2024-2025學(xué)年新教材高中英語(yǔ)Unit2HealthyLifestyleSectionⅣWriting-如何寫改掉不降生活習(xí)慣的文章學(xué)案含解析新人教版選擇性必修第三冊(cè)

PAGEUnit2HealthyLifestyleSectionⅣWriting——如何寫改掉不健康生活習(xí)慣的文章隨著科技的發(fā)展和生活水平的提高，許多人養(yǎng)成了不健康的生活習(xí)慣，如許多人常常熬夜，不吃早飯，不參與體育熬煉，吃過多的高熱量食物等等，這些都是特別不健康的生活習(xí)慣。長(zhǎng)期如此，身心健康會(huì)受到極大影響。本單元的寫作是有關(guān)摒棄不良的生活方式、培育良好的生活習(xí)慣的，對(duì)應(yīng)了《一般中學(xué)英語(yǔ)課程標(biāo)準(zhǔn)》(2024年版2024年修訂)中的“人與自我”這一主題，要求考生能夠就“健康的生活方式、主動(dòng)的生活看法”表達(dá)自己的想法。寫作思路如下：1．首段：描述不健康的生活習(xí)慣(即提出問題)；2．主體段：改掉不健康的生活習(xí)慣的措施(即實(shí)行行動(dòng))；3．尾段：措施產(chǎn)生的效果或建議。常用表達(dá)(1)Itcanbenoticedthattherearesomeunhealthylivinghabitsamong...(2)Someofusoftengotoschoolwithoutbreakfast;someliketohavesnacks.(3)Allthesebadhabitswillsurelydoharmtoourhealth.(4)Whatworriesmemostisthatthesehabitsmayhavemuchimpactonmyacademicperformance.(5)Ithinkhealthylivinghabitsareveryimportanttous.(6)Incurrentsociety,peoplehaveknowntheimportanceofkeepinghealthylifestyles.(7)Goodrest,lessmeatandfish,morevegetablesandenoughexercisearegoodforhealth.(8)Tokeepfit,weshouldhavevarioushealthydiets,including...(9)Havingrealizedtheimportanceoftakingexercise,weshouldworkoutregularly.(10)Iamusedtowalkingtoschoolifweatherpermits.(11)AsfarasI'mconcerned,weshoulddevelopahealthyeatinghabitof...(12)Thereisnodoubtthatabalanceddietisbeneficialtoourhealth.(13)Weshouldrejectjunkfood,suchasinstantnoodlesandhamburgers.(14)Doctorsadviseusteenagerstosleepforatleast8hourseachday.(15)Thereforeit'sveryimportantforustoformhealthyeatinghabits.(16)Onlyinthiswaycanwehaveenoughenergytostudybetter.(17)Peoplecometorealizethatgoodhealthisthemostvaluablethingapersoncanhave.[精品展示]假定你是李華，你校英語(yǔ)校報(bào)編輯正在就“Healthylifestyle”這一主題面對(duì)全體學(xué)生征稿。請(qǐng)你依據(jù)以下內(nèi)容給編輯寫一封信。寫作要點(diǎn)：1.指出不良習(xí)慣：熬夜玩手機(jī)；2.作出確定；3.提出詳細(xì)行動(dòng)；4.表達(dá)預(yù)期結(jié)果。留意：1．要點(diǎn)齊全，可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；2．詞數(shù)80左右，開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。Deareditor，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHua[審題謀篇]第一步：明確要求該寫作為書信類應(yīng)用文。時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)為主。其次步：明確書信格式首先是信頭的稱呼(文中已給出)，主要內(nèi)容寫在主體段即其次段，最終是信尾客套語(yǔ)(文中已給出)。第三步：提煉要點(diǎn)1．________________沒有精力做某事2．________________熬夜3．________________下決心做某事4．________________洗熱水澡5．________________像以前一樣第四步：句式升級(jí)1．最近我上課特殊困，沒有精力做事情，這已經(jīng)影響到了我的健康和學(xué)習(xí)。一般表達(dá)：RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything.Ithasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.高級(jí)表達(dá)：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________2．我要讀些放松的書并且在睡前洗個(gè)熱水澡，這可以幫我睡個(gè)好覺。一般表達(dá)：Iwillreadsomerelaxingbooksandtakeawarmbathbeforegoingtobed,andthismayhelpmegetasoundsleep.高級(jí)表達(dá)：________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[連句成篇]Deareditor，________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Bestwishes.Yours，LiHuaeq\x(溫馨提示：請(qǐng)完成單元檢測(cè)卷二)SectionⅣWriting——如何寫改掉不健康生活習(xí)慣的文章[審題謀篇]第三步：提煉要點(diǎn)1．havenoenergytodosth.2．stayup3．makeupone'smindtodo4．takeawarmbath5．a(chǎn)sbefore第四步：句式升級(jí)1．RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything,whichhasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.2．Iwillreadsomerelaxingbooksandtakeawarmbathbeforegoingtobed,whichmayhelpmegetasoundsleep.[連句成篇]參考范文：Deareditor，I'mtroubledbyaseriousproblem.RecentlyIhavebeenverysleepyinclassandhavehadnoenergytodoanything,whichhasgreatlyaffectedmyhealthandstudy.Afterstartinghighschool,Ifeltstressedoutandalwaysrelaxedbystayingupplayingphonegames.Asaresult,Ilackedenergyandpassioninthedaytime.ButnowIhavemadeupmymindtochangethissituation.Iwillarrangethetimeofusingmobilephonereasonably.I