thirdly等使得文章更連貫；第三步，總結(jié)文章，表明做好了會(huì)取得好成績(jī)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inorderto為了②havethecouragetodosth有勇氣做某事③stayuplate熬夜④getoutoftrouble擺脫困難[高分句型]①Thirdly,don’tstayuplatesothatwecanmakeourselvesenergeticinclassandpayattentiontoourstudy.（sothat引導(dǎo)的目的狀語(yǔ)從句）②Withthesedone,Ibelievewecanbesuccessfulintheexam.（with介詞短語(yǔ)做伴隨狀語(yǔ)）2．（2023·江蘇南京·統(tǒng)考一模）紅星中學(xué)王校長(zhǎng)是一位英語(yǔ)老師，在學(xué)校網(wǎng)站的英語(yǔ)欄目“HEARYOURVOICE”發(fā)帖，了解學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)和學(xué)校食堂兩方面的情況。假如你是學(xué)生李明，請(qǐng)根據(jù)校長(zhǎng)的帖子，選擇其中一個(gè)方面反映問(wèn)題，并提出建議。←HEARYOURVOICEMr.WangDearstudents,Howiseverythinggoing?Doyouhaveanyproblemswithyourstudy?Forexample,doyouoftenstayuplatetofinishyourhomework?WhataboutourStudents’Canteen(食堂)?Areyousatisfiedwithyourlunch?Lookingforwardtoyourproblemsandadvice.5:20PM.Apr.16,2023注意：1.內(nèi)容涵蓋所有要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，全文連貫通順。2.詞數(shù)80左右（回帖開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）。3.文中不得提及有關(guān)考生個(gè)人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。.DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yoursfaithfully,LiMing【答案】Possibleversion1:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.Iwanttotellyousomethingaboutourstudy.Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.Sincewehavesevensubjects,wehavetospendmorethanthreehoursfinishingourhomework.Wouldyoumaketeachersreducehomework?Besides,mostofusfindlessonsboring.Althoughexercisesandexamshelpusunderstandthekeypoints,theytakeuptoomuchtime.Dearheadmaster,youcan’timaginehowboringourschoollifeis.Ithinkteachersshouldimprovetheirteachingmethods.Ihopetheseproblemscanbedealtwithsoon.Yoursfaithfully,LiMingPossibleversion2:DearMr.Wang,IamLiMing,fromGradeNine.IwanttosaysomethingaboutourStudents’Canteen.First,Iamunhappywiththelunchfood.Sometimesitisnotdelicious.However,Ihavetoeatit.Morekindsofdishesshouldbeprovided.Moreover,thecanteenistoosmalltoholdsomanystudents.Whynotbuildalargerone?Finally,theenvironmentatthecanteenisnotsatisfying.Thetablesandchairsaresometimesdirty.Ithinkthecanteenworkersshoulddothecleaningmorecarefully.Iftheproblemscanbesolved,studentswillhaveahappiertimeoncampus.Yoursfaithfully,LiMing【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意圍繞王校長(zhǎng)帖子中的問(wèn)題進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山，交代寫(xiě)作目的；第二步，闡述學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)或?qū)W校食堂的問(wèn)題并給出建議；第三步，表達(dá)自己的期望，希望這些問(wèn)題能夠成功解決。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①firstofall首先②keypoints重點(diǎn)③takeup占據(jù)[高分句型]①Firstofall,properexerciseshelpuscheckwhatwehavelearned.（what引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）3．（2023·云南昭通·統(tǒng)考一模）提示：成長(zhǎng)的過(guò)程中總會(huì)經(jīng)歷很多，也許是學(xué)會(huì)了一項(xiàng)新的技能，也許是和家人出去旅行……哪件事情使你印象深刻或收獲良多呢？請(qǐng)以“A(n)________Experience”為題寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。敘述一段你的經(jīng)歷，并談?wù)勀愕母惺?。要求?.請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)全后再作答；2.語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；3.文中不得使用你的真實(shí)姓名，校名，否則以零分計(jì)；4.請(qǐng)將短文寫(xiě)在答題卡上，寫(xiě)在本試卷上無(wú)效。