【高考英語】備戰(zhàn)高考易錯題(新高考專用)易錯點27 讀后續(xù)寫(5大陷阱)含答案及解析_第1頁
【高考英語】備戰(zhàn)高考易錯題(新高考專用)易錯點27 讀后續(xù)寫(5大陷阱)含答案及解析_第2頁
【高考英語】備戰(zhàn)高考易錯題(新高考專用)易錯點27 讀后續(xù)寫(5大陷阱)含答案及解析_第3頁
【高考英語】備戰(zhàn)高考易錯題(新高考專用)易錯點27 讀后續(xù)寫(5大陷阱)含答案及解析_第4頁
【高考英語】備戰(zhàn)高考易錯題(新高考專用)易錯點27 讀后續(xù)寫(5大陷阱)含答案及解析_第5頁
已閱讀5頁,還剩46頁未讀 繼續(xù)免費閱讀

下載本文檔

版權說明:本文檔由用戶提供并上傳,收益歸屬內(nèi)容提供方,若內(nèi)容存在侵權,請進行舉報或認領

文檔簡介

易錯點27讀后續(xù)寫目錄01易錯陷阱(5大陷阱)02舉一反三【易錯點提醒一】審題不清、文本內(nèi)容易混易錯點【易錯點提醒二】段首句推理銜接易混易錯點【易錯點提醒三】情節(jié)發(fā)展易混易錯點【易錯點提醒四】詞句易混易錯點【易錯點提醒五】卷面易混易錯點03易錯題通關易錯陷阱1:審題不清、文本內(nèi)容易混易錯點?!痉治觥恐挥邪巡牧献x透,才能明確故事主線,把握續(xù)寫方向,為續(xù)寫奠定基礎。很多考生因為詞匯匱乏、時間不夠等種種原因沒有讀透文本信息,導致續(xù)寫嚴重偏離所給素材、跑題等錯誤。為了表現(xiàn)角色的成長或事件的發(fā)展,文中會出現(xiàn)影響角色成長和事件發(fā)展的關鍵線索,而這些線索之間的邏輯關系,構成事件發(fā)生的經(jīng)過,就是文章的主線。易錯陷阱2:段首句推理銜接易混易錯點。【分析】續(xù)寫部分的內(nèi)容,無論是時間的先后還是情節(jié)的發(fā)展,都以第一段和第二段首句這兩句話為內(nèi)在聯(lián)系的連接點。它們直接決定了情節(jié)的發(fā)展方向。考生容易忽略這兩句的作用,或是第二段首句與第一段結尾之間的聯(lián)系。應當根據(jù)第二段首句逆推第一段尾句,即過渡句。易錯陷阱3:情節(jié)發(fā)展和結局易混易錯點。【分析】續(xù)寫必須與原文內(nèi)容故事銜接自然、連貫。語言風格與所給材料應當保持一致。要緊扣原文主題、預設核心沖突、推動故事發(fā)展。所給材料中可能會有很多伏筆,并且可能較為零星的分布在所給材料中,考生不必分別進行回應,只選取有助于推動情節(jié)發(fā)展或凸顯故事主線的伏筆來設置情節(jié)。一般來說,文章的第一段會介紹故事發(fā)生的背景、人物的性格特點等,為可能出現(xiàn)的矛盾沖突做好鋪墊,考生應當善于發(fā)現(xiàn)和利用這些伏筆。結局設置巧妙,可以對續(xù)寫起到畫龍點睛的作用。一般選擇“首尾呼應”或“情感升華”來傳遞作者的思想感情和感悟,凸顯作者的變化。具體讀后續(xù)寫升華句和寫作要領詳見本作者編撰的專輯《2023年新高考英語滿分作文讀后續(xù)寫高分突破+萬能金句》。易錯陷阱4:詞句易混易錯點?!痉治觥繛樨S富故事的情節(jié),充實續(xù)寫的內(nèi)容和升級語言,考生會用到多樣化的詞匯或句型。而匱乏的詞匯量和薄弱的基礎知識則會造成高級句型和詞匯的錯用。易錯陷阱5:卷面易混易錯點?!痉治觥空麧崈?yōu)美的卷面會成為加分的一個因素。有點考生不注意規(guī)范書寫,字母大小隨意,字跡潦草不清,亂涂亂畫,書寫馬虎等都會給閱卷者留下“臟、亂、差”等印象。讀后續(xù)寫不同于第一部分寫作,其分值更高,故優(yōu)美的卷面留下的印象分占比更大?!疽族e點提醒一】詞句(籠統(tǒng)詞與高級詞)易混易錯點【例1】一天晚上,一個小偷走進了她家?!咀兪?】當我們要離開時,他哭起來?!咀兪?】他笑得合不攏嘴?!咀兪?】她不敢一個人外出。【易錯點提醒二】句式結構之非謂語動詞易混易錯點【例2】Seeingfromthetopofthemountain,thevillagelooksmorebeautiful.【正確】【變式1】Havingexperiencedsomanyfailuresoneafteranother,shefinallypickedherselfup.【易錯】【變式2】Devotedtohisresearchwork,theprofessorcaredlittleaboutanyotherthings.【易錯】【變式3】Shewasterrifiedatthethoughtofbeingalone.【易錯】【易錯點提醒三】句式結構之獨立主格易混易錯點【例3】Shelaughed,hereyesshining.【易錯】【變式1】Shefroze,hermouthhangingopen.【易錯】【變式2】Jessicasighingwithrelief,thepairhuggedeachotherandshedtearsofexcitement.【易錯】【變式3】shesattherestill,tearsrollingdownhercheeks.【易錯】【易錯點提醒四】句式結構之形容詞與副詞易混易錯點【例4】Mickfrozewithterror,tooscaredtomoveaninch.【易錯】【變式1】Herheartleapedwithjoy.【易錯】【變式2】Thedaywascoldbutclear.【易錯】【變式3】Jack’sfaceflushed/burnedwithembarrassment.【易錯】【易錯點提醒五】句式結構之從句和特殊句式易混易錯點【例5】Whenfacedwiththegreatchallenge,hehadafrownonhisface.【易錯】【變式1】Notonlydidweseeitbutalsowetouchedit.【易錯】【變式2】HonestyisthemostimportantqualitythatIwanthimtopossess.【易錯】【變式3】Notaworddidhesaythatday.【易錯】(2023·浙江臺州·統(tǒng)考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。