應(yīng)用文：分享露營(yíng)經(jīng)歷+講義-江浙皖高中發(fā)展共同體 高三上學(xué)期10月月考英語(yǔ)試題

應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)作假定你是李華，上周末你們?nèi)胰敉饴稜I(yíng)。請(qǐng)你給英國(guó)朋友Chris寫(xiě)一封郵件分享這次經(jīng)歷，內(nèi)容包括：(1)露營(yíng)過(guò)程；(2)你的感想。注意：(1)寫(xiě)作詞數(shù)應(yīng)為80個(gè)左右；(2)請(qǐng)按如下格式在答題紙的相應(yīng)位置作答。DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,LiHua

【簡(jiǎn)析】這道題很明顯是模仿6月高考題而出的了，相關(guān)話題早年浙江卷考過(guò)續(xù)寫(xiě)，也就是2017年11月講健忘媽媽的那一篇，當(dāng)然2017年6月浙江卷應(yīng)用文寫(xiě)郊游，部分內(nèi)容或許也可以用上。露營(yíng)雖然對(duì)高中生來(lái)說(shuō)，不一定都經(jīng)歷過(guò)，但是大致知道是和吃喝玩樂(lè)以及帳篷有關(guān)，所以大體不會(huì)寫(xiě)偏?！緦忣}】文體：分享｜告知信話題：露營(yíng)時(shí)態(tài)：過(guò)去時(shí)為主（上周末）人稱：第一人稱（Iorwe）【要點(diǎn)剖析】要點(diǎn)一：露營(yíng)過(guò)程。事件的三要素為時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物，由于背景信息已經(jīng)給出了時(shí)間和人物，即上周末和myfamily，所以我們需要自行添加地點(diǎn)。思考：露營(yíng)的地點(diǎn)一般有哪些？海灘邊（喝點(diǎn)小酒、吃點(diǎn)燒烤、吹吹海風(fēng)）、小河/湖泊邊（可以野餐等）、山區(qū)（像黃山頂可以看日落，看云海）、專門(mén)露營(yíng)基地、公園等等，自己對(duì)哪個(gè)地點(diǎn)熟悉就選哪個(gè)寫(xiě)。然后整體的露營(yíng)過(guò)程可以按照時(shí)間順序來(lái)寫(xiě)，同時(shí)結(jié)合層級(jí)順序，最重要的是全文要體現(xiàn)話題詞匯。要點(diǎn)二：你的感想。這里需要思考感想的切入點(diǎn)，這里主要提供三個(gè)點(diǎn)參考。第一個(gè)就是根據(jù)同行的人，既然一起去的是家人，那么就可以從親情切入；第二個(gè)就是話題本身，可以劃分到人與自然主題語(yǔ)境，那就從大自然角度切入；第三個(gè)就是結(jié)合學(xué)生身份，從校園生活切入，可以說(shuō)遠(yuǎn)離繁忙校園生活，放松身心等。當(dāng)然，這三個(gè)切入點(diǎn)并不是孤立的，而是可以相結(jié)合的。【謀篇布局】開(kāi)頭：段首句已經(jīng)給出，通過(guò)主位推進(jìn)，我們通?？梢栽诤竺婕右痪湓?，比如用一到兩個(gè)形容詞來(lái)概述這個(gè)經(jīng)歷，同時(shí)這兩個(gè)形容詞是能貫穿以下內(nèi)容，所以不建議用太籠統(tǒng)的詞，比如good，great，fantastic，fabulous等，可以用稍微具象的詞，比如說(shuō)fun-filled充滿樂(lè)趣的，那么你的整個(gè)露營(yíng)過(guò)程就是要圍繞fun展開(kāi)，又比如說(shuō)educational有教育意義的，那么露營(yíng)過(guò)程中你的相關(guān)事件就是要來(lái)體現(xiàn)這個(gè)詞。這個(gè)知識(shí)點(diǎn)在“演講與辯論”的時(shí)候尤其要注意。I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasarelaxingandrefreshinggetaway.正文：我們家住海邊，雖然沒(méi)有親身在海邊露營(yíng)，但大致也是見(jiàn)到過(guò)很多游客露營(yíng)場(chǎng)景，所以這里選海灘邊來(lái)寫(xiě)。Earlythatmorning,assoonaswearrivedatthepicturesquebeachinXiangshan,Icouldn’twaittopitchthetent.Aftersettlingin,wefiredupthegrillforabarbecueandsippeddrinks,savoringtheraremomentsofleisure.Asthesunbegantoset,westrolledalongtheshore,collectingseashellsandenjoyingthecoolsandbeneathourfeet.Canyouguessthehighlightoftheday?Withoutadoubt,itwaswhengatheredunderaskyfullofstars,sharingstories—rangingfrommyschoollifetomom’stalesofyouthanddad’sentrepreneurialadventures.Thistripallowedmetounwindfromthepressuresofschoolandstrengthenedmybondwithmyfamily.Beingclosetonaturedidbring