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文AnUnforgettableExperienceEveryonehassomeunforgettableexperiences.Ihadaveryunforgettableexperience.Lastsummerholiday,Ilearnedtoswim.Iwenttotheswimmingpoolwithmyfather.Hetaughtmehowtoswim.Atfirst,Iwasafraidofdivinginthewater.AndIfeltunfortableinthewater.Butmyfatheralwaysencouragedme.Hesaidhewouldprotectme.ThenIbegantoswim,butIcouldn’tswimforwardatall.Itmademeupset.Thenmyfathertoldmehowtomove,howtostretchoutmyhandsandlegs.Slowly,Icouldmoveаlittle.Ittookmetendaystolearntoswim.Whatanunforgettableexperienceitwas!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：題干中沒(méi)有給出明確的寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)，考生可結(jié)合自身實(shí)際，敘述自己難忘的經(jīng)歷，注意行文連貫、邏輯清晰。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，介紹自己有一次難忘的經(jīng)歷；第二步，具體介紹該經(jīng)歷；第三步，總結(jié)全文，表達(dá)情感。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①beafraidof害怕……②encourage鼓勵(lì)③unfortable不舒服的[高分句型]①Hetaughtmehowtoswim.（疑問(wèn)詞+不定式）②Ittookmetendaystolearntoswim.（ittooksb.+時(shí)間+todosth.某人花了多少時(shí)間做某事）4．（2023·云南玉溪·統(tǒng)考一模）HappinessIsFrom

提示：幸福源于什么？不同的人會(huì)有不同的感受。請(qǐng)以“HappinessIsFrom

”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，敘述你生活或?qū)W習(xí)中所經(jīng)歷的一件令你感到幸福快樂(lè)的事。要求：1.語(yǔ)言流暢，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不得少于60個(gè)；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。書(shū)面表達(dá)必須寫(xiě)在答題卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分。___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文HappinessIsFromHardWorkOurlifeisfullofhappiness.Myhappinessesfromhardwork.IcangethappinesseverytimeIworkhard.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteachernoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.AfterthatIkeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappydeepinmyheart.Myhappinessisfromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.TheharderIwork,themorehappinessIget.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；提示：寫(xiě)作要求已給出，不要遺漏題目中的要點(diǎn)，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)保持主謂一致，注意字?jǐn)?shù)要求。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，首先通過(guò)介紹幸福源于什么來(lái)引出話題；第二步，具體闡述學(xué)習(xí)中所經(jīng)歷的一件令你感到幸?？鞓?lè)的事；第三步，談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①takepartin參加②beafraidofdoingsth害怕做某事③giveup放棄④encouragesbtodosth鼓勵(lì)某人做某事[高分句型]①I(mǎi)wonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.（賓語(yǔ)從句）②WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappydeepinmyheart.（時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）5．（2023·云南昆明·昆明八中?？级＃?/p>

________ChangedMyLife提示：變化，促成了人的進(jìn)步和發(fā)展。在你的生活中，總有某個(gè)人、某件事或某種東西改變了你的生活，讓你得以升華。請(qǐng)以“________ChangedMyLife”為題，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)劯淖兞四愕娜?、事或物。要求?.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于60個(gè)；2.