GreenThumbAllIdidwasshowmylittlesisterhowtogrowplants.Digahole.Putinaseed.Coveritwithdirt.Waterit.Wait.“See,Laynie,”Iexplained,“awholeplantwillgrowfromthistinyseed.Allwehavetodoiswaterit.”Layniehadherownwateringcansoshecould“help”meinthegarden.Oneday,aftereverythingwaswatered,sherantothefenceandstartedsprinklingwateronanotherspot.Iwalkedoverandsawafreshpatchofdirtnearthefence.“Didyouplantsomethingthere?”Iasked.“Yes,”shesaid.“I’mgrowingapencil.Mypurplepencilgottoosmall,soIplantedit.”“What?But,Laynie—”Ishouldhaveexplainedthingsrightthen,butIjustmuttered,“Uh…Inevergrewonebefore.”LaterIgotwhatseemedlikeagreatidea.IdugupLaynie’spenciland“planted”abrand-newpurplepencil.Layniewasreallyexcitedwhenshesawit.“Mypencilgrew!”sheshouted.Afewdayslater,Layniewaswateringonthesamespot.Twodayslater,newcrayonsstickingtheirpointylittleheadsout,thankstome.Layniejumpedupanddownandyelled,“Theylooklikeflowers!”She“picked”themandranintothehouse.Next,Layniegrewanadultbeardollfromatinyone,asoupspoonfromateaspoon,andahandmirrorfromapieceofglass.Whensheclaimedthatshehadgrownthesethings,Ijustkeptmymouthshut!Actually,itwasfuntryingtothinkofwhatshouldgrowfromLaynie’sseeds.Anditwascooltoseehergetexcited.OnedayIsawherpattingdownsomedirtnearthefenceagain,soIknewshe’djustplantedsomething.Myheartdroppedtomyfeetwhensheasked,“Howlongdoesittaketogrowagoldfish,Brad?”Icouldn’tspeak.“Notlong,Ibet!”saidLaynie.Shekneltdowntowhisper“Grow,Molly.Grow!”beforesheskippedbacktothehouse.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Isatdownwithmybacktothefenceandthoughtforalongtime.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________LaterIfoundLayniesittingbythespotwhereMollywasburied.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2024·浙江杭州·統(tǒng)考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。MydadandIhadbeenlookingforwardtotheStalecross-countryraceofmysenioryearofhighschool,whichwouldbetheclimax(頂點)ofmyexistence.Iwasthefastestrunneronmyteam,andIwassupposedtomakeitintothetopfifteen.Wehadbeenworkingtowardsthisraceforthreeyears.Itwaseverythingtome,anditwaseverythingtomydad.Hewasarunnerandwaswildwithjoybymysuccessinrunning.Hemadeittoeveryrace,evenflyinghomeearlyfrombusinesstripstoseemerun.Ialwayslistenedforhisvoice,whichrangabovethecrowd-tellingmetorelaxmyarms,callingoutmytime.Hepushedme.Hecheeredforme.Hebelievedinme.WespentcountlesshoursonthesandycanalsofArizona.Breathinginthedustofthedesert,theblossomsoftheorangetrees,andtheterriblesmellofthedairyfarm,wemadeourwayacrossthecity.Wepoundedmilesandmilesintoourrunningshoes,markingwitheverystepthepathtogreatness.Itwasajourneythatwasjustours.Adreampassedonfromonegenerationtothenext.Thenthebigdaycame.Itwashotterthannormal-toohot.Mythroatfeltlikeafieldofcotton,crackedwiththesummerheat,asIwaitedfortheguntofire.Igazedoutatthecrowd;dozensoffamiliarfacesfromchurchandschoolflickeredacrossmyview.Theyhadcomeforme.Theywerecountingonme.Isawmydadsethiswatch,worryandexcitementetchedacrosshisface.Withthesoundofagunshot,theracebegan.Forthefirsttwoandhalfmiles,Ifeltgreat.Ihadneverbeforebeensoreadyforsomething.Theweeksleadinguptotheracewerefilledwithhardpracticesandastrictdiet.Thescorchingsunbeatuponmyback,blindingmewithitsbrilliance.Nothingwasgoingtostopme,though.注意:1.所續(xù)寫短文的詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。However,withoutwarning,mystrengthwasrunningout.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iwhispered,“I’msosorryIdisappointedyou,Dad.”___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·廣西玉林·階段練習)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Wesatonthebuswaitingwhileotherpassengerspiledon.Ablond-hairedgirl,aboutnineteenyearsold,tooktheseatinfrontofus.Thebusdriverfollowedbehindher.Hedemandedherfare.“Youpay$40orgetoffthebus!”thedriversaid.“Ipaidalready.Yesterday,online,”thegirlinsisted.“No,norecordofit!”thebusdriverpointedtothepaperinhishandandwaveditinherface.“See.Nopay!Youpay,oryoumustgetoff.”Heangrilypointedtotheexitdoor.“ButIdon’thavemoney.AndIpaidalready.Please.”Thebusdriverpickeduphismobilephoneandmadeacalltofindoutiftherehadbeenanerrorwiththepaperwork.Afterfailingtogetthrough,hewasgettingangrierwiththegirl.Sohecutthecallanddidn’ttry.“No,youhavenotpaid.Youmustpay.”“Butplease,Idon’thaveanymoneyonme.ImustgettoLAtoday.Please.”Tearsstreameddownherface.IhadboardedabusheadedtoLosAngeles.IwasveryexcitedaboutexperiencingLA.MydreamofvisitingDisneyLandwasabouttocometrue.ButwhileIsattherecomfortablyinmyseat,thinkingaboutmynextadventure,thisyounggirlwasintears,withamanstandingoverher,demandingmoney.Iwasn’tsurewhatIshoulddo.Wasshetellingthetruth?Itwouldn’tbethefirsttimesomeonehadextractedmoneybytellingasadstorythatturnedoutuntrue.Didshereallynothaveanymoney?Maybethebusdriverwouldshowsomesympathyandallowhertosortthepaymentoutlater?Butno,thebusdrivercontinuedtodemandshepay$40orgetoffthebus.Theyounggirlinsistedthatshedidn’thaveenoughmoneyforthefareandhadnooneshecouldcontactforhelp.Itseemedthedriverwouldthrowheroffthebus.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Suddenly,amessygrey-hairedwomanwithaweatheredfacestoodup._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Atthenextreststop,Inoticedthatwomanhadnomoneyforfood._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·湖南·湖南師大附中校聯(lián)考一模)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。