統(tǒng)考版2025屆高考英語二輪復習備考提升指導與精練20書面表達含解析

PAGE書面表達優(yōu)培20書面表達優(yōu)培20書面表達真題在線真題在線1.應用1.應用①全國卷（2024·全國III卷·書面表達）假定你李華，你和同學依據(jù)英語課文改編了一個短劇。給外教MissEvans寫封郵件，請她幫忙指導。郵件內(nèi)容包括:1.劇情簡介；2.指導內(nèi)容；3.商定時間地點。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.結(jié)束語已為你寫好。________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【答案】DearMissEvans,Howiseverythinggoing!Iamwritinginsinceritytoaskyouafavorregardingaplayweadaptedaccordingtothetextbook.We’dliketocombineyourculturewithoursbyadaptingtheclassicnovelTheSteamboatforashortEnglishplay.Theplayissetonabigstormaftermidnight,ontheraftdowntherivernavigation,weseeasteamboatthatisgoingtosink.Wesavedascaredboy.However,theadaptionisquiteachallenge.HavingwrittentheEnglishscript,wedon’twantanythinginappropriatetospoiltheplay.Sowouldyoupleasesparesometimetoreviewthedraftscriptattachedtothisemailandmakenecessarychanges?Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?Givenyourbusyschedule,I’dbeveryappreciativeifyouoffertogivesomeprofessionaladvice.Lookforwardtoyourearlyreply.Bestregards!Yourstruly,LiHua【解析】本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，懇求外教MissEvans對于theSteamboat改編短劇的支持。第一步：審題體裁：應用文時態(tài)：依據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。結(jié)構(gòu)：總分總法第一段說明寫這封郵件的目的；其次段具體說明英語戲劇的劇情介紹和指導內(nèi)容細微環(huán)節(jié)問題；第三段表達感謝，并期盼早日得到回復。其次步：列提綱（重點詞組）writeto；accordingto；combine；adaption；challenge；attachedto；convenient第三步：連詞成句依據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，留意主謂一樣和時態(tài)問題。第四步：連句成篇（連接詞）連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的連接與過渡，書寫肯定要規(guī)范清楚。第五步：潤色修改【名師點睛】范文內(nèi)容完整，要點全面，語言規(guī)范，語篇連貫，詞數(shù)適當，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。作者在范文中運用了較多主從復合句，如：Ifitisconvenient,mayIpayyouavisitatyourofficenextTuesdaytogiveyoumoredetails?這句話運用了If引導的條件狀語從句。全文中沒有中國式英語的句式，顯示了很高的駕馭英語的實力。另外，文章思路清楚、層次分明，上下句轉(zhuǎn)換自然，為文章增色添彩。2.應用2.應用②非全國卷（2024·天津卷·書面表達）假設(shè)你是晨光中學高三學生李津。你校于6月8日舉辦了成人禮活動，你的英國摯友Chris很想了解該活動。你于當晚給Chris回一封電子郵件，介紹關(guān)狀況，內(nèi)容包括：（1）成人禮活動內(nèi)容（成長點滴回顧、觀看校友抗疫事邊錄像）；（2）對活動的感受；（3）對自己將來的展望。留意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于100；（2）可適當加入細微環(huán)節(jié)，使內(nèi)容充溢、行文連貫；（3）開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。參考詞匯：成人禮thecoming-ofageceremony新冠腦炎COVID-F9DearChris,I’msogladtohearfromyou.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiJin【答案】DearChris,Iamsogladtohearfromyou.Thecoming-of-ageceremonywasheldinourschoolonJune8ththismonth.Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.Afterthat,weallwatchedthevideoofalumnusfightingagainsttheepidemic.Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.Inthefuture,Iwillbeagooddoctortohealthewoundedandrescuethedying,devotingmyselftomywork.Bestwishes！Yours,LiJin【解析】這是一篇應用文，要求寫一封信。第一步：審題。審題的目的是獲得重要信息。通過審題我們可以確定幾個方面的信息。第一，寫作內(nèi)容。其次，人稱為第一人稱。第三，時態(tài)為一般現(xiàn)在時，一般過去時和一般將來時。其次步：布局段落，確定主要段落，次要段落，段落數(shù)量。這篇寫作段落數(shù)量為三段。第一段：成人禮活動內(nèi)容（成長點滴回顧，觀看校友抗疫事跡錄像等）。其次段：對活動的感受；對自己將來的展望。第三段：表達期望。第三步：確定關(guān)鍵詞匯和短語。如congratulatesbonsth.