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文EnglishSongsChangedMyLifeThefavoritethinginmymiddleschoollifeistolistentoEnglishsongs.Youmightthinkitisstrangebutithasindeedchangedmylifegreatly.IusedtobeshyandhatedEnglish,Iwastiredofmemorizingallthelonganddifficultwords.Ofcourse,myEnglishwaspoor.Afterfollowingmyfriend’sadviceoflearningEnglishdailybylisteningtoEnglishsongs,Imadethefirststep.Atfirst,Iwasjustenjoyingthemusicitself.Littlebylittle,IdiscoveredthatIcouldspeakouteasily,andthewordsIlearnedinschoolappearedinfrontofmeoverandoveragain.Now,myEnglishhasimprovedalot.Andasyoucansee,IovercamemyweaknessandEnglishsongsdidchangemylife.ThankstotheEnglishsongs,theyhavemadeagreatdifferencetomylife.IhavebeebetterinmyEnglishstudyandmoreconfident.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，為話題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”和“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)完整表述內(nèi)容。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹改變自己生活的是什么，點(diǎn)明主題；第二步，分享自己的經(jīng)歷；第三步，表達(dá)自己感悟。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①u(mài)sedtodosth過(guò)去常常②infrontof在……前面③overandoveragain一再地④thanksto多虧，由于[高分句型]①Afterfollowingmyfriend’sadviceoflearningEnglishdailybylisteningtoEnglishsongs,Imadethefirststep.（動(dòng)名詞作賓語(yǔ)）②IdiscoveredthatIcouldspeakouteasily（賓語(yǔ)從句）6．（2023·河南駐馬店·統(tǒng)考一模）在你的學(xué)校生活、家庭生活、社會(huì)活動(dòng)及興趣愛(ài)好等方面，一定有讓你引以為豪的事情。請(qǐng)以“OneThingI’mProudof”為題,根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)與要求，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，記述一件令你感到自豪的事情。要點(diǎn)：1.你引以為豪的事情是什么；2.你是如何做到的；3.你引以為豪的理由。要求：1.文中不出要現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名。2.詞數(shù)100左右。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

OneThingI’mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecamegoodatEnglish.EveryEnglishclassusedtobelikeabaddreamforme.Ididn’tunderstandmyteachermostofthetime.Oneday,theteachertalkedwithmeandgavemesomeusefuladvice.Ibegantoreviewnewwordsfromtimetotime,evenonthewaytoschool.Ireadaloudtopracticepronunciation.IwatchedEnglishvideos,andkeptadiaryinEnglish.WheneverImetnewwords,Ilookedthemupinadictionary.IkeptusingEnglisheveryday.Practicemakesperfect.Abouttwomonthslater,Igotan“A”inthefinalexam.Iamreallyproudofthisexperiencebecauseithelpsmerealizethateveryonecanachievetheirgoalsthroughhardwork.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文為一篇記敘文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏“要點(diǎn)”中的引以為傲的理由，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹讓你自豪的一件事，引領(lǐng)下文；第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，重點(diǎn)介紹如何做到這個(gè)部分；第三步，書(shū)面結(jié)語(yǔ)。闡述引以為傲的理由。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①u(mài)sedtobelike過(guò)去就像②fromtimetotime時(shí)不時(shí)③achievetheirgoalsthroughhardwork通過(guò)努力實(shí)現(xiàn)目標(biāo)[高分句型]①Practicemakesperfect.(諺語(yǔ))②Ireadaloudtopracticepronunciation.(動(dòng)詞不定式作目的狀語(yǔ))7．（2023·河南·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）生活中充滿壓力，學(xué)會(huì)減壓無(wú)異于守護(hù)心靈。中考在即，作為一名考生你會(huì)如何舒緩壓力呢？請(qǐng)以“Ireducemypressureby______”為題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀氵x擇何種方式減壓，選擇該種方式的理由以及具體做法。注意：1.書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范，表達(dá)連貫，可根據(jù)內(nèi)容適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；2.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的地區(qū)、學(xué)校及姓名；3.