高考沖刺600分英語(yǔ)培優(yōu)計(jì)劃之寫作滿分“5優(yōu)化”專項(xiàng)增分訓(xùn)練優(yōu)化點(diǎn)三第1課時(shí)

eq\a\vs4\al([專項(xiàng)增分訓(xùn)練])請(qǐng)適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使下面的作文豐滿起來A[題目要求](2018·福州市質(zhì)檢)假定你是李華，你的英國(guó)朋友Lucy在當(dāng)?shù)氐囊凰鬃訉W(xué)院(ConfuciusInstitute)學(xué)習(xí)。你剛獲悉她在學(xué)院舉辦的中文詩(shī)詞(poetry)比賽中榮獲一等獎(jiǎng)。請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封電子郵件表示祝賀，并希望她有機(jī)會(huì)來中國(guó)深造。注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。[考生作文]DearLucy，I'mpleasedtolearnyou'vejustwonthefirstprizeintheChinesepoetrypetitionheldinyourinstitute.I'mwritingtooffermycongratulationstoyou.IknowyouloveChineseculture,andnowyou'restudyinginalocalConfuciusInstitute.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetoetoChinaforfurtherstudy.WishyougreaterprogressinthestudyofChinesepoetry.Yours，LiHua[我來豐富]請(qǐng)擴(kuò)充為100詞左右并升級(jí)詞匯和句式參考范文：DearLucy，I'mpleasedtolearnyou'vejustwonthefirstprizeintheChinesepoetrypetitionheldinyourinstitute.I'mwritingtooffermysincerecongratulationstoyou.ItcameasnosurprisetomebecauseIknowyouloveChineseculture,especiallyChinesepoetry,andyou'vebeenstudyinginalocalConfuciusInstituteforyears.I'msoproudtoseeallyoureffortshavepaidoff.IhopeyoucanhaveachancetoetoChinaforfurtherstudyinthenearfutureandhaveabetterunderstandingofmycountry.WishyougreaterprogressinthestudyofChinesepoetry.Yours，LiHuaB[題目要求](2018·河北省“五個(gè)一名校聯(lián)盟”質(zhì)檢)假如你是班長(zhǎng)李華，明年即將畢業(yè)。最近發(fā)現(xiàn)班里的一些同學(xué)為了提高成績(jī)經(jīng)常熬夜，并且不注意飲食。針對(duì)這些現(xiàn)象，請(qǐng)你給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社寫信投稿說明以上情況，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶?。注意?.詞數(shù)100左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。DearEditor，Yours，LiHua[考生作文]DearEditor，Iamahighschoolstudentwhowillgraduatenextyear.RecentlyIhavefoundthatsomestudentsinourclassstudyharderthanbefore.Theyoftenstayuplatestudying,andpaynoattentiontotheirdiet,whichdoesharmtotheirhealth.Inmyopinion,thoughweareundertheheavypressureofstudy,weshouldtrytoeatproperlyandgetenoughrest.Onlyinthiswaycanwekeepfitandstudywell.Yours，LiHua[我來豐富]請(qǐng)擴(kuò)充為100詞左右并升級(jí)詞匯和句式參考范文：DearEditor，Iamahighschoolstudentwhowillgraduatenextyear.AsastudentinSeniorThree,Ihavefoundthatalmostallofthestudentsinourclassstudyharderthanbefore.Someevenstudylateintothenight,eatingsnacksanddrinkingCoca-Cola,whichisbadfortheirhealth.Inthemorning,duetostayinguplate,somestudentshavetogotoschoolhurriedlywithoutbreakfast,whichsurelydoesharmtotheirhealth.Inmyopinion,