如何寫好英語(yǔ)四級(jí)作文-段落

題旨來(lái)表達(dá)。整個(gè)段落必須緊扣這個(gè)主題(stickorholdtothetopic)，這一個(gè)完整的感覺，這就是完整性(completenessoradequateness)。JoeandIdecidedtotakethelongtripwe'dalwayswantedacrossthecountry.Wewerelikeyoungkidsbuyingourcamperanditwithallthenecessitiesoflife.BellabakesthebestrhubarbWestartedoutinearlyspringfromMinneapolisandheadedwestacrossthenorthernpartofthecountry.Webothenjoyedthosepeoplewemetatthetrailerpark.Joereceivedawatchathisretirementdinner.Tooursurprise,wefoundthatwelikedthewarmsouthernregionsverymuch,andsowedecidedtostayhereinNewMexico.本段的主題句是段首句，controllingidea（中心思想）takethelongtripacrossthecountryirrelevantsentences，一個(gè)是Bellabakesthebestrhubarbpie，JoeandIBella，Joereceivedawatchathisretirementirrelevantsentences（不相關(guān)語(yǔ)句）而丟分，值得引起注意。MynameisRoseanna,andIliketokeepphysicallyfit.Iusedtoweightwohundredpounds,butIjoinedtheYMCAforanexerciseclassanddietprogram.InoneyearIlosteightypounds.Ifeelmuchbetterandneverwanttohavethatmuchweightonmyfive-feetframeagain.Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek.EverydayIpracticejoggingthreemiles,swimmingfifteenlaps,liftingtwenty-poundweightsandplayingtennisforonehour.Mymotherwasaprematurecontrollingidealiketodeepphysicallyfit，但段中有兩個(gè)irrelevantsentences，Iboughttwonewsuitcaseslastweek，另Mymotherwasaprematurebaby。從上面兩個(gè)例子可以看出，nativespeakers同樣會(huì)造出來(lái)irrelevantsentencesPhysicalworkcanbeausefulformoftherapyforamindinWorkconcentratesyourthoughtsonaconcretetask.Besides,itismoreusefultowork----youproducesomethingratherthanmoreanxietyordepression.什么是＂amindinturmoil＂（心境不平靜）Physicalworktherapy40ItisnotalwaystruethatagoodpictureisworthathousandOftenwritingismuchclearerthanapicture.Itissometimesdifficulttofigureoutwhatapicturemeans,butacarefulwritercanalmostalwaysexplainit.ItisnotalwaystruethatapictureisworthathousandSometimes,picturesareprettyuselessthings.Ifyoucan'tswimandfallintheriverandstartgulpingwater,willyoubebetterofftoholdupapictureofyourselfdrowning,orstartscreaming"Help"?連貫性按時(shí)間先后排列(chronologicalarrangement)Wehadanumberofclosecallsthatday.Whenwerose,itwasobviouslylateandwehadtohurrysoasnottomissbreakfast;weknewthediningroomstaffwasstrictaboutclosingatnineo'clock.Then,whenwehadbeendrivinginthedesertfornearlytwohours----itmusthavebeenclosetonoon----theheatnearlyhidusin;theradiatorboiledoverandwehadtousemostofourdrinkingwatertocoolitdown.Bythetimewereachedthemountain,itwasfouro'clockandwewereexhausted.Here,judgementranoutofusandwestartedthetoughclimbtothesummit,notrealizingthatdarknesscamesuddenlyinthedesert.Sureenough,bysixwewerestrugglingandAndrewverynearlywentdownasteepcliff,draggingMohammedandmealongwithhim.Bynine,whenthewindhowledacrosstheflatledgeofthesummit,weknewasweshiveredtogetherforwarmththatithadnotbeenourluckyday.本段從＂rose＂（起床）寫起，然后是吃餐(＂nottomissbreakfast＂,＂closingatnineo'clock＂)，然后是＂closetonoon＂，一直寫到這一天結(jié)束(＂Bynine按位置遠(yuǎn)近排列(spatialarrangement)。Fromadistance,itlookedlikeaskinnytube,butaswegotcloser,wecouldseeitfleshoutbeforeoureyes.Itwastubular,allright,butfatterthanwecouldseefromfaraway.Furthermore,wewerealsoastonishedtonoticethatthebuildingwasreallyintwoparts:apagodasittingontopofatubularone-storystructure.Standingtenfeetaway,wecouldmarvelathowmuchofthepagodawasmadeupofglasswindows.AlmosteverythingunderthewonderfulChineseroofwasmadeofglass,unlikethetubethatitwassittingon,whichonlyhadfour.Inside,thetubewasgloomy,becauseofthelackoflight.Thenasteep,narrowstaircasetookusupinsidethepagodaandthelight