如果文章的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】Onepossibleversion:IreducemypressurebyplayingsportsNowadays,studentsespeciallyninthgradersareundergreatpressureandsodoI.ButI’vedevelopedmyownwaytodealwithit—playingsports.I’masportslover.EverytimeIplaysports,Ifeelexcitedandrelaxed.SoIthinkit’sthebestwaytoreducemypressurebeforetheentranceexam.HereiswhatIdoeveryday.Igetupearlyeverymorningandrunforhalfanhour.Atschool,Iplaybasketballwithmyclassmatesduringthebreak.Intheeveningafterfinishingmyhomework,Iusuallytakeawalkwithmypetdog.Inmyopinion,whateveryoudotoreducepressure,happinessisthemostimportant.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，主題為中考減壓；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：首先把題目補(bǔ)充完整，表明以何種途徑進(jìn)行中考前減壓，寫(xiě)作時(shí)要說(shuō)清選擇該種方式的理由以及具體做法。[寫(xiě)作步聚]第一步，總體描述中考前的壓力狀況，引出正文；第二步，描述自己選擇運(yùn)動(dòng)減壓的原因及具體做法；第三步，最后進(jìn)行總結(jié)。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①dealwith處理，應(yīng)對(duì)②thebestwaytodosth.做某事的最佳方法③halfanhour半小時(shí)[高分句型]①SoIthinkit’sthebestwaytoreducemypressurebeforetheentranceexam.HereiswhatIdoeveryday.（省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句）；②Inmyopinion,whateveryoudotoreducepressure,happinessisthemostimportant.（whatever引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）8．（2023·山東濟(jì)南·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）回首初中時(shí)光，你一定取得了不少的進(jìn)步，是樹(shù)立了一個(gè)健康觀念、懂得了一個(gè)做事規(guī)則，還是……近日，某英文報(bào)正在進(jìn)行以“TheProgressI’veMade”為主題的征文活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，談?wù)勀阍谏詈蛯W(xué)習(xí)方面取得的進(jìn)步。內(nèi)容提示：(1)Whatprogresshaveyoumade?(2)Howdidyoumakeit?要求：(1)中心突出，語(yǔ)義連貫，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范；(2)文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名；(3)詞數(shù)80詞左右。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheProgressI’veMade

Howtimeflies!Ihavechangedalotinthepastfewyears.

Ononehand,IusedtostayuplatewhilenowIthinkit’simportantformetohaveagoodrest,soIgotobedearlyatnight.What’smore,I’mgraduallyfondoftakingexercise,suchasrunningandplayingfootball.Ontheotherhand,Iwastoolazytofinishmyhomeworkontimeinthepast,butnowIhavemademuchprogressinstudying,especiallyinmyEnglishbecauseIhavetriedmybesttoimprovemyselfwithmyclassmates’andteachers’help.

Inaword,thesechangesmakemehappyandIreallybelievemylifewillbebetterandbetterbecauseofthesechanges.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇說(shuō)說(shuō)明文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)以“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”為主；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏描寫(xiě)生活與學(xué)習(xí)兩方面的進(jìn)步，適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，強(qiáng)調(diào)“時(shí)間飛逝，自己在過(guò)去幾年有了很多改變”。第二步，具體闡述寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容，主要圍繞“生活和學(xué)習(xí)”兩方面的進(jìn)步展開(kāi)描寫(xiě)，如“過(guò)去晚睡現(xiàn)在早睡并喜歡運(yùn)動(dòng)”，“過(guò)去不能按時(shí)完成作業(yè)現(xiàn)在學(xué)習(xí)上取得進(jìn)步”。第三步，書(shū)寫(xiě)結(jié)語(yǔ)，強(qiáng)調(diào)這些改變對(duì)自己的影響“讓自己更開(kāi)心”，并表明希望“生活越來(lái)越好”。