ToactwithintegritywasahabitwithSusanwhoalwaysfollowstheGoldenRule:“Donotdotootherswhatyoudonotwantotherstodotoyou.”Butwhenshethoughtoverherpastconduct,ablushofshamecrepttohercheeks,asmanylittleactsofselfishnessandunkindnesscamebacktohermemory.Sheresolvedthatforthefuture,bothingreatthingsandsmall.shewouldrememberandfollowtheGoldenRule.Itwasnotlongafterthisthatanopportunityoccurred,whichtriedSusan’sprinciples.OneSaturdayeveningwhenshewent,asusual,toMr.Thompson’sinn,toreceivethemoneyofhermother’swashingforhim,whichamountedtofivedollars,shefoundMr.Thompsonapparentlyinaterribleragewithsomehorsedealerswithwhomhehadbeenbargaining.Heheldinhishandanopenpocketbook(錢袋子),fullofbillsandscarcelynoticingSusanasshemadeherrequest,excepttoswearatherfortroublinghimwhenhewasbusy,hehandedherabanknote.Gladtoescapesoeasily,Susanhurriedoutofthegate.Pausingtoputthemoneysafelyinherpurse,shediscoveredthathehadgivenhertwobillsinsteadofone.Shelookedaround;nobodywasnearandherfirstimpulsewasjoyattheunexpectedprize.“Itisallmine,”saidshetoherself.“Iwillbuymymotheranewcoatwithit,andshecangiveheroldonetomysisterMary,andthenMarycangototheSundayschoolwithmenextwinter.IwonderifIcanbuyapairofshoesformybrotherTom,too.”Atthatmomentsherememberedthathemusthavegivenittoherbymistake.Butagainthevoiceofthetempterwhispered,“Hegaveit,andhowdoyouknowthathedidnotintendtomakeyouapresentofit?Keepit!Hewillneverknowit,forhehadtoomanysuchbillsinthatgreatpocketbook.”注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thisconflictwasgoingoninhermindbetweengoodandevil.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________“Sir,youpaidmetwobillsinsteadofone,”shehandedhimtheextranote.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·安徽·高三校考階段練習)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Duringthesummervacation,amotherplannedanexcitingtripwithhertwochildren.Theyweresettoexploreafamoustouristspot,famousforitsbreath-takinglandscapesandattractions.Littledidtheyknowthattheiradventurewouldtakeanunexpectedturn.Astheyarrivedatthedestination,theyweregreetedbyaseaofpeople.Theplacewasoverflowingwithtouristsfromallovertheglobe.Excitementfilledtheairasfamiliesbegantheirsightseeingadventures,creatingalivelyandvibrantatmosphere.Eagertobegintheirownadventure,themother,holdingthehandsofhertwochildren,doveintothecrowd.However,amongthecrowdedarmyoftourists,fatehaditsownplansinstore.Inthechaosofthemassivecrowd,theyoungerson,unawareofthechaosunfoldingaroundhim,somehowmanagedtowanderoff,unknowinglyleavinghisfamilybehind.Suddenly,themotherrealizedthatheryoungerchildwasnolongerbesideher.Panicseizedherheart,andasenseofhelplessnessoccupiedher.Shedesperatelycalledoutherson’sname,hervoicetremblingwithfear.Tearsstreameddownherfaceasshescannedthevastseaofpeopleforherson,buttherewasnosignofhim.Inastateofdespair,themothersoughtassistancefromfellowtourists.Compassionatemindsinstantlyjoinedinthesearch,spreadingwordaboutthelostchildthroughoutthearea.Strangersjoinedinthesearch,theirheartsfilledwithempathyfortheanxiousmother.