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閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構(gòu)成完整的短文。WithonlyaweekbeforeEasterknockedontheirdoor,Faith,theeldestdaughter,satatheroldsewingmachine—aspecialgiftfromherlatemotherasidefromhersewingskills.Herfather,George,losthisarminanaccident.“Let’shaveafestivedinner,Dad!”shetoldGeorge.“Wehaven’tcelebratedanythingsinceMom’sdeath.”“Honey,Ibarelyhaveanymoneyleft.”“But,”headded.“Icanbuysomegroceriestomakeabigone.”“Perfect!”Faithscreamed.Inthestreet,noonenoticedGeorgecarryingthegroceriesalonewithonlyonearm.Oneofhisshoppingbagsslippedandheknelttopickitup,unawareofanSUVrushingtowardhim.TheharmwasdonebeforeGeorgecouldact,withgroceriesscatteringeverywhere.Faithturnedaroundafterhearingherfatherscreambutcouldn’tlocatehim.Whenshedasheddownthestreet,shefoundGeorgeinfrontoftheSUV.Thedriverwasrushingtogettoameetinganddidn’tnoticeGeorge.ShestuffedthemoneyinGeorge’sfistandwasabouttoleave.ButGeorgerefused.
“Imaybepoor,butIcan’ttakeit.Myfatherdidn’traisemetobecomesuchaman.HaveagoodEaster.Trytobemoreempathetictoothersifpossible!”Therichwomancouldn’tbelieveit.“Sorry,Faith.YouhavetogothroughEasterwithoutadinner.”Georgesaid.“Dad,don’tsaythat,”Faithwrappedherarmsaroundherfatherandtoldhimnottoworry.Shehadabrilliantidea!Forthenexttwodays,Faithdidn’tsleepawink(整夜未合眼).Shesatatheroldsewingmachine,makingnewgarments(服裝)foranonlinesale.Luckily,everyonelovedFaith’sdesigns.OnEastermorning,FaithgotastrangemessagefromawomannamedEmma,whowasinterestedinherdesignsandwantedtomeether.Faithwassodelightedandwroteareply,acceptingthemeeting.Thenextday,Faithgotupearly,Georgepreparingbreakfast.Whensheheardthesoundoftires,sheracedtothewindowandsawafamiliarSUVpullup.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應(yīng)為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應(yīng)位置作答。AsFaithopenedthedoor,followedbyGeorge,shefoundherselfface-to-facewithafashionwomanshe’dneverforget.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________EmmaboughtthedressfromFaith,andFaithtookthemoneypolitely.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________文章大意復(fù)活節(jié)前夕,父親喬治和女兒費思決定好好慶祝一下,盡管家境貧寒。喬治在買完東西回家途中被一輛SUV撞到,司機想用錢了事,但喬治拒絕了。這導(dǎo)致他們沒錢準備復(fù)活節(jié)晚餐。費思為了賺錢,連續(xù)兩天沒合眼,在舊縫紉機上制作服裝在網(wǎng)上售賣。后來,一個叫艾瑪?shù)呐藢λ脑O(shè)計感興趣并要求見面。復(fù)活節(jié)第二天,費思發(fā)現(xiàn)來的是那輛熟悉的SUV。五要素分析人物:費思、喬治、司機(艾瑪)。時間:復(fù)活節(jié)前夕至復(fù)活節(jié)后一天。地點:家附近街道、家里。起因:家庭貧困但想慶祝復(fù)活節(jié),喬治遭遇車禍卻拒絕賠償款。經(jīng)過:費思努力制作服裝售賣,收到艾瑪?shù)囊娒嬲埱?。結(jié)果:艾瑪開車前來。幾處伏筆及續(xù)寫中的回應(yīng)伏筆:熟悉的SUV?;貞?yīng):第一段續(xù)寫中揭示艾瑪身份,引發(fā)尷尬與驚訝,艾瑪可能再次道歉并提及對設(shè)計感興趣的原因。伏筆:費思接受見面?;貞?yīng):第二段續(xù)寫圍繞交易展開,可能有情感交流,如艾瑪對費思父女的新認識,以及晚餐邀請使雙方關(guān)系緩和。續(xù)寫要點第一段情感線:驚訝、尷尬,雙方對這次意外相遇感到意外,艾瑪可能有愧疚。故事線:艾瑪表明身份和來意,為之前的行為道歉,稱贊費思的設(shè)計才華,解釋自己對設(shè)計感興趣的原因。第二段情感線:溫暖、感動,交易過程充滿善意,晚餐邀請增進彼此感情。故事線:完成交易,費思邀請艾瑪共進晚餐,分享生活點滴,化解之前的不愉快,建立友誼。主旨升華句Kindnessandintegritycanturnanaccidentintoanopportunityforfriendship.Inthefaceofhardship,maintainingdignityandforgivenesscanopenunexpecteddoors.Truevalueliesnotinwealthbutinthecharactershownduringdifficulttimes.Anactofrefusalbasedonprinciplescanplanttheseedsofrespectandconnection.Sometimes,adifficultencountercanbethebeginningofabeautifulrelationshipthroughmutualunderstanding.寫作示范第一篇AsFaithopenedthedoor,followedbyGeorge,shefoundherselfface-to-facewithafashionwomanshe’dneverforget.Itwasthewomanfromtheaccident.Emmawasembarrassed.Shesaidshewasreallysorryforwhathadhappened.SheexplainedthatshehadbeenlookingforuniquedesignsandstumbleduponFaith'sonlinestore.Shewasamazedbythetalent.
EmmaboughtthedressfromFaith,andFaithtookthemoneypolitely.ShethankedEmma.ThenshetoldEmmahowtheyhadstruggledafterlosinghermotherandtheaccidentmadethingsworse.ButtheystillwantedtocelebrateEaster.Emmawastouched.Sheofferedtohelpthemprepareadinner,andtheyacceptedwithgratitude.第二篇AsFaithopenedthedoor,followedbyGeorge,shefoundherselfface-to-facewithafashionwomanshe’dneverforget.ThewomanwastheSUVdriver.ShelookedatGeorgewithguilt.ShesaidshecametoseeFaith'sdesignsandalsotomakeamends.Shetoldthemshewasinarushthatdaybuthadregrettedheractions.
EmmaboughtthedressfromFaith,andFaithtookthemoneypolitely.Astheytalked,FaithinvitedEmmatojointhemforEasterdinner.Emmawashesitantatfirstbutthenagreed.Duringthedinner,theysharedtheirstories.Theatmospherewaswarm,andthebondbetweenthemgrewstronger.第三篇AsFaithopenedthedoor,followedbyGeorge,shefoundherselfface-to-facewithafashionwomanshe’dneverforget.Itwasthedriver,Emma.Sheheldabouquetofflowers.SheapologizedsincerelytoGeorge.ShetoldFaiththatshewasattractedbyherdesignsandwantedtosupporther.Shealsohopedtomakeupforherrudeness.
EmmaboughtthedressfromFaith,andFaithtookthemoneypolitely.ShethenshowedEmmaaroundtheirsimplehome.Theytalkedaboutfashionanddreams.WhenFaithmentionedtheirEasterdinnerplan,Emmaofferedtocontribute.Theysatdowntogether,andtheholidayspiritfilledtheairastheystartedanewfriendship.參考答案AsFaithopenedthedoor,followedbyGeorge,shefoundherselfface-to-facewithafashionwomanshe’dneverforget.ItwasthedriveroftheSUV.Herexpressionwasamixofguiltandnervousness.ShestammeredanapologytoGeorge,sayingshehadn'tbeenabletostopthinkin
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