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①inthepastfewyears在過(guò)去幾年②usedtostayuplate過(guò)去常常熬夜③amgraduallyfondoftakingexercise逐漸喜歡鍛煉④havetriedmybesttoimprovemyself盡我最大的努力提升自己[高分句型]①Ononehand,IusedtostayuplatewhilenowIthinkit’simportantformetohaveagoodrest,soIgotobedearlyatnight.（while連接兩個(gè)并列句，表示對(duì)比，且第二句為so連接的兩個(gè)并列句，其中第一句think后接省略that的賓語(yǔ)從句，）②Ontheotherhand,Iwastoolazytofinishmyhomeworkontimeinthepast,butnowIhavemademuchprogressinstudying,especiallyinmyEnglishbecauseIhavetriedmybesttoimprovemyselfwithmyclassmates’andteachers’help.（本句是but連接的兩個(gè)并列句，第一句中含固定句式too...todosth.“太……而不能”，第二句中含because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）9．（2023·云南昭通·統(tǒng)考一模）幸福源于什么？不同的人會(huì)有不同的感受。請(qǐng)以“HappinessFrom________”為題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，敘述你生活或?qū)W習(xí)中所經(jīng)歷的一件令你感到幸?？鞓?lè)的事。要求：1.請(qǐng)先將題目補(bǔ)全后，再作答；2.語(yǔ)言流暢、書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范、卷面整潔，詞數(shù)不少于80個(gè)；3.文中不得使用真實(shí)姓名、校名，否則以零分計(jì)。HappinessFrom_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

HappinessFromHardWorkOurlifeisfullofhappiness.Myhappinessesfromhardwork.IcangethappinesseverytimeIworkhard.Lastterm,IwaschosentotakepartintheEnglishSpeechContest.IwasnervouswhenIheardthenews,becauseIwasalwaysafraidofspeakinginpublic.IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.MyEnglishteachernoticedthat.Shehadalongtalkwithmeandencouragedmetochallengemyself.Afterthat,Ikeptpracticingeveryday.WhenIgotthefirstprizeinthecontest,Ifelthappyfrommydeepheart.Myhappinessisfromthesuccessthroughmyhardwork.TheharderIwork,themorehappinessIget.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，要圍繞幸福的來(lái)源展開(kāi)；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般過(guò)去時(shí)為主；③提示：考生應(yīng)注意圍繞主題展開(kāi)闡述，并應(yīng)先補(bǔ)全題目，確定好主題，使用正確的詞匯和句型，注意行文邏輯和文章連貫性。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，補(bǔ)全題目，表明自己的幸福源于努力工作；第二步，具體闡述自己所經(jīng)歷的一件事情，要圍繞主題展開(kāi)，注意時(shí)態(tài)的正確性，突出自己感受到的幸福和付出的辛勤；第三步，總結(jié)文章，并突出自己的主題，即幸福源于努力。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①befullof充滿②takepartin參加③inpublic在公共場(chǎng)合④challengemyself挑戰(zhàn)自我[高分句型]IwonderedifIcouldsucceedandIwantedtogiveup.（if引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句）10．（2023·山東青島·統(tǒng)考一模）你的外國(guó)筆友Marcus對(duì)中國(guó)文化很感興趣，特別想了解一下年夜飯習(xí)俗，請(qǐng)以“TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve”為題，寫(xiě)一篇短文，向Marcus介紹一下你自己家鄉(xiāng)年夜飯的菜式、寓意及豐富多樣的文化習(xí)俗。要求:1.不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名和校名；2.詞數(shù)：80100。TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：TheFamilyDinneronSpringFestivalEve

TheSpringFestivalEvedinner,alsoknownastheFamilyReunionDinner,isanimportantpartoftheChineseNewYearcelebrations.Itisatimeforfamiliestoetogetherandenjoyafeast,andthedishesservedduringthedinnerareoftenmeaningfulandcarryspecialmeanings.

Inmyhometown,theSpringFestivalEvedinnerisusuallyheldathome.Weserveawidevarietyofdishes,includingfish,dumplings,chicken,pork,andmanyvegetables.Fishisanessentialdishduringthedinner,asitisasymbolofabundanceandprosperityfortheingyear.Dumplingsareanotherimportantdish,astheyrepresentwealthandgoodfortune.Besides,wealsohaveagameof“guessinglanternriddles”,wherewetrytoguessthemeaningoftheriddleswrittenonlanterns.