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Threeagonizing(令人焦慮不安的)hourspassed,eachfeelinglikeyears._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Asthemothertightlyfoldedhersoninherarms,awaveofdelightwashedoverher._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·吉林長春·高三東北師大附中練習)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。TheneighborhoodkidsnicknamedthestrangeoldcoupleCrazyJackandRubyRednose.Rumorwasthattheysatinsideanddrankteaallday.Theonlywordsweeverheardfromthemwere“Keepoutofourrosebushes!”Therosebushesservedasafencebetweenourhouseandtheirs.Iwaselevenatthetimeandtheoldestofsixactivegirls.Weshouldhaveplayedoursoftballgameselsewheretoavoidhurtingtheroses,butwesecretlyenjoyedannoyingCrazyJackandRubyRednose.Oneday,wehadaneighborhoodsoftballgameinouryard.Marywastryingtocatchaflyball.Shestumbled(絆倒)overoneofRubyRednose’srosebushesandfellontopofseveralmore.Justatthatmoment,RubyRednosesprangoutandrantowardMary.Shescreamedangrily,“Lookatwhatyou’vedonetoourfamily’sroses!You’vealwaysbeenatrouble.Youhavenoideawhatthisrosebushmeanstome!”Hearingthis,mysistersandIranintoourhouse.Breathlessly,wetoldMomwhathadhappened.“Girls,Ihavetoldyounottoplaysoftballnearthosebushes.Comeoutsiderightnowandhelpmefixthem.”“Mom,wethoughtyoudidn’tlikethecouple,”weprotested.“They’remeantous.”Momjustglaredatus.Wefollowedheroutsidetohelprepairtherosefence.WhileMomwasexaminingthedamagedroses,Rubyslowlywalkedout.Shelookedsad.Anditwasn’thernosethatwasred—itwashereyes.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在相應位置作答。Rubywalkedovertomymother,wegirlsholdingourbreath.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Afewweekslater,theplantsallcamebacktolife.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·江蘇連云港·高三統(tǒng)考期中)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。Imaginesittingatyourbreakfasttablehavingacupofcoffeewhenallofasuddenyouseesomeoneabouttodie.Whatwouldyoudo?LastChristmas,JohnGelinnefoundout.OnDec.26,Gelinne,60,waswatchingoutthebackwindowsofhishomeinEdgewater,Maryland,atfrozenBeardsCreek(河流).Childrenandgrandchildrenwererunningaroundthehouse.That’swhenGelinnelookedupjustintimetoseeasmallplaneafewhundredyardsaway,losingaltitude(海拔高度).Astheplanedisappearedbehindthetrees,Gelinne,aformerNavycommander,realizeditwasgoingtolandinthecreek.Heflashedonamomentfrommorethan20yearsearlier:Sept.11,2001.GelinnewasatworkinthePentagoninWashington,D.C.,whenterrorists(恐怖分子)crashedaplaneintothebuilding.Heescapedbuthasalwayswonderedifhecouldhavestayedinsideand“Totherightwasthecrisis,andtotheleftwasescape.Idon’tevenknowifIcouldhavegoneright,butIwentleft,”herecalled.