，befacedwith，healthewoundedandrescuethedying，devoteoneselftodoingsth.。第四步：確定較為高級的句型。如that引導的定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語（Duringthecoming-of-ageceremony,theheadmastercongratulatedusonsteppingintotheadult,reviewingthegrowthperiodthatwehadexperienced.），that引導的表語從句（Throughtheactivity,whatIfeltisthatIamabletoshouldertheresponsibilityandmakeusstrongerandmoredetermined.），時間狀語從句的省略句（Whenfacedwiththedifficultiesandfailures,Imustovercomethem.）。第五步：連句成文，留意運用恰當?shù)倪B接詞進行過渡連接，如Afterthat，besides，however。第六步：留意書寫，保持卷面整齊，避開劃線，亂擦。【名師點睛】文章思路清楚，語言規(guī)范，段落整齊，語篇連貫，層次清楚。運用了較為高級的句式，如that引導的定語從句和現(xiàn)在分詞作狀語，that引導的表語從句，時間狀語從句的省略句等高級句式的應用提升了寫作的檔次，整個短文顯示出了作者高水平的英語表達實力。提分訓練提分訓練（專練1）目前，你校有很多學生因為各種緣由很少參與體育熬煉。假定你是張華，請你就此事向你校英語報寫一封信，提倡同學們主動參與體育熬煉。內(nèi)容包括：1.學生們不參與體育活動的緣由；2.進行體育活動的好處。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3.文章開頭和結(jié)尾語已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。Dearschoolmates,Nowadays,moststudentsdon’tdosportsforkindsofreasons.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yourssincerely,ZhangHua【答案】Dearschoolmates,Nowadays,moststudentsdon’tdosportsforkindsofreasons.Theythinkthatitisawasteoftimeandwemaygetinjuredintheprocess.Inmyopinion,itisverynecessaryforustotakepartinsportsactivities.First,bydoingsomesports,likeplayingfootball,pingpongandsoon,wecanrelaxourselvesfromconcentratingalongtimeinclass.Thereisnodoubtthatwhenwegetbacktostudy,wecanstudybetter.Second,doingsportsisgoodforourhealth,sowewillbeunlikelytofallill.Third,doingsportscanhelpusformanewhobby,likeswimming,hikingandsoon.Inthisway,ourlifewillbemorecolorful.Inall,wecanbenefitalotfromdoingexercises.Yourssincerely,ZhangHua【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。要求寫一封信，提倡同學們主動參與體育熬煉。話題貼近考生生活，比較好寫。所給要點特別明確，所以考生依據(jù)提示，文章可以分為兩大部分：首先闡述學生們不參與體育活動的緣由，然后陳述進行體育活動的好處?？忌罁?jù)提示先列出主體句，然后再拓展細微環(huán)節(jié)內(nèi)容，以使文章內(nèi)容豐滿，避開內(nèi)容空洞。（專練2）假定你是校學生會主席李華，你校將舉辦一次關(guān)于國際貿(mào)易的研討會。請你給交換生Mary寫一封電子郵件，邀請她參與。內(nèi)容包括：1.時間：10月15日下午3:00-6:00；2.地點：學校禮堂；3.內(nèi)容：觀看國際貿(mào)易相關(guān)視頻；專家分析國際貿(mào)易形勢；互動溝通。留意：1.詞數(shù)100左右（開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，但不計入總詞數(shù)）；2.可以適當增加細微環(huán)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。參考詞匯：研討會seminarDearMary,I’mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnionofourschool.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yourssincerely,LiHua【答案】DearMary,I’mLiHua,chairmanoftheStudentUnionofourschool.I’mwritingtoinviteyoutoattendaseminaraboutinternationaltrade.Itisscheduledtobeheldattheschoolhallfrom3p.m.to6p.m.onOctober15.Youaresupposedtogetthere20minutesbeforeitstarts.Duringthemeeting,wewillfirstwatchsomevideosrelatedtointernationaltrade.Then,someexpertswillmakespeechesontherecentinternationaltradesituation.Afterthat,therewillbeaboutonehourforcommunicationbetweenexpertsandtheaudience.I’msuretheseminarwillbenefityoualot.Notonlywillyoubeabletohaveabetterunderstandingofinternationaltrade,butalsoyouwillknowthelatestworldtradesituation.I’mlookingforwardtohearingfro