Overall,theSpringFestivalEvedinnerisatimeforfamilybonding,reflection,andcelebration.It’satimetoreflectonthepastyearandlookforwardtothenewone.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇話題作文，圍繞“家鄉(xiāng)年夜飯”展開(kāi)；②時(shí)態(tài)：一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)；③提示：要點(diǎn)提示已經(jīng)給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏，并在適當(dāng)?shù)牡胤窖a(bǔ)充和發(fā)揮，使用正確的詞匯和句型，注意行文連貫和邏輯。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖，介紹年夜飯?jiān)谥袊?guó)的重要意義；第二步，介紹自己家鄉(xiāng)年夜飯的特色菜式以及寓意，如魚(yú)的寓意，餃子的意義等，同時(shí)也補(bǔ)充文化習(xí)俗，如猜燈謎；第三步，總結(jié)文章，升華年夜飯的意義。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①enjoyafeast享受盛宴②awidevarietyof種類豐富的③asymbolof……的象征④lookforwardto期待[高分句型]①I(mǎi)tisatimeforfamiliestoetogetherandenjoyafeast.（itisatimeforsbtodosth某人是時(shí)候做某事）②Dumplingsareanotherimportantdish,astheyrepresentwealthandgoodfortune.（as引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句）11．（2023·遼寧葫蘆島·統(tǒng)考一模）本周英語(yǔ)角的主題是“暢想20年以后的生活”。假如你是李華，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)20年后你即將從事的職業(yè)、居住地、愛(ài)好、日常生活等方面，寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文，為此次活動(dòng)做準(zhǔn)備。要求：1.要求語(yǔ)言連貫，語(yǔ)法準(zhǔn)確，層次清晰，書(shū)寫(xiě)規(guī)范。2.文章必須包括所給提示內(nèi)容，并可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：

Hello,everyone!I’mhappytosharemylifein20yearswithyou.In20years,Ishouldbe34yearsold.IwillbeadoctorinahospitalbecauseIwanttohelppeopletostayhealthy.IwillliveinabeautifulbeachcityandIwillhaveasmallplane.SoIwillgooutbyplane.Iwon’thavetochangemyclothesorwashmyclothesbecausetheclotheswillbewarmwhenitiscoldandcool.RobotswilldoallthejobsforussoIwillhavealotoffreetime.Iwillnotonlyhavemoretimetoenjoymyselfbutalsospendmoretimehavingtripsonholidaywithmyfamily.Ithinkmylifeintwentyyearswillbegreat!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文。②時(shí)態(tài)：一般將來(lái)時(shí)。③提示：為要點(diǎn)中的內(nèi)容適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，點(diǎn)明要寫(xiě)的是二十年后的事情。第二步，具體介紹20年后會(huì)發(fā)生哪些變化。第三步，總結(jié)全文。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①stayhealthy保持健康②freetime空閑時(shí)間③enjoymyself玩得開(kāi)心[高分句型]①I(mǎi)willbeadoctorinahospitalbecauseIwanttohelppeopletostayhealthy.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句。）②Iwon’thavetochangemyclothesorwashmyclothesbecausetheclotheswillbewarmwhenitiscoldandcool.（because引導(dǎo)的原因狀語(yǔ)從句，when引導(dǎo)的時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句。）12．（2023·貴州·統(tǒng)考一模）貴州自然風(fēng)光秀美，地方風(fēng)物獨(dú)特。近日，貴州天眼新聞雙語(yǔ)頻道正在舉辦主題為“亮出貴州名片，我為家鄉(xiāng)代言”的英語(yǔ)征文比賽。請(qǐng)你以“Beautiful________,MyHometown”為題，寫(xiě)一篇約80詞的稿件。要求：1.補(bǔ)全標(biāo)題；2.稿件須包含思維導(dǎo)圖中至少兩條信息；3.適當(dāng)表達(dá)自己的看法及感受；4.文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的姓名和校名。