“Ialwayssecond-guessedmyselfaboutthatdecision.”O(jiān)nthisday,Gelinnedidn’thesitate.Herandowntothewaterfront.Theplanehadslippedtoastoponthebroad,frozencreek,farfromtheshore.Itwasnowsinking.Thepilotwasstandingonthewing.GelinneknewfromhisNavytrainingthatevenafewminutesintheicywatercouldkillthepilot.Gelinnetestedtheicewithhisfootanddecidednottotakeanychanceswalkingonit.Soheandhisson,JohnIr.,37,pulledtwokayaks(皮艇)out.“Ifigured,ifitcanfloatonthewater,itcanslideontheice,”Gelinnesays.Thekayaks’paddles(槳)provedeasilybroken,sothepairtriedusingshovels(鐵鏟)topushtheboatsalong.Theirfirstattemptsleftthemmovingincircles.Butwithsomemuscle,theymadeprogress.注意:1.詞數(shù)150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Thetwomensetoff,pushingtheirboatsacrosstheice.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Theyfinallyarrivedattheshorewithgreatefforts.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·吉林白城·高三??计谥校╅喿x下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。PositiveActionFuelsHope“I’mnotgoingbacktogrouptherapy(治療).Irefusetobetreatedlikethat.”ThevoicewassoloudthatIhadtoholdthephoneawayfrommyear.AliciaGonzalezsufferedfromdepression.Thiswashersecondmonthatthehomelessshelter,whereIworkasacasemanager.Aliciahadbeenanursefor10years.Herworkwasintenseanddemanding,andshelovedit.Toher,thetrauma(精神創(chuàng)傷)she’dsufferedwasthathersonlosthislifeinacarcrash.Withherbrainoverloadedbythetrauma,shecouldn’tfocusonherwork.Finally,shehadtoquitherjob.Withnoincome,shecouldn’tpayherrent.Foralmostthreeyears,Alicialivedinhertruck.Aliciatoldmeallthisatourfirstmeeting.“Iwanttohelpyou,”Isaid.“Therearelotsofresourceshere.AllIaskisthatyoutellmewhat’sgoingonwithyou.ThatwayIcanmakesureyou’regettingtheservicesyouneed.”“I’lltry,”shesaid.“It’sjusthard.IusedtofeelasthoughwhatIdidmattered.Now...”Hervoicebecamequiet.BeforeIcouldsaysomething,shestoodandwalkedoutoftheroom.Twomonthslater,IstillfeltasifIhadn’tgottenthroughtoAlicia.Sometimesthethingssendingherintoaviolentangerweresominor—apieceofrubbishsomeonehaddroppedonthefloor—itwashardformetothinkofcopingskillsthatdidn’tsoundlikeIwascriticizingher.Maybethislatesttalkingrouptherapywasthelaststraw(稻草).“Findingsomethingsmallyoucanfeelgoodaboutcanhelpyoucopewithanger,”Isuggested.“Itdoesn’tneedtobesomehugething.”EvenasIsaidit,Iwondered,“WasthatreallythebestadviceIcouldcomeupwith?”Aliciatookalongdeepbreath.“Iknow,”shesaid.