meadeepsenseofpeace.結(jié)尾：從對(duì)方思考，為什么要告知英國(guó)朋友Chris？可能是對(duì)方也對(duì)露營(yíng)感興趣，可以邀請(qǐng)對(duì)方一起，興趣共鳴的同時(shí)加深友誼；分享該經(jīng)歷，讓對(duì)方了解中國(guó)生活方式，促進(jìn)文化交流。Ireallyhopeyoucanjoinusforournextcampingadventureandsharethewonderfulmoments!【參考范文】DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Itwasourfirsttimeonacampingtrip,inwhichmyfamilysleptunderthestarsintheWildernessPark.Wehadnosoonersetupthetentthanitstartedtorain.Whileweenjoyedthesoundoftheraindrippingonourtent,playinggamesandchattingaboutourdailylifestories,mompreparedsomesnacksanddrinksforus.Wemadewet-weathercampingfun.I’mgratefulforthecampingtrip.NotonlydidIenjoythebeautyofnature,butIlearnedthereisplentyofentertainmenttobefoundinexploringnature.Yours,LiHua下水文1DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wedrovetoabeautifulspotbythelake,setupourtents,andenjoyedthetranquilityofnature.Intheevening,wecookedoveranopenfireandsharedstoriesunderthestars.Thenextday,wewentfishingandhiking,whichwasbothrelaxingandinvigorating.Thewholeexperiencewasincrediblyrefreshing.Itmademerealizehowimportantitistodisconnectfromthedigitalworldandreconnectwithnature.Ifeltasenseofpeaceandunitywithmyfamilythat'shardtofindinourbusylives.I'malreadylookingforwardtoournextadventure.Yours,LiHua下水文2DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Weventuredintothemountains,wherewespenttwodayssurroundedbylushforestsandcrispair.Thefirstdaywasallaboutsettingupcampandexploringthenearbytrails.Wemarveledatthewildlifeandthebreathtakingviews.Onthesecondday,wechallengedourselveswithamoredemandinghiketoawaterfall.Itwasatoughclimb,buttherewardwasworthit.Thesoundofwatercascadingdownandthemistonourfaceswasexhilarating.Thatnight,wecookedasimplemealandenjoyedthesolitude,awayfromthecity'shustleandbustle.Thiscampingtripwasareminderofthesimplejoysinlife.Ittaughtmethevalueofpatienceandteamwork,asweallworkedtogethertoovercomechallenges.Icamebackwitharenewedappreciationforthegreatoutdoorsandthebondsweshareasafamily.Yours,LiHua下水文3DearChris,I’mwritingtosharewithyouacampingexperiencemyfamilyengagedinlastweekend.Wechoseapicturesquespotnearariver,wherewespenttheweekendimmersedinnature'sembrace.Theprocessofpitchingourtentsandpreparingourcampsitewasafun-filledfamilyaffair.Wespentourdaysfishingbytheriverbankandournightsroastingmarshmallowsoverthecampfire.Thehighlightwasastargazingsessionwhereweidentifiedconstellationsandsharedlegendsaboutthestars.Itwasasereneandpeacefulexperiencethatallowedustoslowdownandappreciatethesimplepleasuresoflife.Thiscampingtripwasamemorableadventurethatbro