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文：BeautifulTongren,MyHometownMyhometownTongrenliesinthenortheastofGuizhou.Itisaplacewithalonghistory.TherearemanyplacesofinterestinTongren,suchasMountFanjing,JinjiangRiver,NineDragonsCaveandsoon.Whenyouclimbthemountain,youcanenjoytheseaofcloudsandthemushroomstones.JinjiangRiverissocleanthatyoucanseealotoffishinit.Besides,thespecialitiesinTongrenarequitedelicious,suchasthemungbeannoodlesandthesteamedstuffedbunsmadewithglutinousricepowder.What’smore,thelocalpeoplearewarmheartedandfriendly.MyhometownisabeautifulplaceandIloveit.WeletovisitTongren!【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇半命題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：先確定要介紹貴州的哪個(gè)地方，再根據(jù)思維導(dǎo)圖選取至少兩點(diǎn)進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，并表達(dá)自己的看法和感受。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，介紹自己的家鄉(xiāng)——銅仁；第二步，介紹家鄉(xiāng)的具體情況，比如地理位置、名勝古跡、美食、風(fēng)土人情等；第三步，表達(dá)對(duì)家鄉(xiāng)的熱愛(ài)并歡迎大家來(lái)玩。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]①placesofinterest名勝古跡②suchas例如③speciality特色食品；特產(chǎn)[高分句型]①Whenyouclimbthemountain,youcanenjoytheseaofcloudsandthemushroomstones.（when引導(dǎo)時(shí)間狀語(yǔ)從句）②JinjiangRiverissocleanthatyoucanseealotoffishinit.（so...that引導(dǎo)結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)從句）13．（2023·重慶·模擬預(yù)測(cè)）人生在世，總有許多東西值得我們珍惜：時(shí)間、友誼、親情、健康、生活中每一個(gè)快樂(lè)的日子……回首過(guò)往，在眾多值得珍惜的事物中，你最珍惜什么呢？請(qǐng)以“珍惜”為話題，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文，分享你所珍惜的事物及理由，并談一談你在日常生活中是如何做的，你有何感想。參考信息：1.珍惜的事物(時(shí)間、友誼、親情……)；2.珍惜的理由(提升自己、溫暖他人……)；3.具體做法(言語(yǔ)、行動(dòng)……)；4.……要求：1)文中不要出現(xiàn)所在學(xué)校的校名和師生姓名；2)詞數(shù)100左右(開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。Inourdailylife,therearemanythingsthatweshouldvalue._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】例文Inourdailylife,therearemanythingsthatweshouldvalue.I’vehadmanyfriendships,butIvaluetheonewithTommost.Tomlosthisarmsinanaccidentwhenhewasachild.Althoughhebecamedisabled,hedidn’tlosehisheart.Hedidn’tdropoutofschool.Instead,hekeptstudyinghardandalwaysgotgoodgradesexams.Heevenlearnedtousehisfeettoplaythepiano.Nowheplaysitverywell.Heisofteninvitedtoplaythepianoatschoolconcerts.IvaluethefriendshipwithTomaboveallelsebecausehisstrongwillhastaughtmethatnomatterwhatI’lldo,Ishouldbestrongwilledanddetermined.【詳解】[總體分析]①題材：本文是一篇記敘文，是一篇命題作文；②時(shí)態(tài)：時(shí)態(tài)為“一般過(guò)去時(shí)”和“一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)”；③提示：寫(xiě)作要點(diǎn)已給出，考生應(yīng)注意不要遺漏題目要求中每一項(xiàng)內(nèi)容，適當(dāng)添加細(xì)節(jié)，并突出寫(xiě)作重點(diǎn)。[寫(xiě)作步驟]第一步，表明寫(xiě)作意圖。點(diǎn)明文章主題是要介紹自己珍惜的東西——友誼；第二步，具體闡述自己最珍視的東西是和湯姆的友誼，并說(shuō)明自己珍惜的理由；第三步，介紹自己是如何珍惜這段友誼的。[亮點(diǎn)詞匯]dropoutofschool退學(xué)[高分句型]①Althoughhebecamedisabled,hedidn’tlosehisheart.（although引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句）②IvaluethefriendshipwithTomaboveallelsebecausehisstrongw