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150個左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Afewweekslater,Isawherinthehallwaywitharubbishbag.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________InMarch,Aliciawasofferedajobdoinghousekeepingattheshelter.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2023·廣東·高三廣州市第一中學校聯(lián)考)閱讀下面材料,根據(jù)其內(nèi)容和所給段落開頭語續(xù)寫兩段,使之構成一篇完整的短文。EveryJune,werenewanannualtraditionatourhouseinalovelyneighbourhood.Ourchildrenaregivenbowlsandaskedtocollectpiecesofnaturethatremindthemofthesummer.Theyleavethosebowlsonthefrontdoorstepandwegoforawalk.Whenwereturn,wefindfairies(仙子)havetransformedthebowls’contentsintoicecreamsundaes(圣代冰淇淋).I’mnotcertainhowthistraditionevolved.IthinkIwasmakingupsomethingaboutfairiesyearsago,anditalljustsortofhappened.Buteversince,ithasbeenoneofourfavouriteroutineactivities,fascinatedwithitsmagic.“Whenarethefairiescoming?”six-year-oldAnnahadbeenaskingalllastJune,eagerwithexpectation.Meanwhile,John,nine,wasgettingwisetofairiesandFatherChristmasandsuchsillythings.Sohewasprettysureabouthowallthe“magic”cameaboutastheeveningapproached.“Youknow,Ihadeverythingworkedout!”Hesaidhewouldunderstandif,duringourwalk,MumorDadshouldforgetsomethingandreturnhomeorduringthewalkaparentmighthavetofetchsomethinginthecar.Manytimes,wewereeventhinkingoftellinghimthetruthbutwedidn’t.Annashouldenjoythemagic.Theeveningarrivedasexpected.Thechildrencollectedleavesandbladesofgrass,pebbles,twigs(樹枝)anddeadinsects.Weputtheirbowlsonthefrontdoorstepandwentoffonourwalkasusual.Butafterawhile,IpretendedtocomplainthatIhadforgottenmykeysandneededtogoback.Johnsmiledwithaknowingexpression.“Ohwait,”Iadded.“I’vefoundthem!Idon’thavetogoback.”Aswecontinuedonourway,Johnwasbeginningtogetabitconfused.Nearourhouse,afterexchangingaglancewithmyhusband,Ianxiouslywarnedthatthefairiesmightnothavearrivedyet—wemightneedtowalkforabitlonger.HearingwhatIsaid,Johnseemedrelieved.“Yes,”hesaid,“theyprobablyhadn’tcome!”Yetwhenwereachedthefrontdoor,thebowlswereinthesameplacewehadleftthem—filledexactlywithicecreamsundaes.注意:1.續(xù)寫詞數(shù)應為150左右;2.請按如下格式在答題卡的相應位置作答。Seeingthis,thetwokidsgavequitedifferentresponses.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

溫馨提示

  • 1. 本站所有資源如無特殊說明,都需要本地電腦安裝OFFICE2007和PDF閱讀器。圖紙軟件為CAD,CAXA,PROE,UG,SolidWorks等.壓縮文件請下載最新的WinRAR軟件解壓。
  • 2. 本站的文檔不包含任何第三方提供的附件圖紙等,如果需要附件,請聯(lián)系上傳者。文件的所有權益歸上傳用戶所有。
  • 3. 本站RAR壓縮包中若帶圖紙,網(wǎng)頁內(nèi)容里面會有圖紙預覽,若沒有圖紙預覽就沒有圖紙。
  • 4. 未經(jīng)權益所有人同意不得將文件中的內(nèi)容挪作商業(yè)或盈利用途。
  • 5. 人人文庫網(wǎng)僅提供信息存儲空間,僅對用戶上傳內(nèi)容的表現(xiàn)方式做保護處理,對用戶上傳分享的文檔內(nèi)容本身不做任何修改或編輯,并不能對任何下載內(nèi)容負責。
  • 6. 下載文件中如有侵權或不適當內(nèi)容,請與我們聯(lián)系,我們立即糾正。
  • 7. 本站不保證下載資源的準確性、安全性和完整性, 同時也不承擔用戶因使用這些下載資源對自己和他人造成任何形式的傷害或損失。

評論

0/150

提交評論